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In: Aarts, J., de Mönnink, I. and Wekker, H. (eds) (1997) Studies in English
Language and Teaching. Rodopi: Amsterdam & Atlanta, pp. 185-198.
Sylviane Granger
Centre for English Corpus Linguistics
Université Catholique de Louvain
There are two related reasons why non-finite clauses should receive
more prominence in EFL grammars, especially those aimed at advanced
learners. Firstly, non-finites and in particular participle clauses - the topic of this
article - have been found to figure prominently in some registers of English,
notably narrative and academic writing. Beaman (1984:66), for instance, shows
that finite subordinate clauses are more common in spoken narratives and
nonfinite clauses in written narratives. Chafe & Danielewicz (1987:102), on the
other hand, show that high frequency of participles is a distinguishing feature of
academic writing. They compare four registers of English - two spoken and two
written - and conclude that “language other than academic writing makes
considerably less use of participles”. As the improvement of stylistic proficiency
is an important objective at an advanced stage of learning, the stylistic features
of non-finite clauses ought to receive more attention. The second reason for
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giving more prominence to non-finite clauses is that they are a major means of
syntactic compression (Greenbaum 1988). The finite adverbial clause in the
sentence As he was of noble extraction, he found it easy to mix with the local
aristocracy can be abbreviated to a nonfinite clause (Being of noble extraction,
he found it easy...) or further compressed into a verbless clause (Of noble
extraction, he found it easy...). A better mastery of non-finites could therefore
help learners to develop a more compact, integrated style.
2. Participle clauses
(11) dangling Being blind, a dog guided her across the street.
corrected Being blind, she was guided across the street by a dog.
(12) dangling After turning the radio off, the interior of the car became silent.
corrected After she (or I, etc.) turned the radio off, the interior of the car became
silent.
NS NNS
Ved 165 (34.5%) 96 (39.5%)
Ving 310 (65.5%) 147 (60.5%)
Total 475 (100%) 243 (100%)
Nr words 45,600 46,211
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The overall underuse brought out by Table 1 is confirmed here: all three
learner varieties prove to underuse participle clauses significantly (p<0.005),
with frequencies ranging from 70 to 84, as opposed to 135 to 194 for the NS
subcorpora. However, while there are no significant frequency differences
among the NNS subcorpora, the NS corpus displays some variability: US1
contains a significantly higher number of participle clauses than the other two
NS subcorpora.
A look at the respective distributions of -ed and -ing shows that the latter
is much more stable across subcorpora than the former: it is consistently lower
in the learner corpus, with frequencies ranging from 44 to 53 (as opposed to 95
to 119 in the NS corpus). The frequency of -ed structures, on the other hand, is
highly variable in both the NS and NNS corpora with two subcorpora standing
out from the others: US1 displays significantly more -ed structures than US2
and US3, while the Dutch learner corpus (NNSD) contains a significantly lower
number of these structures than either the French or Swedish corpora.
NS NNS
Adnominal 226 (47.5%) 127 (52%)
Ved 133 79
Ving 93 48
Total 475 (100%) 243 (100%)
(13) Obviously, the behaviour demonstrated by the children in the accounts was not typical for
that child, or really any child for that matter.
(14) Further evidence of this is demonstrated by a 1935 study conducted by Robert Dann.
(15) The thought conveyed in this prayer is shallow in meaning.
(16) All the things presented here could make for an effective argument against continuing
genetic research.
(17) it will be ultimately decided that there should be a ban on gays serving in the military.
(18) no evidence was presented to suggest that reports using notebooks and pencils posed any
security risks.
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(19) It could easily become a solution for people suffering from severe depression or those
diagnosed with HIV or AIDS, who want to save themselves from the pain that they will later
endure.
(20) The pain experienced by someone dying of cancer is enormous.
It has been shown that the EFL writers underuse adnominal clauses. In
fact, there is also a reasonable degree of misuse. In several sentences, such as
(21-25), the choice of a reduced relative clause has been found infelicitous by
the native speaker corrector and replaced by a finite relative clause (4).
(21) Not to mention these ethnical minorities not feeling at home. (correction: who don’t feel at
home)
(22) All the countries making part of that Europe will live hand in hand. (correction: who will
make up Europe)
(23) many Europeans fear that they will be the eyewitnesses of the birth of a nation leaving the
citizens aside. (correction: which will leave)
(24) Many dreams and imaginations of the people living in the early part of the century are now a
reality. (improvement: who lived)
(25) ...to fight starvation and diseases endangering the lives of the natives. (improvement: which
endanger)
Nonfinite clauses are obviously not free variants of finite clauses. It is often
difficult to say why one is chosen above the other but there seem to be a
number of factors involved such as the need to remove ambiguity, the
informational load of the relative clause, and so on. What is certain is that there
is a need for detailed comparisons of finite and nonfinite clause types.
NS NNS
Adverbial 182 (38.5%) 75 (31%)
Conj+ 39 18
Ved 17 3
Ving 22 15
Prep+ 143 57
Total 475 (100%) 243 (100%)
(26) do students better understand scientific principles when taught from a two-model approach
of origins (...) or a one-model approach?
(27) There are rules to follow when carrying out affirmative action policies which can be
unconstitutional if ignored.
(28) As shown previously, racism on campus is a serious issue.
(29) As stated above, when he returned the following year to reapply, he wrote down the two
drugs on his application.
(30) As stated in Time, “<quote>“.
(31) When used in business, ethics involves the relationship of what is right (...).
The three conjunctions that serve to introduce past participial adverbial clauses
in the corpus are as (8 occurrences), when (7) and if (2) in the corpus. In the
majority of cases, the -ed clauses are initial and have a connective function, as
in examples 28 & 29, or a frame-setting function (Kortmann 1995:228), as in
examples 30 and 31.
(32) When dealing with the history of genetic research, one should bring up eugenics, which is
the study and methods of improving the species genetically.
(33) This drug is used to help revive heart attack victims while simultaneously preventing brain
damage from occurring.
to very detailed study”. Yet this type of clause is not a minor category: it
accounts for over 75% of all adverbial clauses in our corpus. The main
prepositions which function as subordinators - called ‘connective prepositions’
by Halliday (1985) - are the following ones: by, in , (up)on, besides, with,
without, instead of, rather than, after, before and since. (5) The most frequent
one is undoubtedly by, which alone accounts for 64% of preposition-headed
adverbial clauses in the NS corpus (91 occurrences vs only 21 in the learner
corpus). The majority of by-clauses are rhematic (see ex.34 & 35), but over a
quarter are sentence- or clause-initial and have a clear frame-setting or linking
function (ex. 36-38). (6) Some prepositions, such as in (ex. 39), with (ex. 40) or
after (ex. 41), which occur very infrequently in the learner corpus, are
predominantly found in initial position.
(34) the battle for improvement of race relationships was both won and lost by implementing this
program.
(35) Kerkovian is performing acts of mercy by relieving patients of their agonizing pain.
(36) By using this example, the opponents have presented a strong point as to why (...).
(37) By using drugs, athletes are making the competition unfair.
(38) By arguing that affirmative action hasn’t worked, opponents of the argument are really
defending the need for such programs.
(39) In discussing these definitions, I will concentrate on affirmative action for blacks.
(40) With everyone avoiding teenagers and their need to know about sexual relations, it is only
logical that schools begin teaching our children sex education.
(41) After reading through many sources on new age ideas and the teaching of those ideas, I
have discovered that (...).
(42) They are carried away emotionally while watching them. (NNSD) (Correction: as they watch
them)
(43) By considering the problem, a borrower’s mindset has begun to take form. (NNSS)
(Correction: because people are considering the problem)
(44) Therefore, by distributing them in our high schools, students will be better able to protect
themselves and their partners. (NS) (Correction: if they are distributed)
(45) Without teaching teens sexual ethics, they will inevitably go with the flow. (NS) (Correction:
if teachers are not taught)
NS NNS
Supplementive 67 (14%) 41 (17%)
Ved 15 14
Ving 52 27
Total 475 (100%) 243 (100%)
(46) Looking through the years of history, it is hard to imagine a time when religion did not exist.
(47) Knowing this, one can rightly assert that to abort this fetus is to kill a living human being.
(48) Sam Walton (...) treated his employees and customers with respect, thus building
friendships and becoming successful.
(49) Many of the orphanages did in fact provide a wellbalanced lifestyle for their orphans, even
preparing them for the future.
(50) They study the relation between genotypes and phenotypes, attempting to determine the
generic basis (...).
(51) it is important for the black student to experience their college years in this way, associating
with those of the same background and maintaining a symbol of a great national heritage.
(52) In Canada (...) prices of drugs by Canadian subsidiaries of American companies are
substantially lower, averaging 32%.
(53) these televangelists (...) are even able to wheedle a lot of money from their followers
offering them all sorts of gadgets and persuading them to give them money. (NNSD) (Correction:
their followers, offering them)
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(54) Prolife advocates have lined up in front of abortion clinics not allowing patients to enter and
doctors to exit. (NS) (Correction: clinics, not allowing)
7. Conclusion
This corpus analysis has shown that there is a significant lack of participle
clauses in the academic writing of advanced EFL learners. This underuse -
coupled with an equally significant shortage of passives (see Granger 1996) -
contributes to the stylistic deficiency of learner essays. In Biber’s (1988)
multidimensional model, past participles and passives figure prominently in the
dimension that distinguishes between abstract/impersonal and non-abstract
types of discourse (Dimension 5).
(55) Coal miners can contract lung cancer, they can be flooded when in the mines.
(56) With the risk of contracting sexually transmitted diseases on the rise, teenagers must be
aware of the health dangers (...).
(57) While it is not necessary to completely cut all forms of economic benefits to families or
single parents in need,....
clearly varies across registers and genres, research should also take this into
consideration.
Finally, there is also need for a much more thorough analysis of the
factors conditioning the choice between finite and nonfinite clauses, an area
which, as stated by Johansson & Lysvag (1986 Part 2:296), “is regulated by a
complex interplay of syntactic, semantic, and stylistic factors“. A challenge to
keep English grammarians busy for some time to come. (Ready to take it up,
Flor?)
Notes
2. I am very grateful to Ludo Beheydt and Bengt Altenberg for discussing the
complexities of participle clauses in Dutch and Swedish.
3. A comparison with the frequencies in Biber (1988) shows that the proportions
of adnominal -ed and -ing participle clauses in the NS corpus are identical to
those displayed by ‘press editorials’ (2.9 and 2.0), but much lower than those of
‘academic prose’ (respectively 5.6 and 2.5). This difference can be explained by
the heterogeneity of academic prose: “in the LOB corpus, academic prose is
divided into seven sub-categories: natural science, medical, mathematics,
social science, politics/education, humanities, and technology/engineering. Due
to the differences among these sub-genres, the dimension scores for academic
prose have quite large ranges” (Biber 1988:171). The frequency rates of
features such as participial WHIZ deletions (Biber’s term for adnominal
participle clauses) and passives increase with the level of technicality of texts.
The difference in frequency between Biber’s corpus of academic writing and
ours is to be related to the fact that his corpus contains a large proportion of
technical texts, while ours consists exclusively of non-technical argumentative
essays.
7. The error rate of adverbial clause is c. 10% in each corpus. This should not
be taken as a hard-and-fast figure, however, as the concept of ‘dangling
participle’ is very subjective. Grammarians differ in the type of controller they
allow. Some are very strict and require identity of reference with the subject of
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the matrix clause (see Thomson & Martinet 1986:244), others are more flexible
and accept a whole range of controllers (see Quirk et al 1985:1121-1123).
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