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(2) Narrative Elements, (3)Deliverables

You will post these responses to the Peer Review TDA, with a note to the author. Your feedback should offer the writer the extensive
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!omplete checklist below and offer suggestions for clarifying any items unavailable or needing work



 
 
    
 
Incorporates at relevant artifacts from research to convey some sort of meaning, argument,
observation, theme, or other identifiable element about life in Northeast Texas
Selects modality appropriate to purpose and project
Includes credits and sources, as well as acknowledgments regarding creative rights
Details regarding credits are both obvious and complete
Details regarding creative rights and permissions for all source material
!onsiders the meaning of archival research in terms of relevant findings from research, especially
with respect to the available historical narrative and relevant information obtained from the
metadata in the catalog description for each image and the relevant narratives adjacent to those
images
Uses as its core content artifacts and information derived from Northeast Texas Digital !ollections
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clear focus throughout most of the project fairly clear. purpose of the project. submitted
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images are presented good sense and works well ways in which the images understand how the project not submitted.
works incredibly well, with the overall theme, at fit together remain, but images fit together in
carrying the reader along least through the majority of the reasons for the order the order in which
through the storyline and the project of presentation are fairly they are presented.
firmly grounded in the clear throughout.
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narrative, recurring themes, and/or other some questions remain captions work with the otherwise problematic.
themes, and other elements along through the and captions could use images, the narrative,
elements along in a majority of the project. improvement. and overall purpose.
logical and creative way

 Sources selected are Sources used and cited are Uses only one or two Uses mostly Does not use outside
reliable and relevant and reliable and appropriate, yet reliable sources and/or questionable sources sources and/or does
student goes to additional, reliable sources does not appropriately and/or does not not address the
appropriate lengths to could have been included connect image to original connect images to the original context of
connect project use to with better results context. original source source
both project narrative
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row is the project ³delivered´? (Flikr? Slideshare? Scribd? IE: is it easily accessible online at some
site for sharing, and is that site appropriate for the project being delivered?
Title complete and meaningful?
All artifacts included in remix work together to move narrative forward?

!opyright details and other relevant acknowledgements obvious and complete?

!omplete project offered a !reative !ommons license?
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