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Welcome to the Something to Read About Book Club Sampler from Simon & Schuster. Think of
this sampler as a tasting menu for you and your book club, or rather a platter of book d’œuvres,
intended to spark your interest and excite your reading palate. Each title featured in this
sampler was included for a specific reason: it’s one of those books you won’t be able to stop
talking about. From Kristin Kimball’s wonderful memoir about going from NYC rush hour to
milking cows, to Chris Cleave’s emotionally raw novel written as a letter to the terrorist who
killed her family, to a debut from young adult author John Corey Whaley about second chances
and a special woodpecker, these books are perfectly discussable.
We compiled this sampler in the hopes of helping you and your book club discover your next
won’t-be-able-to-put-it-down, can’t-wait-to-talk-about-it, all-time-favorite read. Like most of
the finer things in life, stories are meant to be shared. So here’s to good food, better books, and
many happy hours of talk!
With [The Memory Palace] I simply set out to explore the connections that I shared with my
mother, nothing more, and I set out to do that through pictures, because I am a visual thinker.
But yes, the story of mother-daughter love shines through and for me, I think I came to
understand that it is a very primal thing, one that is still difficult for me to explain and
understand. With memory, the more I researched the subject and explored my own
relationship to memory, especially in the light of living with Traumatic Brain Injury (TBI), the
more I found all these arguments about so-called “truth” in memory (and thus, memoir) to be
silly. I’m not talking about making up some sensational story so that one can sell a fictional
book as a memoir. . .but rather, the idea that just because one remembers something “clearly,”
it has to be true is simply false. Ask any neuroscientist, any forensic psychologist, criminal
investigator, etc. . . .I personally think the strongest message in the book is about compassion,
and the more times I rewrote the book, the more compassion I discovered within myself.
—Mira Bartók
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Below is a menu suggestion that involves both food and memory for
The Memory Palace.
The Memory Palace was written by piecing together memories from notes, drawings, and
objects. For your book club meeting, have each member bring in a favorite food item—it can be
something as simple as peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, hummus and chips, or chocolate
chip cookies. Sit around a table and taste each item individually. Does the taste or smell bring
back any kind of memory? What are you reminded of when you eat, for example, a chocolate
chip cookie? Share your memories and thoughts with the group.
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. . . Climb the mountains, search the valleys, the deserts, the seashores . . .
the deep recesses of the earth . . . for in this way and no other will you arrive at . . .
the true nature of things.
Petrus Severinus, 16th century Danish alchemist
ONE
The Subterranean World
Even now, when the phone rings late at night, I think it’s her. I stumble out of bed ready
for the worst. Then I realize—it’s a wrong number, or a friend calling from the other side of the
ocean. The last time my mother called was in 1990. I was thirty-one and living in Chicago. She
said if I didn’t come home right away she’d kill herself. After she hung up, she climbed onto the
second-floor balcony of my grandmother’s house in Cleveland, boosted herself onto the
banister, and opened her arms to the wind. Below, our neighbor Ruth Armstrong and two
paramedics tried to coax her back inside. When the call came the next time, almost seventeen
years later, it was right before Christmas 2006, and I didn’t even hear the phone ring.
The night before, I had a dream: I was in an empty apartment with my mother. She looked like
she had that winter of 1990—her brown and gray hair unwashed and wild, her blouse stained
and torn. She held a cigarette in her right hand, fingers crossed over it as if for good luck. She
never looked like a natural-born smoker, even though she smoked four packs a day. The walls
of the apartment were covered in dirt. I heard a knock. “What do you want?” I asked the
stranger behind the door. He whispered, “Make this place as clean as it was in the beginning.” I
scrubbed the floors and walls, then I lifted into the air, sailing feet-first through the empty
rooms. I called out to my mother, “Come back! You can fly too!” but she had already
disappeared.
When I awoke there was a message on my machine from my friend Mark in Vermont. He had
been keeping a post office box for me in Burlington, about three hours from my home in
Western Massachusetts. The only person who wrote me there was my mother. “A nurse from a
hospital in Cleveland called about a Mrs. Norma Herr,” he said. “She said it was an emergency.”
How did they find me? For years, I had kept my life secret from my schizophrenic and homeless
mother. So had my sister, Natalia. We both had changed our names, had unpublished phone
numbers and addresses.
The story unfolded over the next couple days. After the ambulance rushed my mother to the
hospital, the red sweater I had sent her for the holidays arrived at the women’s shelter where
she had been living for the last three years. Tim, her social worker, brought the package to her
in ICU to cheer her up after surgery. He noticed the return address was from me, care of
someone in Vermont. He knew I was her daughter. A nurse called information to get Mark’s
number and left the message on his machine. How easy it was to find me after all those years.
When I called a friend to tell her I was going to see my mother, she said, “I hope you can forgive
her for what she did to you.” “Forgive her?” I said. “The question is—will she ever forgive me?”
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The night before I left for Cleveland, while Doug, my fiancé, was making dinner, I went
to my studio above our barn to gather some things for my trip. I did what I always do when I
enter: I checked the small table to the left of my desk to see if I had written any notes to myself
the day before. It’s there, on my memory table, that I keep an ongoing inventory of what I’m
afraid I’ll forget. Ever since I suffered a brain injury from a car accident a few years ago, my life
has become a palimpsest—a piece of parchment from which someone had rubbed off the
words, leaving only a ghost image behind.
Above my desk are lists of things I can’t remember anymore, the meaning of words I used to
know, ideas I’ll forget within an hour or a day. My computer is covered in Post-its, reminding
me of which books I lent out to whom, memories I’m afraid I’ll forget, songs from the past I
suddenly recall.
I was forty when, in 1999, a semi hurtled into my car while a friend and I were stopped at a
construction site on the New York Thruway. The car was old and had no airbag—my body was
catapulted back and forth in the passenger’s seat, my head smashing against the headrest and
dashboard. Coup contrecoup it’s called, blow against blow, when your brain goes flying against
the surface of your skull. This kind of impact causes contusions in the front and back areas of
the brain and can create microscopic bleeding and shearing of neural pathways, causing
synapses to misfire, upsetting the applecart of your brain, sometimes forever. Even if you don’t
lose consciousness, or, as in my case, don’t lose it for very long.
The next days and months that followed I couldn’t remember the words for things or they got
stuck in my head and wouldn’t come out. Simple actions were arduous—tipping a cabbie,
reading an e-mail, and listening to someone talk. On good days, I acted normal, sounded
articulate. I still do. I work hard to process the bombardment of stimuli that surrounds me. I
work hard not to let on that for me, even the sound of a car radio is simply too much, or all
those bright lights at the grocery store. We children of schizophrenics are the great secret-
keepers, the ones who don’t want you to think that anything is wrong.
Outside the glass door of my studio, the moon was just a sliver in the clear obsidian sky.
Soon I’d be in the city again, where it’s hard to see the stars. Hanging from a wooden beam to
the right of my desk is a pair of reindeer boots I made when I lived in the Arctic, before my
brain injury, when I could still travel with ease. What to bring to show my mother the last
seventeen years of my life? How long would I stay in Cleveland? One month? Five? The doctor
had said on the phone that she had less than six months to live—but he didn’t know my
mother.
What would she think of the cabinet of curiosities I call my studio: the mouse skeleton, the
petrified bat, the pictures of conjoined twins, the shelves of seedpods and lichen, the deer skull
and bones? Would she think that aliens had put them there or would she want to draw them,
like me? I fantasized about kidnapping her from the hospital. I would open the couch bed and
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let her spend her last days among the plants, the paints, and the books; let her play piano
anytime she wanted. I’d even let her smoke. She could stay up all night drawing charts of
tornadoes, hurricanes, and other future disasters, like the ones she used to send me through
my post office box. But she would never see this place. She probably would never leave her
bed.
Lining the walls in my studio was evidence of a life intersecting art and science: books on art
history and evolution, anthropology, polar exploration, folklore, poetry, and neuroscience. If I
brought her here, would my mother really be happy? There was a cabinet of art supplies, an
antique globe, a map of Lapland. I had star charts, bird charts, and a book of maps from the Age
of Discovery. Had my mother ever been truly happy? Had she ever passed a day unafraid,
without a chorus of voices in her head?
The questions I wrote down before I left for Cleveland: How long does she have to live? Does
she have a coat? Will she remember me? How will I remember her, after she is gone?
***
The next day I flew into Cleveland Hopkins International Airport. I almost always travel
with Doug now: he is my compass, my driver, my word-finder and guide. How would I fare in
this place without him? When I collected my suitcase from baggage claim, I half expected my
mother to appear. She had slept on one of the benches off and on for years. Sometimes people
came up to her and gave her money but she never understood why. Once she wrote to say: A
kind man offered me five dollars at the airport for some reason. A bright moment in a storm-
ridden day. I bought a strawberry milkshake at Micky D’s then pocketed the rest.
I had flown to Cleveland just two months before to go to my thirtieth high school reunion. The
day after the reunion, Doug and I drove to Payne Avenue near downtown Cleveland to see the
shelter where my mother lived. She had given me her address in 2004, not a post office box
number like she had in the past. I had no idea she had cancer then, nor did she, even though
her body was showing signs that something was seriously wrong. I live in pain on Payne, she
had written to me several times. I am bleeding a lot from below. But how to know what was
real? Are you sick? I’d write her; she would respond: Sometimes I am taken out of the city and
given enemas in my sleep. It’s what they do to Jews. In her last few letters, she always ended
with: If you come to see me, I’ll make sure they find you a bed. Doug and I parked across the
street from the shelter; I put on dark sunglasses and wouldn’t get out of the car. “I just want to
see where she lives,” I said. “If I go in, she’ll want to come home with me, and then what?” I
sank low in the seat and watched the women smoke out in front, waiting for the doors to open.
It was windy and trash blew around the desolate treeless road. “I wish I could take her home. It
looks like a war zone,” I said to Doug as we drove away. “At least I saw where she lives. It makes
it more real. But now what?”
I felt worse, finally knowing where she lived, knowing exactly what the place looked like. How
could I turn my back on her now when her sad life was staring me in the face? And if I didn’t do
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something soon, what was to stop her from moving on yet again, to another shelter, another
town?
I had been communicating with my mother’s social worker for the past year about
reuniting us, with a third party present for support. I wouldn’t do it without a third party,
without my mother living somewhere under close watch, in a halfway house or a nursing home.
Even though she was now elderly, in my mind she was still the madwoman on the street,
brandishing a knife; the woman who shouts obscenities at you in the park, who follows you
down alleyways, lighting matches in your hair.
I had no idea if my sister Natalia would want to see her at all, but planned to ask her when the
time came. The organization that was helping my mother, MHS (Mental Health Services for
Homeless Persons, Inc.), had been trying to arrange a legal guardianship for her so she could be
placed in a nursing home where she could get adequate care. She would finally have an
advocate—someone to make decisions for her about finances, housing, and health. But when
MHS presented my mother’s case before the court, they lost. It didn’t matter that she slept
outside on the wet ground some nights, or that she was incontinent, nearly blind, and seriously
ill, or that she had a long history of suicide attempts and hospitalizations. The judge declared
my mother sane for three simple reasons: she could balance a checkbook, buy her own
cigarettes, and use correct change. It was just like when my sister and I had tried to get a
guardianship for her in the past.
I picked up a rental car at the airport and met my childhood friend Cathy at my hotel.
We had seen each other for the first time after thirty years when I came to town two months
before. Except for a few extra pounds and some faint lines etched around her blue eyes, Cathy
hadn’t changed. I could still picture her laughing, leaning against her locker at Newton D. Baker
Junior High—a sweet, sympathetic girl in a miniskirt, straight blond hair flowing down to her
waist.
As we were going up the elevator at University Hospital, I told Cathy about what the doctor had
said to me earlier that day on the phone. He had said that my mother’s abdomen was riddled
with tumors, and that he had removed most of her stomach and colon. He explained what
stomas were, how her waste was being removed through them and how they had to be kept
clean. I said, “He claims she’ll never go back to the shelter. They’ll get her into a good nursing
home and make her as comfortable as possible before she dies.”
“I don’t know, Cathy. I still think she’ll just get up, walk out the door, and
disappear.”
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The door was slightly ajar when we arrived at my mother’s room. I asked Cathy to wait
in the hall until I called her in. The lights were off when I entered. I watched my mother sleep
for a few minutes; the sun filtered through the slats in the shades, illuminating her pallid face.
She looked like my grandfather when he was dying—hollow cheeks, ashen skin, breath labored
and slow. Would she believe it was really me? She thought that aliens
could assume the shape of her loved ones.
“Mom,” I said. “It’s me. Your daughter, Myra.” I used my old name, the one she gave me. She
opened her eyes.
“Myra? Is it really you?” Her voice was barely audible and her cadence strange.
“I brought you a little gift,” I said, and placed the soft orange scarf I had knitted for her around
her neck.
I sat down and took her hand. How well could she see? She had always written about her
blindness, caused by glaucoma, cataracts, and “poisonous gas from enemy combatants.” I
wondered if she could see how I had aged. My dark brown hair was cut in a bob, like the last
time I had seen her, but I had a few wrinkles now, a few more gray hairs. I still dressed like a
tomboy, though, and was wearing black sweatpants and a sweater. “That’s a good look for you,
honey,” she said. “You look sporty. Where’s your sister?”
I was relieved that I could say that. What if my sister couldn’t bear to come? What would I have
said?
When the nurse came in I asked her how much my mother weighed.
I expected the nurse to reproach me, but instead she was kind. “How nice that you can be
together now. I hope you two have a great reunion.”
My mother brought her hand up to shield her eyes. “Turn that damn light off.”
“Shut the curtains. It’s too bright in here. Where’s my music? When am I going home?”
“Back to my women.”
Did she mean the women’s shelter? Or did she want to be with my sister and me in her old
house on West 148th Street?
The last time I visited my mother in a hospital, it was over twenty years ago. She was in a
lockdown ward at Cleveland Psychiatric Institute (CPI) and had asked me to bring her a radio.
She had always needed a radio and a certain level of darkness. In her youth, my mother had
been a musical prodigy. When I was growing up, she listened to the classical radio station night
and day. I always wondered if her need for a radio meant more than just a love of music. Did it
help block out the voices in her head?
I pulled the curtains shut over the shades. “Is that better?”
I could smell lunch arriving down the hall—coffee, soup, and bread. Comforting smells in a
world of beeping machines and gurneys—the clanking, squeaking sounds of the ICU .
“Not that hungry these days,” she said. “You want something to eat? You’re too thin. Go ask
them to make you a sandwich. I’ll pay. Bring me my purse.”
My mother was missing all but her four front teeth. I remember her writing me several years
before to say that she had had them all removed because disability wouldn’t pay for dental
care. According to the Government, teeth and eyes are just accessories, she wrote. Like buying a
belt or a brooch.
“Where are your false teeth?” I asked. “They’ll be serving lunch soon.”
We sat for a while, holding hands. She drifted in and out of sleep. I put my mother’s palm up to
my lips. For the first time in my life, I couldn’t smell cigarettes on her skin. She smelled like baby
lotion. She opened her eyes.
“Good for you,” I said. “You know, I always loved you, Mommy.”
It was the first time I had used that word since I was a child. My sister and I always called her
Mother, Norma, or Normie, or, on rare occasions, Mom. It was hard to call her anything
maternal, even though she tried so hard to be just that. But in the hospital, as she lay dying,
Mommy seemed the only right word to use.
“I love you too,” she said. “But you ran away from me. Far away.”
“Yes,” she said. “I’m glad you came. Now let me sleep. I’m so very tired.”
On Tuesday, my second day at the hospital, a nurse came in and asked me how old my
mother was. “She just turned eighty in November,” I said. My mother threw me a nasty look.
“It’s a lie!”
“I was just kidding,” I said. “Are you in your forties now?” I winked at the nurse.
“A little older but not much. A woman should never reveal her age.”
“She’s fifty-two,” I said to the nurse but mouthed the word eighty when my mother turned
away.
Later, the surgeon talked to me outside the room. He said that the pathology report had finally
come in. What he originally thought was colon cancer was late-stage stomach cancer, which is
more deadly and was moving fast. I bombarded him with questions: “Where else has the cancer
spread? Is she too far gone for chemo? How long does she have?”
“Well, the good news is that your mother is doing remarkably well!” How can a dying person do
remarkably well? I wondered. He added, “She’s recovering great from the surgery but there’s
nothing we can really do for her anymore, just keep her comfortable.”
The doctor borrowed my notepad and drew a picture. His pen flew over the paper; it was a map
of what my mother looked like inside. “Here’s what I did,” he said. “I redirected what’s left of
her colon and moved this over here, so that her waste can exit through this stoma, see?”
He spoke too fast for my brain, using words like fistula, ileostomy, and carcinomatosis. I had no
idea what he was talking about. It looked like he was drawing the map of a city as seen from
above. Was this what is inside us, these roads and byways, these rotaries and hairpin turns?
“Super,” said the doctor, perpetually upbeat. “We can talk more later. I want to speak with your
mother now.”
The doctor and I went back inside her room. “Good morning, Norma! How are you doing
today?”
He turned to me. “Her abdomen is completely diseased. We couldn’t take everything out.”
I glared at him and put my finger to my lips. The day before I had said on the phone that
discussing this with my mother would just upset her and that she wouldn’t really understand.
The doctor continued anyway.
“It’s much worse than we thought, Norma. People always want to know how long, but I can’t
tell them. I could say a few weeks, months, either way I’d be wrong.” He sat down beside her,
took her hand in his, and said loudly,
She looked baffled. The night before she had told me it wasn’t anything serious, she just had
food poisoning from bad Mexican food. “Don’t eat at Taco Bell,” she had warned me. “They
poison the beans there.”
The doctor said again, “Norma. Do you understand that you have cancer?”
“Get me a Danish,” she whispered in my ear as if it were a secret. She thought for a second.
“One with sweet cheese.”
Later that day, my mother suddenly became concerned about her things at the shelter.
“Where’s my black backpack? Where’s my purse? Who took them?”
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I asked Tim, her shy young social worker from MHS, to retrieve her two large garbage bags from
the shelter on Payne Avenue. I assumed these were the only things she owned in the world. In
the years that we were apart, she often mentioned in her letters that she still had some of our
family things in storage. Was it true or did she just imagine they were locked up somewhere for
safekeeping? Sometimes she wrote me urgent letters, begging me to come to Cleveland and
help her move her things from one place to another, but I suspected that it was just a ploy to
get me to come back home.
In the hospital parking lot Tim and I rummaged through her bags to see if there was anything
she might want. We found her backpack in one of them, filthy and ripped, filled with laundry
detergent, toothpaste, damp cigarettes, receipts, a diary, a sketchbook, a medical dictionary,
incontinence pads, and a dirty white sock filled with keys. I took the keys and counted them,
seventeen in all. Most looked like they went to lockers and storage units. One was a house key.
Did it unlock our old red brick house?
Back in her room I showed her the sock. “Where do these go to?” I asked.
“I’m tired. I don’t know. Let me sleep.” Then she motioned me to come closer. “I have
Grandma’s diamond rings for you girls. They’re locked up in a safety-deposit box.”
“Where?” I asked. “What box? What are all these keys for?”
“Tell you later. Too tired now. Shut lights. Don’t let them steal my pack.”
That evening, in the hotel room, I picked up the diary I had found in her backpack. It was a
pocket-sized purple notebook with red hearts on the
cover, like the diary of a ten-year-old girl. I wondered if she had more of them hidden
somewhere. I flipped through the coffee-stained pages. The book had the same faint odor of
stale smoke and mildew that her letters had. I turned to her last few entries. Two weeks before
the paramedics picked her up from the Community Women’s Shelter, my mother wrote:
Magma: Hot liquid rock can be three shapes: spherical, spiral or a rod. It flows out like lava or
cools underground.
They had told me at the shelter that when they called 911 that day, she couldn’t stop vomiting
and her stomach was distended as if she were about to give birth. “That Norma, she didn’t
want to go to the hospital,” one woman had said to me on the phone. “She is one stubborn
lady.” She had been sick for months, but wouldn’t see a doctor. Finally, the day the ambulance
came to take her to the hospital, the women at the shelter convinced her to go.
In her diary, my mother wrote: If lava reaches Earth’s surface it turns into igneous rock. Basalt:
dark gray rock forms when magma cools into a solid. My mother had been studying geology. I
turned back the pages. Before geology, she had reread all of Edgar Allan Poe. Before that she
had turned to the stars: Recently, I had a dream of a cataclysm. Was not prepared for study of
the planets, which has fevered my imagination once again.
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Before I left for Cleveland I had been studying geology too. I was in the middle of a book about
Nicolaus Steno, the seventeenth century Danish anatomist, whom some call the grandfather of
geology. Steno was fascinated by what the oceans hid and left behind. I had read about how
one day, in 1666, young Steno was in an anatomical theater in Florence, Italy, dissecting the
head of a shark. It wasn’t just any shark but a great white. The shark was a wonder, and Steno’s
patron, the Grand Duke Ferdinando II de’ Medici, wanted to know what was inside. This was
the time when wonder and scientific inquiry were intricately entwined—when collectors
collected the rare and the mysterious, the miraculous and mundane, from the bounty that
explorers brought back to Europe from the New World.
When Steno peered into the monster’s mouth he noticed that the shark’s teeth resembled the
little stones people called “tongue stones,” or glossopetrae, the mysterious stones Pliny the
Elder said fell from the heavens on dark and moonless nights, what the church said were
miracle stones left from Noah’s Great Flood. Steno’s mind leapt from shark to sea to a question
that plagued him for the rest of his life: why are seashells found on mountaintops? Even his
scientific colleagues thought the fossils were signs from God. Nicolaus Steno laid the foundation
for reading the archival history of the earth: How crystals are formed, how land erodes and
sediment is made over time. How over centuries, seashells become fossils embedded deep
inside the bedrock of mountains.
My mother would have liked Nicolaus Steno. She’d marvel at the way his mind flew from one
thought to another, uncovering the truth about ancient seas, how he learned to read the
memory of a landscape, one layer at a time. The earth is also a palimpsest—its history scraped
away time and time again. If my mother were well enough, I would tell her this. She’d light up a
cigarette, pour herself a cup of black coffee, and get out her colored pens. Then she’d draw a
giant chart with a detailed geological timeline, revealing the stratification of the earth.
That Tuesday night I met my sister, Natalia, at the airport. I spotted her cherry-red coat in the
thick throng of hurried holiday travelers. She lugged a huge suitcase behind her, walking a fast
clip in high black boots. Like me, it had been close to seventeen years since she had last seen
our mother, but my sister had made the painful decision never to write to her. When I had
called her about our mother dying, I didn’t know whether or not she would come. Her last
vision of our mother was a nightmare, indelible in her mind. I was relieved when, without even
deliberating, she said she’d join me in
Cleveland.
“Nattie, I’m so happy you’re here.” I ran up to hug her. I had almost called her Rachel, her birth
name before she changed it more than a decade before. Being back in Cleveland made her
newer name feel strange on my tongue for the first time in years. Just as well. Around our
mother, we’d have to be Myra and Rachel one last time.
“Before I forget, I wanted to tell you—I found some keys. And receipts from U-Haul. She must
have a storage room somewhere.”
“I don’t know. But we can go this week and see. I imagine there’s a lot of junk.”
The next morning Natalia woke up early to work out in the gym. She has always kept a strict
regimen—a daily exercise routine, a rigorous schedule for writing, teaching, grading her
students’ papers before bed. While Natalia was out of the room, I skimmed through my
mother’s dairy. She wrote about staying up all night in the rain on a stranger’s porch and trying
to sleep at the bus station without getting mugged. Should I read any of this to my sister?
When we walked into our mother’s room at the hospital, she looked up at Natalia and said,
“Who are you?” She turned to me. “Who’s this lady?”
How could my mother not recognize her? Did she look that different seventeen years ago? The
last time our mother saw her, Natalia was running away from the house on West 148th Street.
Maybe that was how our mother remembered her—a terrified young girl in flight, long hair
flying in the cold January wind.
How could we explain that we had changed our names so she could never find us? That we had
been so scared of her all these years? She was the cry of madness in the dark, the howling of
wind outside our doors. I had changed my name the year after my sister did, reluctantly, giving
up the name signed at the bottom of my paintings so I would be harder to find. But I could
never relinquish my first name. I simply exchanged a y for an i. My sister couldn’t give up her
first name either and kept it sandwiched between the first and the last: Natalia Rachel Singer.
She took Isaac Bashevis Singer’s last name, I took Bela Bartok’s.
“I’m not dead,” said my sister. “I’m here, right beside you.”
Natalia pulled up a chair next to the bed. “It’s really me. How are you feeling?”
“You girls have got to get me out of here! We have to go back to the house. There are criminals
inside.”
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“Don’t worry, the house is fine,” I lied to her. “Everything is just like you left it. You can go home
as soon as you are better.”
After all these years, our mother was still obsessed about her parents’ house she’d sold in 1989.
When she signed the papers over to the new owner, she believed that she was only renting it to
him for a while. Not long after the sale, and after my sister’s and my last failed attempt to get
her a legal guardian and medical treatment, our mother disappeared into the streets.
“Do you have a husband?” my mother asked Natalia. “Are you wearing a ring?”
Natalia, who had seventeen years of stored-up conversations, began to talk. But after a few
minutes, I could tell our mother was too exhausted and frail to listen anymore.
“She can’t tolerate that much talking or sound,” I said. “She gets overwhelmed like me. Just sit
with her. That’s enough; she’s happy you’re here.”
Natalia took out a brush from her purse. “Can I brush your hair?” she asked.
I looked at them, mother and eldest daughter, strangers for seventeen years. “I’ll leave you two
alone,” I said, and left.
If you glanced in the room at that moment, you would see two women in tranquil silence, one
tenderly brushing the hair of the other, as if she had been doing it her entire life.
***
When I called U-Haul, they confirmed our mother had a storage room there. It was at
Kamm’s Corners in West Park, not far from our old neighborhood. Early the next day, on
Thursday, before heading over to the hospital, Natalia and I drove to the U-Haul on Lorain
Avenue. Natalia sat in the passenger’s seat, clutching the map, nervous about getting lost. I
expected to get lost. I got lost nearly every day.
When we arrived, the man at the counter said, “Norma used to change clothes in there
sometimes, even in winter. There’s no light or heat in the rooms. She was one tough broad.”
Natalia and I wound our way through the maze of corridors. I could see my breath and
regretted not having brought a hat or a pair of gloves. Fluorescent lights hummed, casting a
pale, eerie glow on the high metal walls. I wondered how many other homeless men and
women used these rooms to store their belongings, to change, or to catch up on sleep. Finally
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we came to our mother’s room; it was just like all the others, eight-by-eight feet. I pulled the
keys out of the sock. We tried them all. The last one fit; the padlock clicked open.
I hesitated for a moment before I looked in. I was terribly curious to know what was inside, but
I also wished I never had found the key. I was afraid of what we would find, even more afraid to
find out what had been lost. Wasn’t it enough that we were here, now, in her final days? I
shone my flashlight into the cold dark room. Things were piled up to the ceiling: furniture,
boxes, trash, clothes, books, cans of soup. I imagined her changing clothes in the dark,
shivering, cursing to herself, taking off one shirt and putting on another, then layering on three
more for warmth. Natalia and I began to dig.
My sister and I worked fast, sorting things into piles. We needed to get back to the hospital and
didn’t have the luxury of taking our time. There was that familiar sense of purpose that I hadn’t
felt in years, that old “it’s an emergency, let’s just get the job done” kind of feeling. I was glad
not to do it alone.
I first tried to separate all the trash from things that we needed to save.
I almost tossed out one of my mother’s old grimy pocketbooks when I felt something hard
inside. I pulled out a butcher knife. “Jesus, look at this,” I said.
“Do you think that’s the one she had when the police caught her at Logan Airport?” said
Natalia. “I’m sure she was on her way to find me.”
Natalia and I excavated. We found a 1950s Geiger counter, and a bag of our mother’s hair with
a note taped to it with instructions on how to make a wig. I found a chart she had drawn
showing all the nuclear power plants in the world, similar to one she had sent me when I lived
in the Norwegian Arctic ten years before. There were boxes crammed with newspaper articles
on cryogenics, alien abductions, radon poisoning, global warming, child abuse, train wrecks,
and unsolved murders in Chicago. I discovered a huge box labeled “Scribing Books” filled with
notebooks devoted to my mother’s eclectic research: geometry, poetry, chemistry, botany,
geography, art history, medicine, fairy tales, zoology, car mechanics, physics, and the Bible. For
each subject, she made vocabulary lists with detailed definitions, something I would have done
even before my brain injury. Her files could have been my files; her notes, mine.
I came across the chiffon scarf I had bought for her in New Orleans years ago. In the same box
were many of my favorite books from childhood. I pulled out a collection of Jack London I’d
read when I was about eleven. After reading Call of the Wild, I became obsessed with polar
exploration. If a man could survive by boiling his boots, or walking out onto the glacial ice with
nothing but a few sled dogs and a piece of seal blubber in his pocket, then certainly I could
withstand whatever obstacles came my way.
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At the bottom of the box were two big fairy-tale collections our father had sent us sometime
after our parents divorced in 1963. I was four and my sister was five. We never saw him again.
One book was a beautifully illustrated collection of Russian fairy tales inscribed, To Rachel, from
Daddy. The other, a book of Japanese fables, was inscribed to me. It had been years since I had
opened them. I stared at the handwriting. Something seemed a bit off. Then it dawned on me—
both inscriptions bore my own adolescent scrawl. I had always remembered the books and our
father’s dedications as proof of his love for us. Yet, how malleable our memories are, even if
our brains are intact. Neuroscientists now suggest that while the core meaning of a long-term
memory remains, the memory transforms each time we attempt to retrieve it. In fact,
anatomical changes occur in the brain every single time we remember. As Proust said, “The
only paradise is paradise lost.”
As I paged through the Russian fairy tale book, a piece of paper fell out—a photocopied picture
of a piano keyboard. Was this how my mother played music all these years? Did my homeless
mother, once a child prodigy, play Bach inside her head, her hands fluttering over imaginary
keys?
What I found next took my breath away. “Nat,” I said. “She saved my pony.”
I took out the old palomino horse I used to call Pony from a torn moldy box. The horse’s right
foreleg was broken. My mother had tried to mend it with a piece of packing tape, then wrapped
it in a red wool hat I had sent her for her birthday two years before. I put it in my bag to take
back to the hotel. In the same box were all the letters I had written my mother over the last
seventeen years. There were also photocopies she had made of her letters to me. Natalia
glanced over to see what I was looking at. I wondered what she felt as she saw me sifting
through the stack. We had barely spoken about our mother for years.
At the bottom of the box were thirteen pairs of scissors. Right after her divorce, when I was
four, my mother tried to slit her wrists with a pair of cutting shears and was rushed to the
hospital. I remember sitting at the foot of the stairs, my grandfather looming over me, puffing
on a cigar. He handed me a rag and told me to wipe the blood off each and every stair. At the
top of the staircase was the open door to our apartment; inside, a limp frilly blouse draped over
an ironing board, on the floor a pair of scissors and a pool of blood. My sister remembers the
incident too but neither of us recalls the other being there. Did it even happen? Before the age
of ten, children have a kind of childhood amnesia. We lack developed language skills and a
cognitive sense of self, especially when we are very young. It’s hard to even know if our
memories are real. Even though we feel they are, they might not be. And in family narratives,
what if the person you learned your early autobiography from couldn’t tell the difference from
reality and a dream?
In another box were all the museum date books I had sent my mother over the years. I found a
little stuffed owl, a teddy bear, and a children’s book I once sent her called Owl Babies, about a
mother owl who disappears but is reunited with her children in the end. There were nursing
textbooks and lists of medical schools my mother planned to apply to. When she turned
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seventy-nine she wrote to tell me that although she was now legally blind she had decided to
study medicine: I am thinking of going to nursing school, maybe in a foreign country. That way,
if I ever get sick or lose my sight completely, I’ll know what to do. I found a set of her teeth stuck
inside an old eyeglass case. I uncovered dozens of legal claims filed by her, accusing various
moving companies, housing projects, the Chicago Transit Authority and the city of Cleveland of
stealing her teeth, her glasses, her house, her hair, her children, her memory, and her youth. I
pulled out stacks of drawings she had made of street scenes, family members, flowers, and
fairies. One was titled Rachel Has No Flowers in Her Hair, a desolate stretch of gray land with
nothing in it but one scraggly tree.
Our mother was expecting us and we had already been at U-Haul for over two hours. My hands
were so cold I could barely feel my fingers anymore. I’d been about to suggest leaving when I
found the box.
We dragged the heavy box out into the hall. It was stuffed with diaries, seventeen years of
secrets: typewritten journals in bulging three-ring binders, others pocket-sized and written by
hand. I skimmed through them for half an hour or more, but had to stop. It reminded me of
when I was a teenager and hid in our grandparents’ attic, digging through boxes, searching for a
father who had disappeared, searching for a mother before she lost her mind. Then I saw
several papers stapled together, stuck in between two journals.
At the top of the page, my mother had written, “Life Story.” It began like this:
There was danger imparted to me at birth. The street was well kept and quiet during the day.
You hardly saw anyone. In 1945 I suffered a childhood nervous breakdown. I was nineteen. My
father and I were supposed to go to a party at my uncle’s, but instead, we went to a foreign film
and as we returned home by bus on 148th Street, my father became angry and said something
about not liking my uncle’s associates. Leaving the bus I dropped coins in the fare box. My father
was angry that I paid for myself. He became more and more enraged and I became mildly
hysterical. When we were in the house, he seized a lamp and said, “I’ll kill you” to parties
unknown. My early childhood was deprived in some respects. I did not view television until 1963
and now I see that little bits of my life in distorted form have gotten into movie stories. I still
have received no compensation for that. Ultimately, what I do know is this: I am a homemaker,
my records have never been straightened out, and my need for privacy and house is greater
than ever. I write this in a motel room looking out onto garbage bins.
I slumped down onto the floor and couldn’t move. I write this in a motel room looking out onto
garbage bins. How much more did I really want to know about her life on the street? My brain
was done for the day.
“Nattie,” I said. “Maybe we should go.” My sister didn’t hear me; she was lost in her own little
world. She sprang up into a standing yoga posture, stretching her arms high above her head.
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Before my injury, I would have been just as resilient. After a few more stretches, Natalia went
back in. I gathered my reserves and went back in too.
“Look at this!” she said. She pulled out something big, white, and fuzzy from deep within our
mother’s den. It was a teddy bear the size of a toddler, dressed in a festive red dress. The red
bow around its neck said 2000.
I tried to remember where I was on New Year’s Day 2000, but couldn’t. Where was my mother
that day? Who gave her this bear? Would she still be here this coming January 1?
“Let’s bring the bear,” said Natalia. “We better go back,” she added. “You look tired. Besides,
she’s going to think we’re not going to come.”
Before we left, we made a stack of things our mother might want at the hospital. My sister
placed The Brothers Karamazov on the pile and a torn almanac from 1992. “Definitely this,” she
said, holding up our mother’s Glenville High School yearbook from 1945. “She loved looking at
pictures of her old friends.”
I flipped through the pages to find her maiden name, Norma Kurap. The portrait of her in a
simple white blouse was sweet and demure. She was eighteen, and schizophrenia had yet to
rear its ugly head. I read the list of activities below her smiling face: Orchestra, Play Production,
Choral Club, Accompanist, Student Council, Music Appreciation Club, National Honor Society,
the list went on. She was voted “Most Versatile” in the Popularity Poll. Her classmates wrote:
Good luck at Carnegie Hall! May your magic piano fingers charm all the hearts of the world. One
boy wrote, To my dream girl, the sweetest and prettiest gal at Glenville. Another wrote, So
when are you going to teach me how to rumba? And another, It will take more than a war to
make me forget you. The introduction to her yearbook, written by a boy named Marvin, is titled
“War Baby.” He writes at the end: We are the class of January, 1945—a war class. We leave
Glenville, determined to finish the fight.
I never realized until then that my mother lost her mind the year we dropped the bomb. Seven
months after she graduated, in August 1945, America obliterated Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
Shortly afterward while on a bus coming home from a movie with her father, the voices inside
my mother’s head arrived unannounced, in all their terrible glory.
Our mother was wide awake when we arrived. “Where were you? I thought you weren’t
going to come. You girls need to help me. We have to get back to the house before it’s too
late.”
“But I’m so worried about everything.” My mother reached up and touched the back of my
head. “And you. What about your little noggin? Does it still hurt?”
“My head’s okay,” I said. “Just some problems here and there, you know.”
“You should wear a helmet,” she said. “That way, they can’t get you again.”
When I injured my brain, I almost didn’t write her about it, but changed my mind. It seemed like
the kind of thing a mother should know, even if she was indigent and ill. When I wrote, I spared
her the gory details, like I did with most things.
“They stole my memory too,” she whispered, as I straightened out her pillows. “They have their
tricks.”
When the truck hit, I was in the passenger’s seat, leaning over, looking for a cassette. The man
driving my car, who suffered whiplash in the accident, was a guy I was dating at the time. We
were on our way home from my sister’s house in northern New York. The truck driver, who
must have fallen asleep, swerved toward the right and tried to put on his brakes. The next thing
I recall was a pair of white-gloved hands reaching in to pull me out of the car. I remember a blur
of blinking lights, and the feeling of hot lava dripping down the back of my head.
When I eventually told my mother about the accident, I said that I suffered from memory loss,
mostly short-term but some long-term memory as well, which isn’t that common with
traumatic brain injury. I didn’t tell her about the strange sensations of lost time that one doctor
thought might be temporal lobe seizures, or that I no longer could follow directions, that I
didn’t know how to leave a tip, and had trouble reading, writing, and doing just about anything
that required over ten minutes of concentration. Why tell a homeless woman who slept at the
airport that it felt like it was raining inside my body and ants were crawling up and down my
legs? My mother thought there were rats living inside her body, aliens in her head.
Natalia and I returned to the storage room before dinner. “We should have worn
headlamps,” I said. “It’s like going down into a cave.”
“Let’s not stay long,” said my sister. “I want to go back tonight to see her.
Even though I usually appear fine to the outside world, when I do too many things, say, shop for
food and have coffee with a friend on the same day, I might not be able to drive home or talk to
anyone for two days after that. If I’m exhausted, I stutter or shut down. If I go to a noisy dinner
party, I can easily press down on the accelerator instead of the brake on my way home.
Because I didn’t learn how to drive until I was almost forty, the act of putting my foot on the
brake isn’t the same kind of habitual memory as tying my shoe. It’s frightening when the part of
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my brain that’s supposed to process all those stimuli being hurled at me won’t do its job
anymore. I get terribly frustrated with myself and with friends who don’t understand. My
judgment isn’t always the best either. I think I’m able to handle much more than I really can.
“You have to drive back, you know,” said Natalia. “We didn’t put me down on the rental.
Maybe we should do that tomorrow.”
I was packing more journals to take back to the hotel when Natalia found a big black trunk with
brass trim. We hauled it out and yanked the top open.
Inside were family photos we thought we’d never see again: our mother at sixteen, smiling
from a tenement window, our father’s black-and-white glossy for his first book, our grandfather
standing with a menacing grin in the garden, holding a pair of pruning shears. And nestled in a
pile of loose photos was my sister’s and my baby album. I skimmed through the pages till
I came to a picture of my sister as a chubby toddler, sitting on top of a baby grand, looking at
my mother, eyes closed, playing with abandon. My sister seemed frightened in the picture, as if
she were about to fall. I imagined her during the fourteen months before I came into the
world—an infant living with a gifted and beautiful mother who lived in an alternate universe, a
brilliant father who drank himself to sleep each night. A bit like Zelda and F. Scott Fitzgerald, I
thought. I put the book aside to bring back to the hotel.
Natalia and I continued mining. Inside the trunk, there were pictures I had drawn when I was
small, report cards, my art and music awards. I picked up a small plastic grandfather clock to
toss into the garbage pile. “Look at this crappy old thing,” I said. “I can’t believe the things she
saved.”
“There’s too much here,” said my sister. “I can’t take it all in.”
“Don’t exclude me. Stop thinking that you have to do everything. It’s annoying.”
I pried open the little glass window below the clock face—inside was a drawing of two little
rabbits, and below the rabbits was a drawing of a tiger.
script. Underneath the tiger my mother had placed a photo of my sister and me at ages five and
six. I look stiff and unhappy; my sister smiles at the viewer and strikes a girlish pose. Behind the
photo was yet another picture, cut from a 1960s Life magazine— a still life of red and green
Christmas ornaments and holly. Was she trying to protect us? Did she believe a drawing could
be a talisman against the forces of evil in the world?
Back at the hotel that night, as my sister and I got ready for bed, I wondered what lay
ahead. The next day or the day after that, our mother would be moved to a nursing home for
hospice care. How long would she hang on? Days? Weeks? My sister, who suffers from
insomnia, performed her nocturnal rituals to calm her nerves. She took an aromatherapy bath,
stretched, and read before inserting her earplugs. She put on her eye mask and turned off her
lamp. We are both vigilant sleepers: she can’t fall asleep; I wake at the slightest sound.
“Night, Nattie. I’ll turn off the light in a little bit. Sleep well.”
I pulled a few of our mother’s journals from the pile. As the years passed, I saw how they
became smaller and more portable. She daily mulled over her dreams, trying to interpret them
and discern if they were real or not. She recorded exactly what she ate each day—mostly
donuts, small cups of chili, cheap black coffee, and hamburgers from McDonald’s. She recorded
what she spent, down to the penny. She spoke to someone in her head and struggled to
understand what was an outside influence and what came from within. She wrote about how
light fell on certain trees and described the delicate scents of flowers she saw in the park; she
also wrote each flower’s common and Latin names, and drew a picture of it. One sentence
stuck in my head and I marked its place in the book. It sounded like something she had written
to me in a letter once: Of my life at the piano, I shall say nothing for the time being.
I picked up her very last journal, the diary I had found when I looked through her backpack. In
the pages I read prescient signs of her living with cancer, unaware. My mother was nauseous,
dizzy, incontinent, and had blood in her stool. She doubled over with abdominal pain. She was
bloated from a tumor but thought it was because she was overweight, so she tried to eat even
less. She ate most meals in hospital cafeterias, the cheapest places, and rode the subway all
over the city to get there, no matter how bad the weather. She recorded the weather daily,
sometimes every hour. Near the end of her last diary, she wrote: Awoke today with stronger
remembrance for loved ones.
I knew I should go to bed—it was well past midnight and we wanted to get an early start, but I
couldn’t stop reading. She wrote: This a.m. I’m in a hotel I can’t identify, I see so many gray
closed doors. I cannot work with poor memory. To note something, a rat will find incentive to
report. Caution: I’ve suffered as much as anyone in history. Note: Metamorphic rock means
changes deep inside earth from heat and weight of other rocks.
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I cannot work with poor memory either, I thought. How will I remember these passing days?
Once again, I thought of Nicolaus Steno. My mother was dying and yet I turned to history for
solace, to ancient geology. I thought of when Steno made his final public appearance as a
scientist. These things I remember well, these odd little facts from science, history, and art.
That year, in 1673, Steno was dedicating an anatomical theater and gave a speech on the
importance of scientific research. He told the audience, “Beautiful is what we see. More
beautiful is what we understand. Most beautiful is what we do not comprehend.”
Natalia was fast asleep in the bed next to mine, like when we were little and our names were
Rachel and Myra. I read about how many nights my mother slept outside in the rain one
November, hungry and cold, suffering from a bladder infection and a terrible cough. She had
been sleeping in her old backyard while the owner was out of town. This was how she spent her
birthday in the fall of 2001, two months after the tragedies of 9/11. I felt sick to my stomach,
knowing that my own mother spent so many nights outside in the rain. Why didn’t anyone help
her, lead her to safety? I wanted to go back in time and be the person who took her in.
In my mother’s very last diary, from the fall of 2006, she returned to the history of the earth:
The outer shell . . . is divided into about thirty large and small pieces that fit together . . . called
tectonic plates. They move on hot layers of rock within the mantle. Continents sit on top of the
plates; plates are also under the ocean floor. As the plates move, the continents and oceans
slowly change.
What hadn’t she studied these seventeen years? I searched her journals for my name, my
sister’s, but she barely mentioned us at all, and even then only obliquely: Long nightmare
dream of losses. Bury the nightmare. Bury the losses. Bury the dream.
On Friday morning, Natalia and I sat side by side next to our mother’s bed.
My sister graded her students’ English papers while I drew in my sketchbook. It felt like old
times. When we were children, Natalia sat on the bed and wrote stories while I sat next to her
and made pictures—rare moments of calm in a turbulent world. I still felt at home sitting only a
few inches apart, her writing, me drawing, neither of us saying a word. Soon our mother would
be moved to a nursing home. We were waiting to find out where she would be placed. She still
thought she was going “home.”
There was a radio in the room now; one of the nurses had brought it in after I told her how my
mother’s favorite classical music station calmed her down, and that she listened to it twenty-
four hours a day. Christmas was in three days and every radio station was playing “Jingle Bells.”
“Turn that holiday crap off,” said my mother. “I can’t stand it anymore.”
“What’s a CD?”
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“It’s a little record. I’ll get you some classical music. Don’t worry.”
I only came home once during Christmastime, the first year after I left for college. My Russian
Orthodox grandfather was still alive then and he was the only one in the family who celebrated
Christmas. After he died in 1980, our mother always spent the holidays alone, or with our
grandmother, the two of them eating corned beef sandwiches, watching sitcoms on TV. I
always told myself that it didn’t matter anyway, that they were secular Jews who had no
interest in any religious celebrations, Chanukah or otherwise. A neighbor from next door told
me that my mother spent her last Thanksgiving in the family house locked up inside. When the
neighbor peeked in the window, she saw piles of dishes in the sink and garbage on the floor. “I
was afraid to go in but was worried your mother would starve to death.” The neighbor left food
in the milk chute, then came back later to retrieve the empty plates.
As my mother slept, I tried to draw her face. It was my fourth attempt since I’d arrived on
December 18. It had been many years since I had drawn her. When I was in high school, I
stayed home on weekend nights sometimes so she wouldn’t be alone. We listened to the radio
together or to records. She’d lie on the couch and smoke and I would sketch her. Now I drew
her asleep and dying, head tilted back upon the pillow, her mouth open as if in song.
I took out the drawing the doctor had made of what my mother looked like inside. It reminded
me of choreography, the staging of an intricate dance. It reminded me of my own inevitable
demise. There is a Buddhist meditation I do sometimes. I imagine the layers of my body as I sit,
mindful of my breath. I picture my flesh falling away, then the muscles and connective tissue,
the organs, and finally the bones. I do this once in a while to remind myself of where I’m going.
A rather macabre way to comfort myself, I suppose. Sometimes I take it a step further, into
deep time—I imagine my bones beneath the earth, crumbling to gypsum, forming into chalk
held by a child writing words upon a blackboard. I imagine the words erased by another child’s
hand, and still another, breathing in chalk dust, exhaling into air.
An aide came into the room to remove my mother’s tray. She had barely touched her eggs.
Little by little, we cease to consume, take in food, water, air. My sister glanced up, then jotted
something down. What would she remember? What would I? Our brains are built for selective
attention—we focus on some things while ignoring a vast array of other stimuli around us. It is
those select things that we recall, not the rest. I couldn’t take notes about what was going on
around me like Natalia. Just the act of taking visual and auditory information in, processing it,
then writing it down, is an act of multitasking, something I don’t do well anymore. I was afraid I
would miss something, something so small you can’t see or sense if you are putting words to
the page—the subtle twitch of a finger, a swift sideways glance, a snippet of song down the
hall.
And yet, what does it matter anyway? Memory, if it is anything at all, is unreliable. Even birds,
with their minute brains, have better memories than we do. Nuthatches and black-capped
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chickadees remember precisely where they stored food in the wild. Honeybees have “flower
memory” and remember exactly where they already have been to pollinate a flower. They can
even recall the colors and scents of their food sources, and the times of day when their food is
at its best. We humans are different—our brains are built not to fix memories in stone but
rather to transform them. Our recollections change in their retelling.
Still, I wondered if I should try to take notes. Without some kind of written record, would I
remember these quiet, fleeting days? Nobel Prize–winning neuroscientist Eric Kandel says we
are who we are because of what we learn and what we remember. Who am I, then, if my
memory is impaired? And how will I remember my mother after she is gone?
Some of my old memories feel trapped in amber in my brain, lucid and burning, while others
are like the wing beat of a hummingbird, an intangible, ephemeral blur. But neuroscientists say
that is how memory works—it is complex and mercurial, a subterranean world that changes
each time we drag something up from below. Every sensation, thought, or event we recall
physically changes the neuroconnections in our brain. And for someone who suffers from brain
trauma, synapses get crossed, forcing their dendritic branches to wander aimlessly down the
wrong road.
And yet, I can still walk into a museum and name almost everything on the wall. I can recall
pictures I drew, even ones I made as a child. I remember artifacts from museums, fossils,
masks, and bones. The part of my brain that stores art and all the things I loved to look at and
draw is for the most part intact. Perhaps the visual part of my brain can help retrieve the events
that are lost. If neuroscientific research suggests that the core meaning of a memory remains,
even if its details have been lost or distorted, then if I find the right pictures, the pictures could
lead me to the core.
In my mother’s room, while she slept and Natalia wrote, I took out one of my mother’s diaries,
one from 1992. That year I had gone to Israel and brought back a bag of stones. One contained
an ammonite, a fossilized nautilus hell. When I got home I poured water on it to see what it
might have looked like centuries ago in the sea. I wondered how long it had been hidden in the
earth, a rock shifting against rocks, rising up over time from primordial sediment. Isn’t that how
memory works too? We look at something—a picture, a stone, a bird—and a memory surfaces,
then that memory carries us to another, and another. Memory isn’t just mutable, it is
associative. Thomas Aquinas once said, “One arrives at the color white through milk, to air from
the color white, to dampness from air and on to Autumn.” How, then, would I arrive back at my
own past?
“Myra?” my mother said, her eyes half shut. “Are you still here?”
I hid her journal inside the book in my lap. “I’m still here.”
“She’s here too. She just stepped out for a second but she’ll be right back.”
“Myra?”
“Yes?”
“Anything.”
“Good. Because a girl has to put her best foot forward whenever she can.”
We left the hospital late that night. Most of the day had been quiet, just the sound of
our mother’s slow breathing and the radio purring in the background. My sister got ready for
bed while I pulled out one of the photo albums we’d brought back from U-Haul, our baby book.
“You coming?” she asked. She switched off her light and turned her masked face to the wall.
I held the photo album up to my nose. It smelled like my mother used to smell—cigarettes and
Tabu, her favorite perfume—our sense of smell, the strongest memory trigger of all, the only
sense that travels directly to the limbic system in our brain. I thought of my mother’s small
white face in the hospital bed, her delicate, cold hands. Then another picture of her rose up
in my mind, her hands hovering over mine at the piano—a younger Norma; my mother in the
bloom of life, a dark-eyed beauty in a red silk dress, her face unreadable, listening to something
no one else can hear.
I took out my mother’s last diary. Her final entry was a random list: Hyssop: plant used in
bunches for purification rites by ancient Hebrews. Po River: Runs through Italy into Adriatic.
Avert: to turn away or aside. Note: My white cane is missing. I dropped my sunglasses on the
bus. Then farther down, these words: Chica—drink of Peru. Hecuba—wife of Priam. Baroque
Palace—? What palace? What did her last entry mean? A few pages back were little sketches
she had made: a leaf, her hand, a shoe.
The Memory Palace: A Memoir, Mira Bartók
I thought of random pictures from my past—paintings from the Cleveland Museum of Art,
objects from our grandparents’ house, things I liked to draw. What pictures did I remember?
What could I create to contain them all? Was the answer in my mother’s very last page? Hadn’t
she herself built a memory cabinet at U-Haul to contain her beautiful, tragic, and transient life?
Was there something I could build too?
A memory palace. A man named Matteo Ricci built one once. I read about him the year after
my accident. Ricci, a Jesuit priest who possessed great mnemonic powers, traveled to China in
1596 and taught scholars how to build an imaginary palace to keep their memories safe. He
told them that the size of the palace would depend on how much they wanted to remember.
To everything they wanted to recall, they were to affix an image; to every image, a position
inside a room in their mind. His idea went back to the Greek poet Simonides, who, one day
while visiting friends at a palace, stepped outside for a minute to see who was at the door. As
soon as he went outside, the great hall came crashing down. All the people inside were crushed
to death and no one could recognize them. Simonides, however, remembered where everyone
stood at the party, and recalled them one by one so their bodies could be identified.
My mind was full of so many pictures—with each one I could build a different room, each room
could lead me to a memory, each memory to another. Since I knew what Ricci didn’t at the
time, that memories cannot be fixed, my palace would always be changing. But the foundation
would stay the same.
Ricci told the scholars that the place to put each picture must be spacious, the light even and
clear, but not too bright. He said that the first image they should choose for their memory
palace must arouse strong emotions. It was the entranceway, after all. I closed my eyes and
opened a door. I turned to the right and there, in a reception room with high arched ceilings, I
placed two pictures on opposite walls. The light was clear in the room, the space free of clutter.
The Memory Palace: A Memoir
Reading Group Guide
Introduction
When piano prodigy Norma Herr was well, she was the most vibrant personality in the room.
But as her schizophrenic episodes became more frequent and more dangerous, she withdrew
into a world that neither of her daughters could make any sense of. After being violently
attacked for demanding that Norma seek help, Mira Bartók and her sister changed their names
and cut off all contact in order to keep themselves safe. For the next seventeen years Mira’s
only contact with her mother was through infrequent letters exchanged through post office
boxes, often not even in the same city where she was living.
At the age of forty, artist Mira suffered a debilitating head injury that left her memories foggy
and her ability to make sense of the world around her forever changed. Hoping to reconnect
with her past, Mira reaches out to the homeless shelter where her mother had been living.
When she receives word that her mother is dying in a hospital, Mira and her sister travel to
their mother’s deathbed to reconcile one last time. Norma gives them a key to a storage unit in
which she has kept hundreds of diaries, photographs, and mementos from the past that Mira
never imagined she would see again. These artifacts trigger a flood of memories, and give Mira
access to a past that she believed had been lost forever.
1. The prologue describes a homeless woman standing on a window ledge, thinking about
jumping. The author writes, “Let’s call her my mother for now, or yours.” How does
imagining a loved one of your own in that position change the way you think about the
book? Does it help you connect or make the situation more personal?
2. Early in the book, Mira sees her mother for the first time in seventeen years. What is
your impression of this hospital visit? What impact does it have on Mira?
3. While their mother is dying at the hospital, Mira and her sister Natalia go through their
mom’s storage facility. How did it make you feel to be with the two sisters as they
rummaged through the collection? What discovered or rediscovered items touched you
most and why.
4. Mira says, “Memory, if it is anything at all, is unreliable.” How does Mira’s own
unreliable memory—a lingering effect of her auto accident—underscore the
schizophrenic mind of her mother? Do you think it helps her relate to her mother? Why
or why not?
5. Mira turns to art as a way to express herself. When Mira visits a Russian Orthodox
Church with her grandfather, she sees the “Beautiful Gate” of painted icons and
wonders: “Can a painting save a person’s life?” Describe ways in which art is therapeutic
in this book.
6. As an illustration of how memory can be unreliable, Mira explains that she vividly
remembers seeing the Cuyahoga River burning in Cleveland in 1969, and then admits
that she’s almost certain she wasn’t really there, even though the memory of the event
is so clear. Can you think of things that are imprinted in your own memory (perhaps
from hearing family stories or seeing images onscreen) even though you were not
there? Do you think anyone’s memory can be an accurate record of truth? Why or why
not?
7. In Italy, Mira takes a job making reproductions of old paintings for tourists. She later
learns that they are being sold as authentic antiquities. How does Mira react to this
news? What deeper feeling does it evoke in Mira about her life in general? How does
this discovery fit into the book’s questions about authenticity?
8. After visiting their father’s grave in the New Orleans area, Mira and Natalia decide to
visit a state park. Their heads and hearts filled with emotion, they get lost along the
way. But after they find the park and enjoy some peaceful time in nature, the road away
from the park seems clear and simple. Describe the role that nature and meditation play
in Mira’s life and in this book.
9. When Mira’s husband William is in a fit of depression, Mira feels like “It’s January in
1990 all over again.” Compare and contrast Mira’s characterization of her husband and
her mother. How do her experiences with her mother impact the way she responds to
William’s depression?
10. At her mother’s memorial service, the director of MHS (Mental Health Services, Inc.)
says to Mira, “I know of children who have abandoned their parents for much less than
you two have gone through,” but Mira wonders if she and her sister truly did enough.
How does this book make you think about the obligations that children have to their
parents? Are there limits to what family members owe each other?
11. Mira seems to regard the homeless people she sees on the streets a little differently—as
though any one of them could be a mother or father. She wants people to understand
the “thin line, the one between their worlds and ours.” Has this book helped you see the
homeless in a different light? Why or why not? How has it impacted the way you think
about mental illness?
Enhance Your Book Club
1. One purpose of this memoir is to show first-hand what it’s like to live with (and apart
from) a person who suffers from a mental illness. Do a little research to find out more
about what it’s like to live with this disease. You can start with websites such as
www.schizophrenia.com, http://nami.org/, and http://www.healthyplace.com/thought-
disorders/nimh/world-of-people-with-schizophrenia/menu-id-1154. You might also try
typing in the search term “schizophrenia documentary” at YouTube.com in order to see
a variety of homemade and televised documentaries about people who suffer from this
debilitating mental illness.
2. Mira Bartók is a writer, poet, musician, and artist. She is also a strong advocate for other
writers, poets, and artists. She blogs about grants, fellowships, and opportunities for
both the established and aspiring. Visit her blog at www.miraslist.blogspot.com. Are
there any opportunities there you may want to explore? Share them with the group—
and encourage your fellow readers to pursue their own creative interests.
3. The author wants you to understand how thin the line is between one world and
another—between what you may consider a “normal” life and a life on the streets or
plagued with a mind or mood-altering condition. After reading this book, take a closer
look at people you may ordinarily ignore. Look a homeless person in the eye and greet
him or her with a salutation as you might any other person. If possible, try volunteering
at a local homeless shelter, or better yet, your book club could volunteer as a group. Be
sure to share and discuss your experience with your fellow book club members.
You mention that your mother admired the ability of a person to mix words and art. Do you
think she would have been proud of this book, which combines your artwork with your
writing? Did your mother’s encouragement prompt you to combine words and art, or did you
always think you’d be a writer?
I think she would have been very proud of me for writing this book, although there are many
parts in it that would upset her, too. However, I know she would have liked the artwork and she
would have appreciated the great effort it took to create a book like this, given my disability. As
far as always thinking I would be a writer, I never thought about that and still don’t think of
myself in that way. Although I always wrote—mostly poetry, essays, and short fiction, and also I
made artists’ book with images and text—I am an artist first, and that means, for me, that I
serve the idea. If the idea, which often starts out as an image, needs to be a story, then I will
write a story. If it should be a painting or a film, then I have to follow that trajectory. My next
project is an illustrated young adult novel/adult fiction crossover. I have also started to explore
creating radio documentaries with my husband, musician and producer, Doug Plavin. Can you
tell that I don’t like labels?
You are an accomplished artist, author, poet, and musician. Do you have a favorite medium?
My first love was music, and still is, although I am hardly an accomplished musician—more of
an amateur. And due to some cognitive deficits from my brain injury, it will take a lot of focused
practicing to regain much of my former ability to play music.
How do you choose which form to use when expressing an emotion, theme, or story?
How did combining art forms using writing and painting help you construct your memoir?
Music informed my use of language, art informed the imagistic way I wrote. And when words
failed me, I would draw. When I couldn’t draw, I would write. And sometimes, while typing, if
words got stuck in my head, I’d bring up an image from my computer to help me along visually.
This book is a very personal and moving testimony to the turbulent and loving relationship
between a mother and daughter. Were there certain aspects of your story you were reluctant
to share?
Yes, definitely. I withheld certain things that might have appeared sensational, particularly
violent episodes with our grandfather. I’m not a huge fan of misery memoirs, ones that
relentlessly describe one terrible thing after another without any self-examination on the
author’s part. I wanted to express beauty as well and I also did not want to contribute to the
unfortunate stereotype of a violent schizophrenic; statistically, most schizophrenics are more
likely to harm themselves than others. I also decided against sharing a couple of very personal
drawings, like the one I did of my mother when she was dying.
When you wrote your memoir, how did you feel about scenes that involve your sister or
other featured characters who may read it? How does the unreliability of memory come into
play in these scenes, given the different perspectives of people who may have experienced
the same moments in different ways? What has it been like to share these memories with the
people who lived through them with you?
I think that the only person I was worried about was my sister, Natalia Singer, because of her
very private nature and her difficult personal choice not to write our mother during those
seventeen years of separation. I was just worried about bringing to light, in a public way, a very
painful part of our family history. Nevertheless, I felt compelled to write the book and hoped
that ultimately, her reading it would be a healing experience for both of us—and I really think it
was. After she read it, she called to say that she loved it and that I was very brave to have
written this book. And aside from that, she had written her own memoir a few years ago, called
Scraping by in the Big Eighties, about how she tried to rise above our difficult past to make it as
a struggling writer during that decadent era of big hair and junk bonds. She never, to my
recollection (ah…memory again!) asked me to help her recall any events from that period while
she was writing her book, nor do I think she should have.
Basically, I tried hard not to think of anyone reading the book until I was done. At one
point, while I was working on an early draft, my sister asked me if I was going to show her the
book before I was finished so she could check my memories and make sure they were right. I
thought that was pretty funny, given that my book was about how unreliable memory was. I
thanked her but told her that I was more interested in what things we miss-remember and why.
I was and still am very intrigued by how family members recall things differently. It’s the
psychology behind what we choose to forget and the neuroscience that I am interested in, not
some journalistic approach to memoir. Also, most people who read memoirs know that
conversations and scenes are condensed and altered in the interest of time and telling a good
story. But what we don’t often see in memoir is the exploration of memory itself, how it
functions, and how in the retelling of an event, the telling transforms not only the memory but
it changes our brain as well.
One thing almost everyone says after reading the book is: how could you write a book like that
if you have such a problem with memory? What I think they don’t understand is that for many
years, from the time I was fourteen, I have been keeping very detailed journals, dream diaries,
and sketchbooks. Also, with TBI, much of our long-term memory returns. It’s the short-term
memory that is most compromised with me (and still is). All that aside, the funny thing is that
when certain family members or friends from childhood read the book, they all said how close
their memories were to my own. I didn’t expect that at all.
There is a difference between the unreliability of memory and the conscious effort to stretch
truth into fiction. There have been some high profile allegations in the memoir genre in
recent years. Were you at all concerned about this sort of scandal?
Never. My book is hardly scandalous. If anything, it is a story about the transformative power of
empathy.
Did you ever consider writing about your experiences in a fictional way?
Actually, before I wrote this book I was writing a novel but the mother character (a minor figure
in the novel) kept getting in the way so I thought I would just write about my mother and be
done with it! My next book has some bits and pieces of autobiographical material but more
related to place since it is set in northern Norway where I lived for a time.
Why do you think your mother requested that you contact Willard Gaylin? Have you had any
additional contact with him besides the single message in the book?
I think that my mother really respected him and remembered him from her past as a kind,
gentle, and helpful man. In her journals and her letters to me, she often talked about her need
to find an “advisor” and I think he probably fit the bill in her mind for some reason. And no, I
haven’t had any more contact, however, he’s on my Goodreads ‘friend’ list and when the book
comes out I will definitely send him a copy!
Your mother wrote, “Everyone is guaranteed the right to be deprived of the pursuit of
happiness.” Do you think she believed that in the end?
I don’t know. Sometimes she made up these darkly funny phrases but I don’t know how much
she believed in them. I would imagine she was commenting on this American belief that
everyone has a right to the pursuit of happiness, while for those who are poor and
disenfranchised, it is extremely arduous for them to not only find happiness but to even pursue
it, especially if they are living on the street.
Do you?
I think that unfortunately, many Americans think happiness means entitlement—being able to
drive gas-guzzling cars, and consume as much as we want, usually at the expense of another
human being’s suffering (i.e., working in sweatshops). Nothing is ever enough and therefore,
they can never truly be happy. Personally, I think true happiness comes from trying to alleviate
the suffering of others. I also think it comes from always remembering what you love—paying
attention to and recreating that sense of wonderment that we experienced in childhood but
often about as we grow older.
Part three of your memoir is aptly called “Palimpsest.” Do you feel as though writing this
book was a new beginning for you?
Absolutely!
Did the book’s publication create a transitory moment similar to or different from the feeling
you had when you finished writing it?
It’s a different feeling. Finishing the book felt like a monumental thing for me, but monumental
on a personal level. Publishing it makes the story public and creates this odd (and powerful)
connection to a larger world, i.e., an audience. I found that after I finished the book I was
incredibly relieved and felt like now I can go on and write fiction, make radio documentaries,
make prints and paintings, etc. But the reality is that now that the book is out there, I have to
go full-steam ahead and promote it—do events, engage with readers, etc. It’s a bit
overwhelming and stressful, although incredibly exciting too.
As a practiced author and artist, can you briefly describe your creative process? Do you
practice daily, or in fits of inspiration? Do you approach visual art differently than writing?
I often start writing when I am walking in the woods with my dog. I bring a hand-held voice
recorder with me, and speak/write as I walk. I get some of my best writing ideas in the morning
when I’m out in nature but if I don’t record them right away they probably will disappear from
the memory bank by the time I get home. As far as practicing daily goes, I write every day when
I am working on a literary project. However, because I live with a brain injury, if I have dinner
with friends the night before, that means I don’t write the next day. Or if I speak at a
conference and have to travel there and back, I am usually so mentally fatigued that I probably
won’t write for a couple or few days. I have to measure everything I do very carefully. It goes
the other way around too—if I write one day I might not be able to drive my car the next. As for
making art, though, I find it very hard to start something (starting projects is very difficult for
people with TBI) but once I do, it takes less mental energy and can be quite meditative. I
approach both art and writing in a similar way, though—with strong images. I usually get
inspired to write or draw by looking at an image or remembering one. I then write, or draw
myself into the discovery of what that image means to me. I also get a lot of ideas from my very
wild, mythic, and adventurous dreams! I see images I have to write down or I hear the first line
in a poem, right before I wake up.
Describe how you came to title this book The Memory Palace. Do you feel like writing this
memoir was a memory palace in itself? How did you put together the bits and pieces until
they made a more sensible whole for you?
I never have an agenda for anything I create. I didn’t write this book to teach anyone a lesson
about brain injury or mental illness or the plight of the homeless population. I wrote it because
I needed to, and also, I knew it was one hell of a good story. That said, if readers walk away
from this book with more empathy for those less fortunate or if they gain a more
compassionate understanding of mental illness and the other issues I bring up, then that is the
icing on the cake. Like I say in the book, there is a thin line between the world of homelessness
and “our” world. And each and every woman out there, trying to survive on the street is
someone’s mother, daughter, sister, or friend. I also hope my friends and family will
understand my struggles with living with a brain injury a little bit better. Even after over ten
years, most people still don’t get it when I tell them I need to not talk on the phone or see
people for a while in order to rest my brain. I think it’s very hard to see someone who looks and
sounds normal and accept that there is something seriously wrong. And I certainly hope that
friends and family of others living with TBI, as well as those living with other invisible
disabilities, such as Lupus, Fibromyalgia, Chronic Fatigue Syndrome, Lyme Disease, etc., will be
more understanding toward their loved ones. And last but not least, I hope that, even though I
revealed some very dark things about her, my mother’s memory is honored in some way, and
that readers will go away with the feeling that she was a beautiful, gifted, and extraordinary
human being. And the best thing is, the shelter that she lived in the last three years of her life
has recently been renamed in her honor. It is now a bright, shiny new facility called The Norma
Herr Women’s Center! I am now working with the shelter to hopefully raise money to create a
community garden near the shelter for the women there to grow their own food. How is that
for a happy ending?
INCENDIARY
Chris Cleave
Simon & Schuster
Paperback: 9781451618495
eBook: 9781451618495
Dear Reader,
Incendiary was my first book, and I still like it the most. I love it not because it’s the most
polished or well-behaved novel, but because I wrote it in a state of raw emotion following the
birth of our first child—and it is a never-to-be-repeated intensity of experience.
The novel is about the love a mother has for her child, but it’s also a novel about our times
because the mother is writing to Osama bin Laden, who took her child away. She thinks she can
make Osama stop hating, using only the power of her words. She tells him, “I want you to see
what a human really is from the shape of the hole he leaves behind.”
That’s the point of the novel—it’s an open letter from a woman who understands love to a man
who doesn’t.
If you read Incendiary, I hope you’ll enjoy it. I’ve always wanted to start conversations with my
writing, rather than to have the last word—so I’d be delighted if you wanted to discuss it in
your book group, or to join in the discussion on www.chriscleave.com. I am also on Twitter
@chriscleave.
I’m very grateful to American readers for the welcome they have given to my work. If you are
someone who read Little Bee or if you sent me one of the very many insightful and kind
messages I’ve received, my sincere thanks. I hope you enjoy Incendiary just as much.
I wrote Incendiary because as a parent I want to see a world where our first instinct is to fight
violence with humor and persuasion, rather than with more violence. For that reason, it’s a
political novel too.
Chris Cleave
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Chris Cleave’s menu suggestion below will make all the more sense after
reading Incendiary.
“Gin and fish fingers, with an optional couple of Valium on the side. Terms and conditions
apply. Please consult your physician before taking any medicines.”
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Sometimes the sun would be up before my husband came home. The breakfast show would be
on the telly and there’d be a girl doing the weather or the Dow Jones. It was all a bit pointless if
you ask me. I mean if you wanted to know what the weather was doing you only had to look
out the window and as for the Dow Jones well you could look out the window or you could not.
You could please yourself because it’s not as if there was anything you could do about the
Dow Jones either way. My whole point is I never gave a monkey’s about any of it. I just wanted
my husband home safe.
When he finally came in it was such a relief. He never said much because he was so tired. I
would ask him how did it go? And he would look at me and say I’m still here ain’t I? My
husband was what the Sun would call a QUIET HERO it’s funny how none of them are NOISY I
suppose that wouldn’t be very British. Anyway my husband would drink a Famous Grouse and
go to bed without taking his clothes off or brushing his teeth because as well as being
QUIET he sometimes COULDN’T BE ARSED and who could blame him? When he was safe asleep
I would go to look in on our boy.
Our boy had his own room it was cracking we were proud of it. My husband built his bed in the
shape of Bob the Builder’s dump truck and I sewed the curtains and we did the painting
together. In the night my boy’s room smelled of boy. Boy is a good smell it is a cross between
angels and tigers. My boy slept on his side sucking Mr. Rabbit’s paws. I sewed Mr. Rabbit myself
he was purple with green ears. He went everywhere my boy went. Or else there was trouble.
My boy was so peaceful it was lovely to watch him sleep so still with his lovely ginger hair
glowing from the sunrise outside his curtains. The curtains made the light all pink. They slept
very quiet in the pink light the 2 of them him and Mr. Rabbit. Sometimes my boy was so still I
had to check he was breathing. I would put my face close to his face and blow a little bit on his
cheek. He would snuffle and frown and fidget for a while then go all soft and still again. I would
smile and tiptoe backwards out of his room and close his door very quiet.
Mr. Rabbit survived. I still have him. His green ears are black with blood and one of his paws is
missing.
Now I’ve told you where my boy came from Osama I suppose I ought to tell you a bit more
about his mum before you get the idea I was some sort of saint who just sewed fluffy toys and
waited up for her husband. I wish I was a saint because it was what my boy deserved but it
wasn’t what he got. I wasn’t a perfect wife and mum in fact I wasn’t even an average one I was
what the Sun would call a DIRTY LOVE CHEAT.
My husband and my boy never found out oh thank you god. But
I can say it now they’re both dead and I don’t care who reads it. It
can’t hurt them any more. I loved my boy and I loved my husband but sometimes I saw other
men too. Or rather they saw me and I didn’t make much of an effort to put them off and one
thing sometimes led to another. You know what men are like Osama you trained thousands of
them yourself they are RAVENOUS LOVE RATS.
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Sex is not a beautiful and perfect thing for me Osama it is a condition caused by nerves. Ever
since I was a young girl I get so anxious. It only needs a little thing to get me started. Your Twin
Towers attack or just 2 blokes arguing over a cab fare it’s all the same. All the violence in the
world is connected it’s just like the sea. When I see a woman shouting at her kid in Asda car
park I see bulldozers flattening refugee camps. I see those little African boys with scars across
the tops of their skulls like headphones. I see all the lost tempers of the world I see HELL ON
EARTH. It’s all the same it all makes me twitchy.
And when I get nervous about all the horrible things in the world I just need something very
soft and secret and warm to make me forget it for a bit. I didn’t even know what it was till I was
14. It was one of my mum’s boyfriends who showed me but I won’t write his name or he’ll get
in trouble. I suppose he was a SICK CHILD PREDATOR but I still remember how lovely it felt.
Afterwards he took me for a drive through town and I just smiled and looked out at all the hard
faces and the homeless drifting past the car windows and they didn’t bother me for the
moment. I was just smiling and thinking nothing much.
Ever since then whenever I get nervous I’ll go with anyone so long as they’re gentle. I’m not
proud I know it’s not an excuse and I’ve tried so hard to change but I can’t. It’s deep under my
skin like a tat they can never quite remove oh sometimes I feel so tired.
I’ll tell you about one night in particular Osama. You’ll see it isn’t true I always used to wait up
for my husband. One night last spring he got called out on a job and while I was waiting up for
him the telly made me very anxious. It was one of those politics talk shows and everyone was
trying to talk at once. It was like they were on a sinking ship fighting over the last life jacket and
I couldn’t stand it. I ran into the kitchen and started tidying to take my mind off things only the
problem was it was already tidy. The trouble is when I get nervous I always tidy and I get
nervous a lot and there’s only so much tidying a small flat can take. I looked around the kitchen
I was hopping from foot to foot I was getting desperate. The oven was clean the chip pan was
sparkling and all the tins in the cupboards were in alphabetical order with their labels facing
outwards. Apple slices Baked beans Custard and so on it was a real problem it was effing
perfect I didn’t know what to do with myself so I started biting my nails. I can bite till my fingers
bleed when I get like that but very luckily just then I had a flash of genius I realized I never had
alphabetised the freezer had I? I’m good like that Osama sometimes things just come to me. So
I opened up the freezer and dumped out all the food onto the floor and put it back in its right
order from top to bottom. AlphaBites Burgers Chips Drumsticks Eclairs Fish Fingers I could go on
but the point is all the time I was doing this I was very happy and I never once imagined my
husband cutting the wrong wire on a homemade nail bomb and being blown into chunks about
the size of your thumb. The trouble was as soon as all the packets were back in the freezer
that’s exactly what I started seeing. So then I did what anyone would do in my situation Osama
I went down the pub.
Actually that isn’t quite true. What I did first was open up the freezer again and take out the
bag of AlphaBites and open them and put all the AlphaBites into alphabetical order and put
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them back into the freezer and then I went down the pub. There was nothing else for it I just
had to get out of that flat and close the door behind me.
I know they say you should never leave a child alone in the home but there you go. The people
who say that I wonder what they would do if it was them left all alone and it was their
husbands making a bomb safe and all their laundry was done already and all their AlphaBites
were in perfect order. I think they might of popped out to the pub like I did. Just to see a few
friendly faces. Just to drink a little something to take the edge off. So off I toddled down the
road to the Nelson’s Head and I got a G&T and I took it to the corner table nearest the telly
projector and I sat there watching Sky like you do. They were showing all the season’s greatest
goals which was fine by me. I know you’d rather watch blindfolded lads having their heads
hacked off with knives Osama well that’s the main difference between you and me I suppose
we have different opinions about telly. If you’d ever spent an evening in front of the box with
me and my husband there’d of been a lot of squabbling over the remote control. Anyway my
point is I was happy minding my own and I sat there all alone good as gold and the old
granddads sat at the bar talking about the footie and everyone let me be.
Now I may be weak Osama but I am not a slut. I never asked for Jasper Black to sit down at my
table and interrupt me gawping at action replays. I never came on to Jasper Black he came on
to me there’s a difference.
You could tell straight away Jasper Black had no business being in the East End. He was one of
those types who fancied a spot of Easy Access To The City Of London And Within A Stone’s
Throw Of The Prestigious Columbia Road Flower Market. The Sun calls them SNEERING TOFFS.
Usually they live about 3 years in Bethnal Green or Shoreditch then move to the suburbs to be
with their own kind. I watched a documentary once about salmon swimming up rivers to spawn
and that’s what they’re like those people. You turn around one day and they’ve upped sticks
and gone and all you’re left with is this fading smell of Boss by Hugo Boss on your nice T-shirt
and a Starbucks where the pie shop used to be.
Including him there were 3 SNEERING TOFFS on Jasper Black’s table it didn’t take Sherlock
Holmes to spot them. I was looking at Sky trying not to catch their eye but I could feel them
looking up from their pints and giving each other these little secret grins on account of I was a
bit of local colour. Like it was okay I was wearing a Nike T-shirt and trackie bottoms but they’d
of preferred it if I’d been dressed as a Pearly Queen or maybe the little match girl from Oliver!
The Musical. If they’d been just a bit more pissed they’d probably of taken a photo of me on
their mobiles for those web sites I told you about. They thought they were very clever. My
whole point is they weren’t very nice and you could of blown up as many of them as you liked
Osama you wouldn’t of heard any of us complaining.
Anyway Jasper Black left his table and came over to mine and it was quite a surprise. Normally
I’d of told him where to shove it but I couldn’t help noticing he had nice eyes for a SNEERING
TOFF. I mean most of them have dead eyes like they’ve been done over with electric shocks like
Jack Nicholson in One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest. Or some of them have these little excited
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eyes like they’ve got a chinchilla up their bum like Hugh Grant in. Well. All his films. But Jasper
Black wasn’t like that. He had nice eyes. He looked almost human. I looked back at the slow-
motion goals on Sky. I knew it was dangerous to look at Jasper Black at least give me that much
credit.
—I think you’re beautiful, said Jasper Black. So do my friends. They bet me 20 quid I couldn’t
get your name. So tell me your name and I’ll split the cash with you and never bother you again.
—20 quid?
—Listen carefully. I’ll say this slowly. Your friends are WANKERS.
—So help me take them for the money, he said. We’ll go halves. 10 quid each. What do you
say?
—No, he said. Neither do I really. Well maybe I can just talk with you?
I picked up my G&T and I made sure he got an eyeful of my wedding band. My wedding band is
not silver actually Osama it’s platinum it’s a cracker. My husband chose it himself and it cost
him a month’s wages. There are some things you just can’t skimp on he always used to say. I
still wear it today on a little silver chain around my neck. It’s as wide as runway number 1 at
Heathrow Airport and it flashes like the sun but apparently Jasper Black couldn’t see it at all.
—No. Well yes I suppose I am. Like I say I’m waiting for my husband he’s a copper he’s a rock
he’s never let me down we’ve been married 4 years 7 months we have a boy he is 4 years 3
months old he still sleeps with his rabbit the rabbit is called Mr. Rabbit.
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—Are you okay? said Jasper Black. It’s just that you seem a little
overwrought.
—Overwhat?
—Overexcited.
Introduction
A distraught woman writes a letter to Osama bin Laden after her four-year-old son and her
husband are killed in a massive suicide bomb attack at a soccer match in London. In an
emotionally raw voice alive with grief, compassion, and startling humor, she tries to convince
Osama to abandon his terror campaign by revealing to him the desperate sadness and the
broken heart of a working-class life blown apart. But the bombing is only the beginning. While
security measures transform London into a virtual occupied territory, the unnamed narrator,
too, finds herself under siege. At first she gains strength by fighting back, taking a civilian job
with the police to aid the antiterrorist effort. But when she becomes involved with an upper-
class couple, she is drawn into a psychological maelstrom of guilt, ambition, and cynicism that
erodes her faith in the society she’s working to defend. And when a new bomb threat sends the
city into a deadly panic, she is pushed to acts of unfathomable desperation—perhaps her only
chance for survival.
1. Incendiary opens with “Dear Osama,” and is framed as a novel-length letter from a
devastated mother of a terror-attack victim to Osama bin Laden. How does the
epistolary structure impact your appreciation of the narrator’s plight? Is the narrator’s
run-on narrative style intended to be indicative of a semi-literate upbringing, or to
convey the urgency of her situation, or to suggest that she is psychologically
unbalanced?
2. “And when I get nervous about all the horrible things in the world I just need something
very soft and secret and warm to make me forget it for a bit.” How is the narrator’s
sexual promiscuity connected to her anxiety? To what extent does her sexual encounter
with Jasper Black on the day of the stadium attack seem reprehensible?
3. How does their shared awareness of class differences establish an immediate boundary
between the narrator and Jasper Black? What is it about their social and cultural
differences that makes them especially attractive to each other?
4. How does the setting of Incendiary in London resonate for you as a reader? Does
London function as a character of sorts in the novel, as it undergoes changes as a result
of the attacks?
5. “Well Osama I sometimes think we deserve whatever you do to us. Maybe you are right
maybe we are infidels. Even when you blow us into chunks we don’t stop fighting each
other.” How does the narrator’s disgust with some of the Arsenal and Chelsea bombing
victims reveal her own awareness of her society’s failings? Why does the author choose
to include details from the attack and its aftermath that are unflattering to the victims?
6. How did you interpret the narrator’s interactions with her deceased son? To what
extent do you think the author intended these glimpses of the boy as evidence of the
narrator’s post-traumatic mental condition? How might they also function as a kind of
magical realism?
7. “I am someone who is having a surreal day,” she said. “This afternoon I had a light lunch
with Salman Rushdie. We drank Côte de Léchet. We discussed V.S. Naipaul and long hair
on men.” To what extent is Petra Sutherland a caricature of a self-involved snob? Does
she transcend that characterization through her involvement with the narrator? What
does her behavior in light of the narrator’s discoveries about the May Day attack
suggest about her true character?
8. In the text of her letter to Osama, the narrator imagines newspaper headlines that
comment directly on her experiences. How is this propensity connected with the
narrator’s sense that her life offers the kind of spectacle that others only read about?
How does it relate to her relationships with the journalists Jasper Black and Petra
Sutherland?
9. “Yes,” she said. “We have better sex when I look like you.” How is Jasper Black’s love
triangle with the narrator and his girlfriend, Petra Sutherland, complicated by their
similar appearances? How does Petra’s pregnancy change the narrator’s relationship
with her? Does Jasper Black’s staging of a dirty bomb in Parliament Square reveal his
social conscience or his stupidity?
10. How does Terence Butcher’s revelation about the truth behind the May Day attack
impact his relationship with the narrator? What does his decision to tell the narrator the
truth suggest about his feelings for her? To what extent do you feel his behavior before
and after the attack is justifiable?
11. “A thousand City suits die and it’s good-bye global economy. A thousand blokes in
Gunners T-shirts die and you just sell a bit less lager.” How do the social concerns
introduced in Incendiary hint at the tensions between working-class and middle-class
London in the twenty-first century?
12. Why doesn’t author Chris Cleave give his narrator a name? To what extent does her
anonymity impact your ability to identify with her as a reader?
Enhance Your Book Club
1. Did you know that Chris Cleave’s novel, Incendiary, was made into a feature film starring
Michelle Williams as the young mother and Ewan McGregor as Jasper Black? At the next
meeting of your book club, after everyone has had an opportunity to read the novel,
hold a movie night. You might want to jump-start discussion of the novel by comparing
the book to the film. Which characters are left out of the cinematic version, and why?
2. Are you interested in reading more by Chris Cleave? In addition to his book, Little Bee,
Cleave’s parenting column for The Guardian, “Down with the Kids,” is still available on
the newspaper’s website. Click this link to read more:
www.guardian.co.uk/lifeandstyle/series/down-with-the-kids. “Down with the Kids”
offers an intimate view into Cleave’s personal parenting style, and his unique
perspective on raising three kids in a turbulent time in our world’s history. Your book
club members may want to share their favorite anecdotes from the column.
3. All of the events in Incendiary take place in London, a city with its own remarkable
history and culture. Book club members might have their own ideas of what the city
looks like, based on the author’s descriptions, but how do they match up with reality?
What is the Eye, the tourist attraction where Terence Butcher reveals the truth about
May Day to the narrator? What does the statue of Churchill in Parliament Square, where
Jasper Black stages a fake attack on the city, look like? Where is Bethnal Green, home of
the narrator of Incendiary, located with respect to Emirates Stadium, where the fictional
attacks take place? To explore some of the fascinating details from the setting of the
novel, or to view the city in greater detail, go to www.visitlondon.com.
You drafted Incendiary “during six insomniac weeks” after the birth of your first child. To
what extent is this kind of creative torrent typical of your literary output? Why did this book
come to you so quickly, do you think?
I work pretty fast when I’m fired up about an issue, and then I repent—or edit—at leisure. For
Incendiary I worked quickly because the world was in crisis and it precipitated a crisis in me, in
my susceptible state of new parenthood. I was writing in the spring of 2004, in the immediate
aftermath of the Al Qaeda–inspired bombings in Madrid—in which over 200 people died—and
during the period when details were emerging about the horror of the Abu Ghraib detention
facility in Iraq. I was thus writing at a period when atrocities were being committed by people
on both sides of what was then being called the “War Against Terror.” I became interested by
the notion that when the civilized nations declare war on a noun, writers become combatants
whether they like it or not. I believe in the effectiveness of persuasion rather than coercion, so I
felt that it ought to be possible to use words, rather than heavy ordnance, to effect attitude
change on both sides of a war that seemed insane to me, both in its conception and in its
execution. Incendiary was my attempt at that persuasion. My objective was to prove, giving
examples and showing my working, the sanctity of human life on both sides of the conflict.
Maybe it was a naive aim, and certainly my execution was imperfect. All I can say is that it
seemed extremely urgent to me, so I didn’t spare myself until it was done. I probably pushed
myself too hard—I had some health problems afterwards—but I’m still proud of the book and
the intent behind it. I’m glad I managed to raise my hand at the time the War Against Terror
was being waged and to say, “Excuse me, but this is insane.”
The publication of Incendiary in Britain on July 7, 2005, coincided with a series of coordinated
terrorist attacks on mass transportation in London. How did this eerie accident of timing
impact you personally and professionally?
I still think about the coincidence but I no longer comment on it, for the simple reason that 56
people died on that day and hundreds more were injured, which means that 7/7 is their day
and not mine.
How did the pandemonium you envisioned in Incendiary (mass panic, public curfews, racial
discrimination backlash, etc.) compare to the aftermath of the actual July 7, 2005, bombings
in London?
Despite the difference of two orders of magnitude between the scale of my imagined attack
and the scale of the real attacks of 7/7, people are fond of telling me that I wrongly predicted
Britain’s reaction to a terrorist atrocity. The prevalent view now is that Britain’s response to 7/7
was stoical and reminiscent of the spirit of the Blitz, during which a shell-shocked London
refused to buckle under the Luftwaffe’s nightly bombing raids. After 7/7, the very strong
position of my nation’s leaders was that “these people will not change our way of life.” At the
same time that this rhetorical line was being held, our way of life was of course changing
rapidly. Civil liberties were curtailed, the British Muslim community was ostracized, and Britain
redoubled its incomprehensible military involvements in Iraq and Afghanistan on the false
premise that our armed engagement there made London’s streets safer. The cost of that
sustained and still-ongoing military engagement is a major reason why we in Britain can no
longer afford a free university education for our children, for example. So I tend to give a wry
smile when I’m told that 7/7 did not change Britain, and that the sentiments in my novel were
false.
What were some of the challenges you encountered as a male author, narrating a novel from
the perspective of a woman?
I like writing female characters—it forces me to think more deeply about my protagonist and to
work harder at my research, rather than simply recycling autobiographical elements from my
own life. In any case when I write a character I’m not particularly aware of writing from a
“male” or a “female” point of view, whatever that might involve. Instead I ask four questions of
my characters:
If I can answer those four questions honestly, I feel that I know my characters well enough to
help them through their scenes. They’re also interesting questions to ask of oneself or one’s
friends in real life.
You worked as a columnist for The Guardian in London. In your skewering of journalists
Jasper Black and Petra Sutherland, were you at all concerned that you might be “poisoning
the well,” so to speak, by exposing your profession to ridicule?
I feel that you have to write it how you see it, and to hell with the consequences. In any case I
don’t think it’s news to journalists that a great many fellow journalists are insincere and self-
serving, just as there are a great many fellow journalists who work diligently to serve their
readers and to print only the truth. Like politics, it’s a profession that’s split right down the
middle with regard to its practitioners’ positions on truth and integrity. I liked working for The
Guardian because I felt they made a particular effort to employ the good guys.
How would you characterize your everyday experience of the differences between the upper
classes and working classes in London?
Well, I’m writing this sentence in a small attic room of a rural farmhouse where I’ve come to
spend some time working quietly on my own, if that answers your question. I don’t really have
everyday experience at the moment. I’m either on tour with work, embedded in some situation
that I’m researching, or writing in seclusion. I spent many years living and working in central
London, and my feelings about the class differences there found a focus in Incendiary. I don’t
think I belong to a particular social class anymore, in the sense that I now feel clumsy in all of
them.
How did the idea of an epistolary novel first come to you? Is it a genre you particularly
admire?
The epistolary form is interesting because the first-person narrator is not directly addressing
the reader. Instead, they are addressing an absent third person, while the reader is a fly-on-the-
wall and can choose to sympathize with the narrator or not. There is none of the sense of
obligation toward the narrator that comes when the reader is being appealed to directly. In this
way the epistolary form respects the reader and allows them to come to their own conclusions.
It’s the difference between having someone talk directly at you while looking into your eyes
across the small table of a claustrophobic meeting room, and being an invisible ghost going for
a country walk with that person while they talk to the fields and the sky. By being less direct,
the form is more intimate.
Incendiary was made into a major motion picture. What was that experience like for you as
its progenitor?
It was fun. I’m always happy when someone takes a piece of my writing to another level,
whether that be through art, or on the stage, or in this case in a movie. I’ve always wanted to
start conversations through my work, rather than to have the last word. Often people will
surprise you by seeing your work more clearly than you did, or by bringing new elements to it
that make it much better. I was mesmerized by Michelle Williams’ interpretation of the female
narrator of Incendiary. She was unbelievably good in the movie.
While many of your readers in America are familiar with your novel, Little Bee, Incendiary
was your literary debut. How would you compare the experience of writing both books?
They were very different books to write. Incendiary drew deeply on my personal experience of
living and working in London and featured a narrator whose thought processes were close to
mine, while Little Bee required a huge amount of research and had two narrators whose lives
and voices were worlds apart from my own. I had to raise my game to write Little Bee. It took
much longer, too—two years compared with six weeks. I had to learn the skill of working alone
for periods of months and years. Two years is long enough for self-doubt to become your
greatest enemy, and the psychological knots you get yourself into can sometimes work
themselves so tight that you basically have to give up unpicking them and use scissors on them
instead. When I wrote Incendiary I naively imagined that my writing would change the world,
but when I had written Little Bee I realized that what had actually happened was that writing
had changed me.
You recently concluded your parenting column for The Guardian. What are you doing with
your time these days?
Writing a novel that I hope will justify my readers’ kindness and patience, trying to be a help to
my family, and attempting to not appear weird in social situations.
WITHER
The Chemical Garden Trilogy #1
Lauren DeStefano
Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
Hardcover: 9781442409057
eBook: 9781442409118
I have been asked “Where did the idea from Wither come from?” as many times as I have been
asked, “How old ARE you?” and both answers involve a grin and a shrug. Okay, I mean, I know
how old I am, and when I wrote Wither I was even younger, but as far as the idea? Okay. The
glamorous answer is that it is an amalgamation of a few components I had lurking around in my
head, like ghosts of lives lived somewhere else, sometime else, and their incessant chain
dragging led me to type their story.
The unglamorous truth? I dunno. I was bedridden with the flu, for starters, and I was getting
frustrated with an adult writing project I had going. My agent suggested that I try something
out of my comfort zone, something that I would normally never write, and then Wither came
pouring out faster than the Thera-flu from the teapot. What I can say is that as far as where the
next two books in the series are coming from, the characters have started to basically write the
book for me, and I am just as thrilled as any reader to see what they will do next!
—Lauren DeStefano
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Below is a menu suggestion from Lauren DeStefano that may just make you
want to stay in bed, eat pancakes, and keep reading.
There’s that scene in Wither where Rhine and Linden have breakfast in bed, waffles with
blueberries—so try out breakfast or a brunch book club meeting. See below for a recipe for
pancakes with strawberries and blueberries, since fresh fruit is so rare where Rhine came from,
but so abundant at the mansion!
Ingredients
1. In a large bowl, sift together the flour, baking powder, salt, and sugar. Make a well in
the center and pour in the milk, egg, and melted butter; mix until smooth.
2. Heat a lightly oiled griddle or frying pan over medium high heat. Pour or scoop the
batter onto the griddle, using approximately ¼ cup for each pancake. Brown on both
sides and serve hot.
3. Top with whipped cream, syrup, and your favorite fruit: blueberries, strawberries,
raspberries, or blackberries.
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Chapter 1
I WAIT. They keep us in the dark for so long that we lose sense of our eyelids. We sleep huddled
together like rats, staring out, and dream of our bodies swaying.
I know when one of the girls reaches a wall. She begins to pound and scream—there’s metal in
the sound—but none of us help her. We’ve gone too long without speaking, and all we do is
bury ourselves more into the dark.
The light is frightening. It’s the light of the world through the birth canal, and at once the
blinding tunnel that comes with death. I recoil into the blankets with the other girls in horror,
not wanting to begin or end.
We stumble when they let us out; we’ve forgotten how to use our legs. How long has it been—
days? Hours? The big open sky waits in its usual place.
I stand in line with the other girls, and men in gray coats study us.
I’ve heard of this happening. Where I come from, girls have been disappearing for a long time.
They disappear from their beds or from the side of the road. It happened to a girl in my
neighborhood. Her whole family disappeared after that, moved away, either to find her or
because they knew she would never be returned.
Now it’s my turn. I know girls disappear, but any number of things could come after that. Will I
become a murdered reject? Sold into prostitution? These things have happened. There’s only
one other option. I could become a bride. I’ve seen them on television, reluctant yet beautiful
teenage brides, on the arm of a wealthy man who is approaching the lethal age of twenty-five.
The other girls never make it to the television screen. Girls who don’t pass their inspection are
shipped to a brothel in the scarlet districts. Some we have found murdered on the sides of
roads, rotting, staring into the searing sun because the Gatherers couldn’t be bothered to deal
with them. Some girls disappear forever, and all their families can do is wonder.
The girls are taken as young as thirteen, when their bodies are mature enough to bear children,
and the virus claims every female of our generation by twenty.
Our hips are measured to determine strength, our lips pried apart so the men can judge our
health by our teeth. One of the girls vomits. She may be the girl who screamed. She wipes her
mouth, trembling, terrified. I stand firm, determined to be anonymous, unhelpful.
I feel too alive in this row of moribund girls with their eyes half open. I sense that their hearts
are barely beating, while mine pounds in my chest. After so much time spent riding in the
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darkness of the truck, we have all fused together. We are one nameless thing sharing this
strange hell. I do not want to stand out. I do not want to stand out.
But it doesn’t matter. Someone has noticed me. A man paces before the line of us. He allows us
to be prodded by the men in gray coats who examine us. He seems thoughtful and pleased.
His eyes, green, like two exclamation marks, meet mine. He smiles. There’s a flash of gold in his
teeth, indicating wealth. This is unusual, because he’s too young to be losing his teeth. He keeps
walking, and I stare at my shoes. Stupid! I should never have looked up. The strange color of my
eyes is the first thing anyone ever notices.
He says something to the men in gray coats. They look at all of us, and then they seem to be in
agreement. The man with gold teeth smiles in my direction again, and then he’s taken to
another car that shoots up bits of gravel as it backs onto the road and drives away.
The vomit girl is taken back to the truck, and a dozen other girls with her; a man in a gray coat
follows them in. There are three of us left, the gap of the other girls still between us. The men
speak to one another again, and then to us. “Go,” they say, and we oblige. There’s nowhere to
go but the back of an open limousine parked on the gravel. We’re off the road somewhere, not
far from the highway. I can hear the faraway sounds of traffic. I can see the evening city lights
beginning to appear in the distant purple haze. It’s nowhere I recognize; a road this desolate is
far from the crowded streets back home.
Go. The two other chosen girls move before me, and I’m the last to get into the limousine.
There’s a tinted glass window that separates us from the driver. Just before someone shuts the
door, I hear something inside the van where the remaining girls were herded.
I awake in a satin bed, nauseous and pulsating with sweat. My first conscious movement is to
push myself to the edge of the mattress, where I lean over and vomit onto the lush red carpet.
I’m still spitting and gagging when someone begins cleaning up the mess with a dishrag.
“Sleep gas?” I splutter, and before I can wipe my mouth on my lacy white sleeve, he hands me a
cloth napkin—also lush red.
“It comes out through the vents in the limo,” he says. “It’s so you won’t know where you’re
going.”
I remember the glass window separating us from the front of the car. Airtight, I assume.
Vaguely I remember the whooshing of air coming through vents in the walls.
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“One of the other girls,” the boy says as he sprays white foam onto the spot where I vomited,
“she almost threw herself out the bedroom window, she was so disoriented. The window’s
locked, of course. Shatterproof.” Despite the awful things he’s saying, his voice is low, possibly
even sympathetic.
I look over my shoulder at the window. Closed tight. The world is bright green and blue beyond
it, brighter than my home, where there’s only dirt and the remnants of my mother’s garden
that I’ve failed to revive.
Somewhere down the hall a woman screams. The boy tenses for a moment. Then he resumes
scrubbing away the foam.
“I can help,” I offer. A moment ago I didn’t feel guilty about ruining anything in this place; I
know I’m here against my will. But I also know this boy isn’t to blame. He can’t be one of the
Gatherers in gray who brought me here. Maybe he was also brought here against his will. I
haven’t heard of teenage boys disappearing, but up until fifty years ago, when the virus was
discovered, girls were also safe. Everyone was safe.
“No need. It’s all done,” he says. And when he moves the rag away, there’s not so much as a
stain. He pulls a handle out of the wall, and a chute opens; he tosses the rags into it, lets go,
and the chute clamps shut. He tucks the can of white foam into his apron pocket and returns to
what he was doing. He picks up a silver tray from where he’d placed it on the floor, and brings it
to my night table. “If you’re feeling better, there’s some lunch for you. Nothing that will make
you fall asleep again, I promise.” He looks like he might smile. Just almost. But he maintains a
concentrated gaze as he lifts a metal lid off a bowl of soup and another off a small plate of
steaming vegetables and mashed potatoes cradling a lake of gravy. I’ve been stolen, drugged,
locked away in this place, yet I’m being served a gourmet meal. The sentiment is so vile I could
almost throw up again.
“That other girl—the one who tried to throw herself out the window—what happened to her?”
I ask. I don’t dare ask about the woman screaming down the hall. I don’t want to know about
her.
“She woke up this morning. I think the House Governor took her to tour the gardens.”
House Governor. I remember my despair and crash against the pillows. House Governors own
mansions. They purchase brides from Gatherers, who patrol the streets looking for ideal
candidates to kidnap. The merciful ones will sell the rejects into prostitution, but the ones I
encountered herded them into the van and shot them all. I heard that first gunshot over and
over in my medicated dreams.
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“Two days,” the boy says. He hands me a steaming cup, and I’m about to refuse it when I see
the tea bag string dangling over the side, smell the spices. Tea. My brother, Rowan, and I had it
with our breakfast each morning, and with dinner each night. The smell is like home. My
mother would hum as she waited by the stove for the water to boil.
Blearily I sit up and take the tea. I hold it near my face and breathe the steam in through my
nose. It’s all I can do not to burst into tears. The boy must sense that the full impact of what has
happened is reaching me. He must sense that I’m on the verge of doing something dramatic like
crying or trying to fling myself out the window like that other girl, because he’s already moving
for the door. Quietly, without looking back, he leaves me to my grief. But instead of tears, when
I press my face against the pillow, a horrible, primal scream comes out of me. It’s unlike
anything I thought myself capable of. Rage, unlike anything I’ve ever known.
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Reading Group Guide
1. Rhine is snatched off the streets by Gatherers and wakes up in a satin bed in a mansion
owned by a House Governor. What does she remember about being taken captive? Why
is she being held in the mansion? Why is she considered to be one of the lucky girls?
2. In Rhine’s world, women die at the age of twenty and men die when they reach twenty-
five. What accounts for this short lifespan? Why is early marriage encouraged by the
wealthy?
3. Who is Lady Rose and why is she ill? How does her character contribute to the story’s
plot? To Rhine’s understanding of her new life?
4. Describe Rhine’s life prior to being taken by the Gatherers. Who were her parents?
Explain what happened to them. How did she and her twin brother, Rowan, survive on
their own?
5. Rhine initially feels disdain for Linden, her new husband and son of the House Governor.
Why is she contemptuous? How do her feelings change as she gets to know him? What
information does she eventually learn that enables her to see him in a different light? In
what way is Linden a victim?
6. Rhine is one of three new brides for Linden. Compare and contrast Rhine, Cecily, and
Jenna. How does each view being forced into marriage? How do the wives grow
together as time passes? How does each adjust to and/or cope with her new lifestyle?
7. How does Rhine become Linden’s first wife? How does this role enable her to plan her
escape?
8. Rhine becomes attracted to Gabriel, a house servant. What draws them together and
how is their relationship dangerous? How does Gabriel help Rhine?
9. House Governor Vaughn claims to be working on an antidote that will cure future
generations of the virus that kills young men and women in their prime years. What
mysteries surround the basement of the mansion? What fears does Rhine have about
his intentions?
10. What physical feature sets Rhine apart from the other two new brides? Why might this
physical attribute be desirable?
11. Compare and contrast House Governor Vaughn and his son, Linden. How does each
view the three wives?
12. Rhine has multiple dreams in the story. How do the dreams contribute to the story and
to the reader’s understanding of Rhine?
13. One can argue that the mansion represents an ideal world. Rhine, Jenna, and Cecily
have everything they can possibly imagine. They have stunning clothes and amazing
foods to eat and a beautiful home with gardens. Holograms are even used to export
them to other experiences and places. Are any of the three girls suited for this life? If so,
who and why? In what way has Linden been sheltered by this lifestyle?
14. When Rhine is discussing escaping with Gabriel, she says, “You’ve been captive for so
long that you don’t even realize you want freedom anymore.” How might this statement
apply to Cecily? How might it apply to Linden? Cite examples in the story in which Rhine
is almost taken in by her new surroundings. What thoughts pull her back to reality?
15. How do Rhine and Gabriel plot to escape? What character traits enable Rhine to go
through with the plan?
THE RED QUEEN
Philippa Gregory
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[In The Red Queen], I think what these women demonstrate is the range of responses that were
possible for women and that this range is probably wider than we as readers of the period
might generally think. Because the history of the period has been mostly written by men (for
two reasons: that until the twentieth century almost all historians were men since only men
attended universities, and that histories of war seems to attract mostly male historians), we
have only scanty records of what women were feeling, thinking, and even doing. And those
reports we have are often biased against women who sought power. Thus we simply don’t
know the extent of the involvement of Elizabeth Woodville and Margaret Beaufort in the
Buckingham rebellion or the Tudor invasion; we can only deduce that they were deeply
involved. But we do have very negative views of Elizabeth Woodville as a mother failing to
protect her children, as a panic-stricken woman fleeing into sanctuary, and as a hard-hearted
manipulator sending her daughters to the uncle who may have killed her sons. That these views
of her are exaggerated and indeed contradictory does not seem to trouble some historians
whose view of her are determinedly negative. . . .In this book I suggest that Princess Elizabeth
fell in love with King Richard, her uncle. This is based on a letter which was seen by a historian
but is now missing, and it would suggest that she also had the courage and passion to try to
choose her own life. These are women of exceptional courage and determination, but I think
they show that, even in a society where women are repressed both legally and culturally, that
there are still women who will find ways to express themselves.
—Philippa Gregory
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Below are two party ideas (fit for a queen) from Philippa Gregory.
To Eat
Sweet and Spicy Stuffed Peppers: Stuff jarred piquillo peppers with your favorite soft
cheese. Goat cheese, blue cheese, and ricotta all work well.
Roasted Red Pepper and Cannellini Bean Dip: Combine a jar of roasted red peppers, a
can of Cannellini beans, two garlic cloves, and olive oil in a food processor to make a
delicious dip. Season to taste with salt, pepper, cumin, and paprika. Serve with pita
chips, carrots, and celery.
Prosciutto-Wrapped Asparagus: Cook asparagus in simmering water until just tender (5
to 7 minutes). When cool, wrap spears with thin slices of provolone and prosciutto.
To Drink
Ingredients
2 ounces Vodka
4 ounces tomato juice
½ ounces fresh lemon juice
¼ teaspoon freshly grated horseradish
2 pinches celery salt
3 dashes Sriracha Chili sauce (or more to taste)
2 dashes Worcestershire sauce
Celery stalks and lime wedges (for garnish)
Preparation
To Eat
Wars of the Roses Cookies: Mix up a batch of your favorite sugar cookies and decorate
with red and white icing to signal your loyalties to the House of Lancaster or York.
Cucumber Mint Tea Sandwiches: Spread butter, cream cheese, and finely diced mint
leaves on whole wheat bread. Add thinly sliced cucumbers and top with another slice of
bread. Cut off the crusts and cut each sandwich into quarters to serve.
To Drink
Ingredients
2 ounces gin
2 ounces brewed and chilled Earl Grey Tea
Squeeze of lemon juice
1 teaspoon sugar
Lime wheels for garnish
Preparation
SEPTEMBER 1483
I go to bed uneasy, and the very next day, straight after matins, Dr. Lewis comes to my rooms
looking strained and anxious. At once I say I am feeling unwell and send all my women away.
We are alone in my privy chamber, and I let him take a stool and sit opposite me, almost as an
equal.
“The Queen Elizabeth summoned me to sanctuary last night, and she was distraught,” he says
quietly.
“She was?”
“She had been told that the princes were dead, and she was begging me to tell her that it was
not the case.”
“I didn’t know what you would have me say. So I told her what everyone in the city is saying:
that they are dead. That Richard had them killed either on the day of his coronation, or as he
left London.”
“And she?”
“She was deeply shocked; she could not believe it. But Lady Margaret, she said a terrible
thing—” He breaks off, as if he dare not name it.
“Go on,” I say but I can feel a cold shiver of dread creeping up my spine. I fear I have been
betrayed. I fear that this has gone wrong.
“She cried out at first and then she said: ‘At least Richard is safe.’”
“The one they took into the Tower to keep his brother company.”
“That’s what I asked her. I asked her at once what she meant, and she smiled at me in the most
frightening way and said: ‘Doctor, if you had only two precious, rare jewels and you feared
thieves, would you put your two treasures in the same box?’ ”
“She wouldn’t say more. I asked her if Prince Richard was not in the Tower when the two boys
were killed. She just said that I was to ask you to put your own guards into the Tower to keep
her son safe. She would say nothing more. She sent me away.”
I rise from my stool. This damned woman, this witch, has been in my light ever since I was a girl,
and now, at this very moment when I am using her, using her own adoring family and loyal
supporters to wrench the throne from her, to destroy her sons, she may yet win, she may have
done something that will spoil everything for me. How does she always do it? How is it that
when she is brought so low that I can even bring myself to pray for her, she manages to turn
her fortunes around? It must be witchcraft; it can only be witchcraft. Her happiness and her
success have haunted my life. I know her to be in league with the devil, for sure. I wish he
would take her to hell.
“What?” I snap.
“Lady Margaret, I swear, I dread going to her. She is like a witch imprisoned in the cleft of a pine
tree; she is like an entrapped spirit; she is like a water goddess on a frozen lake, waiting for
spring. She lives in the gloom of sanctuary with the river flowing all the time beside their rooms,
and she listens to the babble as a counsellor. She knows things that she cannot know by earthly
means. She fills me with terror. And her daughter is as bad.”
“You will have to summon your courage,” I say briskly. “Be brave, you are doing God’s work.
You have to go back to her and tell her to be of stout heart. Tell her that I am certain that the
princes are alive. Remind her that when we attacked the Tower, we heard the guards taking
them back from the door. They were alive then, why would Richard kill them now? Richard has
taken the throne without killing them, why would he put them to death now? Richard is a man
who does his own work, and he is hundreds of miles away from them now. Tell her that I will
double my people in the Tower and that I swear to her, on my honor, that I will protect them.
Remind her that the uprising will start next month. As soon as we defeat Richard the king, we
will set the boys free. Then, when she is reassured, when she is in her first moment of relief,
when you see the color come to her face and you have convinced her—in that moment quickly
ask her if she has her son Prince Richard in safety already. If she has him hidden away
somewhere.”
He nods, but he is pale with fear. “And are they safe?” he asks.
“Can I truly assure her that those poor boys are safe and we will rescue them? That the rumors,
even in your own household, are false? Do you know if they are alive or dead, Lady Margaret?
Can I tell their mother that they are alive and speak the truth?”
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“They are in the hands of God,” I reply steadily. “As are we all. My son too. These are dangerous
times, and the princes are in the hands of God.”
***
That night we hear news of the first uprising. It is mistimed; it comes too early. The men of Kent
are marching on London, calling on the Duke of Buckingham to take the throne. The county of
Sussex gets up in arms, believing they cannot delay a moment longer, and the men of
Hampshire beside them rise up too as a fire will leap from one dry woodland to another.
Richard’s most loyal commander, Thomas Howard, the brand-new Duke of Norfolk, marches
down the west road from London and occupies Guildford, fighting skirmishes to the west and to
the east, but holding the rebels down in their own counties, and sending a desperate warning
to the king: the counties of the south are up in the name of the former queen and her
imprisoned sons, the princes.
Richard, the battle-hardened leader of York, marches south at the fast speed of a York army,
makes his center of command at Lincoln, and raises troops in every county, especially from
those who greeted his progress with such joy. He hears of the betrayal of the Duke of
Buckingham when men come from Wales to tell him that the duke is already on the march,
going north through the Welsh marches, recruiting men and clearly planning to cross
at Gloucester, or perhaps Tewkesbury, to come into the heart of England with his own men and
his Welsh recruits. His beloved friend, Henry Stafford, is marching out under his standard, as
proudly and as bravely as once he did for Richard; only now he is marching against him.
Richard goes white with rage, and he grips his right arm, his sword arm, above the elbow, as if
he were shaking with rage, as if to hold it steady. “A man with the best cause to be true,” he
exclaims. “The most untrue creature living. A man who had everything he asked for. Never was
a false traitor better treated; a traitor, a traitor.”
At once he sends out commissions of array to every county in England demanding their loyalty,
demanding their arms and their men. This is the first and greatest crisis of his new reign. He
summons them to support a York king; he demands the loyalty that they gave to his brother,
which they have all promised to him. He warns those who cheered when he took the crown less
than sixteen weeks ago that they must now stand by that decision, or England will fall to an
unholy alliance of the false Duke of Buckingham, the witch queen, and the Tudor pretender.
It is pouring with rain, and there is a strong wind blowing hard from the north. It is unnatural
weather, witch’s weather. My son must set sail now if he is to arrive while the queen’s
supporters are up and while Buckingham is marching. But if it is so foul here, in the south of
England, then I fear the weather in Brittany. He must come at exactly the right moment to catch
the weary victor of the first battle and make them turn and fight again, while they are sick of
fighting. But—I stand at my window and watch the rain pouring down, and the wind lashing the
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trees in our garden—I know he cannot set sail in this weather, the wind is howling towards the
south. I cannot believe he will even be able to get out of port.
***
The next day the rains are worse and the river is starting to rise. It is over our landing steps at
the foot of the garden, and the boatmen drag the Stanley barge up the garden to the very
orchard, out of the swirling flood, fearing that it will be torn from its moorings by the current. I
can’t believe that Henry can set sail in this, and even if he were to get out of harbor, I can’t
believe that he could safely get across the English seas to the south coast.
My web of informers, spies, and plotters are stunned by the ferocity of the rain, which is like a
weapon against us. The roads into London are all but impassable; no one can get a message
through. A horse and rider cannot get from London to Guildford, and as the river rises higher,
there is news of flooding and drowning upstream and down. The tides are unnaturally high, and
every day and night the floods from the river pour down to the inrushing tide and there is a
boiling surge of water that wipes out riverside houses, quays, piers, and docks. Nobody can
remember weather like this, a rain storm that lasts for days, and the rivers are bursting their
banks all around England.
I have no one to talk to but my God, and I cannot always hear His voice, as if the rain is blotting
out His very face, and the wind blowing away His words. This is how I know for sure that it is a
witch’s wind. I spend my day at the window overlooking the garden, watching the river boil
over the garden wall and come up through the orchard, lap by lap, till the trees themselves
seem to be stretching up to the heavy clouds for help. Whenever one of my ladies comes to my
side, or Dr. Lewis comes to my door, or any of the plotters in London ask for admittance, they
all want to know what is happening: as if I know any more than them, when all I can hear is
rain; as if I can foretell the future in the gale-ripped sky. But I know nothing, anything could be
happening out there; a waterlogged massacre could be taking place even half a mile away, and
none of us would know—we would hear no voices over the sound of the storm, no lights would
show through the rain.
I spend my nights in my chapel, praying for the safety of my son and the success of our venture,
and hearing no answer from God but only the steady hammer of the torrent on the roof and
the whine of the wind lifting the slates above me, until I think that God Himself has been
blotted from the heavens of England by the witch’s wind, and I will never hear Him again.
The king has commanded my presence, and I fear he doubts me. He has sent
for my son Lord Strange too and was very dark when he learned that my son is
from his home with an army of ten thousand men on the march, but my son has
told nobody where he is going, and his servants only swear that he said he was
raising his men for the true cause. I assure the king that my son will be marching
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to join us, loyal to the throne; but he has not yet arrived here at our command
center, in Coventry Castle.
Buckingham is trapped in Wales by the rising of the river Severn. Your son,
I believe, will be held in port by the storm on the seas. The queen’s men will be
unable to march out on the drowned roads, and the Duke of Norfolk is waiting
for them. I think your rebellion is over; you have been beaten by the rain and the
rising of the waters. They are calling it the Duke of Buckingham’s Water, and it has
washed him and his ambition to hell along with your hopes. Nobody has seen a
storm like this since the Queen Elizabeth called up a mist to hide her husband’s
army at the battle of Barnet, or summoned the wind to blow him safely home.
Nobody doubts she can do such a thing, and most of us only hope she will stop
before she washes us all away. But why? Can she be working against you now?
And if so, why? Does she know, with her inner sight, what has befallen her boys
and who has done it? Does she think you have done it? Is she drowning your son in
revenge?
Destroy what papers you have kept, and deny whatever you have done. Richard
is coming to London, and there will be a scaffold built on Tower Green. If he
believes half what he has heard, he will put you on it and I will be unable
to save you.
Stanley
***
OCTOBER 1483
I have been on my knees all night, but I don’t know if God can hear me through the hellish noise
of the rain. My son sets sail from Brittany with fifteen valuable ships and an army of five
thousand men and loses them all in the storm at sea. Only two ships struggle ashore on the
south coast, and they learn at once that Buckingham has been defeated by the rising of the
river, his rebellion washed away by the waters, and Richard is waiting, dry-shod, to execute the
survivors.
My son turns his back on the country that should have been his and sails for Brittany again,
flying like a faintheart, leaving me here, unprotected, and clearly guilty of plotting his rebellion.
We are parted once more, my heir and I, this time without even meeting, and this time it feels
as if it is forever. He and Jasper leave me to face the king, who marches vengefully on London
like an invading enemy, mad with anger. Dr. Lewis vanishes off to Wales; Bishop Morton takes
the first ship that can sail after the storms and goes to France; Buckingham’s men slip from the
city in silence and under lowering skies; the queen’s kin make their way to Brittany and to the
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tattered remains of my son’s makeshift court; and my husband arrives in London in the train of
King Richard, whose handsome face is dark with the sullen rage of a traitor betrayed.
“He knows,” my husband says shortly as he comes to my room, his traveling cape still around
his shoulders, his sympathy scant.
“He knows you were working with the queen, and he will put you on trial. He has evidence from
half a dozen witnesses. Rebels from Devon to East Anglia know your name and have letters
from you.”
“I am faithful,” he corrects me. “It is not a matter of opinion but of fact. Not what the king
thinks—but what he can see. When Buckingham rode out, while you were summoning your son
to invade England, and paying rebels, while the queen was raising the southern counties, I was
at his side, advising him, loaning him money, calling out my own affinity to defend him, faithful
as any northerner. He trusts me now as he has never done before. My son raised an army for
him.”
“My son will deny that, I will deny that, we will call you a liar, and nobody can prove anything,
either way.”
“Buckingham is dead?”
“They took off his head in Salisbury marketplace. The king would not even see him. He was too
angry with him, and he is filled with hate towards you. You said that Queen Anne was welcome
to her city, that she had been missed. You bowed the knee to him and wished him well. And
then you sent out messages to every disaffected Lancastrian family in the country to tell them
the cousins’ war had come again, and that this time you will win.”
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“I have my money chest; I have my guard. I could bribe a ship to take me. If I went down to the
docks at London now, I could get away. Or Greenwich. Or I could ride to Dover or Southampton
. . .”
He smiles at me and I remember they call him “the fox” for his ability to survive, to double back,
to escape the hounds. “Yes, indeed, all that might have been possible; but I am sorry to tell you,
I am nominated as your jailer, and I cannot let you escape me. King Richard has decided that all
your lands and your wealth will be mine, signed over to me, despite our marriage contract.
Everything you owned as a girl is mine, everything you owned as a Tudor is mine, everything
you gained from your marriage to Stafford is now mine, everything you inherited from your
mother is mine. My men are in your chambers now collecting your jewels, your papers, and
your money chest. Your men are already under arrest, and your women are locked in their
rooms. Your tenants and your affinity will learn you cannot summon them; they are all mine.”
I gasp. For a moment I cannot speak, I just look at him. “You have robbed me? You have taken
this chance to betray me?”
“You are to live at the house at Woking, my house now; you are not to leave the grounds. You
will be served by my people; your own servants will be turned away. You will see neither ladies-
in-waiting, servants, nor your confessor. You will meet with no one and send no messages.”
I can hardly grasp the depth and breadth of his betrayal. He has taken everything from me. “It is
you who betrayed me to Richard!” I fling at him. “You who betrayed the whole plot. It is you,
with an eye to my fortune, who led me on to do this and now profit from my destruction. You
told the Duke of Norfolk to go down to Guildford and suppress the rebellion in Hampshire. You
told Richard to beware of the Duke of Buckingham. You told him that the queen was rising
against him and I with her!”
He shakes his head. “No. I am not your enemy, Margaret; I have served you well as your
husband. No one else could have saved you from the traitor’s death that you deserve. This is
the best deal I could get for you. I have saved you from the Tower, from the scaffold.
I have saved your lands from sequestration; he could have taken them outright. I have saved
you to live in my house, as my wife, in safety. And I am still placed at the heart of things, where
we can learn of his plans against your son. Richard will seek to have Tudor killed now; he will
send spies with orders to murder Henry. You have signed your son’s death warrant with your
failure. Only I can save him. You should be grateful to me.”
I cannot think, I cannot think through this mixture of threats and promises. “Henry?”
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“Richard will not stop until he is dead. Only I can save him.”
“I am to be your prisoner?”
He nods. “And I am to have your fortune. It is nothing between us, Margaret. Think of the
safety of your son.”
He rises to his feet. “Of course. You can write to him as you wish. But all your letters are to
come through me, they will be carried by my men. I have to give the appearance of controlling
you completely.”
“The appearance?” I repeat. “If I know you at all, you will give the appearance of being on both
sides.”
Introduction
Heiress to the red rose of Lancaster, Margaret Beaufort never surrenders her belief that
her house is the ruler of England and she has a great destiny before her. Married to a
man twice her age, quickly widowed, and a mother at fourteen, Margaret is determined
to turn her lonely life into a triumph. She sets her heart on putting her son on the
throne of England regardless of the cost. As the political tides constantly shift, Margaret
charts her way through two more loveless marriages, treacherous alliances, and secret
plots. She masterminds one of the greatest rebellions of all time, knowing that her son
has grown to manhood, recruited an army, and now waits for his opportunity to win the
greatest prize.
2. Margaret wants to live a life of greatness like her heroine, Joan of Arc. However,
her fate lies elsewhere, as her mother tells her, “the time has come to put aside
silly stories and silly dreams and do your duty.” What is Margaret’s duty and how
does she respond to her mother’s words?
3. At the tender age of twelve, Margaret is married to Edmund Tudor and fourteen
months later she bears him the son and heir of the royal Lancaster family line.
During the excruciating hours of labor, Margaret learns a painful truth about her
mother and the way she views Margaret. Discuss the implications of what
Margaret learns from her mother. What is “the price of being a woman.”
4. How does Jasper Tudor aid Margaret in her plans for herself and her son, Henry?
What does he sacrifice in order to keep Henry Tudor safe? In what ways are
Jasper and Margaret alike?
5. After the death of Edmund Tudor, Margaret marries the wealthy Sir Henry
Stafford. How is Stafford different from Edmund? Margaret laments that she is
“starting to fear that my husband is worse than a coward.” What are her reasons
for this? Do you see any sense in Stafford’s careful diplomacy?
6. On Easter 1461, violence breaks out between the armies of Lancaster and York.
This time, Sir Henry Stafford goes out to fight for Lancaster, only to witness a
terrible battle. What does he understand about war and politics and why are
these truths so difficult for Margaret to grasp?
7. Ever since she was a young girl, Margaret believed she was destined for
greatness. How does her pride in her destiny manifest itself throughout the
story? Identify key moments where Margaret’s pride overwhelms her judgment.
8. In the spring of 1471, Stafford sides with York and supports Edward in his quest
to take the throne of England once and for all. Do you understand Stafford’s
reasons for doing this? Is Margaret’s rage at her husband’s decision
understandable?
9. Sir Henry Stafford suffers a mortal wound in battle. After his death, Margaret
decides she must be strategic in her next marriage and so she approaches
Thomas, Lord Stanley, who Jasper describes as “a specialist of the final charge.”
What does Jasper mean? How is Stanley different from Stafford and what does it
mean for Margaret that she decides to unite her fortunes with this man?
10. In April 1483, Margaret tries to enlist Stanley in helping to get her son, Henry,
and Jasper back on English shores. An argument ensues between the two of
them, and the ever-shrewd Stanley confronts Margaret with his view of her true
nature, much to her horror. Do you think Stanley’s assessment of her is correct?
Why is this so significant?
11. Discuss Margaret’s feelings toward the White Queen, Elizabeth Woodville. Why
does she cause her so much anger? How does Margaret’s view of Elizabeth
change as she becomes her lady-in-waiting, and then as she actively plots with
her—and against her—for the throne of England?
12. Once King Richard has installed himself on the throne, Margaret and Lord
Stanley scheme to replace him with her son, Henry Tudor. Margaret must make
the difficult decision about whether to sacrifice the two princes in the Tower for
her own ambitions. Is there any way to justify Margaret’s actions? Do you
sympathize with her plight?
13. In the winter of 1483–84, Margaret despairs when her plans fail miserably.
Under house arrest by the king, she looks back on her schemes and declares,
“the sin of ambition and greed darkened our enterprise.” Discuss Margaret’s
conclusion about her behavior. Do you think she takes responsibility for her
actions? What blame does she place on Elizabeth Woodville?
14. As the fortunes of England shift once again, Margaret finds herself playing host
to the young Lady Elizabeth, the beautiful daughter of Elizabeth Woodville.
Discuss the interaction between these two headstrong women. How does Lady
Elizabeth treat Margaret and what does she say that leaves Margaret stunned
into silence?
15. Discuss the final battle scenes in The Red Queen. How does Henry Tudor, young
and inexperienced, eventually gain the upper hand, and how does King Richard
lose his throne and his life?
16. By the end of the book, Margaret, now Margaret Regina, the king’s mother, has
achieved all she wanted. Do you respect her and her ideals? Do you think her
achievement justifies her actions?
1. Learn more about the Wars of the Roses, Richard III, and the fall of the house of
York at the homepage of the Richard III Society, http://www.r3.org/.
2. Conduct a mock investigation of the murder of the princes in the Tower. Review
the suspects and determine motive and guilt. Resources can be found at
www.castles.me.uk/princes-in-the-tower.htm and
www.r3.org/bookcase/whodunit.html.
One of the most difficult things I have ever done in writing was shift my perspective so
that, after three years of thinking entirely from the point of view of Elizabeth Woodville
and from the point of view of the house of York, I had to convert to the view of
Margaret Beaufort and the house of Lancaster. I thought at the time that the only way
to do it would be to find some sort of key to the girl that Margaret was, in order to
understand her as a woman. There are three extant biographies of her and I read them
all and then thought that the secret to Margaret is her genuine and deep faith. That led
me to the picture of this very precocious and serious little girl, and once I could imagine
and love her, I could imagine the woman that her hard life and disappointments create.
Margaret’s mother tells her “since you were a girl you could only be the bridge to the
next generation.” Do you feel sympathy for Margaret and her thwarted ambition?
What would her life have been like if she were born a man?
Of course I feel intense sympathy for Margaret who is used by her family, as so many
women of this period were used—as a pawn in a game of dynasties. However, to be
cheerful about it, if she had been a man, she would almost certainly have been killed in
a battle or in an attack—all the other heirs on the Lancaster side were killed and she
sent her son away to keep him safe. Perhaps the greatest disappointment for Margaret
was that she was not allowed a religious life. There is no doubt in my mind that she
would have made a wonderful abbess both as a landlord and community leader and as a
scholar.
Taken together, The White Queen and The Red Queen present very different portraits
of marriage in the fifteenth century. Was either woman’s experience more indicative
of the time?
Margaret has the more typical life of a woman of her class. Many of the noblewomen of
this time were placed in arranged marriages for the advantage of their families, she was
exceptionally young, but most noblewomen could expect to be married at sixteen. What
is unusual about Margaret is that it seems likely that her third marriage was indeed
arranged by herself, to position herself at the York court and to give her son a stepfather
of immense wealth and influence. In this she was very powerfully taking control of her
own destiny, and this was unusual, even for widows. Elizabeth Woodville’s first marriage
is also very typical of the time. Her marriage was arranged when she was about sixteen
to the wealthy heir of a great estate in a neighboring county. The Grey family gained the
Woodville’s connections at court and the royal and noble connections of Elizabeth’s
mother, and the Woodvilles got their daughter into a wealthy house. Elizabeth’s second
marriage was, of course, unique. She was the first English commoner to marry a king of
England, and the first queen married for love. They married in secret without the
knowledge the king’s advisor and mentor. It was an extraordinary marriage.
Sir Henry, like so many men and women of his time, has left little or no record of his
thoughts and only scanty records of his actions. I had to look at what we knew about
him: his age, his decision not to take part in any of the many battles of the wars, except
when he went out for Lancaster in 1561 and for York a decade later. Therefore I had to
consider why a man would have fought in the sixth and the fifteenth battles, but no
others and why a man tied to the house of Lancaster by family and habit would change
his mind so completely as to fight for York. That was all I had to go on, as well as my
general reading about the feelings of so many men who were forced to take difficult
decisions about their private and family hopes and fears at a time of constant challenge.
How does history remember Margaret Beaufort? Do you feel that she is dealt with
fairly by historians and writers?
There are two main opinions on Margaret Beaufort that have emerged for me from my
reading. One, very positive, is based on the Tudor hagiography that sees her as the
matriarch of the house and a woman who spent her life in the service of her son. It
follows the sermon preached by Archbishop Fisher, who stressed her suffering as a
young woman, and her very early sense of destiny, when she believed that she was
advised by the saints to marry Edmund Tudor and thus have a Tudor heir to the
Lancaster throne. This view sees her as a divinely inspired matriarch to a family called by
God, and was incorporated into the Tudor history of their own line. The other, more
modern view of her, is less admiring of her as a spiritual woman but emphasizes her
political ambitions and her powers of manipulation. In this view she is sometimes
regarded critically as a woman of excessive ambition and greed and suggests that she
dominated the household of her son, and influenced the upbringing of her grandsons.
Can you tell us a little about the next book in the series? Is Lady Elizabeth going to
feature prominently?
The next book tells the story of Elizabeth Woodville’s mother, who is glimpsed in this
novel. She was Jacquetta, daughter of the Count of Luxembourg, and kinswoman to half
the royalty of Europe, who was married first to John Duke of Bedford, uncle to Henry VI.
Widowed at the age of nineteen she took the extraordinary risk of marrying Richard
Woodville, a gentleman of her household for love, and then carved out a life for herself
as Queen Margaret of Anjou's close friend and a Lancaster supporter—until the day that
her daughter Elizabeth York fell in love, and married the king Edward IV. Of all the little-
known but important women of the period, Jacquetta’s dramatic story is the most
neglected.
POSSESSION
Elana Johnson
Simon Pulse
Hardcover: 9781442421257
eBook: 9781442423916
Possession was born from a combination of two things: the question, “What if we couldn’t
make our own choices?” and the fact that I’d just read my first (amazing) dystopian novel. I
distinctly remember finishing the story and saying, “I want to write a book like this.”
So I sat down and figured out what made a novel dystopian. I chose to build a world with
brainwashing because free will is something I wouldn’t want to live without. I mean, what kind
of world would have to exist for choice to be eliminated? I sort of think teens live a life of
limited choice as it is, so it seemed a natural fit to drop someone who’s desperate to carve her
own path into a society where that’s entirely unacceptable.
—Elana Johnson
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Below is a menu suggestion for thick, chewy granola bars from
Elana Johnson.
When on the run, Vi and Jag eat TravelTreats to give them energy and stay full—they’re similar
to protein or granola bars and come in fruit and nut or chocolate varieties.
Ingredients
1 ⅔ cups quick rolled oats (if gluten intolerant, be sure to use gluten-free oats)
½ to ¾ cup granulated sugar (use more for a sweetness akin to most purchased bars; use
less for a mildly sweet bar)
⅓ cup oat flour (or 1/3 cup oats, processed till finely ground in a food processor or
blender)
½ teaspoon salt
¼ teaspoon ground cinnamon
2 to 3 cups dried fruits and nuts (total of 10 to 15 ounces)
⅓ cup peanut butter or another nut butter (optional)
1 teaspoon vanilla extract (optional)
6 tablespoons melted butter
¼ cup honey, maple syrup, or corn syrup
2 tablespoons light corn syrup
1 tablespoon water
Preparation
Preheat the oven to 350°F. Line an 8″ x 8″ x 2″ pan in one direction with parchment paper,
allowing it to go up the opposing sides. Lightly grease the parchment paper and the exposed
pan, or coat with a nonstick spray.
Stir together all the dry ingredients, including the fruit and nuts. In a separate bowl, whisk
together the vanilla, melted butter or oil, liquid sweeteners, and water. Toss the wet
ingredients with the dry (and peanut butter, if you’re using it) until the mixture is evenly
crumbly. Spread in the prepared pan, pressing the mixture in firmly to ensure it is molded. (A
piece of plastic wrap can help with this, as you press down on the back of it).
Bake the bars for 30 to 40 minutes, until they’re brown around the edges.
Cool the bars in their pan completely on a cooling rack. Once cool, use a serrated knife to cut
the bars into squares. If bars seem crumbly, chill them (still in the pan) in fridge for 30 minutes,
which will fully set the “glue,” then cut them cold. To store, wrap the bars individually in plastic
or stack them in an airtight container. In humid weather, it’s best to store bars in the
refrigerator. They also freeze well.
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Chapter One
Good girls don’t walk with boys. Even if they’re good boys—and Zenn is the best. He strolled
next to me, all military with his hands clasped behind his back, wearing the black uniform of a
Forces recruit. The green stripes on his shirtsleeves flashed with silver tech lights, probably
recording everything. Probably? Who am I kidding? Those damn stripes were definitely
recording everything. Walking through the park in the evening is not technically against the
rules. Good people do it all the time. But walking through the park with a boy could get me in
trouble.
In this park, the saplings stood an inch or two taller than me. Some trees in the City of Water
are ancient—at least a century old. But the forest is off-limits, and even I know better than to
break that rule.
The filthy charcoal shade of the sky matched the impurities I’d filtered from the lake in class
today. I imagined the color to be similar to the factory walls where my dad worked, but I had
never been there and hadn’t seen him for years, so I couldn’t say for sure.
“Vi, I’m glad you finally answered my e-comm,” Zenn said, his voice smooth, just like his skin
and the perfectly fluid way he walked.
“You know my mom.” I didn’t have to elaborate. Not with Zenn. “I told her I was coming
whether she said yes or not.” I tried to hide how desperate I’d been to see him, how happy his
e-comm invitation had made me. He could’ve asked me to the moon and I would’ve gladly
gone. And taken whatever punishment followed.
I’d left school during the afternoon break. The Special Forces compound is a two-hour walk
south of the City of Water. I’d crossed the border and trekked for half a mile in the Fire Region
just to see him. Crossing borders is also against the rules, but Zenn was worth every step.
I watched the hovercopters circle closer, comfortable in the silence with Zenn. Sometimes it
said more than we did.
The sidewalks had stopped functioning thirty minutes ago, clearly curfew for this park. As one
hovercopter dipped nearer, it took every ounce of courage I had to keep from reaching out,
grabbing Zenn’s hand, and running.
Before, I might have done it. But there was something different about him. Something that
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Another quick glance confirmed it. His eyes. They held no sparkle. No life. Maybe the Forces
worked him too hard.
My sweet, wonderful Zenn. I hoped he was okay here. His eyes worried me.
“Well, now that you’re here, I’ve got something for you,” he said, smiling.
I angled my body toward him. Zenn’s e-comm had said he had a surprise for me—surely
something he’d tinkered with until it was absolutely perfect. Like he was.
“The Forces have kept me busy,” Zenn continued, reaching into his pocket. He didn’t seem
concerned about the circling hovercopters, but he wasn’t always living one breath away from
getting arrested. “But we might not get to see each other again for a while. Your birthday is in a
couple weeks, and you’re my—”
“You down there!” An electronic voice cut through Zenn’s throaty tone. I flinched and took a
half step behind Zenn. A one-manned tech-craft, the hovercopter was invented especially for
ruining lives. No one ever escapes from one. Not even me.
On the bottom rudder, a red rose winked through the twilight. My breath shuddered through
my chest—I’d been caught by this hovercopter before. Maybe since Zenn was a Forces recruit
and had invited me here, I wouldn’t get in trouble.
“Cards!” the mechanical voice shouted. Zenn pulled out his lime green activity card and held it
straight up. An electric arm grew from the side of the police vehicle and flew down to scan the
bar code on the back of Zenn’s card.
I slowly retrieved my own ID. No one in the Goodgrounds can so much as step onto the
sidewalk without an electronic record of their activity.
My card was blue for the City of Water. I raised it halfway as the arm jangled at me, trying to
get a better angle to scan the bar code. Then I’d be busted for being out of bounds—after dark.
Zenn watched me with a wary eye. “Vi. Don’t give them a real reason to lock you up.” He
stepped close enough for his body heat to permeate my senses. Touching was against the rules,
but he’d broken that one lots of times.
I smiled, even though he was right. Lock Up is not a fun place. The stench alone is enough to set
rule-breakers straight. Still, I almost threw my activity card into the brambles where no one
would ever find it.
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Zenn’s face stopped me, his mouth drawn into a fine line. My bar code would be attached to
his—we were in the park after dark (gasp!)—and if I got into serious trouble, he might not be
able to advance in the Special Forces. And I couldn’t have that weighing on my conscience.
I rolled my eyes at Zenn, something he didn’t see because of my oversize straw hat—another
rule, one I actually followed. The scanner beeped, and a horrible squeal erupted from the
hovercopter.
“What have you done now?” Zenn’s voice carried a hint of laughter amidst the exasperation.
“Nothing,” I answered. “I’ve done nothing this time.” I’d been good for two months.
“Violet Schoenfeld, stay where you are!” the mechanical voice boomed. “The Green demands a
hearing.”
***
Everyone knows the Green is just a fancy name for the Thinkers. They’re the ones who
broadcast the transmissions and categorize the people. The ones who do the thinking so
regular people won’t have to.
Zenn would join Them when he finished training with the Special Forces. He’d wanted to be a
Greenie for as long as I’d known him, but that didn’t stop our friendship. This arrest might—SF
agents didn’t hang out with criminals.
Inside the hovercopter, large panels with multicolored buttons and complicated instruments
covered the dashboard. Glass encased the entire bulb of the body, allowing the pilot to spot
rule-breakers from any angle. A window in the floor beneath the single—and occupied—metal
chair provided a good view of the ground below. Since I had nowhere to sit, I stood next to the
tiny doorway.
I felt trapped in a bubble, with the charcoal sky pressing down around me. My throat tightened
with each passing second.
After cuffing me, the pilot scowled. “This return trip will take twice as long. We usually send
transports for arrests.”
I made a face at the back of his head. Like I didn’t know that. Almost as bad as Lock Up,
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transports are twice as uncomfortable as the cramped hovercopter. And the filth and stink?
Nasty.
With my extra weight on board, the pilot maneuvered the craft awkwardly and zoomed back
toward the towers on the south end of the Goodgrounds. “I have a break in twenty minutes. I
don’t have time for this.”
Then let me out. I watched Zenn fade to a distant dot, hoping it wouldn’t be the last time I saw
him.
The hovercopter slowed and the pilot turned to glare at me. “Don’t try your tricks on me,
girlie.”
I had no idea what he meant. I gripped the handle above the doorway as he swung the
hovercopter to the left. Toward the towers.
The Southern Rim is only accessible to Goodies with special clearance or important business. I’d
never been there, not that I hadn’t tried. No one I knew had ever been—water folk didn’t make
trouble.
True fear flowed in my veins as we approached. Maybe sneaking to see Zenn had been a bad
idea. The thought felt strange, almost like it didn’t belong to me. It grew, pressing me down
with guilt. You shouldn’t have risked your freedom to see Zenn.
The voice in my head definitely wasn’t my own. Damn Thinkers. I shook the brainwashing
message away. Zenn had risked his freedom for me last summer.
Below me, fields wove together in little squares, some brown, some green, some gold. Crops
grown in the Centrals provided food for those in the Southern Rim and the rest of the
Goodgrounds.
The fields gave way to structures standing two or three stories high. Constructed like the other
buildings in the Goodgrounds—gray or brown bricks, flashing tech lights, and red iris readers in
every doorway.
Windows were blinded off from the outside world. We certainly don’t want any sunlight getting
in. No, that would be bad. According to the Thinkers anyway. Sunlight damages skin, no matter
what color. Our clothes cover us from wrist to chin, ankle to hip, and everywhere in between.
Suits for the business class. Jeans and oatmeal-colored shirts for everyone else. Wide-brimmed
hats must be worn at all times.
Yeah, that doesn’t work for me. I don’t want to be a paper doll. That’s why I broke the rules and
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The pilot swerved and twisted around the tall buildings. I’d never seen the city up close. My
eyes couldn’t move fast enough from one shiny structure to the next.
The pilot steered toward the last and tallest building on the border of our land. The one with
the symbol that can be seen anywhere in the Goodgrounds.
The olive branch is the symbol of good. It signals our allegiance to the Association of Directors.
More like Association of Dictators, if you want my honest opinion. But no one does.
“So now you’ve seen the Southern Rim,” the pilot said. “Was it everything you expected?”
I didn’t know how to answer, so I kept my mouth shut—a first for me. That was the Southern
Rim? No magic, no golden pathways, no perfect escape from my sucky life. The wall now
towered in front of me, closing off any thought of freedom.
The hovercopter hung in midair as a door slid open in the wall. Darkness concealed whatever
waited inside. And what would I find on the other side? Could I come back? Maybe I would
never see Zenn again. My mouth felt too dry.
“After I process your file,” the pilot said. He made a note on a small screen. A long list popped
up.
“I’ve cited you before,” he said, smiling slowly. I remembered the last time: I’d left the City of
Water after dark, crossed through the crops growing in the Centrals, and tried to enter the
Southern Rim. I’d dressed up real nice in a fancy white dress and old platform shoes—which
were the reason I’d been caught. No one can run in shoes like that.
I endured six rounds of questioning until I admitted I’d stolen the shoes from the basement of a
house in the Abandoned Area—another off-limits place—another violation of the rules.
Wearing contraband (which I didn’t know about at the time) from an illegal area, trying to enter
another forbidden district, and then there was all that nasty business about lying. Like it’s the
worst thing on the planet or something.
You see, Goodies don’t lie. Ever. Honesty is sort of bred into us, but somehow mine got out-
bred. Maybe when I stopped listening to the transmissions. Or maybe because I just don’t give
a damn.
And I’m a good liar, but that’s all been properly documented in my file, which the pilot was now
reading with interest. “Mm-hmm,” he said. “A liar, a thief, and now the Green wants you. It’s no
small wonder, Vi.”
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I absolutely hate it when strangers use my nickname like we’re old friends. I ignored him as he
eased the hovercopter closer to the wall. A red beam scanned the rose on the bottom and a
signal flashed. The pilot steered into a long tunnel with black walls, hardly a wall and more like
a building. As we careened through it, panic spread through me—something I hadn’t felt since
learning Zenn would be leaving me behind to join the Special Forces. I wished he’d given me my
birthday present before the stupid pilot arrested me.
When we finally cleared the tunnel, I gasped at the view below me.
People swarmed in the streets. Silver instruments and shiny gadgets winked up at me from the
vast expanse below. My stomach clenched painfully, and I forced myself to keep breathing so I
wouldn’t faint.
The fierceness of the advanced tech burned in my brain. I can feel technology, I’ve always been
able to. And this whole new part of the Goodgrounds produced some serious tech buzz. My
head felt like it was in a particle accelerator set on high.
“So here we are,” the pilot said. “The Institute—the birthplace of tech.”
2. Many characters in Possession who claim to love Vi leave or betray her, including
Zenn, Jag, and Ty. They all say it is to protect her. Which characters do you believe?
Why do you think everyone keeps Vi in the dark about their true intentions? If you
were Violet, who would you trust?
3. The dystopian world in Possession is governed by Thane and his group of Directors
who use transmissions, technology and mind control to keep the society organized.
They claim that without the control the world would be too unsafe and chaotic.
What level of control do you think is acceptable in order to keep people safe? How
do our modern laws compare to the world in Possession?
5. Violet is supposed to plug into transmissions each night while she sleeps. The
transmissions are personalized to each listener in the Goodgrounds. It seems as
though Vi is one of the few who rebel against this. Do you think it’s mind control
that keeps people plugging in or do you think it’s a matter of the need to follow
rules? If you had your own personal transmission, what do you think it would say?
6. At the end of Possession, Vi’s father has modified her memory and she no longer
remembers Jag, only what she feels is a “blank space.” Do you think she is now
working for her father as he hoped all along? Do you think Zenn remembers Jag or is
he being controlled? Were you surprised by this ending?
THE DIRTY LIFE:
A Memoir of Farming, Food, and Love
Kristin Kimball
Scribner
Paperback: 9781416551614
eBook: 9781439187142
In 2002, I was single and living an unencumbered life in New York City. I read Eric Schlosser’s
Fast Food Nation and became interested in what looked like a trend: educated, ambitious
young people who were striving to become farmers at a time when conventional wisdom said
farming was a dead-end sucker’s line of work. I heard about a woman who had just graduated
from Vassar and was living in a tent in the Hudson Valley, making a go of an acre of vegetables.
Then I noticed others, all through the valley, setting up small, sustainable farms, supplying the
farmers markets and local stores. These young farmers and their projects sounded like a good
story to me, and I thought I’d try to write a book about what they were doing.
One of the first people I interviewed was Dan Guenther, who had started the college farm at
Vassar and had inspired many young farmers. Dan said I should probably talk to his son, Mark,
who was farming in Pennsylvania. So I drove out to meet Mark, who was too busy that day to
grant me an interview. Instead, he handed me a hoe and pointed me toward the broccoli patch.
That was the first time I actually did any farmwork—we didn’t even have a garden growing up—
and something happened. I fell in love with the work.
Although I had set out to gather research, I ended up with a husband, a farm, and an entirely
new life—as far from my old one as it’s possible to get. When Mark and I started Essex Farm, I
put the book idea aside for three years because there was no time. When I picked it back up, it
was a different story—more personal. I’d married it. Luckily, I had been keeping notes, and
writing a weekly farm newsletter for the members, so those things became a handy record of
events for the book. In terms of writing, I would start really early: leave the farm at four a.m. to
go down the road to the volunteer fire department, where I had a desk in the broom closet.
That was my island of calm away from the farm. I’d write from four to seven, then go home to
get our daughter up and dressed.
I’ve always loved words, cared about and paid attention to them. I plucked inspiration from a
few of my favorite writers: For humor and honesty, I looked to Mary Karr’s memoirs, all of
them, and to the wonderful Jeannette Walls. For the ability to write a true sentence, I love Joan
Didion. For writing about farming and rural life, there’s Wendell Berry and also Verlyn
Klinkenborg; I love the texture of his language. But writing is a solitary activity. I love talking
about other people’s writing, but I don’t talk about my own too much. Farming, on the other
hand, I talk about all the time.
My job on the farm right now is milking the cows. As a nursing mother, I feel a certain empathy.
The cows and I get along just fine.
—Kristin Kimball
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Here are a few farm-to-table suggestions from Kristin Kimball.
Fruit and cheese love each other. Serve fruit in season, and match it to a locally produced
cheese. Think about pears with your local form of blue, apple with something like a cheddar,
strawberries with crème fraîche. Every region has its own perfect couple in this category. The
wine to serve would depend on the cheese. But wine. Definitely wine.
Make your own simple herbed cheese: Mix a quart of yogurt with a little salt and pour it into a
colander lined with cheesecloth. Set the colander over a bowl in the fridge for six to twenty-
four hours, until the whey drains out and the yogurt is the consistency of spreadable cheese.
You might need to scrape the cheesecloth a few times to help it drain. Mix with salt and ground
pepper to taste, plus fresh herbs of your choice. You can also add chives or a little bit of minced
garlic. Serve with crackers or raw vegetables and Gewürztraminer.
Local eggs are usually easy to come by, and deviled eggs are terribly underrated. Help them
stage a comeback. Serve with Chardonnay, or if you make a spicy version, with beer.
The Dirty Life: A Memoir of Farming, Food, and Love, Kristin Kimball
PROLOGUE
Saturday night, midwinter. The farmhouse has been dark for hours and the crew has all gone
home. We light a fire and open two bottles of our friend Brian’s homemade beer, and as I wash
up the milking things Mark begins to cook for me, a farmer’s expression of intimacy. He is
perfectly sure of himself in the kitchen, wasting no movement, and watching him fills me with a
combination of admiration and lust, like a rock star’s groupie. He has chosen a fine-looking
chuck steak from the side of beef we butchered this week and has brought an assembly of
vegetables from the root cellar. Humming, he rummages through the fridge and comes out with
a pint of rich, gelatinous chicken stock and a pomegranate, the latter a gift from my friend
Amelia, who brought it up from New York City.
Mark gets busy, his hands moving quickly, and half an hour later he sets two colorful plates on
the table. The steak he has broiled medium rare and sliced thin across the grain and drizzled
with a red wine reduction. There is a mix of leek, carrot, and kale, sautéed in butter and
seasoned with juniper berries, and next to this, vibrating with color, a tiny pile of this year’s
ruby sauerkraut, made from purple cabbages. We are out of bread, but he found a little ball of
pastry dough in the fridge, left over from making a pie, and he rolled it out and cut it in triangles
and cooked it in a hot skillet, and voilà, biscuits. But the unlikely star of the plate is the radish.
Mark went a little crazy planting the storage radishes last summer and put in a thousand feet of
them, a lark for which I have teased him mercilessly, but they grew so beautifully and are
storing so well that now I see we might actually put a small dent in the supply by the end of the
winter. The variety is called Misato Rose. Creamy white with shades of green on the outside,
and bright pink on the inside, they are about the size of an apple, and, when you cut them, they
look like miniature watermelons. These are a favorite appetizer served raw with a little
sprinkling of salt. They look so fruitlike the biting taste is always a surprise, a disagreement
between the eye and the palate. Tonight, Mark braised them in stock, which hardly dimmed
their brilliant color but mellowed out their flavor. He added a dash of maple syrup and balsamic
vinegar, and at the end tossed in a handful of the tangy pomegranate seeds, the heat bursting
some and leaving others whole to amuse the tongue. This is why I love my husband: given these
opposites to work with, the earthiest of roots and the most exotic of fruits, he sees harmony,
not discord. We eat the meal, my eyes half closed in pleasure, and sip the bitter, hoppy beer,
and kiss, and before my friends in the city have even dressed to go out for the evening, we slip
off to bed.
I’ve slept in this bed for seven winters, and still, sometimes, I wonder how I came to be here,
someone’s wife, in an old farmhouse in the North Country. There are still moments when I feel
like an actor in a play. The real me stays out until four, wears heels, and carries a handbag, but
this character I’m playing gets up at four, wears Carhartts, and carries a Leatherman, and the
other day, doing laundry, a pair of .22 long shells fell out of her pocket, and she was supposed
to act like she wasn’t surprised. Instead of the lights and sounds of the city, I’m surrounded by
five hundred acres that are blanketed tonight in mist and clouds, and this farm is a whole world
darker and quieter, more beautiful and more brutal than I could have imagined the country to
be.
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Tonight, curled against Mark’s body under the goose-down comforter, I hear cold spring rain
begin to fall. Mark is already asleep, and I lie awake for a while, wondering if any of the cows
will have the bad luck to calve in such nasty weather, if the pigs have enough straw in their hut
to stay warm, if the horses are comfortable in the pasture or if they’d be better off in the barn. I
worry that the rain is melting the snow cover, exposing the garlic and the perennials to the
harsh cold that is sure to come back to bite them before the threat of frost is over. These are
the kinds of thoughts that have occupied the majority of the human race—the agrarians—for
most of the history of the world. And I am one of them now. It’s as surprising to me as radishes
and pomegranates.
Mark and I are both first-generation farmers. The farm we’ve built together could be described
as antique or very modern, depending on who you ask. The fertility comes from composted
manure and tilled-in cover crops. We use no pesticides, no herbicides. The farm is highly
diversified, and most of the work is done by horses instead of tractors. Our small fields are
bordered by hedgerow and woodlot. We have a sugar bush, the beginnings of an orchard, an
abundance of pasture and hay ground, and perennial gardens of herbs and flowers. We milk
our cows by hand and their milk is very rich and the butter we make from the cream is taxicab
yellow. We raise hogs and beef cattle and chickens on pasture, and at butchering time we make
fresh and dried sausages, pancetta, corned beefs, pâtés, and quarts of velvety stock.
The food we grow feeds a hundred people. These “members” come to the farm every Friday to
pick up their share of what we’ve produced. Our goal is to provide everything they need to have
a healthy and satisfying diet, year-round. We supply beef, chicken, pork, eggs, milk, maple
syrup, grains, flours, dried beans, herbs, fruits, and forty different vegetables. For this our
members pay us $2,900 per person per year and can take as much food each week as they can
eat, plus extra produce, during the growing season, to freeze or can for winter.
Some members still shop regularly at the grocery store for convenience food, produce out of
season, and things that we can’t provide like citrus fruit, but we and some of the others live
pretty much on what we produce.
I’ve learned many things in the years since my life took this wild turn toward the dirt. I can
shoot a gun, dispatch a chicken, dodge a charging bull, and ride out a runaway behind panicked
horses. But one lesson came harder than any of those: As much as you transform the land by
farming, farming transforms you. It seeps into your skin along with the dirt that abides
permanently in the creases of your thickened hands, the beds of your nails. It asks so much of
your body that if you’re not careful it can wreck you as surely as any vice by the time you’re
fifty, when you wake up and find yourself with ruined knees and dysfunctional shoulders, deaf
from the constant clank and rattle of your machinery, and broke to boot.
But farming takes root in you and crowds out other endeavors, makes them seem paltry. Your
acres become a world. And maybe you realize that it is beyond those acres or in your distant
past, back in the realm of TiVo and cubicles, of take-out food and central heat and air, in that
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country where discomfort has nearly disappeared, that you were deprived. Deprived of the
pleasure of desire, of effort and difficulty and meaningful accomplishment. A farm asks, and if
you don’t give enough, the primordial forces of death and wildness will overrun you.
So naturally you give, and then you give some more, and then you give to the point of breaking,
and then and only then it gives back, so bountifully it overfills not only your root cellar but also
that parched and weedy little patch we call the soul.
This book is the story of the two love affairs that interrupted the trajectory of my life: one with
farming—that dirty, concupiscent art—and the other with a complicated and exasperating
farmer I found in State College, Pennsylvania.
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PART ONE
Leaving
The first time I laid eyes on Mark, we were in the run-down trailer that served as his farm office
and his home. I had driven six hours from Manhattan to interview him for a story I was pitching,
about the young farmers who were growing the kind of local organic food that more and more
people wanted to eat. I knocked on his front door during what turned out to be the after-lunch
nap. When nobody answered, I let myself into the kitchen and called out, and after a minute
the bedroom door banged open and Mark strode down the hallway, buckling his belt. He was
very tall, and his long legs propelled him toward me with a sort of purposeful grace. He wore
scuffed leather work boots, blue jeans gone white at the thighs, and a devastated white dress
shirt. He had lively green eyes, a strong and perfect nose, a two-day beard, and a mane of gold
curls. His hands were large and callused, his forearms corded with muscle and wide blue veins.
He smiled, and he had beautiful teeth. I smelled warm skin, diesel, earth.
He introduced himself, shook my hand, and then he was abruptly gone, off on some urgent
farm business, the screen door banging shut behind him, promising over his shoulder to give
me an interview when he got back that evening. Meantime, I could hoe the broccoli with his
assistant, Keena. I recorded two impressions in my notebook later on: First, this is a man. All the
men I knew were cerebral. This one lived in his body. Second, I can’t believe I drove all this way
to hoe broccoli for this dude.
That first night, instead of doing an interview with him, I helped Mark slaughter a pig. I’d been a
vegetarian for thirteen years, and I was wearing a new white agnès b. blouse, but he was
shorthanded, and being on his farm without helping felt as unnatural as jumping into a lake and
not swimming. I’d never seen an animal slaughtered before, and I could not look when he shot
the pig—a sow named Butch with black-and-white spots, like a porcine character in a children’s
story. Once she was still I regained my equilibrium. I helped hoist the carcass on a gambrel and
make the eviscerating cut from breastbone to belly, holding the steaming cavity open while
Mark cut the organs free from their moorings. I was not disgusted but enlivened by what we
were doing. I was fascinated by the hard white purse of the stomach, the neat coil of intestines,
the lacy white caul fat, the still-bright heart.
After the carcass was halved we hauled it in a cart to a walk-in cooler near the road. One
hundred yards from us was a development of grandly scaled houses on small lots. They had
carefully clipped lawns, and geraniums in pots at the ends of the driveways. In the falling dark
Mark draped the now-headless pink half body over his shoulder. It was bulky and heavy and
awkward to carry, just like dead bodies on TV. I held on to the slippery back trotters and helped
get the pig into the cooler and hung on a hook from the ceiling. The cars zipping by had their
headlights on by then, and the lights were coming on in the houses across the road. I wondered
if anyone could see us, and if they would call the police.
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I stayed at a chain hotel in town that night and soaked the pig grease off of me in a bathroom
that seemed shockingly white and sterile. I felt like I’d been on a long trip to a very foreign
country.
The next morning I got up at dawn and went back to the farm. Mark’s crew was gathered for
breakfast: cornmeal pancakes and homemade sausage drizzled with warm maple syrup. I ate a
double helping of sausage, and that was the end of my life as a vegetarian.
Mark disappeared again right after breakfast, the pig in the back of a borrowed Explorer, off to
his Amish friends’ butcher shop. He’d be back in the afternoon, he said, and we could
conduct a proper interview then. In the meantime, I could rake rocks in the tomatoes with his
other assistant, Michael.
Michael did not look optimistic about my work capacity. I had traded my white blouse for a
vintage Cheap Trick T-shirt, tight jeans, and a pair of thrift-store Dingos with chunky little heels.
It was the kind of ironic-chic outfit that worked well in the East Village but looked strange and
slightly slutty in a field in Pennsylvania. I thought of myself as extremely fit and, as I phrased it
to myself, strong for my size, which was a slight five two including the heels on the Dingos, even
though my most vigorous exercise at that time came from regular games of pinball. I was
already sore from the previous day’s exertions, but I am cursed with a physical competitiveness
that goes beyond reason. I inherited this trait from my father, who, by way of example,
detached a hamstring attempting to muscle his way through a standing dock start while
waterskiing at the age of seventy-three.
Michael handed me a hard-toothed rake, and we set off in adjacent rows. Penn State was just
down the road, and Michael, a film major, had graduated that spring. He’d begun volunteering
weekends at Mark’s farm to see if, as he put it, hard work would make him a man. When he
graduated, Mark had hired him full-time. Michael’s father was an accountant and his girlfriend
was about to start law school and the lot of them had a fairly dim view of farming and were
hoping that Michael would soon get it out of his system.
I asked a lot of questions, to cover my puffing, and took every opportunity to lean on the rake
in a pose of intense listening. The July sun stung like a slap on the face and raised up around us
the sharp, resinous smell of tomato. The plants were as tall as I was and heavy with fruit, held
upright by twine and oak stakes. To a person used to growing nothing bigger than herbs in a
window box, they seemed vaguely menacing. The soil between the rows was dry and clumped
and heavily studded with rocks. Michael told me to ignore the rocks smaller than an egg and
rake the rest into piles, then shovel the piles into a wheelbarrow to be dumped in the
hedgerow. I was shocked by the weight of each shovel full of rocks, and I flipped the
wheelbarrow on my first trip. Rake, shovel, dump.
Two interminable hours passed in this way, until it occurred to me that, if this went on much
longer, I’d seize up entirely and be unable to depress the clutch in order to drive myself home.
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In desperation, I offered to go in to cook lunch for everyone. I tried to make the offer sound
casual. I couldn’t quite believe how much damage I’d done to myself in so short a time. There
were blisters rising between my left thumb and first finger, I couldn’t fully straighten my back,
and my crotch, imprisoned in the tight jeans, felt chafed beyond repair.
I wasn’t much of a cook back then. I appreciated good food, but I didn’t have a steady
relationship with it. Food was more like a series of one-night stands, set in front of me at a
restaurant or delivered in little white cardboard containers by a guy on a bicycle. I wasn’t sure
the oven in my apartment was functional, since in the seven years I’d lived there, I’d never used
it. The refrigerator worked, but in my small studio it was more valuable to me as storage space
than as a kitchen appliance. I kept the dog’s kibble in there, and a Brita pitcher of water, and,
bookshelf space being dear, the Manhattan phone book, which in my memory of those years
will always be heavy and cold. The freezer held a tray of shrunken ice cubes and a bottle of
Polish vodka.
Mark’s kitchen took up half the trailer and reminded me of a market in a third-world country. It
was stuffed full of colorful and unpackaged things, the smells of milk and meat and dirt and
vegetation mingling together in an earthy perfume that was strong but not unpleasant. I
opened doors, peered cautiously at the high shelves. The cabinets held gallon jars of black
beans and dried apples, wheat and rye berries, small, dry ears of corn.
The cupboard above the stove was full of bundles of herbs and unlabeled bottles of some fizzy,
amber liquid. I opened the refrigerator and found an uncovered pot brimming with soft, bloody
things I recognized as Butch’s internal organs, and a wire basket of scuffed brown eggs. In the
crisper were Ball jars of butter and cottage cheese, a pile of golf ball–looking things that may
have been turnips, and some carrots, unwashed.
I quickly shut the refrigerator door and grabbed a basket and a knife and went back out to the
field where Michael had finished raking rocks and was now busy mulching the rows of tomatoes
with bales of half-rotted straw. I looked at all the food that was there for the picking. New
potatoes, broccoli, lettuce, herbs, peas, beets, and blackberries. There was a cow grazing with
her calf, a flock of hens pecking away at some compost, another pig rooting through a pile of
leaf litter. Everywhere I looked, there was plenty. I felt some ideas moving around in my head,
big and slow, like tectonic plates. This was only a six-acre plot, the size of a large playground,
but there were vegetables here for two hundred families. It all seemed so much simpler than I’d
imagined. Dirt plus water plus sun plus sweat equaled food. No factories required, not a lot of
machinery, no poisons or chemical fertilizers. How was it possible that this abundance had
always existed, and I had not known it? I felt, of all damn things, safe. Anything could happen in
the world. Planes could crash into buildings, jobs could disappear, people could be thrown out
of their apartments, oil could run dry, but here, at least, we would eat. I filled my basket with
tomatoes and kale and onions and basil, calculating in my head the hefty sum all those
vegetables would have cost at the farmers’ market in New York City, and went back inside
hoping to do them justice.
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I found two tools in the kitchen that are so familiar to me now they’re like old friends: a ten-
inch soft steel chef ’s knife with a very sharp blade and a cast-iron skillet so big I could barely
get my two arms around it. I set to work, cutting ribs out of the kale and chopping tomatoes
and onions without knowing exactly where the meal was going. I did know that, if the rest of
the crew was as hungry as I was, I had better aim for quantity. I heated the skillet on two
burners and sautéed onion in butter, adding some diced carrots and the tomatoes and a bit of
water to steam the kale. I covered the skillet with something that looked like a manhole cover,
and when the kale was soft I dug shallow divots in it and cracked a dozen eggs into the holes to
poach. Then I minced some garlic and basil together and mashed it into a knob of butter and
spread that on slices of bread I’d found in the cupboard. I put the garlicky bread under the
broiler, and just as the crew walked in from the field I pulled the tray of fragrant toasts out of
the oven with a flourish, dealt pieces onto plates, topped them with the kale and poached eggs,
and crowned each with a spoonful of cottage cheese and a grind of black pepper.
When we were all seated and served I took my first trepidatious bite, and then sat back. It was,
I thought, astoundingly delicious—the kale a fresh, green backdrop to the hot, sharp bite of
garlic and basil—and I felt very clever to have made it. I looked around the table, expecting
raves and compliments, but there was only the flash of silverware, the purposeful movement of
several jaws. “Please pass the salt,” Michael said, eventually. It wasn’t that my lunch was bad, I
realize now. In fact I bet they thought it was pretty good. But pretty good is just not that
impressive to farmers who eat like princes every day. Food, a French man told me once, is the
first wealth. Grow it right, and you feel insanely rich, no matter what you own.
It was evening again before I managed to intercept Mark’s orbit. Michael and Keena and a
handful of volunteers who had been buzzing around the fields had all left for the day, but
Markwas still working. I’d begun to wonder if this guy was ever still. Now he was literally
running between jobs on those long legs of his, drawing on what seemed to be a boundless
reserve of energy. He checked the irrigation in the carrots, jotted notes for the next day, bent
to pull a clump of innocuous-looking weeds from the edge of the strawberries, tested the deer
fence for charge and then baited it with cotton balls soaked in apple scent, so the deer would
get a good, strong shock on the nose. I trotted along after him, juggling a notebook and pen
with a screwdriver and pieces of broken hose that he absentmindedly handed me. He talked
the whole time, at a pace and with a dexterity that surprised me. I thought farmers were
supposed to be salt-of-the-earth-type people, not dumb, exactly, but maybe a little dull.
He didn’t like the word work. That’s a pejorative. He preferred to call it farming, as in I farmed
for fourteen hours today. He did not own a television or a radio and figured he was probably
one of the last people in the country to know about September 11. Still doesn’t listen to the
news. It’s depressing, and there’s nothing you can do about most of it anyway. You have to
think locally, act locally, and his definition of local didn’t extend much beyond the fifteen acres
of land he was farming. The right thing was to try to understand how you were affecting the
world around you. At first he’d been against just plastic, but he was becoming suspicious of any
metal that he couldn’t mine and smelt himself. In fact, when it was time to build himself a
house, he’d like to build it with no nails, no metal at all, so that it could compost itself down to
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nothing after he was dead. He had never owned a car. He biked or hitchhiked where he needed
to go. He had recently turned against the word should, and doing so had made him a happier
person. He found the market economy and its anonymous exchange boring. He’d like to
imagine a farm where no money traded hands, only goodwill and favors. He had a theory that
you had to start out by giving stuff away—preferably big stuff, worth, he figured, about a
thousand dollars. At first, he said, people are discomfited by such a big gift. They try to make it
up to you, by giving you something big in return. And then you give them something else, and
they give you something else, and pretty soon nobody is keeping score. There is simply a flow
of things from the place of excess to the place of need. It’s personal, and it’s satisfying, and
everyone feels good about it. This guy is completely nuts, I thought. But what if he’s right?
The
Dirty
Life:
A
Memoir
of
Farming,
Food,
and
Love
Reading
Group
Guide
Topics
&
Questions
for
Discussion
1. Kristin
was
a
freelance
writer
in
New
York
City,
which
gave
her
the
opportunity
to
travel
around
the
world.
When
she
first
met
Mark
on
his
farm,
she
felt
like
a
foreigner.
In
what
ways
do
you
think
this
feeling
comforted
her?
Were
you
surprised
when
the
situation
flipped
and
Kristin
felt
foreign
to
the
life
she
used
to
lead
in
the
city?
2. In
what
ways
did
Kimball’s
yearning
for
a
home
sway
her
decision
to
leave
the
city
and
start
a
new
life
with
Mark?
If
you
were
put
in
a
similar
situation,
do
you
think
you
would
have
made
the
same
decision?
Why
or
why
not?
What
is
your
own
personal
definition
of
“home”?
3. Mark
and
Kristin
start
a
farm
that
aims
to
provide
a
whole
diet
for
their
year-‐round
members.
If
a
farm
in
your
area
did
the
same
thing,
would
you
become
a
member?
How
would
it
change
the
way
you
cook
and
eat?
4. The
first
year
on
Essex
Farm
was
full
of
trial
and
error.
Kristin
had
never
farmed
before
and
much
of
her
knowledge
came
from
her
neighbors
and
from
books.
In
what
ways
did
all
of
the
mishaps
shape
Kristin
and
change
her
perspective?
5. One
of
the
biggest
adjustments
Kristin
has
to
make
when
moving
to
Essex
Farm
is
learning
to
live
with
the
absence
of
instant
gratification.
She
finds
that
a
farmer
must
continuously
put
forth
effort
in
order
to
reap
benefits.
How
does
Kristin
respond
to
this
new
kind
of
work?
How
does
her
definition
of
“satisfaction”
change?
Would
you
be
able
to
accommodate
a
similar
change?
6. The
Dirty
Life
is
segmented
into
seasons.
What
are
the
underlying
issues
that
take
place
within
each
season
and
how
do
they
relate
to
the
year
in
full?
7. Have
your
views
on
sustainable
farming
changed
after
reading
about
the
trials
and
triumphs
of
Essex
Farm?
Have
your
views
on
farm-‐fresh
food
versus
supermarket
food
changed?
8. Kristin
repeatedly
finds
that
her
prior
assumptions
about
farming
and
farmers
are
false.
Do
you
think
her
stereotypes
were
the
same
as
those
of
most
Americans
or
just
people
who
live
in
urban
areas?
9. As
a
new
farmer,
Kristin
struggles
with
where
she
fits
in
the
socioeconomic
spectrum.
It
bothers
her
when
a
neighbor
brings
over
some
kitchen
things
because
she
thinks
Kristin
is
needy.
Later,
Kristin
writes
that
farming
makes
her
feel
rich
even
though
she’s
not.
What
makes
people
feel
poor
or
rich?
How
much
is
the
feeling
related
to
money?
10. Why
do
you
think
Kristin
goes
from
being
a
vegetarian
to
an
omnivore
after
helping
Mark
slaughter
a
pig?
11. Kristin
writes
that
there
are
two
types
of
marriages:
the
comfortable
kind
and
the
fiery
kind.
Do
you
agree?
Enhance
Your
Book
Club
1. Take
a
trip
to
a
local
farm
with
your
book
group
to
observe
the
work
that
goes
into
its
daily
management
and
production.
Visit
www.pickyourown.org
to
find
a
farm
near
you!
2. Kristin
and
Mark
raise
a
variety
of
produce.
Kristin
recalls
the
monotonous
pleasures
of
planting,
weeding,
and
harvesting.
Try
planting
a
garden
at
home
to
gain
a
greater
understanding
of
the
challenges
and
rewards
of
growing
your
own
produce.
3. Make
a
meal
with
your
book
group
using
only
locally
grown
and
seasonal
food.
If
possible,
talk
to
the
farmer
who
grew
it.
How
does
this
change
your
experience
of
cooking
and
eating
it?
4. Kristin
spends
part
of
the
harvest
season
putting
up
food
for
winter.
Consider
buying
a
quantity
of
food
in
season
and
getting
together
with
your
book
group
to
preserve
it.
Visit
www.learntopreserve.com
for
tips
and
ideas.
5. Listen
to
Kristin
Kimball
discuss
The
Dirty
Life
on
NPR’s
All
Things
Considered
by
going
to
http://www.npr.org/2010/11/12/131268939/-‐the-‐dirty-‐life-‐from-‐city-‐girl-‐to-‐hog-‐
butcher?ft=1&f=1032.
Learn
about
how
Kristin
came
up
with
the
title,
the
best
way
to
eat
a
potato,
and
see
pictures
of
Essex
Farm!
THE BUTTERFLY’S DAUGHTER
Mary Alice Monroe
Gallery Books
Hardcover: 9781439170618
eBook: 9781439171028
Dear Reader,
Who doesn’t love butterflies? They are joy with wings. It is the joy that I witnessed
10,000 feet high in the mountains of Mexico when millions of monarch butterflies burst
into the air like orange confetti that gave me the theme for The Butterfly’s Daughter. As
a story-teller, I look for the human parallels to inspire my themes, characters, and
metaphors, and to add depth to the novel. The monarchs’ unique migration and
metamorphosis, and their genetic memory; inspired the story’s strong bond between a
grandmother and her granddaughter and a young woman’s journey to understanding
her family, culture, and traditions—even as she takes steps to forge her own identity.
Don’t we all look for familiar family traits in ourselves and in our children?
Also, to fully understand the story of the characters I raised dozens of monarchs from
egg to butterfly—a magical experience. Only by personal observation did I truly
appreciate the miracle of metamorphosis and understand why so many cultures and
religions use it as a symbol for rebirth. Most people think only the butterfly is beautiful.
I believe it is the courage to go into the darkness to change that is the true miracle. The
story of a young woman’s journey to self-discovery is no less wondrous.
Warm regards,
Mary Alice Monroe
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club
discussing their own book. Mary Alice Monroe has some festive suggestions and
shares a recipe for (drum roll please) the “Best Ever Refritos.”
In The Butterfly’s Daughter Luz travels to Mexico and discovers her roots. What could be
more entertaining for your book club than either a colorful Cinco de Mayo (May 5)
party, or a festive Day of the Dead party to bring culture, good food, and fun to the club
meeting?
Cinco de Mayo is not a Mexican national holiday, but has developed as a colorful, fun
celebration of Mexican heritage in the spring.
Dia de los Muertos is held on November 1 and 2 and celebrates life and the return of the
beloved departed. In Mexican culture, many believe that the monarch butterfly is the
spirit of someone recently departed. So science and culture meet as the holiday
coincides with the monarchs’ return to their overwintering grounds.
For your book club meeting, set up an ofrenda (altar) in your home similar to the one
Luz observed in the novel. Cover a table with a tablecloth and place on it colorful skulls
(candy or painted), paper cutouts (papeles picado), white candles, marigolds or mums,
fruit, water, and sweets. Don’t forget the butterflies!
Deepen the impact of the evening by selecting a theme for your ofrenda that everyone
can participate in. For example: each member could bring an offering that represents
her favorite book. Or she might bring something personal to commemorate a lost loved
one.
For ambience, light candles and play a selection of Latin music. Remember, despite its
name, the Day of the Dead is a very festive and upbeat time. It’s not the same as
Halloween, so you don’t have to dress up in costumes. Traditional Mexican attire—
colorful shawls, long braids with ribbons, floral embroidered blouses—might be fun.
I’m sharing with you the best refried beans recipe ever! It was given to me when I was
first married, and I’ve handed it down to my friends, family, and children all these many
years. It makes a lot!
To drink? Margaritas, of course! Salt or no salt? Have a selection of cold Mexican beers
on hand, too.
Ingredients
Preparation
Cook beans per package instructions. Over-cooking is desirable. Reduce liquid. Mash
beans with potato masher.
Heat 3 tablespoons of oil in skillet. Add onions, garlic, and peppers and sauté until
translucent. Add cumin, salt, and pepper.
Add beans to vegetables and seasoning in skillet and mix well. If too soupy, the liquid
may be reduced over a low flame.
ONE
Each fall, millions of delicate orange and black butterflies fly more than two thousand miles
from the United States and Canada to overwinter in the mountains of central Mexico.
The annual migration of the monarch is a phenomenal story—a miracle of instinct and survival.
Esperanza Avila had told the story so many times over the years that it was accepted as truth—
even by herself. She’d meant only to blanket her granddaughter’s frightening loss, not to
mislead her. She saw the story she’d created as a safe, happy cocoon for her to grow up in.
But in the end, she’d created a lie. Now she was caught in her own trap of deception. The only
way out was to tell Luz the truth, no matter how painful that truth might be.
Esperanza counted the strokes as she brushed her long, white hair in front of the bureau
mirror. Morning light fell in a broken pattern across her room. Her gaze fell upon an old sepia-
toned photograph of herself and her second husband, Hector Avila. She paused her brushing as
she gazed at his brilliant smile, his hair that waved like the ocean he loved, and his eyes that
were as impossibly blue.
Hector Avila had been the love of her life, taken too soon from her. When she was a younger
woman her raven hair flowed down her back to swirl around her hips. Hector had loved her
hair, whispered to her how it was like a waterfall at night that captured the reflection of the
stars. He used to wind her hair in his hands, wrap himself up in it when they made love. Even
after all these years, closing her eyes, she could remember the feel of his skin, and her hair like
silk pressed against her body.
Opening her eyes again, she saw that her long hair was no longer the lustrous skein that Hector
had relished. So many seasons had passed since those halcyon days, so many joys, and so much
sadness. Her hair was a blizzard of snow falling around her shoulders. She pressed the brush to
her heart as it tightened. Where did the time go?
Suddenly the room felt like it was tilting. Esperanza closed her eyes and grasped the bureau for
balance. She was tired, she told herself. She didn’t sleep well the night before. Ever since she’d
received that phone call from her daughter Maria, old memories and worries had plagued her.
They spilled over to her dreams, haunting her, and lingered after the pale light of dawn
awakened her.
Her troubled gaze traveled across the other photographs on her bureau, resting on a small
silver frame that held the treasured photograph of her daughter Mariposa, aglow with
happiness. In her arms she carried her baby. Luz couldn’t have been six months old but already
her pale eyes shone as bright as the sun. Tears filled Esperanza’s eyes as her heart pumped with
love for this child, who’d been a gift to her in her later years, after Mariposa had vanished.
“Hector,” she said aloud. “I need your wisdom, now more than ever. I could bear this hardship
alone. But Luz . . . she is twenty-one, no longer a child. Still, I can’t endure to see her hurt. I’ve
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told Luz so many stories about her mother. But now this! What words can I say to make her
understand this truth?” She shook her head with grief. “How will she not hate me?”
She finished gathering her long locks in fingers that were gnarled from age and hard work.
While she methodically wound the hair like a skein of wool, her mind reviewed her plan to tell
Luz the truth about her mother. She needed uninterrupted time and a safe place to tell her
granddaughter the story from beginning to end.
Her hands trembled as she finished pinning the thick braid of hair securely at the base of her
head. Taking a steadying breath, she opened her drawer and pulled out the amber plastic
medicine bottle she kept hidden behind socks and underwear. She didn’t tell Luz about the pills
that kept her heart from skipping its beat. Luz already had to worry about too many things for a
girl her age. There was a fine line between being responsible and being burdened. That thought
strengthened Esperanza’s resolve. She pried open the bottle and shook out the last pink tablet
into her palm, then sighed. She needed to get the expensive prescription refilled. How would
she pay for it after today? She placed the pill on her tongue and washed it down with a glass of
water. Tomorrow she’d worry about that. Today her course was clear.
With great care Esperanza applied smudges of rouge to her cheeks and dabbed on some
lipstick. The ruby color added fullness to her thinning lips. She cast a final, assessing glance in
the mirror. There were times when she looked at her reflection that she caught a peek at the
girl she once was, trapped deep inside of her, barely visible behind the wrinkles and sunken
cheeks. That young girl shone bright in her eyes this morning, excited for the task ahead.
Sitting on the edge of her bed, she put on her tennis shoes, then slipped down to her knees.
Usually she’d pull out her rosary for her morning prayers, but today she reached her arm under
her mattress all the way to her shoulder and began groping. The mattress was heavy and
Esperanza panted with the effort. At last, her fingers clutched the small leather pouch and
pulled it out.
She sat cross-legged on the hardwood floor, catching her breath, and then gingerly opened the
worn, hand-sewn purse that had traveled with her from her small village in Mexico all the way
to Milwaukee so many years before. Her fingertip traced the image of a butterfly etched into
the golden leather. Without hesitating further, she opened it and pulled out a thick wad of bills.
She counted the dollars in her lap, smoothing each bill. Her ruby lips spread into a satisfied grin.
Esperanza put on her black trench coat and slipped a triangle of red silk scarf over her head, a
gift from Luz. Before leaving, she made sure the coffee machine was turned off and the iron
was unplugged, then made a fervent sign of the cross in front of the framed portrait of La
Virgen de Guadalupe in the front hall. With a puff, she extinguished the candle and pulled the
door closed behind her.
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A north wind hit her face and she tugged the collar of her coat higher around her neck. Fall
came early in Wisconsin and spring took its time. She made her way down the stairs to the
cracked cement sidewalk.
“You off?”
Esperanza turned toward the throaty voice of her neighbor, Yolanda Rodriguez. She was
dressed for the weather in a thick black sweater and gloves as she raked leaves from her tiny
front yard. Yolanda stood with her head cocked and her dark eyes gleaming, like a crow at the
fence line.
“Yes,” Esperanza called back with conviction as she walked closer to the chain-link fence that
divided their front yards.
At the sound of her voice, two small black-and-white mixed-breed dogs rushed to the fence,
barking wildly. Yolanda hushed them, then paused to lean on the rake. “This is a good thing
you’re doing,” she said, nodding her head for emphasis. “Luz is not a little girl anymore. She
should know.”
“You should have told Luz the truth long ago. I told you so!”
Esperanza held her tongue but felt her heart squeeze in anxiety.
“You still planning on driving to San Antonio?” Yolanda’s voice was filled with doubt.
“Yes.”
Yolanda shook her head doubtfully. “I still think you should fly. It’s faster. Not so much trouble.
Not so dangerous.”
“It’s better this way. And I did it before, don’t forget. I have it all planned. It will take only three
days to drive to San Antonio. It’s perfect, don’t you see? That will give Luz and me enough time
to talk, where it is quiet and safe.”
Yolanda snorted. “And Luz won’t be able to bolt like Mariposa.” Esperanza frowned and looked
off into the biting wind. She thought how sharp words could sting when they held the truth.
Yolanda caught a note in her voice and reached out to gently pat Esperanza’s shoulder in
commiseration. “It’s a good plan. I will say a prayer to the Virgencita that it will succeed. ¡Buena
suerte!” she said with a farewell wave, then returned to her raking, muttering curses under her
breath at the gust of wind that brought a fresh torrent of leaves to her yard.
Esperanza hurried to the street corner to catch the bus she saw cruising up the block. She found
a seat and looked out the window at the familiar scenery of bungalow houses, brown brick
buildings, and fast-food restaurants. There were so many people, she thought. In cars, on foot,
in the windows—all strangers and all with their hands rammed into pockets and their faces set
in hard frowns. Her mind flitted back to the small village in the mountains where she’d grown
up. Everything was green and she knew everyone’s name. Esperanza shivered and tightened
her coat. Even after all these years she couldn’t get used to these cold northern winters.
No coat was warm enough. She longed for the warmer climate and the simple tranquility of her
home.
Stepping off the bus, she felt the chill of the winds off Lake Michigan clear to her bones. It took
her a minute to get her bearings. She consulted the small piece of paper on which she’d written
the directions, then began to walk. After a few blocks, she sighed with relief at seeing the
enormous sign: NICE USED CARS.
It wasn’t much of a car lot. It was an old filling station surrounded by a long line of wire
tethered between buildings, affixed with colored plastic flags flapping in the breeze. Beneath
was a small collection of random cars, some with new coats of paint that didn’t do a good job of
covering rust. The salesman didn’t see her walk onto the lot at first. She knew the moment he
spotted her, though, because he instinctively fixed his tie.
“I’m where I need to be,” she replied. “Are you going to show me some cars or do I have to look
myself?”
The salesman was a short, beady-eyed man in an ill-fitting suit. He smiled and led her to a
midsize sedan. After looking at the sticker, Esperanza shook her head. “Oh no, I can’t afford this
car. Please, something more . . .” She didn’t want to say cheap. What was the better word in
English? “Affordable.”
“I can do that,” he replied cheerfully, though his smile was more forced now.
He led her to the far side of the lot, where the prices dropped significantly. She peered into the
windows of a Ford Taurus.
She looked at the man as though he was addled. “I need one!” she said, then turned to move
down the line of cars.
Esperanza didn’t know what he meant by that, so she didn’t reply. She walked down the first
line of sad-looking cars, feeling her heart drop into her shoes. Each looked worse than the next.
When she turned to the second row she saw the car she’d come for.
The battered orange Volkswagen was very much like the one that her first husband, Luis, had
found abandoned on the side of the road. He’d spent hours repairing it, then he’d taught her
how to drive along dusty roads as she ground the gears.
“You like that one?” the persistent man asked as he approached again. “I dunno. Maybe you
shouldn’t be looking at a manual transmission.”
“No,” she said, feeling as though fate had just smiled on her.
Luz Avila looked out the wall of grimy industrial windows at the foundry to see thick, gray
clouds gathering in the sky. She reached up to tug at the elastic of her ponytail, then shook her
head to free her long mane of black hair. Then, slipping into her brown corduroy jacket, she
took her place in a long line of employees waiting with vacant stares to enter their numbers
into the employee time clock. One by one they moved forward, but she felt they were all really
just stuck in one place.
“You wanna go out tonight?” the young woman behind her asked. Dana was only a year older
than Luz but already married and divorced. Her short, spiky hair was an unnatural shade of red
and she liked to experiment with varying shades of green and blue eye shadow. “We thought
we’d hook up at O’Malley’s.”
Luz shook her head. Dana wouldn’t understand that she was saving every dollar she could to
finish college. Or that her conservative Mexican grandmother didn’t approve of freewheeling
single girls who went out to bars alone.
“Yeah,” she replied dully. The foundry paid a good wage but Luz felt trapped inside its walls,
unable to see a brighter future for herself. The best part of her day was clocking out.
Luz stepped out into an October wind tinged with acrid industrial scents. She wrinkled her nose
and walked quickly toward the parking lot, where she knew her boyfriend would be waiting for
her.
Sully’s face burst into a grin under his baseball cap when he spotted her. Sullivan Gibson was a
traditional midwestern boy of German-Irish farming descent, evident in his six-foot-three-inch
height, his broad shoulders, his penchant for basketball and beer, and his polite manners
toward a lady. His long arm pushed the truck door open for her as she approached, and she
climbed into the warm compartment just as an icy northern rain began.
The air in the truck was close and reeked of stale cigarette smoke—she couldn’t get Sully to
break his habit. She leaned across the seat to meet his lips. Sully’s brooding blue eyes sparked
to life when they kissed, like his truck when he fired the ignition.
Beneath Sully’s rough exterior beat the steady, generous heart of a gentle man. He worked at
an auto repair shop in Milwaukee. It was a small garage but it had a sterling reputation and a
waiting list for appointments. Sully felt lucky to have been offered a job there, but Luz knew
that his diligence, reliability, and honesty meant that the garage was the lucky one. Sully
already had his own roster of clients. He made a good living with the promise of raises,
promotions, and if his dreams were realized, his own shop someday.
He was a man ready to settle down with a wife and raise a family. They’d been dating for three
years and Sully was her rock. She felt safe when he slipped a possessive arm around her
shoulders and drew her close as they pulled out from the parking lot.
Every day after work Sully drove Luz to her home on Milwaukee’s south side. He pulled to a
stop in front of her unassuming A-frame bungalow, one of many identical houses bordering the
narrow street. It was a modest neighborhood, mostly Hispanic. A neighborhood where the
residents couldn’t afford improvements to the houses and the city didn’t bother to improve the
streets. But there were pots of brightly colored geraniums on front porches, well-tended
shrubs, bicycles chained to a railing, and soccer balls lying in the yard. This was a close-knit
neighborhood of families.
Sully let the engine idle and bent to deliver a slow, probing kiss that took Luz’s breath away. She
pulled back, blinking in a daze.
“What was that for?”
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His lips curved shyly, cutting deep dimples into his cheeks. “I was going to ask you. You’re awful
quiet today.”
Luz’s grin slipped and she looked out the windshield. “It’s Abuela,” she said, referring to her
grandmother. In her mind’s eye she saw Abuela as she was early that morning. She hadn’t been
in the kitchen humming over the stove as usual. Luz had searched and found Abuela shivering
outdoors in the damp chill, her nightgown billowing at her ankles and her long, white hair
streaming tangled down her back. She’d stood motionless, like a stone statue in the garden.
“I’m worried about her,” she said, and immediately his gaze sharpened with concern. “She
wasn’t herself this morning. She seemed so distracted and her face was chalky and tired, like
she didn’t sleep a wink. I know she’s upset about something but she won’t talk about it.”
Sully’s dark brows immediately gathered over a frown. “Maybe I should drive her to the
doctor.”
Luz’s heart softened. Sully loved Abuela and in turn, Abuela doted on her granddaughter’s tall
and tender-hearted boyfriend. The two shared a bond that endeared Sully to Luz. Abuela was
always asking Sully to drive her to the grocery store or the mall or to pick something up because
they didn’t have a car. Sully was gallant and never refused her. In exchange, Abuela invited him
to dinner regularly, knowing he lived alone, and always had a bag of leftovers or cake for him to
take home.
“I don’t think it’s her health,” Luz replied. “Something happened yesterday.”
The big engine rumbled loudly, rocking them gently, and Luz could at last confess the worries
she’d carried all day. “When I came home from work yesterday she was on the phone. But she
got off real quick when I came in, like she didn’t want me to overhear. When I asked her who it
was she said it was my tía Maria, but she wouldn’t look at me, and her look was kind of guilty,
you know the kind I mean? She just went out to her workroom and began sweeping. I tried to
find out what happened but Abuela brushed me off, saying we’d talk about it later.”
“Maybe. Abuela and my aunt are always fighting about something. But this was different. It’s
big, whatever it is. I’ve never seen Abuela so . . .” She stumbled for a word, trying to put a name
to the sullen expression she’d seen in Abuela’s eyes.
“Upset?”
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“Worse. Shaken.” She saw Abuela’s face again, so pale and drawn, and unbuckled her seat belt.
“I better go in and check on her.”
Luz moved to leave but Sully tugged at her elbow, holding her back.
“Uh, Luz,” he began, and cleared his throat. “There’s something I should tell you.”
Luz heard the seriousness in his tone and she grew alert. She settled back against the cushion.
“Okay.”
“You know how your grandmother asks me to run a few errands for her?”
“Yeah.”
“Well, for a while now she’s been asking me to go to the pharmacy to pick up her medicine.”
“Her medicine? What medicine?” Luz asked, alarmed. She hadn’t known Abuela was taking any
prescriptions and was seized with a sudden fear. Her grandmother was her world. After her
mother died when Luz was only five, Abuela had raised her singlehandedly, giving Luz the only
home she knew. “She never told me she was taking medicine. Sully, if anything ever happened
to her, I don’t know what I’d do. I can’t even think about it without getting teary-eyed.”
“See? That’s why she didn’t want you to know. She asked me not to tell you, but you’re worried
about her, and well, I thought you should know.” He looked at her anxiously. “I hate to break a
promise.”
Luz took a shaky breath and exhaled. “No, Sully, you did the right thing to tell me.
Especially if . . . I won’t tell her I know.” She looked out anxiously at the house. “I better go in
and check on her.”
“Do you still want me to pick you up tonight? Maybe you should stay home.”
She shook her head. “I’m probably making too big a thing out of all this. I’ll be ready.” Luz
leaned in for a quick kiss, then climbed from the truck. She heard the sudden roar of the engine
as Sully pulled away. A light rain chased her up the stairs to her front door.
Her grandmother’s brown brick bungalow appeared dreary and dull from the outside, but once
she was inside, the little house pulsed with life. Abuela’s vibrant spirit breathed in every
brightly painted room. Metal and ceramic icons from Mexico hung on the walls and in a place of
honor in the living room was a large, framed painting of the Virgin of Guadalupe.
Luz set her purse down on the small tile-topped hall table. She heard sounds of children’s
laughter and, lifting her nose, caught the unmistakable scent of maize. An involuntary smile
eased across her face.
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“¡Aquí!”
She followed the voice to the kitchen, where the rich smells of dark roasted coffee, maize, and
cumin embraced her. A wooden bowl overflowed with limes, oranges, and the avocados Abuela
adored. She told Luz tales of enormous aguacate trees growing on her family farm in Mexico,
ripe with avocados she could pick by the bushel. Fragrant steam rose from a pot on the stove,
rattling the lid. Abuela was surrounded by two girls and a boy around seven years of age.
Looking up, Esperanza caught Luz’s eye, then with a quick smile she clapped her hands.
“Time to go, mis niños! Your mothers will be calling you for dinner,” she sang, herding the
children toward the door. “No, no, the butterflies are gone. They flew off to Mexico. Lo siento.
I’m sorry. But don’t worry. They’ll be back in the spring, eh? Sí, sí, yo prometo.”
Luz leaned against the doorframe, relieved to see her abuela back to her normal self. She
crossed her arms and watched the hectic scene unfold. Abuela was called La Dama Mariposa,
the Butterfly Lady, in the neighborhood because she raised butterflies. Monarchs in particular.
For as long as Luz could remember there had always been children hovering near Abuela,
especially during the summer, when the monarchs were bursting from chrysalises or being
released into the garden.
At last the door closed and Abuela turned to face Luz, clasping her hands tightly. Her dark eyes
sparkled with mysterious excitement.
Luz dropped her arms and straightened, alert. “A surprise? For me?”
She reached out to pull her black shawl from the back of a chair. Luz couldn’t help the ear-to-
ear grin that spread across her face. She’d thought it was such a rainy, gloomy day, but now
Abuela was laughing and talking about surprises. She laughed to herself as she followed Abuela
outdoors.
The rain had slowed to a faint drizzle, more a mist that fell soft on her face. She tucked her arm
under Abuela’s as they made their way down the six cement steps to the front sidewalk. Abuela
detoured across the short expanse of city grass to stop before an old
Volkswagen Bug at the curb. Dropping Luz’s arm, she dug into her pocket. Her face beamed in
triumph as she pulled out a key.
“Surprise!”
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“Come, take a look!” Abuela exclaimed, placing the key in her hand and nudging her toward the
curb. “What do you think?” Words failed Luz as she took in the small burnt orange car at the
curb.
Abuela clasped her hands together near her breast. “You were surprised, right?”
“I knew you would be. I could not wait to see your face.” Luz walked across the soggy soil closer
to the car. Under the yellow glow of the streetlight, she could see that the old VW Bug had lived
a hard life. Multiple small dents and spots of rust were like a pox across the faded orange
metal. When she peeked in the window, everything looked more spindly and less plush than in
newer cars. She shook her head, wondering to herself what surprised her more: that Abuela
had actually bought a car, or that Abuela had somehow managed to unearth the ugliest,
sorriest car on the planet. And yet, something about it was utterly vintage, and
she had to admit she liked it.
“You bought a car!” she said, and knew a moment of giddiness. Abuela cocked her head at Luz’s
hesitation. “You wanted a car, right?”
“Oh, yes,” she agreed with a shaky smile. She’d had a savings account for several years, just to
buy a car, but it never seemed to get past a thousand dollars. “I wanted a car. But . . .” Luz bit
her lip and hesitated.
She didn’t want to appear ungrateful, yet niggling worries about money dampened the fire of
her enthusiasm like the cold rain. Luz was frugal and knew to the penny how much—or how
little—was in their family checking account and how much they currently owed on their credit
card. Since she was the only one employed, the responsibility for paying those bills fell on her
shoulders. How could Abuela just go out and buy a car? she wondered, feeling her shoulders
stiffen.
Abuela waved her hand in a scoff. “It’s not so much.” Luz looked at the ancient VW with dents
in the fenders and patches of touched-up rust and hoped her sweet grandmother wasn’t
fleeced. “How much did you pay?”
Abuela sniffed and lifted her chin. “It isn’t polite to ask how much a gift cost. This does not
concern you.”
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“I’m sorry. But, Abuela, it does . . .” Luz took a deep breath. “Did you charge it on the credit
card?” She had to ask. The credit card company had just raised its rates and she was already
wondering how long it would take for her to pay it back.
Luz imagined a sock filled with dollar bills, coins hidden in a coffee can. She suppressed a
chuckle at her grandmother’s old-fashioned ways. “How much do you have?”
Abuela put out her hands toward the car with pride. “Enough for this!”
Luz struggled to find words that were respectful and wouldn’t hurt her grandmother’s feelings.
But she had to be practical and think of their future. “Abuela, you know we’re cutting things
close to the bone. We could’ve used the money to pay off our debt. Those interest rates are
killing us. And besides, Sully always says buying a car is like buying a puppy. The purchase price
is the cheap part.”
Abuela tugged at the ends of her black crocheted shawl. “I thought maybe Sully could look at
it.”
There it was. Poor Sully, Luz thought. “That car is a beater. It might take more time than he has
to offer.” Not to mention money that he’d never bill them for. “How many miles does it have?”
“I don’t know.”
Abuela’s back straightened and her smile slipped. Once more Luz saw the cloak of anxious
worry slip over her grandmother’s usually serene expression. Abuela clasped her small hands
before her, like a woman in prayer, and when she spoke her voice was grave.
“A trip? Where?”
Abuela’s eyes widened with surprise that the phone call was mentioned, then her eyes shifted
and after a pause, she delivered a quick, tentative nod. Luz thought as much. “Is there an
emergency? Is Tía Maria sick?”
“Oh, Abuela . . .” Her grandmother had always planned to take Luz to visit her daughter and
family in San Antonio. Unfortunately, money was always short and trips were as unrealized as
Luz’s dreams. “I’d love to go. But right now, we just don’t have enough money.” It was the
truth, but as soon as she said the words she saw Abuela’s face fall. “But if we’re careful and
save our money, we can go next year.”
Abuela clutched Luz’s hand. Her dark eyes flamed and her voice broke with emotion. “No, not
next year. This year! Right away!”
Luz rushed to wrap her arms around her grandmother. Abuela was barely five feet tall, slim in
the shoulders and barrel-waisted. Luz was only four inches taller but she had to lean over her.
Closing her eyes, she smelled in her hair the scents of corn and vanilla and all things safe and
secure.
“Okay, Abuelita,” she said reassuringly. “I’ll find a way, I promise. Don’t worry. I’ll get a second
job. But let’s go inside now. It’s starting to rain again and you’re shivering. Your hands are like
ice.”
With one arm wrapped around Abuela’s shoulders she shepherded her back to the house. Luz
didn’t know how she was going to keep her promise, but she’d figure that out later. Now she
had to bring Abuela back inside, where it was warm.
Introduction
In The Butterfly’s Daughter, four women embark on a journey of self-discovery that follows the
monarch butterflies’ migration to Mexico. The story begins when Luz Avila’s grandmother, the
local butterfly lady, purchases an old VW Bug for a road trip back home to Mexico. When she
unexpectedly dies, Luz is inspired to take her abuela’s ashes home. Following her
grandmother’s beloved butterflies, Luz meets a collection of women—each on a journey of her
own. But nothing can prepare Luz for what she finds along the way.
Rich with lyrical detail and insight, The Butterfly’s Daughter embraces the notion that life is
more about the journey, than the destination.
1. The author writes, “The annual migration of the monarch is a phenomenal story—a
miracle of instinct and survival.” Do you think this quote also applies to Luz and her
friends’ journey? Where else in The Butterfly’s Daughter are there parallels between
nature and the novel’s characters?
2. Before she dies, abuela tells Luz, “True courage comes from the heart. Tu corazón.
Sometimes, it takes more courage not to jump and to stand strong.” Later, Luz wonders
whether courage is “nothing more than taking wing and staying the course.” How do
you define courage?
3. Abuela believed that “a monarch butterfly was the soul of the recently departed.” What
kinds of myths or superstitions does your own family believe in? What kind of purpose
do you think these beliefs serve? What did you think about Ofelia and Luz’s different
interpretation of the use of Xochiquetzal in the creation myth?
4. Luz followed the butterflies to Mexico both literally and figuratively—often discovering
a butterfly or some other kind of sign at the moment when she most needed help and
guidance. What do you think these signs represent? Have you ever felt like you were
receiving signs to aid you along your way?
5. Why do you think abuela lied to Luz about her mother’s death? Early in the novel the
author writes that abuela “had told the story so many times over the years it was
accepted as the truth—even by herself. Do you think she was right to lie, or should she
have told Luz the truth from the beginning? Are lies of any kind acceptable in a family?
6. When Luz arrives in Texas and discovers that her mother, Mariposa, is still alive, she’s
filled with a mix of emotions—hurt, anger, joy, betrayal, panic. She’s furious with
Mariposa for leaving and disappointed that her mother is not the woman she’d
fantasized about. What do you think about Luz’s reaction to meeting her mother?
Discuss how they ended the journey at the airport. Do you think that Luz and Mariposa
will ultimately be able to have a mother/daughter relationship?
7. Margaret’s mother told her that she had to make her own luck, and this is one of the
reasons she decides to join Luz on her journey. Do you agree that you make your own
luck?
8. In The Butterfly’s Daughter the author shows both Mariposa’s struggles to turn her life
around and the negative effects she’s had, whether intentional or unintentional, on the
people in her life. Do you think she is ultimately a sympathetic character?
9. Once she arrives in Texas, Luz sees herself in the mirror and “marveled at how the
changes she felt occurring inside herself were reflected outside as well.” In what ways
does she mature internally? How did she most change? What was the most significant
lesson she learned?
10. As they travel toward Mexico, Luz and her friends make an ofrenda for abuela with
scraps that signify each woman—the baby booties Ofelia made, dried flowers, Stacie’s
artwork. Discuss Mariposa’s opinion that Luz’s ofrenda was disrespectful. How do her
actions reveal the breakdown of verbal and nonverbal communication between a
mother and daughter? Was Luz’s fury a response to feeling disrespected, or to her
feeling that she was neither seen nor heard by her mother?
11. During the course of their journey, many of the characters emerge from their own
“cocoons”—Luz leaves behind her sheltered existence, Margaret breaks free of her own
rigid boundaries, Ofelia ends an abusive relationship, and Mariposa lets go of her guilt.
In what ways did the women help one another with their individual metamorphoses?
12. Mariposa visits her garden when she needs peace and strength, because it makes her
feel “rooted to a profound source that connect[s] her to a greater whole.” Discuss
different ways you find peace and strength when needed. Where else in The Butterfly’s
Daughter do the characters turn to nature for healing?
13. In Mexico, Luz celebrates the Day of the Dead with her family. The family creates an
altar to honor the departed and share stories of the deceased’s life. What similarities
and differences do you see between this tradition and the way that other cultures honor
their dead?
14. Mariposa asks Sam, “Why does everyone always think only of the butterfly as beautiful?
It’s the change itself—the metamorphosis—that is the true wonder.” Do you agree?
Discuss the notion that true beauty lives not in the final result but in the act of
transformation. How does this relate to Luz’s journey and the discoveries she makes
about herself?
15. A major theme of the novel is genetic memory. For the monarch butterfly, the fourth
generation of monarch butterfly acts on instinct to make the journey. What traits and
similarities—physical and behavioral—were carried on in Luz’s family? In your own
family?
1. To learn more, visit Mary Alice Monroe’s website (www.maryalicemonroe.com) and the
websites Monroe used to research monarchs: Journey North (www.Learner.org/jnorth)
and Monarch Watch (www.MonarchWatch.org).
2. Invite members of your book club to build an ofrenda, an offering to someone you’ve
loved and lost. Use different items that are significant to your relationship with that
person or that remind you of him or her.
3. Bring elements of a Day of the Dead celebration into your book club by making some of
the foods abuela made or incorporating some of the traditional customs. You can find
recipes and suggestions at
http://mexicanfood.about.com/od/history/a/dayofthedead.htm.
SKIPPING A BEAT: A Novel
Sarah Pekkanen
Washington Square Press
Paperback: 9781451609820
eBook: 9781451609837
For me, ideas take shape gradually. I knew I wanted to write about a married couple forced to
reexamine their relationship after the husband’s near-death experience, but other pieces of
[Skipping a Beat]—like Noah’s character, the specifics of Michael’s company, and Julia’s love of
opera—didn’t snap into place immediately. I think gearing up to write a book is like cooking
soup on the back burner of your stove. Soup, like writing, works best if you swirl in a few
ingredients and let it simmer for a long time (I’m sort of making this up, because I’m a terrible
cook, but I’m pretty sure that’s how they do it on the Food Network). It’s actually more
productive for me to open myself up to ideas by reading lots of newspapers and books, chatting
with people, and daydreaming. Then I let my subconscious sort through ideas while I do things
like grocery shop, do laundry, and walk the dog before sitting down to write.
—Sarah Pekkanen
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Sarah Pekkanen suggests Sangria. Or rather Skipping Sangria.
There’s a scene in my book where Julia and her best friend are sipping Sangria and talking
about how it’s a beverage in the ‘aaah. . .’category (because of the sound it ends with). So how
about Sangria?
Skipping Sangria
Ingredients
1 bottle of red wine (Cabernet Sauvignon, Merlot, Rioja, Zinfandel, or Shiraz are
recommended)
1 lemon, cut into wedges
1 orange, cut into wedges
1 lime, cut into wedges
1 small can of diced pineapple (with juice)
2 tablespoons sugar
Splash of orange juice or lemonade
2 shots of gin or Triple Sec (optional)
4 cups ginger ale
1 cup of raspberries or strawberries (may use thawed or frozen)
Preparation
Pour wine into a large pitcher and squeeze the juice from the lemon, orange, and lime wedges
into the wine (leaving out seeds if possible). Toss in the fruit wedges and pineapple. Stir and
add sugar, orange juice, and gin. If you can, chill your Sangria overnight, so the juices can
marinate! If you’d like to serve right away, use chilled red wine and serve over ice. Add ginger
ale, berries, and ice just before serving.
Skipping a Beat, Sarah Pekkanen
ONE
When my husband, Michael, died for the first time, I was walking across a freshly waxed marble
floor in three-inch Stuart Weitzman heels, balancing a tray of cupcakes in my shaking hands.
Shaking because I’d overdosed on sugar—someone had to heroically step up and taste-test the
cupcakes, after all—and not because I was worried about slipping and dropping the tray, even
though these weren’t your run-of-the-mill Betty Crockers. These were molten chocolate and
cayenne-pepper masterpieces, and each one was topped with a name scripted in edible gold
leaf.
Decadent cupcakes as place cards for the round tables encircling the ballroom—it was the kind
of touch that kept me in brisk business as a party planner. Tonight, we’d raise half a million for
the Washington, D.C., Opera Company. Maybe more, if the waiters kept topping off those wine
and champagne glasses like I’d instructed them.
“Julia!”
I carefully set down the tray, then spun around to see the fretful face of the assistant florist
who’d called my name.
“The caterer wants to lower our centerpieces,” he wailed, agony practically oozing from his
pores. I didn’t blame him. His boss, the head florist—a gruff little woman with more than a hint
of a mustache—secretly scared me, too.
“No one touches the flowers,” I said, trying to sound as tough as Clint Eastwood would, should
he ever become ensconced in a brawl over the proper length of calla lilies.
My cell phone rang and I reached for it, absently glancing at the caller ID. It was my husband,
Michael. He’d texted me earlier to announce he was going on a business trip and would miss
the birthday dinner my best friend was throwing for me later in the month. If Michael had a
long-term mistress, it might be easier to compete, but his company gyrated and beckoned in his
mind more enticingly than any strategically oiled Victoria’s Secret model. I’d long ago resigned
myself to the fact that work had replaced me as Michael’s true love. I ignored the call and
dropped the phone back into my pocket.
Later, of course, I’d realize it wasn’t Michael phoning but his personal assistant, Kate. By then,
my husband had stood up from the head of the table in his company’s boardroom, opened his
mouth to speak, and crashed to the carpeted floor. All in the same amount of time it took me to
walk across a ballroom floor just a few miles away.
The assistant florist raced off and was instantly replaced by a white-haired, grandfatherly
looking security guard from the Little Jewelry Box.
Skipping a Beat, Sarah Pekkanen
I silently thanked my oxygen facials and caramel highlights for his decision not to call me
ma’am. I was about to turn thirtyfive, which meant I wouldn’t be able to hide from the liver-
spotted hands of ma’am-dom forever, but I’d valiantly dodge their bony grasp for as long as
possible.
“Where would you like these?” the guard asked, indicating the dozen or so rectangular boxes
he was carrying on a tray draped in black velvet. The boxes were wrapped in a shade of silver
that exactly matched the gun nestled against his ample hip.
“On the display table just inside the front door, please,” I instructed him. “People need to see
them as soon as they walk in.” People would bid tens of thousands of dollars to win a surprise
bauble, if only to show everyone else that they could. The guard was probably a retired
policeman, trying to earn money to supplement his pension, and I knew he’d been ordered to
keep those boxes in his sight all night long.
“Better not,” he said with a wry smile. The poor guy probably wasn’t drinking anything because
the jewelry store wouldn’t even let him take a bathroom break. I made a mental note to pack
up a few dinners for him to bring home.
My BlackBerry vibrated just as I began placing the cupcakes around the head table and mentally
debating the sticky problem of the video game guru who looked and acted like a thirteen-year-
old overdue for his next dose of Ritalin. I’d sandwich him between a female U.S. senator and a
co-owner of the Washington Blazes professional basketball team, I decided. They were both
tall; they could talk over the techie’s head.
At that moment, a dozen executives were leaping up from their leather chairs to cluster around
Michael’s limp body. They were all shouting at each other to call 911—this crowd was used to
giving orders, not taking them—and demanding that someone perform CPR.
As I stood in the middle of the ballroom, smoothing out a crease on a white linen napkin and
inhaling the sweet scent of lilies, the worst news I could possibly imagine was being delivered
by a baby-faced representative from the D.C. Opera Company.
I sank into a chair with a sigh and wiggled my tired feet out of my shoes. Perfect. Melanie was
the star soprano who was scheduled to sing a selection from Orfeo ed Euridice tonight. If those
overflowing wineglasses didn’t get checkbooks whipped out of pockets, Melanie’s soaring,
lyrical voice definitely would. I desperately needed Melanie tonight.
Skipping a Beat, Sarah Pekkanen
“Patrick Riley.”
Figures; put a four-leaf clover in his lapel and he could’ve been the poster boy for Welcome to
Ireland!
“And Patrick, how long have you been working for the opera company?” I asked gently.
“Just trust me on this.” Melanie required drama the way the rest of us needed water. If I
hydrated her with a big scene now, Melanie might miraculously rally and forgo a big scene
tonight.
“Send over a warm-mist humidifier,” I continued as Patrick whipped out a notebook and
scribbled away, diligent as a cub reporter chasing his big break. “No, two! Get her lozenges,
chamomile tea with honey, whatever you can think of. Buy out CVS. If Melanie wants a
lymphatic massage, have the hotel concierge arrange it immediately. Here—” I pulled out my
BlackBerry and scrolled down to the name of my private doctor.
“Call Dr. Rushman. If he can’t make it over there, have him send someone who can.”
Dr. Rushman would make it, I was sure. He’d drop whatever he was doing if he knew I needed
him. He was the personal physician for the Washington Blazes basketball team. My husband,
Michael, was another one of the team’s co-owners.
“Got it,” Patrick said. He glanced down at my feet, turned bright red, and scampered away.
Must’ve been my toe cleavage; it tends to have that effect on men.
Skipping a Beat, Sarah Pekkanen
I finished placing the final cupcake before checking my messages. By the time I read the frantic
e-mails from Kate, who was trying to find out if Michael had any recently diagnosed illnesses
like epilepsy or diabetes that we’d been keeping secret, it was already over.
While Armani-clad executives clustered around my husband, Bob the mail-room guy took one
look at the scene and sped down the hallway, white envelopes scattering like confetti behind
him. He sprinted to the receptionist’s desk and found the portable defibrillator my husband’s
company had purchased just six months earlier. Then he raced back, ripped open Michael’s
shirt, put his ear to Michael’s chest to confirm that my husband’s heart had stopped beating,
and applied the sticky patches to Michael’s chest. “Analyzing . . . ,” said the machine’s
electronic voice. “Shock advisable.”
The Italian opera Orfeo ed Euridice is a love story. In it, Euridice dies and her grieving husband
travels to the Underworldto try to bring her back to life. Melanie the soprano was scheduled to
sing the heartbreaking aria that comes as Euridice is suspended between the twin worlds of
Death and Life. Maybe it shouldn’t have surprised me that Euridice’s aria was playing in my
head as Bob the mail-room guy bent over my husband’s body, shocking Michael’s heart until it
finally began beating again. Because sometimes, it seems to me as if all of the big moments in
my life can be traced back to the gorgeous, timeworn stories of opera.
Four minutes and eight seconds. That’s how long my husband, Michael Dunhill, was dead.
Four minutes and eight seconds. That’s how long it took for my husband to become a complete
stranger to me.
Skipping
a
Beat:
A
Novel
Reading
Group
Guide
Introduction
What would you do if your husband suddenly wanted to rewrite the rules of your relationship?
Julia
and
Michael
met
as
high
school
students
in
their
small,
poverty-‐stricken
West
Virginia
town.
Both
products
of
difficult
childhoods—Julia’s
father
is
a
compulsive
gambler
and
Michael’s
mother
abandoned
his
family
when
he
was
a
young
boy—they
find
a
sense
of
safety
and
mutual
understanding
in
each
other.
Shortly
after
graduation
they
flee
West
Virginia
to
start
afresh.
Now
thirty-‐somethings,
they
are
living
a
rarefied
life
in
their
multimillion-‐dollar
Washington,
D.C.,
home.
From
the
outside
it
all
looks
perfect—Julia
has
become
a
highly
sought-‐after
party
planner,
while
Michael
has
launched
a
wildly
successful
flavored
water
company
worth
$70
million.
But
one
day
Michael
stands
up
at
the
head
of
the
table
in
his
company’s
boardroom—then
silently
crashes
to
the
floor.
More
than
four
minutes
later,
a
portable
defibrillator
manages
to
jump-‐start
his
heart.
Yet
what
happened
to
Michael
during
those
lost
minutes
forever
changes
him.
Money
is
meaningless
to
him
now—and
he
wants
to
give
it
all
away
to
charity.
A
prenuptial
agreement
that
Julia
insisted
upon
back
when
Michael’s
company
was
still
struggling
means
she
has
no
claim
to
his
fortune,
and
now
she
must
decide:
Should
she
walk
away
from
the
man
she
once
adored,
but
who
truthfully
became
a
stranger
to
her
long
before
his
near-‐
death
experience—or
should
she
give
in
to
her
husband’s
pleas
for
a
second
chance
and
a
promise
of
a
poorer
but
happier
life?
Topics
&
Questions
for
Discussion
1. When
a
teenaged
Julie
asks
Mike
where
he
sits
in
class,
he
responds,
“I’m
right
behind
you,
Julie.
I
always
have
been.”
Does
this
statement
remain
accurate
for
their
entire
relationship?
2. Why
is
Julia
so
reluctant
to
hear
about
Michael’s
near-‐death
experience?
3.
“I
had
no
doubt
Michael
would
be
successful,
but
as
much
as
I
loved
him,
as
much
as
I
wanted
to,
I
couldn’t
bring
myself
to
gamble
on
him.”
Why
does
Julia
feel
this
way?
Why
does
she
insist
on
a
prenuptial
agreement?
4. When
Michael
leaves
Julia
a
card
telling
her
that
he
loves
her,
she
crumples
it
in
her
hand
and
thinks,
“I
wanted
to
hurt
him.
He
was
ruining
everything.”
Considering
how
unhappy
she
is
in
their
marriage,
what
exactly
is
Michael
ruining?
5. How
did
her
parents’
relationship
affect
the
one
she
shares
with
Michael?
Does
Julia
trust
anyone?
6. Michael
is
often
described
as
jittery.
Why
does
he
seem
to
never
stay
still
for
very
long?
7. Michael
senses
that
he
doesn’t
have
much
time
left.
Does
Julia
believe
him?
Why
does
she
have
nightmares
that
she
is
losing
him?
8. Throughout
the
novel,
Julia
frequently
mentions
her
favorite
operas.
Why
are
they
so
important
to
her?
9. What
significance
do
you
see
in
Noah’s
restaurant
riddle?
10. Michael
frequently
laments
that
success
changed
him
for
the
worse,
from
taking
risks
with
the
exploding
glass
bottles
to
the
“Let’s
see
you
bastards
ignore
me
now”
checks
for
his
family
to
Scott’s
law-‐suit
and
the
many
other
examples
of
hush
money.
Do
you
agree
that
money
changed
him?
Was
he
always
a
good
man,
or
did
power
truly
corrupt
him?
11. What
do
you
think
the
future
holds
for
Isabelle
and
Beth?
Will
they
stay
in
touch?
12.
“‘I
never
went
with
you
to
visit
your
mother.’
This
was
what
Michael
and
I
had
been
heading
toward
ever
since
he’d
fallen
to
that
conference
room
floor,
I
realized.”
Why
is
it
so
important
for
both
of
them
to
visit
Julia’s
mother?
13. Why
does
Julia
confess
her
affair
to
Michael?
Why
had
they
never
discussed
Michael’s
assumed
affair?
14. What
does
giving
her
jewelry
to
Michael
symbolize?
Does
this
decision
mean
that
Julia
wants
to
stay
married?
15. At
the
novel’s
end,
why
does
Julia
return
to
her
father’s
house?
Does
she
forgive
him?
16. Discuss
how
things
could
have
been
different
if
Michael
had
never
collapsed
in
the
conference
room.
Would
he
still
be
married
to
Julia?
1. Did
Noah’s
riddle
stump
you?
Challenge
your
fellow
book
club
members
with
your
favorite
head-‐scratchers
and
see
who
can
solve
the
most!
2. At
one
point
Julia
contemplates
the
fate
of
Scarlett
O’Hara,
saying
she’s
protected
herself
so
she’ll
never
have
to
make
a
dress
out
of
drapes.
Discuss
which
other
famous
literary
characters
Julia
reminds
you
of,
if
any.
3. Michael
feels
confident
that
he
only
has
a
short
time
left.
Discuss
among
yourselves
what
you
would
do
if
you
knew
you
only
had
a
few
weeks
left
to
live.
4. Julia
is
an
opera
enthusiast
who
frequently
draws
parallels
between
her
own
life
and
La
Bohème,
Arabella,
and
others.
While
discussing
Skipping
a
Beat,
play
some
of
her
favorite
arias
to
discover
why
they’re
so
important
to
Julia.
5. Author
Sarah
Pekkanen
has
a
significant
online
presence.
Visit
her
website
(www.sarahpekkanen.com/index.html)
to
read
her
bio,
find
out
about
upcoming
events,
and
more.
You
can
also
follow
her
on
Twitter
(@sarahpekkanen)
and
Facebook
(www.facebook.com/pages/Sarah-‐Pekkanen/215202723761).
A
Conversation
with
Sarah
Pekkanen
As
the
novel
unfolds
and
the
reader
discovers
more
of
Julia
and
Michael’s
backstory,
their
perspective
on
the
couple’s
marriage
might
change.
Why
did
you
decide
to
structure
Skipping
a
Beat
in
this
manner?
How
did
you
decide
when
to
reveal
certain
aspects
of
Julia
and
Michael’s
relationship?
As
Skipping
a
Beat
opens,
Julia
and
Michael
are
thrust
into
a
crisis,
and
it’s
unclear
whether
their
marriage
will
survive.
In
order
to
move
forward,
they
also
need
to
look
back
at
the
decisions
and
moments,
both
big
and
small,
that
shaped
their
relationship.
So
I
wove
in
scenes
from
their
past
to
show
how
complicated
their
life
together
has
become,
and
to
reveal
why
Julia
feels
so
conflicted.
But
there
are
two
sides
to
every
story—so
even
though
everything
is
unfolding
from
Julia’s
point
of
view,
it’s
not
necessarily
the
complete
picture.
She,
like
the
readers,
discovers
how
much
more
there
is
to
the
story
of
her
marriage.
When
Julia
is
recalling
her
favorite
parties,
she
remembers
the
affinity
she
felt
for
a
woman
who
said,
“How
can
I
be
eighty
years
old
when
I’m
still
a
girl?”
Of
course
you’re
a
safe
distance
from
eighty,
but
do
you
ever
relate
to
her
statement
of
still
being
a
little
girl?
Absolutely!
I
do
feel
young
at
heart
and
hope
I
always
will.
I
saw
a
quote
on
one
of
those
refrigerator
magnets
recently
that
said
something
like,
“How
old
would
you
be
if
you
didn’t
know
your
age?”
My
age
would
probably
be
nine
or
ten.
If
you
believed
you
only
had
three
weeks
to
live,
how
would
you
spend
your
remaining
time?
I
didn’t
have
to
think
about
this
one
for
longer
than
a
second—the
answer
is,
with
my
family.
I’d
take
photographs
and
film
some
moments,
but
mostly
it
would
be
cuddling
and
talking
and
storing
up
as
much
love
as
possible.
You
used
to
work
as
a
journalist
covering
Capitol
Hill.
Do
you
have
a
favorite
story
from
that
era
of
your
life?
Probably
the
most
memorable
moment
would
be
the
time
an
elderly
senator’s
thumb
and
index
finger
made
contact
with
my
rear
end
as
I
got
out
of
an
elevator
and
he
got
into
it.
I’ve
since
learned
I’m
not
the
only
one
he
pinched,
but
I
laughed
it
off.
He
was
a
frail
old
guy,
and
if
I’d
exhaled
vigorously,
I
could’ve
blown
him
over.
I’m
proudest
of
my
yearlong
investigation
into
the
tangled,
highly
illegal
activities
of
a
U.S.
congresswoman
from
Detroit.
I
uncovered
evidence
that
she
set
up
a
college
scholarship
fund
for
poor
kids
from
her
district,
then
used
the
donated
money
to
go
shopping.
Not
only
did
she
get
voted
out
of
office,
the
Justice
Department,
House
Ethics
Committee,
and
Federal
Election
Commission
launched
simultaneous
investigations
as
well.
I’m
so
lucky
that
I
get
to
dust
off
my
old
reporting
skills
as
a
fiction
writer.
For
example,
for
Skipping
a
Beat,
I
interviewed
the
founder
of
the
Honest
Tea
company
to
learn
how
my
main
character
could
invent
a
successful
beverage
company
from
scratch.
Of
course,
as
the
head
of
my
fictional
company,
Michael
did
some
underhanded
things—which
is
not
at
all
the
case
for
the
very
reputable
Honest
Tea
company.
Those
scenes
were
purely
imaginary,
but
I
loved
learning
about
the
origins
of
the
company
and
weaving
realistic
details
into
my
book.
How
much
of
your
own
personality
do
you
imbue
in
your
heroines?
Do
you
also
celebrate
your
successes
with
chocolates
and
margaritas?
I’ve
heard
that
a
writer’s
“voice”
is
similar
to
her
personality,
and
for
me,
that’s
true.
I
love
to
laugh,
so
I
try
to
inject
humor
into
my
novels,
but
I’m
also
sentimental.
I
cry
easily,
and
sometimes
I
laugh
so
hard
that
I
cry
(causing
my
husband
great
confusion
and
the
desire
to
go
do
something
simple
and
manly,
usually
involving
power
tools).
And
no
celebration
would
be
complete
without
margaritas
and
chocolate!
Even
minor
triumphs—like
successfully
navigating
the
pickup
line
at
my
kids’
school
every
day,
or
writing
a
line
of
dialogue—should
be
rewarded
with
chocolate.
Lots
of
chocolate.
Did
you
learn
something
about
your
own
marriage
while
writing
Skipping
a
Beat?
I
tend
to
take
on
the
emotions
of
the
scenes
I’m
writing,
so
I
learned
I
had
to
be
careful
not
to
snap
at
my
husband
when
Julia
was
annoyed
at
Michael!
I
think
marriages
are
so
fascinating;
no
one
really
knows
what
goes
on
inside
of
them
except
for
the
two
people
involved.
It
seems
like
many
marriages
contain
mini-‐marriages—times
when
the
relationship
goes
through
a
high,
then
a
low,
emotional
cycle.
My
own
father
says
it
best:
When
asked
how
long
he
and
my
mother
have
been
married,
he
often
replies,
“Forty-‐five
wonderful
years.
And
three
not-‐so-‐
good
ones.
And
two
really
bad
ones.”
They’re
about
to
celebrate
their
fiftieth
wedding
anniversary,
and
they’ve
never
been
happier.
Julia
notes
that
“Sometimes
following
the
path
that
looked
the
safest
was
what
led
to
the
most
hurt.”
Do
you
feel
the
same
way?
Sure;
if
you
don’t
follow
your
heart,
for
example,
but
only
do
what
others
expect
of
you,
that’s
a
powerful
recipe
for
unhappiness.
I
think
the
things
we
regret
most
in
life
are
the
things
we
don’t
do—the
challenges
we
shy
away
from.
For
me
personally,
writing
a
book
was
a
huge
gamble.
I
knew
I
could
make
a
decent
salary
and
have
some
success
as
a
freelance
writer,
but
I
couldn’t
stop
dreaming
about
writing
a
novel,
even
though
there
was
no
guarantee
it
would
ever
be
published.
On
your
website
you
list
“writers
[you]
love,”
such
as
Jennifer
Weiner,
Lisa
Tucker,
Emily
Giffin,
Jodi
Picoult,
and
Marian
Keyes.
What
have
you
learned
from
these
women?
So
much!
Especially
Jennifer’s
books.
After
I
read
them
for
pleasure,
I
go
through
them
again
to
marvel
at
how
she
puts
together
scenes
and
develops
characters.
My
husband
once
asked
me
if
it
took
away
from
my
reading
enjoyment
when
I
scrutinized
books
I
love
to
uncover
plotting
secrets
and
the
author’s
use
of
elements
like
tension
and
character
development.
I
said
it
actually
increased
my
enjoyment—it’s
like
being
an
art
history
major
and
going
to
the
Louvre.
You
just
look
at
things
differently.
Have
you
ever
met
someone
who
claims
to
have
had
a
near-‐death
experience?
Did
it
change
them?
How?
What
do
you
imagine
happens
to
someone
during
that
time?
Yes,
my
maternal
grandmother.
During
a
near-‐death
experience,
she
said
she
traveled
through
a
tunnel,
then
was
greeted
by
a
sister
who
had
died
years
earlier.
My
grandmother
said
the
experience
was
wonderful,
and
not
at
all
scary
(and,
incidentally,
my
grandmother,
who
was
quite
vain,
said
one
of
the
best
parts
was
how
young
and
beautiful
she
felt).
I
wish
my
grandmother
were
still
alive
so
I
could
ask
her
more
about
the
experience.
She
told
my
mother
about
it
right
after
it
happened,
and
I’ve
never
forgotten
it.
I
find
it
so
comforting.
What
message
about
marriage
do
you
hope
readers
will
take
away
from
Skipping
a
Beat?
I
hope
it
doesn’t
sound
sappy,
but
the
message
is
that
love
is
the
most
important
thing
in
this
world.
At
a
time
when
there
are
so
many
competing
demands
for
our
attention,
and
so
many
external
stressors
in
life,
it’s
easy
to
lose
sight
of
that.
WHERE THINGS COME BACK
John Corey Whaley
Atheneum
Hardcover: 9781442413337
eBook: 9781442413351
Where Things Come Back is a novel about second chances. So, it makes sense that it would be
inspired heavily by the reemergence of a thought-to-be-extinct woodpecker in Arkansas, right?
But, it isn’t just about a bird. Actually, it has very little to do with the Lazarus Woodpecker.
What the novel is really about is a teenage boy who just so happens to have been raised in a
place he absolutely hates with a town full of people he’d rather not know. While I’ll admit that
much of the story reflects my own teenage years in a small, southern town, the general idea
behind Cullen Witter’s story came to me by accident. I’d heard a radio story about a singer,
Sufjan Stevens, writing a song based on interviews about a small Arkansas town wherein, lo and
behold, a woodpecker that had been declared extinct sixty years prior had allegedly been
resurrected.
This got me thinking about my own small town, which was in Louisiana, and how impossible I
thought it was to exist and grow up in a place like that. I’ve always been interested in (some
may say obsessed with) coming-of-age stories and I thought that, for the first time, I had a story
idea that wasn’t just my own retelling of the typical teenage struggle to figure out life. I had an
unspoken motto during my writing of the first draft: How does one grow up in an impossible
world?
When the town Cullen despises is flooded with strangers who are desperately searching for a
lost species of woodpecker, Cullen’s world, which he barely understands in the first place,
reaches its pinnacle of madness. And Cullen is supposed to decide what to do with the rest of
his life under these ridiculous circumstances? Now add in a recently deceased cousin and a
close younger brother whose sudden disappearance throws the lives of Cullen and his family
into utter chaos. With this novel, I set out to write a story not only about the possibility of
second chances, but about the people who crave them the most.
We asked the authors what kind of food or drinks they would serve at a book club discussing
their own book. Below is the recipe for The Lazarus Mini-Burger (or really the Number 3
without cheese) from John Corey Whaley.
Ingredients
Bun
o Baguette
o Butter
Patty
o Ground meat of your choice (½ pound of extra-lean ground beef made 10 mini-
burgers)
o Garlic powder, black pepper, salt (all to taste)
Spread
o Ketchup
o Mayonnaise
o BBQ sauce
Preparation
Cut a baguette horizontally into thin slices. Two slices per mini-burger.
Butter one side of each baguette slice.
Preheat a skillet to medium high. Place baguette slices butter side down and cook until
golden.
Brown one side only. This can also be done on the grill. You can also use spray oil.
For the patty, season ground meat to taste. Form seasoned meat into patties the same
size as your baguette slices. TIP: Sprinkle salt on patties just before grilling. The salt
helps form that seared yummy-ness.
On a hot grill, skillet, or griddle, cook patties. Patties cook extremely quickly. About two
minutes total.
To build your Lazarus mini-burgers, layer baguette with ketchup, mayonnaise, BBQ
sauce, and patty. Top with another baguette slice and serve!
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Chapter 1
I was seventeen years old when I saw my first dead body. It wasn’t my cousin Oslo’s. It was a
woman who looked to have been around fifty or at least in her late forties. She didn’t have any
visible bullet holes or scratches, cuts, or bruises, so I assumed that she had just died of some
disease or something; her body barely hidden by the thin white sheet as it awaited its
placement in the lockers. The second dead body I ever saw was my cousin Oslo’s. I recognized
his dirty brown shoes immediately as the woman wearing the bright white coat grasped the
metallic handle and yanked hard to slide the body out from the silvery wall.
“You sure?”
“Positive.”
His eyes were closed. His lips purple. His arms had bruises and track marks. Nothing was hidden
from view, as he had died in a sleeveless white T-shirt, one of the same he had worn nearly
every day of his life. There was something white in the corners of his mouth, but I didn’t ask
what it might be. I didn’t really say much after that. The woman waited there for me to cry or
say “I’m done,” or something. But I didn’t do a thing. I just stared at him. And I’m not sure if I
was thinking anything at that moment either. I wasn’t thinking about missing him or pitying him
or even about how angry I was at him. I was just standing there like some ass-hat, mouth half-
open and eyes glued to one spot. Eventually the white coat woman broke the silence.
My mother cried on the way home. My little brother, Gabriel, looked anxious, but he kept his
headphones on and didn’t say much for the duration of our trip. I drove, but I didn’t want to
because I thought it might rain. I hate driving in the rain. I’d wanted my dad to come along so I
wouldn’t have to play man for the evening by driving the whole way and making sure everyone
ate and all. I didn’t so much mind the body identifying. That part was bound to happen, one
way or another. Oslo had been shooting shit into his arm since I could remember. He had also
frequently been an inconvenience to me. Picking him up at truck stops or crack houses. Telling
lies to his mom to cover up his dumb-ass behavior and save him an argument. Loaning him ten
dollars here and there and hoping he would buy food with it, but knowing he probably
wouldn’t. I did it all. We all did. Me. My dad. Even my aunt Julia gave him money so long as he
showed up every other day or so, long enough to make her forget that she had failed to raise
him right, long enough to make her love him again.
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My dad couldn’t come because he got a call around five thirty that afternoon to haul some oil
well equipment up to Harrison. That’s what he does. He hauls things that I don’t know anything
about and never really care to. All I know is that somebody needs these large pieces of metal
that have something to do with pumping oil as soon as possible when they call him. And so he
goes at all hours of the day and night. Sometimes he sits at the house for days, reading the
paper or novels about deadpeople (because, apparently, men in their forties are only interested
in reading about the lives of presidents, explorers, or criminals). Sometimes we don’t see him
for two weeks at a time, only hear the sound of him switching trailers in the backyard at three
in the morning or leaving messages on the machine to remind Mom to fill a prescription or pay
the mortgage.
When we got home from Little Rock, Dad was still gone and the kitchen light was the only thing
we could see from the driveway. Gabriel had fallen asleep about twenty minutes before and
Mom wasn’t far behind him. She leaned over and kissed the side of my head before she got out
of the car and walked toward the house. Opening the back door, I kicked at the bottom of
Gabriel’s shoe. He shot up quick and threw his arms up, as if someone were about to cut his
throat. I looked at him the way you look at someone when you’re waiting for them to come to
their senses—like you’re both frustrated with and feeling sorry for them—and then I helped
him get his footing. I followed him into the house and Mom was already in his bedroom,
already crying again as she talked to a half-asleep Aunt Julia. Soon there was one more crying
voice, and Gabriel and I sat up on my bed and listened through the wall as Aunt Julia rambled
on and on about wanting to die.
Gabriel was asleep within minutes and the voices in the room next door had nearly gone silent.
If they were still talking, they had decided to whisper, perhaps taking into consideration the
two teenagers in the next room who had to get up and go to school the next day. Before lying
down, I grabbed my leather-bound journal off the nightstand and turned to the first blank page
I could find. I jotted down Oslo After Death. This would be a great title for a book, I thought.
That is what I do sometimes. I jot down titles for books that I one day intend to write. Oslo After
Death was #71.
I closed the journal, turned off the lamp, and looked at my brother to make sure I hadn’t stirred
him. He still slept, an impossibly sincere smile on his face. He had a habit of shutting out the
world. Habits like this meant that he didn’t look up when he walked down the hallway at
school. If you look up, then you can avoid being pushed or running into someone or being the
convenient target for some ass-hat standing by the water fountain waiting intently for
innocent-looking freshmen to walk by with their heads down. My problem was that I wasn’t big
or tough enough to really protect or defend my little brother in any manner save for my
sometimes creative use of sarcasm as distraction. Lucas Cader, though, was quite effective in
staving off those common shitheads who liked to pick on Gabriel and his friends. I think, in a
way, Lucas felt like it was part of his duty in the world to protect those kids. I’m glad, because it
wasn’t mine. You see, Lucas had power. He walked down the hall and you noticed him. You
noticed his six-two swimmer’s build and his messy brown hair that always looked like it was
ready for a photo shoot. You noticed how he smiled at the pretty girls but always managed to
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say something nice or sweet to the not-so-pretty ones. Lucas was the only other guy besides
Gabriel that I could stand to be around, simply for the fact that I just didn’t like guys all that
much. I liked girls and women, but guys really put me off most of the time. Everything is a
pissing contest with most guys. With Lucas, I could be my insecure shell of a man and not feel
threatened. And Gabriel could walk down the hall and not risk having his backpack thrown into
the trash can. And Elizabeth Strawn could feel good about herself for maybe the only time that
day she had a huge zit on her cheek.
Being seventeen and bored in a small town, I like to pretend sometimes that I’m a pessimist.
This is the way it is and nothing can sway me from that. Life sucks most of the time. Everything
is bullshit. High school sucks. You go to school, work for fifty years, then you die. Only I can’t
seem to keep that up for too long before my natural urge to idealize goes into effect. I can’t
seem to be a pessimist long enough to overlook the possibility of things being overwhelmingly
good. But as I lay there in my bed that night with my brother asleep beside me, I couldn’t seem
to muster up any sort of idealism. The phone call at three that afternoon. The drive to Little
Rock. And then the revelation of death. It was all too real. Nothing idealistic about seeing your
only cousin ghost white and stone dead. Not much to idealize when you know your aunt is
crying herself to sleep next door and nothing can be done.
Like most teenage boys, I, Cullen Witter, was in love with a beautiful girl who had a big, burly
boyfriend who would just as soon kick my ass as look at me. His name was Russell Quitman, and
I didn’t care too much for his brother or parents, either. But I sometimes dislike people by
association. The girl’s name was Ada Taylor, and she could have probably kicked my ass too. (If
you haven’t figured it out yet, just about everyone you know could probably kick my ass.) If you
lived in Lily, Arkansas, which we all did, then you knew Ada, or at least knew about her. I’m
pretty sure even some of the kids in Little Rock and Memphis heard stories about Lily’s own
black widow.
You see, Ada Taylor had a grim history. As a sophomore in high school, when I was just a
freshman, Ada was dating this ass-hat by the name of Conner Bolton. Conner was a senior and
made it his personal mission to make every freshman in the school terrified to be caught
walking alone or near the bathrooms, lockers, or trash cans. But alas, he died before Christmas
break in a car accident. Ada was the only other passenger. She walked away without a scratch.
Then, the next year, Ada was dating this guy who I used to play G.I. Joes with on the floor of my
mom’s hair salon. His name was Aaron Lancaster. He didn’t even make it to Thanksgiving before
he up and drowned in the White River during a thunderstorm. His dad found his empty fishing
boat. A search party found his body four days later. I heard it looked like he had been
microwaved.
After that, it almost seemed like a ridiculous thing to date Ada Taylor, or even go near her. But
that didn’t matter much to the young men of Lily, even me. The unspoken philosophy of all
those in love with Ada was something like this: If I have to die to get that, then death it is. But
there we were with one week of school left and Russell Quitman was still breathing up all the
air around him and taking up all the extra table space around him in the lunchroom with his
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monstrous biceps. I had bet Lucas that Russell wouldn’t last past Easter. That cost me ten
bucks. You might think it sadistic to bet on an eighteen-year-old boy’s death or to talk about it
like I wanted it to happen or something. This would just further prove that you’d never met
Russell Quitman. Certain people are supposed to be the ones who burn up in fiery crashes or
drown in the rapids of a river in the middle of the night. These are the Russell Quitmans of the
world.
Dr. Webb says that most people see the world in bubbles. This keeps them comfortable with
their place and the places of others. What he means is that most people, in order to feel okay
about who they are and where they stand in relation to others, automatically group everyone
into stereotypical little bunches. This is why boys who don’t like sports or don’t have
promiscuous sex are always called gay, people who make good grades without studying are
always called nerds, and people who seem to have no worries in the world and have a little bit
of money are always called preps. As a straight-A student who hated football, I fit into two of
these bubbles. This left me with things like Post-it notes saying “Cullen Witter’s a fag” stuck to
my locker and big black glasses being drawn onto my photo in everyone’s yearbooks. Dr. Webb
also says that the only way of dealing with the close-minded nature of most southern-born,
conservative-leaning people is to either completely ignore their ignorance or to perpetuate it
by playing into the set of standards that they subconsciously hold for each particular bubble. In
short, if I would have whined about being called a fag, then I would have just been called a fag
more often. And if Sara Burch would have ignored the boys in fifth grade when they called her a
bookworm, then she might not have become the glorified slut she is today.
There are some, however, who seem to be immune to this epidemic of bubbles. They are
people like Gabriel Witter, who is perhaps the most interesting person I’ve ever known, and I
don’t say that just because he’s my brother. I say it because every morning since he turned
eleven or so he would wake up before anyone else in the house, go out onto the porch, and
read a chapter of a book. I say it because he listened to bands no one ever heard of. And he had
amassed a collection of nearly fifty ties by the time he got into junior high, ties he wore to
school every single day. I guess the most interesting thing about Gabriel was that he didn’t
seem to care at all what people were thinking about him. He walked down the hallway at
school with his head down not because he wanted to avoid being seen or dissuade social
predators or anything, but simply because he didn’tsee any reason to lift up his head. It took
me a while to get to the point where I would walk both down the middle of the hallway and
with my head upright. Of course, walking beside or behind Lucas always made this much easier.
Given the choice between looking at Cullen Witter and looking at Lucas Cader, anyone would
choose the latter.
I called Russell the Quit Man for two reasons. The first one was obvious, his last name. That’s a
no-brainer. But the other reason I called him this was much more related to his character. It
was because the most frequent thing heard when near Russell Quitman were the cries of
whatever prey he was putting into a headlock or holding upside down or tripping in the
hallway. “Quit, man. Quit!” How is it that Russell Quitman, the Quit Man, could be so cruel,
such a huge douche bag, and still manage to go out with the prettiest girl in town? I call this the
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Pretty Paradox. Pretty girls always want guys who treat them, and most everyone else, like
complete shit. It is perhaps one of the most baffling phenomena in history.
I’m not sure why anything like the existence of the Quit Man or girls liking him surprised me in a
place like Lily. Living in Lily, Arkansas, is sometimes like living in the land that time forgot. We
do have things like Burger King and McDonald’s, and we even have a Walmart, but if you are
looking for much more than that, you’ll just have to keep on driving through. Like most
Arkansas towns, Lily does have an abundance of one thing: trees. Lily is all trees and dirt sliced
into circles by curved roads. Lily is also water, though. The White River runs right along the edge
of town and all the way across the state and over to the Mississippi.
If you’ve never been to Lily, and I bet you haven’t, then you need to know that it is located
almost exactly halfway between Little Rock and Memphis. There are 3,947 people, according to
the faded green sign on the side of the road as you drive into town, and most of those people
are complete ass-hats who tried and subsequently failed to leave this place behind.One unique
thing about Lily is that, for a small town in the middle of nowhere, it seems to be a very clean,
well-kept sort of place. Lily is the kind of place you’d like to move to some short time before
you die. If at any other time in your life you think you need the peace and quiet of Lily,
Arkansas, then you should either see a therapist or stay there for a week and try to find
anything half-entertaining to do.
Because I have few inner resources, I often found it very difficult to deal with the boredom
brought on by living in Lily. My brother never seemed bored, and that only further angered me
at the fact that I was most of the time unsettled and unfulfilled in everything I did. Gabriel was
happy just reading a book or listening to music or walking around town with Libby Truett, his
best friend. Well, I can only sit around listening to music or reading a book for so long before
my mind starts to wander and picture images of Ada Taylor diving off Tilman’s Dock or flirting
with the Quit Man outside of Burke’s Burger Box.
On this particular day, two days after my trip to the morgue, I decided to call Lucas and see
what he had planned.
“You driving?”
If you had to put Lucas Cader in a bubble, and you might be one of those people who has to do
such a thing, then he would fit right smack dab in the middle of the preps. Now, keep in mind
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that I hate hate hate using stereotypical terms like prep and preppie, but it is unavoidable.
These were the words my people, as it were, used to describe those high schoolers who
dressed nice, bathed regularly, drove a nice vehicle (or, in Lily, drove a vehicle at all that wasn’t
their parents’), or were on the football team. Feel free to apply whatever term you yourself
would use to refer to this group if you were in my place. Lucas wasn’t much like me at all. He
played football, for one thing. For another, he had a girlfriend. Her name was Mena Prescott,
and she reminded me of the redhead from The Breakfast Club. She also made me
uncomfortable by always hugging on me or kissing my cheek, always doing something that I
assume she thought I would find flattering or sexy, but instead just found annoying and
offensive. I also hated her accent. I understand that everyone who lives anywhere can be
expected to have an accent, especially those of us down here in the South, but honestly,
hearing her voice made me ashamed to be human, much less southern. Here’s an example:
“Hey, y’all! I went o-ver th-a-y-er la-yast wayeek.” Try saying that three times fast.
Lucas pretended to love her as much as she thought he did. But it was all bull, really. As he
pulled into my driveway, I let the screen door go with one finger and listened as it tap-tap-
tapped on the door frame when it shut. The smell of cologne in Lucas’s car was overpowering.
“Did you bathe in that shit?” I asked, waving my hand before my face.
Lucas did this all the time. You would ask him a question, serious or not, and he would manage
to skillfully deflect it by bringing up something very important and distracting, out of the blue,
and your previous thoughts would be left in the dust, just as my house was as we sped down
Eighth Street toward town.
“And Gabe?”
“Seems the same to me.” I thought about my answer. It seemed wrong in some way.
“I mean, you’ve got all these kids around here doing bad things. Getting into trouble and
getting kicked out of school and all that mess. And then you’ve got Gabriel. He just sticks out, ya
know? Like he’s better than this place or something. Know what I’m saying?”
“I almost think of him as my little brother sometimes,” Lucas said in an oddly serious manner.
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One could always tell when Lucas was doing that thing where he was lost in his own thoughts,
as would often happen when the topic of brothers came up. His eyes would get this certain
strength about them, like they were really focusing on what was in front of them. And his lips
would purse a little like he was getting ready to whistle. And one could only be left to sit back
and witness this spectacle, waiting to see if anything brilliant or cathartic would come about.
Usually it all ended within a few minutes, when Lucas would realize that he had gotten himself
into an awkward position and made others around him feel uncomfortable. Lucas Cader was
not in the habit of making others feel anything but comforted. As soon as we pulled up to
Burke’s Burger Box, Mena Prescott ran up to his car window, leaned inside, and kissed him on
the cheek. Then she walked around to my side, knocked on the window, waited for me to roll it
down, and kissed me on the cheek as well. As she climbed into the backseat, I wiped her saliva
and lipstick off my face.
She began her questions before Lucas could roll the windows back up and pull out of the
parking lot.
Mena Prescott had a past that did not involve innocent, good-natured boys like Lucas. It did,
however, involve my overdosed cousin Oslo. Let me sum up their relationship like this: They
met at a party when she was a freshman and he was a senior.
They made out, both drunk, and then ran into each other one week later at the grocery store.
They dated off and on for several weeks before Mena realized, I presume, that Oslo Fouke was
nothing more than a drug addict and a bum. That moment in the car would be the last time
Mena Prescott would ever mention Oslo Fouke, at least around me anyway.
When one is sitting in the passenger seat of his best friend’s car as an overly enthusiastic
hillbilly is ranting in the backseat about being snubbed by a cheerleader at lunch, his mind
begins to wander and think about zombies. Here’s the thing about zombies: They are supposed
to be killed. You just have to do it. Humans are obligated to kill zombies, just as zombies have
an obligation to seek out humans and feast on their flesh. It is for this reason that I was
imagining Russell Quitman and his friend Neil as zombies, wreaking havoc on Lily and killing
men, women, and children. They crept down Main Street, dragging their feet, each having one
ankle completely limp and dangling behind him. A woman screamed from a store window. A car
sped by and crashed into a nearby tree. The scene was a gruesome one until I arrived. Walking
slowly and with much confidence, I approached the Quit Man and his minion with a shotgun in
one hand and an ax in the other. After idly blowing off Neil’s slobbering head, I tossed the
shotgun aside and double-gripped the ax. The Quit Man was upon me—his teeth more visible
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than anything else and his smell causing me to gag. I dug the ax into his leg. He fell to the
ground, grasping at my pants as I tried to back away for a good, clean swing at him. I tripped,
falling down beside him. Just as his teeth were about to pierce the flesh of my neck, his head
was smashed in by a black boot. I looked up to see Lucas Cader, smiling and reaching a hand
down. Crowds gathered around us and cheered loudly. The zombies had been defeated. “Lucas!
Lucas! Lucas!” The sounds surrounded us as I reestablished my footing and scanned the crowd
for my brother. He sat alone on the edge of the sidewalk. He had been crying. Lucas put his
hand on my shoulder and whispered into my ear, “He’ll be fine. We’ll all be fine now.”
1. The Book of Enoch, Gabriel, and the Fallen Angels are themes that tie together many of the
main characters in complex ways. How do you view and interpret this element of the
book—as it relates to specific characters’ lives, to the meaning of religion, and to the
intelligence and potential of humankind?
2. Cabot Searcy takes on a mission he believes was Benton’s idea. Why do you think Cabot
becomes so obsessed with the Book of Enoch? Was he crazy? A religious zealot? Or was he
simply a misguided soul looking for his own second chance?
3. Over the course of the novel, Cullen exhibits cynicism, hope, idealism, and sometimes
despair. Is he acting out the stages of grief over “losing” his brother, or is he simply a
typical, unhappy teenager trying to figure out his life? Think of the other missing brothers
and sons in the novel (Oslo, Lucas’s brother, Benton Sage)—what is the significance of these
characters’ stories? How do they relate to the themes of desperation and second chances
that are explored in the story?
4. Cullen has a very deep and loving connection with his brother, Gabriel. In what ways do
Cullen and Gabriel appear to be a typical pair of teenage brothers? In what ways does their
relationship strike you as unique or special?
5. Lily, Arkansas, is a town where things come back—both in a positive and negative sense.
Discuss both sides of this theme and the implications for the town of Lily. Do you think that
Cullen Witter will end up staying in Lily?
6. The author calls Where Things Come Back a book about second chances. What are some of
the second chances that characters get in this novel? Specifically consider John Barling and
Benton Sage, in addition to the main characters. Are they always successful? Do things
always turn out as they hope?
7. What is the significance of the Lazarus woodpecker—the bird that caused such excitement
in the town of Lily, but which never actually existed there? How can the Lazarus be
interpreted symbolically?
8. The author describes many different kinds of love in this story: parental love, fraternal love,
romantic love, and love for God. What does the novel say about each?
9. Consider the somewhat secondary female cast of Where Things Come Back—Ada Taylor,
Alma Ember, and others—and their influence on the male characters of the story.
10. Cullen and Gabriel both find comfort in music throughout the novel. What is the significance
of the various lyrics quoted within Cullen’s narrative, and how do they relate to the scenes
in which they are used?
11. Consider the format of the novel and the movement of time: how we alternate between
Cullen’s, Benton’s, and Cabot’s stories, and between first and third person narrators, until
the storylines converge at the very end. How did the author’s approach to time affect your
reading and comprehension of the novel? How did you anticipate that the various narrative
threads would intersect or be resolved?
12. Discuss the quirks of Cullen’s voice—for example, his lists, his fantasies, his third person
phrasing. How did Cullen’s voice influence your view of his story? How does it help us
understand his mindset as the narrator?
13. Cullen keeps a running list of titles for books that he could write in the future. Consider your
own life—both important events and inconsequential moments, like Cullen does. What are
some titles that would fit your personal story?
14. Where Things Come Back is Cullen’s final title idea and becomes the title of this novel. What
is the significance of this title being the final line of the book? What does it imply about
what happens at the end of the novel?
Reading Group Tips and Resources
A story is always better if you have someone to share it with. Enter the book club. It’s your place
to meet with friends and talk books. Like stories themselves, book clubs are completely unique.
Remember, there are no rules! Whether you are starting, joining, or refreshing your current
book club, we hope these tips, reminders, hints, and resources help liven up the discussion.
The Club
If you are starting a new club, consider what kind of atmosphere you and your club want to
cultivate. The tone of your group is just as important as the setting. Do you want your group
to be more academic in nature or more lighthearted and social? Setting some ground rules
for your meeting can help make the discussion and gathering run smoothly. Here are some
questions to consider when forming your book club:
• Do you want to designate leaders for you group discussions? If so, what will the group
leader be in charge of?
• What time do you want to meet? Establishing a set time and date provides consistency.
• Where will you meet? Do you want to change the location of each group meeting?
• How big do you want your group to be? Usually, smaller groups (somewhere between 6 and
8 people) work best, because they allow everyone a chance to join in on the conversation.
However, large groups allow for greater diversity.
• Why do you want to start a book club? What do you and your members hope to get out of
your book club?
• What type of books do you want to read in your group? Do you want to focus on certain
genres, bestsellers, or a specific theme? Or mix it up each month?
Getting the details straight will set the foundation for a long, prosperous, and chatty book
group!
The Book
So many books, so little time! Choosing books for your book club may seem like a daunting
task, but don’t fret. You may want to consider selecting titles by genre or by a certain author
or by theme—i.e., a specific time period, character, or setting. If you and your group are having
trouble picking your next book selection, you could:
• Check the bestseller lists, from the weekly New York Times Book Review, to the IndieBound
Bestseller list, to USA Today’s Best-Selling Books!
• Look up recent award-winning titles, such as the National Book Awards, the Man Booker
Prize, the PEN/Faulkner Award, the National Book Critics Circle Awards, the Hemingway
Foundation/PEN, the New York Times Best Books of the year, or the Orange Prize for fiction.
• And of course, try reading one of the titles featured in the Something to Read About
sampler!
If you and your group still can’t agree on a pick, try some of these fun techniques:
• Have each member in your club bring a “top five” list of books to read to your first meeting
and vote on the suggestions—the title with the most votes wins.
• Pay tribute to your playground days and simply take turns! Let the host or discussion leader
choose the title or decide who gets to pick by order of birthdays, alphabetically, etc.
• Leave it up to book club chance—have each member write down the book they want to
read, put it in a bowl, and draw your next selection.
• Seasonalize your book club choices—for instance, pick a title about African American
heritage in honor of Black History month in February or read an Irish author in March for St.
Patrick’s Day.
The Meeting
Mapping out the meeting logistics will make the actual meeting all the more enjoyable. Here
are some details to consider when planning your book club meeting:
• Do you want to establish a period of “social time” before starting the discussion?
If you want to change up the feel of your book club, try some of these meeting locations:
• A restaurant or bar
• Your local library
• A coffee shop
• A park (weather permitting!)
• Your local bookstore
• A museum
• Your living room!
The Discussion
You’ve read the book—now it is time to start talking! A lot of book group titles come with a
set of questions for discussion. If the reading group guide is not included in the book itself, try
visiting the publisher’s website to see if you can find the accompanying guide online. Consider
sending out the discussion questions in advance, so all of the members will be prepared to chat
it up. Included below are some ever-green questions that apply to any book and are guaranteed
to jumpstart your conversation:
• Describe the character development. Which character(s) did you identify with? Did your
opinions about any of the characters change? How?
• What was the dialogue like? How do the characters speak to one another? What is the voice
or tone like?
• How would you characterize the author’s use of language? Did the book’s characters, story,
or style remind you of another book?
• If there was one thing you took away from the book, what was it? How would you sum up
the book in one word?
• How did the setting and time period influence the novel? Could the story have taken place
anywhere else? Or at any other time?
• Did you have a favorite passage or quote from the book? If so, share it with your group.
If some members of your group are reading e-books, while some readers are reading print
editions, getting on the same page (literally) may seem to be an issue when trying to reference
page numbers and cite favorite parts. Not to worry! In most e-readers, you can search for
occurrences of words and phrases. In most e-readers, page numbers are available in addition
to the progress bar. Remember that the page numbering in a e-book depends on the size and
font style of the text. Still looking for ways to enhance you book club meeting and to keep the
discussion going? Try some of these tips:
• Have each member come up with an alternate title for the book. Go around the group and
explain your new title choice.
• Have members submit three questions by e-mail to the group host or leader prior to your
meeting, creating an instant, personalized reading group guide.
• Make a book club recipe box! Have each member write their notes, questions,
thoughts, and opinions on a note card to save in a recipe box.
• Get on the same page (literally)! Have each member read the same book and make different
notations as you read. When it is your turn to read, you will also be reading your member’s
notes and questions, creating a read-as-you-go book club experience. Bring the book to your
meeting and discuss the experience of sharing one book and reading each other’s thoughts.
• Decide on one question that will be asked at each book club meeting. When you answer this
staple question, be sure to discuss how your answer has changed since the last meeting and
since the last title you read.
• Have each member select a character name out of a hat and act out a favorite passage in
the book.
• Keep a book club log! Bring a notebook or journal to your book club get-together to keep
track of the book read, what was discussed, your club rating, where your group met, what
kind of wine was served, etc.
• Visit the author’s website to learn more about their background. Sometimes authors
are available to call-in to book club meetings. Authors will also often provide contact
information on their websites or on their publisher’s website. While inviting the author to
your book group alters the discussion, it is a unique experience and one your group may
want to consider.
• Check your local listings to see what authors are on tour and plan to attend a book-signing
or reading as a group.
• Bring your book to life by taking a related field trip with your club members to someplace
that echoes the theme or setting of your recent read—maybe it’s volunteering at an animal
shelter, taking painting classes, or going on a bike ride!
• Food (of course) makes any gathering better. Consider cooking a recipe that ties into the
subject of your book club pick or doing a potluck where each member brings in a favorite
dish.
Most important, sit back, relax, and enjoy both the discussion and the company of your book
club members.
The Extras
The web is a great place to find book club resources. For more book club tips, suggestions,
guides, and information, try visiting the following online, book-specific communities:
• ReadingGroupGuides.com
• Shelfari.com
• LibraryThing.com
• GoodReads.com
• BookMovement.com
• ReadingGroupChoices.com
• BookBrowse.com
• BookClubCookBook.com