Fast Food should not be criticized; it suits the pace of life today.

(SA008) "Slow and steady wins the race" this popular saying is being modified into "Fast and steady wins the race. In this fast growing world everything are liked to be fast, fast track, fastest plane, fastest car, fastest bike etc. If everything can be fast why can`t the food? So the race for the fastest gave rise to the recognition of the term fast food in 1951 A.D. As the name suggests, fast food is the food that consumes less time to prepare as well as serve. In this todays Hi-tech world even a single millisecond matters a lot so the popularity of Fast Food is gaining speed. Even I have experienced me myself the time saving factor of fast food when I was late for a seminar and I couldnt have my meal, I was starving and I couldn`t also enter a caf and have something and at that particular moment fast food came as a fairy to me as I could reach in time for my seminar by having the food in the way and also quench my hunger. Beside the developed countries developing countries like Nepal are also accepting the fast food in a wide range. Nepalese are also accepting the time and money saving factor of fast food which can be known crystal clearly from the rush in Ratnapark, Basantapur, Baneshwor,kingsway at the evening time in front of a fast food store. The first thing that comes in mind when we hear the word fast food is the save of time. The world is full of competition a loss of one second leads to loss of thousand dollars or more. Punctuality leads to huge earning and development. Fast food has become a boon for school/college students, employees as they can be punctual without keeping their stomach empty too. Fast food can be beneficial to the people going for a long trip as they can have a food on the way in a jiffy. Money is too saved by having fast food. Fast foods are comparatively much cheaper than the other food. Every people whether rich or poor can have the taste of delicious food. Even though the cost of fast food is less but due to the huge popularity of fast food a lot of income is earned. If we have to talk about USA about US$ 173 billion is earned every year by the fast food stores like Pizza hut, McDonald`s, KFC, Subway, Burger King. Fast food helps to increase the employment rate of a country. There are very people who ignore fast food, so the fast food business will flourish a lot. In order to open a fast food store much money and skills are not needed. People should have the magic of making the people lick their fingers in order to flourish their business. If we can go back in time and look the history of the fast food restaurants like KFC, Pizza hut, Subway, MC Donald`s then these all restaurants started from a small store but later on the uniqueness and quality had made them so popular that now there are about 31,000 McDonalds restaurants worldwide, there are about 39,129 Subway Restaurants worldwide, KFC is spread over 25 countries and Pizza hut is also spread over 97 countries. Recently due to the popularity of Pizza Hut and KFC these restaurants were also opened in a developing country like Nepal at Durbar marg(king way), and on the opening day only thousands of Nepalese had the bite of delicacie s of KFC and Pizza hut. As the moon has dark spot on it even though its bright light likewise in spite of huge benefits of fast food they to have some pros. The main point that arises when we talk about

the disadvantages of fast food is its unhealthiness and less nutritional value. These sorts of food contains more amount of Cholesterols and fats .They results obesity which is the root cause of different diseases like Diabetics, High Blood Pressure, Heart Stroke, Heart Attack. Some small and independent vendors sell their product on the cart, vehicles etc. which are unhygienic. The Vendors add different types of colors, taste, odor to attract the people passing by these types of substances causes different health hazards. They also contain dust, dirt and unhygienic oils, salt, vegetables, meat etc. Fast food also leads to extinction and degradation of culture and tradition. Fast food replaces the traditional food and recipes. The young generation will be more influenced towards fast food, so this is how in the war of food penalties national food dhendo(meal made of flour of maize) is ruled over by burger,gundruk(dried Spanish) has to bow down the head in front of French fries. In spite of some disadvantages fast food is necessary for all the people of the world to save time, money. So at the time of hurry don`t forget to have fast food. ----Marks--------------------------------------------Content: 44/60 Use of English: 26/40 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Comment: Good approach of starting the introduction. However there are many sentences that found redundant. The word limit is precious so you should better concise your views with exact wordings rather than playing with the words suggesting a same idea. The story could have been used as an individual paragraph. You should have properly listed out the issues in the introduction paragraph. Body paragraph was good. You have started the topic sentence in proper manner. However you could have elaborated it much more. The essay looks good when you have similar length body paragraphs. Here you have some paragraphs of 4 lines to 10 lines. it would be good to see similar length body paragraph. It becomes attractive and reader will easily get impressed by your way of writing. You have serious grammatical problem. Please work on it. The incorrect use of tenses is not supporting your arguments properly. Content wise you have collected good examples. You need to work with the conclusion portion because it is very short. The reader expects a complete summary of the essay in the last paragraph. You haven't repeated all the issues in the conclusion. An ideal conclusion should include your personal views, paraphrasing of the issues and a solid support to your side. Better work on that. Very good going. Work hard..You can land up with good grades in the finals.