Professional Documents
Culture Documents
PRACTICE II
LAW4511
LEGAL WRITING
PROFESSIONAL WRITING
Graduates good writing skills are directly related to
the commercial requirements of professions and
businesses.
Good writing skills operate in an increasingly
competitive market and need to be effective and
efficient in carrying out their operations.
A major element - communication: both internally
within the organisation, and externally with clients
and customers.
Clients and customers make a judgment about an
organisation based on the quality of its professional
communications.
These communications need to be clear, concise,
Experts Advice
The written word - one of the most
important tools of the legal
profession.
Words are used to advocate, inform,
persuade and instruct.
Mastering legal writing skills takes
time and practice; but superior
writing skills are essential to success.
Which Format?
Which format is chosen depends
on a number of factors, including
whether
it is an internal or external
communication,
who the recipient is,
the subject matter in question,
and
the formality of relationship
Quality of Advice
Tone
Example:
If writing to a recently bereaved person it is of course
appropriate to express condolences, but it might
come across as a little disingenuous if you do not
have personal link to either the client or the
deceased but yet you express, 'You really must be
absolutely devastated and I just cannot find words to
express my absolute sympathy for your dreadful
loss.
Similarly, there should be no scope for exclamation
marks in written advice to clients, no matter how
alarming their predicament may be.
Once an ongoing professional relationship has been
formed with clients, then it is easier to use a specific
tone appropriate for them. Until that point, the best
Avoid Left-handed
Sentences
Be Concise
Active/Passive Voice
Be Consistent
Whether you are using active or passive voice, be consistent
within a sentence.
a. Hetriedto act cool when he slipped in the puddle, but he was
stilllaughed atby the other students. (Uses active voice in the
first clause, passive voice in the second clause)
b. He tried to act cool when he slipped in the puddle, but the
other students still laughed at him. (Uses active voice in both
parts of the sentence.)
For More Information:
Grammar Girl, "Active Versus Passive Voice," 2011. Access at
http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/ac
tive-voice-versus-passive-voice
.
Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL), "Active and Passive Voice,"
2012. Access at
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/539/1/ .
Run-on Sentences
Run-on sentences are among the most common sentencelevel errors. Although many people think of run-ons as
sentences that are just "too long," the problem has little to
do with sentence length.
Simply put, run-on sentences are created when two (or
more) independent clauses are improperly joined. (An
independent clause is a clause that contains a subject and a
verb and can stand alone as a complete sentence.)
In a run-on, independent clauses may be run together, with
no punctuation or transitional words between them:
The attorney encouraged her client to settle the case out
of court the client refused because he wanted to go to trial.
Or they may be insufficiently connected with just a comma:
The lawyer handed the judge a memo, it fell on the floor.
(This type of run-on is often called acomma splice.)
Identifying Run-on
Sentences
Sentence Fragments
Subject/Verb Agreement
Subject/verb agreement can seem straightforward for native
speakers and others comfortable with English; we know to
write "the attorney argues" and "the attorneys argue."
However, some special circumstances can make it more
difficult to tell whether a subject and verb really do agree.
These complications can arise from the words themselves, or
from their order in a particular sentence.
Recognizing plural and singular nouns
Again, the basics are straightforward -- we usually add an "s"
to the end of a noun to form a plural (a group of more than
one "defendant" constitutes "defendants") and know the
most common irregular plurals (a group of more than one
"child" is a group of "children"). But here are a few to watch
out for.
Similarly, some common nouns that may represent a group of people acting as
one are:
board (of
directors)
committe
e
corporatio
n
couple
court
family
governme
nt
jury
majority
panel (of
judges)
Intervening words
Sometimes a group of words that modify the subject will come
before the verb. This situation can be tricky, because it will put a
noun closely related to the subject right next to the verb. Here's
an example:
Wrong: "The criminal nature of these incidents do not divest
Family Court of jurisdiction."
The writer has tried to create agreement, matching a plural
noun, "incidents," with a plural verb, "do not divest." This
mistake is natural because "incidents" appears where we often
expect the subject, right before the verb. However, "incidents"
actually belongs to a prepositional phrase that modifies an
earlier word, "nature," and the word should agree with that verb:
Right: "The criminal nature of these incidents does not divest
Family Court of jurisdiction."
A test: Try saying the sentence without the intervening words:
"The criminal nature do not," or "The criminal nature does not"?
Compound subjects
Subjects made up of several individual components
joined with "and" take plural verbs: "Both New Horizons
and Queens Rising have contracts with the state to
provide twenty-four-hour care for youth." However, a
couple of special cases exist. Keep an eye out for
introductory words such as "each," "every," "either,"
and "neither."
Subjects joined with "and" are plural, but subjects joined
with "or" or "nor" are not (necessarily). Consider the
following:
Right: "Neither the Office for Civil Rights nor the Human
Rights Commission in Vermont is likely to file a court
claim against Bennington."
Although the subject has two elements, "Office for Civil Rights" and "Human
Rights Commission," they do not have an additive quality; see "some words
you might not realize are singular," above, for a discussion of words like
"neither." However, a plural verb is appropriate if the part of the compound
subject nearest to the verb is plural. A pair of examples will clarify this:
Right: "Neither the plaintiffs nor the defendant wants to suggest settlement
first."
Right: "Neither the plaintiff nor the defendants want to suggest settlement
first."
The verb in such cases may be singular or plural, but should agree with the
nearest part of the subject. Your ear can guide you here; both "defendant
want" and "defendants wants" sound wrong, regardless of any subjects they
might be paired with.
Finally, when a compound subject involves the word "each" or "every," use a
singular verb. (See "some words you might not realize are singular," above.)
Right: "Every pleading, written motion, and other paper is required to bear the
signature of at least one attorney of record."
Pronouns
Singular/Plural agreement
Pronouns should agree in number with the nouns they refer to ("The
students agreed that they would form a study group"). Writers are
probably most likely to slip up in agreement when they are unsure
whether the pronoun antecedent is singular or plural, or when they
are trying to avoid gender bias by using "they."
Some singulars and plurals to watch for
Some nouns, such as collective nouns and words from Latin, may not
be instantly recognizable as singular or plural. For example, a court is
considered to be an institution, and requires a singular pronoun
regardless of whether the court you are writing about consists of one
individual or a group of people.
Wrong: "The court stated that they were ill-equipped to secondguess the trial court judge's determination."
Right: "The court stated that it was ill-equipped to second-guess the
trial court judge's determination."
Unclear Reference
When they are not handled carefully, pronouns can introduce
ambiguity into your writing. When several male persons have
been named, which one does "he" indicate? Will your reader
see immediately which previously described concept or
situation your use of "this" refers to?
With Personal Pronouns
Wrong: "When Rodriguez entered the precinct, she told the
officer at the front desk about Jeffries's condition, but rather
than taking her report, she was asked to speak directly with
Officer Frazier."
Does the second "she" in this sentence refer to Rodriguez, to
the officer at the front desk, or even possibly to Jeffries? The
phrase "rather than taking her report" leads the reader to
expect the next pronoun to refer to the officer at the desk, but
"was asked to speak directly with Officer Frazier" sounds like
Consistency
Wrong: "Prison life requires that one give up their liberty and other rights,
but not his fundamental right of due process."
In this sentence, "one," "their," and "his" are all meant to refer to the same
person, but do so in varying ways. It is better to be consistent; choose one
way of referring to the subject and use it throughout the sentence. Here's
one option:
Right: "Prison life requires that people give up their liberty and other
rights, but not their fundamental right of due process."
Personal pronouns
Wrong: "We urge the court to deny the motion to dismiss."
In formal legal writing, it is not customary to identify yourself, the writer. In
the conventions of this discourse, words like "I," "we," and "our" are
avoided.
Punctuation
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