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ENGINEERING
ACHIEVEMENTS
IN THE EARLY
CIVILIZATION:
THE
MESOPOTAMIANS

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Significant engineering achievements were

made by ancient dwellers of Mesopotamia, the
land between the Tigris and Euphrates Rivers,
currently the country of Iraq.
(1) Mesopotamia is the land between Tigris and
Euphrates rivers.
(2)The land between Tigris and Euphrates rivers
is currently the country of Iraq.
(3) Significant engineering achievements have
been made by ancient dwellers of Mesopotamia.

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In this area, the wheeled cart was first found. In
southern Mesopotamia, at the beginning of recorded
history, the ancient Sumerian people constructed
canals, temples, and city walls.
(4) The wheel cart was first made in Mesopotamia in
the early civilization.
(5) The wheeled cart is the cart which is wheeled.
(6) Before the wheeled cart was made, the ancient
Mesopotamians had used their heads and shoulders
to carry materials for building constructions.

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In this

Mesopotamia, at the beginning of recorded history, the

ancient Sumerian people constructed canals, temples, and
city walls.

(7) The ancient dwellers of Mesopotamia constructed

canals temples and city walls.
(8) The ancient dwellers of Mesopotamia constructed
canals temples and city walls at the beginning of recorded
history.
(9) Recorded history is history which is recorded.
(10) The ancient dwellers of Mesopotamia were the
mysterious Sumerian people.

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In this area, the wheeled cart was first

found. In southern Mesopotamia, at the
beginning of recorded history, the ancient
Sumerian people constructed canals,
temples, and city walls.
These were worlds first engineering
works.
(11) The canals, temples and city walls are
the first engineering works in the world.

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A wheeled cart
Recorded history
A confused record

A wheeled cart
= a cart which is
wheeled

Recorded
history
= history which is recorded

A confused record
= a record which is
confused

Records inscribed
on
clay tablets

Records
which are
inscribed on
clay tablets

A device called the

astrolabe
A device which is called the
astrolabe

Graduated circle
Circle which is
graduated

6-unit numerical system

used by the
Mesopotamians
6-unit numerical system which
was used by the
Mesopotamians

The most unusual

structure left by the
Mesopotamians
The most unusual structure
which was left by the
Mesopotamians

A terraced pyramid of
bricks
A pyramid of bricks which is
terraced

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Reconstruct the
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> Socioeconomic
> > > > > >Status
> and
Health:
How Education, Income, and
Occupation Contribute to
Risk
Factors for Cardiovascular
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One of the strongest and most

consistent predictors of a person's
morbidity and mortality experience is
that person's socioeconomic status
(SES).
Socioeconomic status (SES) deals with a
persons social and economic status.
SES is one of the predictors of a person's
morbidity and mortality experience.
SES is the strongest and most consistent
predictors of a person's morbidity and

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This finding persists across all
diseases with few exceptions,
continues throughout the entire life
span,5 and extends across numerous
risk factors for disease.
This finding persists across all diseases.
But this finding has a few exceptions.
This finding continues throughout a
persons entire life span.
This finding extends across numerous risk
factors for disease.

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The significant impact of SES on
disease makes its definition and
measurement of SES a critical
importance.
SES has a significant impact on
disease.
This significant impact of SES makes
the definition of SES a critical
importance.

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SES is a complex phenomenon
predicted by a broad spectrum of
variables that is often conceptualized
as a combination of financial,
occupational, and educational
influences.
SES is a complex phenomenon.
SES is predicted by a broad spectrum
of variables.

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SES is a complex phenomenon
predicted by a broad spectrum of
variables that is often conceptualized
as a combination of financial,
occupational, and educational
influences.
The broad spectrum of variables is a
combination of financial,
occupational, and educational

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Henry Mintzberg, a Canadian professor of
management, has made significant
contributions to our understanding of
managerial work and the role of the
manager.
Henry Mintzberg is a Canadian professor of
management.
Henry Mintzberg has made significant
contributions.
The significant contributions are toward
the understanding of managerial work and

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Henry Mintzberg has identified
different roles in a managers job and
placed them in three categories.
Henry Mintzberg has identified
different roles in a managers job
Henry Mintzberg has placed them
in three categories.

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Interpersonal roles a manager is the
figurehead, providing leadership for the
team, the department or the organization
and liaising with other stakeholders (both
internal and external).
a manager has Interpersonal roles.
a manager is the figurehead
a manager provides leadership for the
team, the department or the organization
a manager liaises with other
stakeholders.

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Information roles a manager has to be an
effective communicator as
information constantly moves in, round
and out of the organization
A manager has information roles.
a manager has to be an effective
communicator.
an effective communicator is someone
who can give information effectively.
Because the information constantly moves

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Sen for spotting opportunities,

allocating resources and dealing with

conflict or the day-to-day differences that
can arise in any team or organization
A manager has a decision roles.
a manager has responsibility for spotting
opportunities
a manager has responsibility for allocating
resources
a manager has responsibility for dealing
with conflict or the day-to-day differences
the day-to-day differences can arise in any

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Accounting provides
informationthrough the maintenance
of files of data, analysis and
interpretation of these data, and the
preparation of various kinds of
reports.
Accounting provides information.
The information is given through the
maintenance of files of data.
The information is given through

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Most accounting information is
historicalthat is, the accountant
observes the things that the
organization does, records their
effects, and prepares reports
summarizing what has been
recorded.
Most accounting information is
historical
the accountant observes the things

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The system of bookkeepingthat Luca
Pacioli described first introduced the
practice and theory that had developed in
commercial cities in Italy, particularly in
Venice.
Luca Pacioli described the system of
bookkeeping.
The system of bookkeeping introduced the
practice and theory.
the practice and theory had developed in
commercial cities in Italy, particularly in

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Nevertheless,the problems encountered
by the ancients with their record keeping,
control and verification of financial
transactions were not entirely different
from the types that are experienced today.
The problems were encountered by the
ancients.
The problems were with their record
keeping.
The problems were with control and
verification of financial transactions.

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