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Rebecca Ip
The thesis statement are specific on how the two commercials are different.
Proactive attracts a larger audience with their use of ethos, logos and pathos unlike clean & Clears commercial who has a limited audience.
Each letter is specific about of their argument and why they are arguing that topic.
The first letter argues that parents need to monitor their children social networking to to keep them safe and out of trouble from the dangers of social networking. The second letter argues that Facebook needs to have regulation on the youth to protect them, but return to an age regulation of college students and older people since the site exposes children to mature topics they are not ready to handle while improving the sites tools for the users for control issues.
Should parents talk to their children daily about the dangers or when should they start to talk about topics of social networking.
Second Letter, says that Facebook should have regulations for the users control, but for what? The regulations on the site tools is used to control privacy issues?
Inquiry 4
This project thesis statement was embodied in a website I created for a Proactiv commercial from Inquiry 2. To support my thesis from Inquiry 2 that Proactiv has the better acne advertisement, I took all the information and presented it on separate pages on my website. To show ethos, I posted the video of the Proactiv Commercial featuring Julianne Hough and a page about each product. I also made a celebrity of the month page to give the company credibility.
To show logos, I had a page that described how to use the products of how they feel and work on the skin.
To show pathos, I created a page of Real Stories of customers who have tried Proactiv and have seen major improvements in their lives. I included before and after photos of the customers face before they used it and after. I also included quotes of what people said about Proactiv and how it helped them physically and emotionally.