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ERROR # 1
Incomplete sentences
Incorrect: The two extractions were combined. Then dried for five hours. Correct: The two extractions were combined and then dried for five hours. More correct: The two extracts were pooled and dried by evaporation on a rotary evaporator.
ERROR # 2
Subject-verb agreement
If the subject is singular (or plural) the verb must match appropriately. In the following defective sentence, the noun is plural while its verb is singular.
Incorrect: Our results indicates the significance of intracellular signaling systems. Correct: Our results indicate the significance of intracellular signaling systems.
ERROR # 3
Misspelled words
This requires no explanation, other than to say the professional price paid for chronic misspellings can be very embarrassing (or worse).
ERROR # 4
The active tends to make the writing tighter, more personal, and introduces action early in the sentence. Passive: The theory is supported by the results. Active : The results support the theory. Passive: Attempts were made by the researchers to assess the project. Active: The researchers attempted to assess the project.
ERROR # 5
The phrase "et al." is used when citing a technical reference of three or more authors. Examples: Smith et al. (1983) found that... (indicates that this reference had at least three authors, the first of whom was Smith). Smith and Jones (1999) found that... (indicates that this reference had two authors).
ERROR # 6
ERROR # 7
"It's" is the contraction of "it is". In general, avoid using any contractions in scientific writing.
Incorrect: Results didn't differ among treatment groups. Correct: Results did not differ among treatment groups.
ERROR # 8
"Data" is plural, "datum" is singular. Examples: The data are .... The datum is...
ERROR # 9
Significant "Significant" is a key word in science and is usually reserved for discussion of statistical results. When statistical analyses are not being discussed, use a synonym such as "substantially". Not good: Increases in cancer rates in Gage County may be especially significant. Better: Increases in cancer rates in Gage County were substantial. Differences in the treatment means were significant (p < 0.5).
ERROR # 10
When writing a number that is less than 1.0, always place a zero to the left of the decimal.
ERROR # 12
Chickens have two legs. Fifteen chickens crossed the road There are 16 balls in the box.
ERROR # 13
Incorrect: Since they have rich soil, tallgrass prairies were rapidly converted to row crop agriculture. Correct: Because of its rich soil, tallgrass prairies were rapidly converted to row crop agriculture. Since settlement by Europeans, tallgrass prairies have largely disappeared.
ERROR # 14
Organisms living in water (e.g., fish and alligators) often perish (i.e., die) when exposed to air for significant periods of time.
ERROR # 15
Misplaced modifiers
Be cautious about the use of "with", "using", and other modifiers. Note problems with the following example: Not good: Using ANOVA, animals were ..... (This implies that the animals were somehow able to perform a statistical analysis!) Better: Statistical analysis showed that animal groups ...
ERROR # 16
Very
In general, avoid using the word "very" anywhere in your manuscript. Rather, be precise and exact. Not good: Individuals from seacoast populations consumed very high concentrations of omega-3 fatty acids compared to individuals from inland populations. Better: Individuals from seacoast populations consumed 3.2 times more omega-3 fatty acids than individuals from inland populations.
ERROR # 17
The pasta sauce that came from KFC was a crowd favorite.
The traditional approach is to use "that" with restrictive clauses and "which" with nonrestrictive clauses
Contd
The birds, which were singing, had arrived earlier in the spring. Only birds that were singing were considered to be reproductively active. She had a dog, which was incredibly smart, that she brought to the competition.
ERROR # 18
"Among" refers to three or more objects or groups. "Between" refers to exactly two objects or groups.
Not good: There were no significant differences between the five treatment groups. Better: There were no significant differences among the five treatment groups.
ERROR # 19
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Edited Version
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