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A KISS Grammar
Second Grade Workbook
© Edward A. Vavra
April, 2008
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Alternative Explanations
Some people (including some grammarians) believe that there should be one and only one
explanation of how any word fits in a sentence. Among themselves, however, grammarians
disagree as to what these explanations should be. Within KISS, your students will be learning
how to analyze sentences from real texts. In so doing, people will see things differently.
Consider, for example, the following sentence from Aesop's "The Ant and the Grasshopper"
I am helping to lay up food for the winter.
Does the prepositional phrase "for the winter" function as an adjective to "food" or as an adverb
to “to lay up?” In one sense, it functions as both. Thus, within KISS, some students will explain
it as an adjective, and other students will explain it as an adverb. Either explanation should be
accepted. The validity of an explanation depends on its making sense to the people who are using
it. That includes both the person making the explanation and the people to whom it is being
explained.
KISS focuses an enabling students to analyze and meaningfully discuss real sentences in real
texts. The best way to reach that objective is to create exercises that are based on real texts.
Using real texts is important for three reasons. First, if the students are reading the texts as they
do the exercises, they will see for themselves that the grammar they are learning clearly relates to
what they read and write.
Second, exercises that are created from such texts automatically provide an instructional
focus. Which helping verbs, for example, do students really need to know? Most grammar
textbooks simply provide a list of helping verbs. Students are expected to learn these with no
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context provided. But the early exercises in this book, for example, are based on the stories in
Mary Frances Blaisdell’s Bunny Rabbit's Diary. The helping verbs “ought” and “dare” simply do
not appear in the book. “Can,” “could,” “would,” and “should,” however, appear fairly
frequently. If, at the end of second grade, some students still do not recognize “ought” as a part
of a verb phrase, is their failure to do so a major problem? I would suggest not. On the other
hand, at the end of second grade, every student should be able to recognize “can,” “could,”
“would” and “should.”
Another way of looking at this is in terms of Vygotsky's two circles, but in this case consider
the center circle to represent the most frequently used examples of the concept. The area between
the two circles then represents the less frequently used examples (such as “must” and “need”),
and the area outside the circle represents the rarely used examples (such as “dare” and “ought”).
As students learn how to analyze real sentences, surely the examples in the inner circle are the
most important. In this sense, exercises that are created based on real texts limit the amount of
material that the students have to master at a given time.
The third reason for using real texts is to expand the instructional material that students need
to master at a given time. A simple example of this is words such as “begin,” “start,” and “stop”
as helping verbs. Most grammar textbooks pay little attention to these words, but students will
read (and write) these words far more frequently than they do “dare” and “ought.” Thus KISS,
again using Bruner’s concept of the spiral curriculum, introduces these words to second graders
as “helping” verbs. (For more on this, see the notes for the exercises on helping verbs.)
The “helping” verbs are just one example of how text-based exercises expand instruction.
Here again Vygotsky's two circles can help explain what is involved, but in this case the center
circle represents the simplest form of a concept, and the area between the circles represents the
variations that are found in real texts. In presenting direct objects, for example, most textbooks
provide only simple S/V/DO patterns—“I like him.” Exercises based on real texts, however, will
include sentences such as “Him I like.”
Ideally, students can read a story or poem and then do exercises that are based on it. They
can, of course, also discuss the story or poem as a story or poem, and they can even write about
it. My intention is to collect the stories used in this book and some suggestions for writing about
them in a separate MS Word document. My guess, however, is that once classroom teachers
become familiar with the KISS Approach and objectives, they will replace many of the exercises
given here with exercises on other works that their students are reading. Of course the exercises
can be done without reference to the texts upon which they are based.
The preceding explanations should have suggested that within the KISS approach, students
are almost always expected to make mistakes. As you work your way into KISS exercises, you
will see which mistakes students are expected to make, and why. But the pedagogical principle
involved needs to be explained here. Learning (as opposed to memorizing) always involves some
confusion and thus some mistakes. All native speakers of English taught themselves the
language. (How could anyone explain it if the child did not understand the language in the first
place?) In doing so, they learned the core concepts first and made mistakes with those in the
outer circle. As children, for example, we all said, “We cutted the paper.” Only after we mastered
the basic rule (“-ed” for past tense) did we begin to distinguish the irregular cases.
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Two comments of a parent (whose child was doing the early exercises in this book) illustrate
how this applies to second grade. She noted, for example that her child had a problem with the
tenth sentence in Exercise # 7. The sentence is “He melted the snow in the warm hollows.” At
this point in instruction, the students are expected to identify only the subject and the verb. As
the parent explained, the student “didn't want to mark the verb as ‘melted,’ because he himself
didn’t melt. She decided the whole verb had to be ‘melted the snow,’ because without the DO,
the verb just didn’t make sense to her.’ If I had been working with this student, I would have said
something such as, “That’s very good thinking. Actually, ‘the snow’ is a type of complement, a
direct object, and we will be studying them later this year.”
The second comment involved the first sentence in Exercise # 9. The sentence is, “And
before long the sound of the axe rang out through the stillness.” Even after the mother explained
that “sound” is the subject, the student remained “convinced in her own mind that it was the axe
that did the ringing.” As in the previous case, the student’s confusion resulted from a
construction that will be studied later in second grade–in this case prepositional phrases. Here
again I would have pointed out that her answer made sense, but that “axe” is in a prepositional
phrase (which she will be studying later) and thus cannot be the subject.
There is, of course, the question of grading. I have already suggested that most exercises
should be reviewed in class, and not be graded. But even if these two exercises were graded, it
appears that the student had no problem with nine of the ten sentences in each exercise, and in
the sentences that did cause problems, the student got half perfectly correct (in the first, the
subject, and in the second, the verb). Thus the student was apparently 95% perfectly correct.
That 5% confusion is, I would argue, a pedagogical necessity. We learn most from examples,
not from definitions. But it is very easy to look at simple examples without thinking. Within
KISS, exercises provide the most important instruction, and some of the exercises should
confuse the students. We are going to be asking these students to analyze randomly selected
sentences from real texts, including their own writing. There will be points that confuse them,
and the sooner they learn that they are expected to make mistakes, the better off they will be.
Most of the exercises in KISS workbooks include “Answer Keys” followed by “Complete
Analysis Keys.” The “Answer Keys” suggest what you should expect from students. They
include both mistakes that you should expect and some alternative explanations. The “Complete
Analysis Keys” provide the rest of a complete KISS explanation of the text. These are intended
to enable you to answer any questions that students may have about other words. (For example,
about the sentence “Bobby slept all night,” a student might ask what “night” is. The complete
analysis key enables you to say, “’Night’ is a noun that is used as an adverb. You'll be studying
those later.”) Of course the complete analysis keys also enable you to use exercises for additional
purposes. Thus, for example, you might want to introduce the types of complements before they
are introduced in this book. The complete keys will give you the KISS explanations of the
complements in the earlier exercises.
KISS books are developed on-line, and are then modified into printable documents. The
substance of each “book” is the same, but each version has advantages and disadvantages. In the
on-line versions, each exercise, analysis key, original text, and instructional handout is a separate
document. Thus teachers and parents can simply choose (and print) what they want. The on-line
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versions also include hyperlinks from analysis keys to explanations of advanced constructions.
Such hyperlinks will not work, of course, in printable versions, so they are eliminated. (If you are
interested in these explanations, you can find them all in the instructional materials for the five
KISS levels.) The printable versions also make it much easier to come to the web site once,
download a book for a specific year, and have everything you need.
Although not all members of the KISS List favor graphics in the exercises, I find a text-only
worksheet somewhat boring, especially when there are so many interesting graphics that can be
included. To my knowledge all of the graphics in this book are in the public domain, but since
the book is being given away, and not sold, I’m not particularly worried about using any of these
graphics. I will, of course, remove graphics if they are found to be copyrighted, but most of them
are from out-of-copyright texts. Some I scanned myself; others are from clipart (or art)
collections on the web. The only ones I have some question about are the illustrations for
Andersen’s Fairy Tales in exercises 84 – 87. They are by Jan Marcin Szancer, are were taken
from a Polish site – http://www.klaban.torun.pl/children/andersen/index-en.html.
The primary objective for second grade is to make the identification of subjects, verbs,
complements, adjectives, adverbs, compounds, and simple prepositional phrases almost
automatic. In addition, students should begin to see how all the words within a “sentence” fit
together – adjectives, adverbs and prepositional phrases function as modifiers of the words in the
S/V/C pattern. This will enable students to more easily understand the more complicated
constructions as they are introduced in later years. Given relatively simple sentences, second
graders should have little trouble reaching this objective.
Some of the instructional material in this book is included within exercises. In addition,
exercises are at least paired, and in most cases several similar exercises follow in sequence, all
aimed at the same objective. For example, the first three exercises are all on “What is a
sentence?” Parents and teachers may want to go over the first exercise with students and then
assign the second, third, etc.
Some exercises (such as five and six) focus on punctuation, but then the focus returns to the
identification of subjects and verbs. There are thousands of verbs in English, and it will take
students a fair amount of practice to be able to identify them. The KISS Approach, however, is
cumulative – students will always identify the subjects and verbs in the sentences they are
analyzing. Thus there is no major problem in moving on in the sequence if some students in a
class are still having problems. Because some students will need more practice than others, there
is no “ideal” number of exercises on a specific focus that can be included within a book. But
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once you see how the KISS Approach works, you can go to the web site for additional exercises,
or, better yet, have students create exercises for each other.
Identification exercises are the heart of KISS grammar. If students cannot identify subjects,
verbs, prepositional phrases, etc. in real sentences, then anything else they are taught is
meaningless – the students will be unable to apply it effectively to the sentences that they read
and write. ID exercises are short, and should take students not more than five minutes to do.
KISS punctuation exercises are also short, and almost always consist of real texts from which
the punctuation (and capitalization) has been stripped. The students are asked to “fix” the text,
after which you can show them the original and discuss why the original is punctuated as it is. In
Recipe Rosters, students are asked to write sentences that include specific constructions; in
Treasure Hunts, they need to find sentences that contain specific constructions within either a
variety of different texts or in one text. Treasure Hunts will take more time on the students’ part,
but they are very important because they make the students see that what they are learning
applies to all the texts that they read.
Sentence-combining and/or manipulation exercises become more frequent in later grades,
but even in second grade they can often help students learn to revise what they have written. It is
not uncommon to see second (and third) graders write something like “I live in a big house. It is
brown. It is on Maple Street.” One reason for this type of writing is that the students are
searching for things to say. As each idea pops into mind, it gets written down as a separate
sentence. Combining exercises can thus help students revise this into “I live in a big brown house
on Maple Street.” Note that you can create additional combining exercises simply by taking
sequences of sentences from your students’ writing. Students can also be asked to create such
exercises for each other.
Once students have a basic ability to identify a construction, perhaps the most useful and
important exercise for second graders is to have them create an exercise. Give them a short text
and have them create an exercise comparable to the exercises that they have just been doing. See,
for examples, exercises 10, 20, 40, 61, 79, 83, and 110 in this book. Note that exercises 21 and
22 in this book consist of having students make an answer key for their exercises (22), and then
doing each others’ exercises (23). I have not repeated these exercises because you can obviously
apply them to any student-created exercises. These exercises are important for several reasons.
First, we learn most when we teach, and these exercises make the students the teachers. Second,
the students will here also be making a connection between what they read and the grammar that
they are learning. Third, teachers can use these exercises to replace many of the exercises in this
book. (Remember that a KISS assumption is that students will be doing exercises based texts that
they are actually reading. Ultimately, this book itself is just an example of what can be done and
suggestions for doing it.)
The ten “Assessment” quizzes are intended for use at the end of the year, but you can, of
course, use them at any time. Note that the format of these quizzes differs from that of other
exercises. In assessment quizzes, students are asked to identify the words in the subject / verb /
complement pattern and then to explain how other words in the sentence connect to the words in
that pattern. This is the standard format of all KISS assessment quizzes. For second grade,
students will be working with isolated, and very simple sentences. At this level of instruction, the
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difficulty in creating these quizzes is in finding sequential passages that do not include advanced
constructions. In upper grade levels, more of the assessment quizzes are based on a single, real
paragraph. (In the upper levels of KISS, the difficulty in creating assessment quizzes is in finding
paragraphs that do include advanced constructions.)
The exercises in this book are spread across twelve instructional objectives. Students should
probably do two or three exercises a week. Note that instruction should be spread across the
entire school year. Otherwise, students will forget what they have previously learned. (Use it, or
lose it.)
Although students should be able to do most of these exercises in less than five minutes,
reviewing exercises in class will take longer. Rather than “correcting” these assignments,
however, teachers should, as a general rule, review them in class. Not only will this approach
save the teacher’s sanity, it will also help students master the concepts. One enjoyable way to do
this is to use the KISS Grammar Game. (It is explained in An Introduction to KISS Grammar.)
In-class review of exercises, especially using the grammar game, is also an excellent motivator.
Currently, most people hate studying (or teaching) grammar. In part, that is because of poor
instructional materials. Most students, however, will catch on to the KISS approach rather
quickly. And in-class review will show the other students not only that their classmates are
“getting it,” but also that they are enjoying it.
Note also that having students do short exercises even after they have mastered the relevant
concepts tends to increase students’ enjoyment and motivation. Doing what we can do well is
enjoyable, especially if it is something that we are supposed to be able to do and it only takes
five minutes. Take the attitude that KISS exercises are short puzzles. Students will be able to
solve them, and the more of them they solve, the stronger their confidence will be.
Although some exercises should be done as homework, teachers might want to have
students, as a class, do some exercises, especially exercises that introduce a new concept..
Instead of giving each student a copy of these exercises, you can simply make an overhead
transparency.
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1 What Is a Sentence? Ex # 1
Answer Key
1. The three little rabbits lived in the woods.
2. Each little rabbit had a name.
3. Bunny was full of fun.
4. But Billy was lazy.
5. The rabbits had many playmates.
6. They played with the gray squirrels.
7. Sometimes Bunny ran down to the brook.
8. One Christmas Mrs. Rabbit gave Bunny a book.
9. She pinned the leaves together with thorns.
10. Sometimes he talked to Mrs. Duck.
11. He turned one leaf and then another.
12. They were all alike.
13. This is a funny book.
14. What kind of a book is this?
15. She made it herself out of maple leaves.
Notes
1. “Herself” is an appositive to “She.”
2 What Is a Sentence? Ex # 2
Answer Key
1. So Bunny Rabbit ran back to the big stump.
2. But Bunny shook his head.
3. He was very busy.
4. He hid his book in the hollow tree.
5. I found the hollow tree.
6. The gray squirrels lived in the big oak tree.
7. It was all full of stories about the three little rabbits.
8. They played with the red squirrels.
9. It was about the slide on the long hill beside the pond.
10. The rose-bush grew on the wall.
1. And {before long [#1]} the sound {of the axe} rang out {through the stillness}. |
2. I thought so (DO) [#2], too. |
3. But I have a store-house (DO) {in this tree}. |
4. Where is it? |
5. I am as hungry (PA) {as a bear}. |
6. So [#3] am I. |
7. Sammy took out a nut (DO). |
8. I saw many pretty things (DO). |
9. Oh [Inj], it was pretty (PA)! |
10. Then the little sparrow flew away. |
Notes
1. "Long" is not a noun or pronoun. What we have here is a case of ellipsis – the leaving out of
understood words – that has become idiomatic. We all understand this to mean "before a
long time had passed."
2. Alternatively, "so" can be explained as an adverb meaning "in the same way." [For an
explanation of "alternative explanations," see the Introduction to KISS Grammar.]
3. It is difficult to tell how most grammarians would explain this "so." Most grammar textbooks
do not explain how to analyze real sentences. My guess is that many grammarians would
explain it as an adverb, but note how, in the context of the preceding sentence, it functions as
a "pro-adjective" – it replaces "hungry." I would not, by the way, even attempt to explain this
to second-graders. I mention it as an example of the difference of the KISS Approach.
5. Verb Phrases
The objective here is to help students include all the helping verbs (also known as “auxiliary
verbs”) when they underline verbs. The exercises break this section into parts by first presenting
tense auxiliaries, then modal auxiliaries, and finally an “other” group. (See below.). This division
is primarily intended to organize the presentation of the material. In other words, attempting to
make second graders remember which verbs are “tense” and which are “modals” may confuse
them more than help. The KISS objective is to have students work with the tense auxiliaries (“is
playing,” “had been sleeping,” “does read,” etc. until their recognition is almost automatic. Then
add the modals (“can,” “could,” “would,” etc.), and finally, the “other” group.
The tense auxiliaries are a matter of general agreement among grammarians (although some
grammarians claim that English does not have a future tense). Grammarians disagree (among
themselves) about what modals are and about which verbs should be included in the category,
but the KISS objective is simply to help students learn that in a sentence such as :”Bobtail must
like nuts,” “must” is part of the verb phrase.
KISS includes the “other” category because it is easier for students, at this level, to view
these words as helping verbs. In their writing, and in their reading, students will frequently find
sentences such as:
She started to swim.
Bobby Duck stopped talking.
We liked to play.
Suzie wanted to leave.
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Technically, these are finite verbs that have verbs (verbals) as their direct object. At this point,
however, our objective is to help second graders identify verbs that function as verbs within a
sentence. Introducing verbs that function as nouns will probably confuse more students than it
helps. Both Bruner's “spiral curriculum” and Vygotsky's “zone of proximal development”
suggest that there is no problem, especially in the first three KISS Levels, in having the students
underline “started to swim,” “stopped talking,” etc. as verbs. Once they get to verbals in KISS
Level Four, few if any students will have difficulty in re-seeing these verb formations as a finite
verb plus a verb that functions as a direct object.
Problems to Expect
“Not” is a frequently used adverb that often appears in the midst of a verb phrase–“They did
not stop.” Because the exercises are based on real sentences, no attempt was made to eliminate
sentences with “not” from these early exercises, even though adverbs are not introduced until
section seven. At this point in their work, therefore, you can tell students that “’Not’ is never a
verb and should never be underlined,” or you can simply let them underline it until they get to
adverbs in section seven.
The “other” category of “helping” verbs may introduce a problem if you are having students
analyze randomly selected sentences. The forty sentences in the exercises in this section were all
taken from Blaisdell’s Bunny Rabbit’s Diary, but in collecting them I also collected the following
six sentences:
In these sentences, “stop,” “came,” and “ran” are the finite verbs (the verbs that should be
underlined twice) and the infinitives (“to” plus a verb) answer the question “Why?” not “What?”
Note, for example, the difference between:
She did not stop to talk to Bunny.
and
She did not stop talking to Bunny.
If you are creating your own exercises (or having students create them) expect problems here and
ignore (for purposes of grading) any errors that students make.
1. It is going to rain. |
2. I do not like the wind (DO). |
3. Teddy did not say a word (DO). |
4. But you will never be hungry (PA) here. |
5. But he could not find Bobtail (DO). |
Answer Key
1. So Bunny (N) sat down on the stump (N) and opened his book (N).
2. One morning (N) in winter (N) Bunny (N) opened his eyes (N).
3. The big round sun (N) peeped up from behind the hills (N).
4. The ground (N) was covered with snow (N).
5. Something (N) hit Bunny (N) on the head (N).
6. Billy (N) can make a long slide (N) over in the meadow (N).
7. The rabbits (N) stood at the top (N) of the hill (N) and looked down at the pond (N).
8. Jack Frost (N) covered the pond (N) with ice (N) last night (N).
9. But the garden (N) was far away, across the field (N) and over the other side (N) of the road
(N).
10. All the red squirrels (N) scampered off to get the best seats (N) among the branches (N) of
the oak tree (N).
Complete Analysis Key
1. So Bunny sat down {on the stump} and opened his book (DO). |
2. One morning [NuA] {in winter} Bunny opened his eyes (DO). |
Some people will see “in winter” as an adjective to “morning,” and others will see it as an
adverb to “opened.” The question is not worth an argument. Either explanation should be
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accepted. KISS prefers the adjectival explanation because the model of how our brains
process language suggests that we chunk words as soon as possible. Therefore, our minds
would probably connect “in winter” to “morning.”
3. The big round sun peeped up {from behind the hills}. |
4. The ground was covered (P) {with snow}. |
5. Something hit Bunny (DO) {on the head}. |
6. Billy can make a long slide (DO) {over in the meadow}. |
7. The rabbits stood {at the top} {of the hill} and looked down {at the pond}. |
8. Jack Frost covered the pond (DO) {with ice} last night [NuA]. |
9. But the garden was far away, {across the field} and {over the other side} {of the road}. |
10. All the red squirrels scampered off to get the best seats {among the branches} {of the oak
tree}. |
"Seats" is the direct object of the infinitive "to get." The infinitive phrase functions as an
adverb (of purpose) to "scampered."
Once students have a general introduction to nouns, pronouns, adjectives, and adverbs, they
will need some practice exercises to solidify these concepts, particularly adjectives and adverbs.
However, once students do have a command of adjectives and adverbs, having them identify
them in every exercise is not necessary. Indeed, it can become boring. Thus the exercises in this
section do require the students to draw an arrow from every adjective and from every adverb to
the word it modifies. After this group of exercises, adjectives and adverbs are ignored except for
special cases that are explained in the analysis keys.
8. Compounds
In a sentence such as “Bill likes baseball and football,” many students will mark “baseball”
as a complement, but ignore “football.” Compounding is a relatively simple concept, and by
introducing it at this point, sentences with compound subjects, verbs, and/or complements can be
used in the exercises on prepositional phrases.
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1. The flowers would like to have a drink (DO) {of fresh water} [Adj. to "drink"]. |
When they get to infinitives, students will be able to explain "to have" as the direct object
of "would like," and "drink" as the direct object of the infinitive.
2. We will go down {to the brook} [Adv. to "will go"]. |
Alternatively, "down to" can be considered the preposition.
3. Will you come {with us} [Adv. to "will come"]? |
4. There is not much water (PN) {in the brook} today. |
Expect students to be confused here. Alternatively, "water" can be considered the subject,
and "There" can be explained either as an adverb or as an expletive. Note that an
argument can easily be made that "in the brook" functions as an adjective to "water,"
rather than as an adverb explaining where there is not much of it. Thus either explanation
should be accepted.
5. So {at last} [Adv. to "sat"] Bunny sat down {under the oak tree} [Adv. to "sat"]. |
6. Mrs. Duck and all the little ducks waddled {along the path} [Adv. to "waddled"]. |
7. It was really nothing (PN) {but mud} [Adj. to "nothing"]. |
8. The little ducks were playing {in the muddy brook} [Adv. to "were playing"]. |
9. They pushed their flat bills (DO) {into the mud} [Adv. to "pushed"]. |
10. Their little yellow feet were black (PA) {with mud} [Adv. to "black"]. |
11. Mr. Sun looked down and smiled {at them} [Adv. to "smiled"]. |
12. A gentle wind began to blow {over the tall grass} [Adv. to "to blow"] {in the
field} [Adj. to "grass"]. |
The infinitive "to blow" can be explained as the direct object of "began." Some people
may see "in the field" as describing "blow." This view will make the phrase an adverb to
"blow" and thus not embedded in the "over the tall grass phrase.
13. It rushed along {to the woods} [Adv. to "rushed"]. |
Alternatively, "along to" can be considered the preposition.
Then the water began to fall down on the ground at the foot of the tree. One great big
drop fell on Bunny’s nose. Then another fell on his ear. He waked up with a start.
“What is the matter?” he said. “What is the matter?”
great [#2] big drop fell {on Bunny’s nose}. | Then another fell {on his ear}. | He waked
up {with a start}. |
[DO [#3] “What is the matter (PN)?”] he said. | “What is the matter (PN)?” |
Notes
1. Alternatively, "to fall" is an infinitive that functions as the direct object of "began."
2. Because "great" modifies the adjective "big," it functions as an adverb.
3. This is the traditional explanation of this sentence, but KISS offers an alternative explanation.
In it, the subordinate clause is the main clause, and the "he said" is a subordinate clause that
functions as an interjection. Note that the traditional explanation does not take into account
that the following "What is the matter?" is also "subordinate" to "he said."
talking {to him}]. | He saw Blacky Crow (DO) sailing [#3] round and round {over his
head}. |
“Oh [Inj], no,” (DO) answered Blacky Crow. | “I can find something (DO)
Though be is the most common linking verb in Modern English, many others
are in common use. The following are illustrative:
seem: The weather seems nasty.
become: The weather became nasty.
turn: The weather turned nasty.
continue: The weather continued nasty.
loom: The difficulties loomed large.
grow: His love grew cold.
taste: The pie tasted foul.
feel: Don't feel bad.
run: The cow ran dry.
get: Hurry and get well.
You can probably find other verbs included in other books. No such list claims to be complete,
and that is the problem. What are students supposed to do when the verb in the sentence they are
analyzing (or writing) is not on the list? Note, for example, that one of the exercises for Grade
Two includes the sentence “Perhaps he can keep awake.” “Keep” is not on Roberts’ list, but it
functions as a linking verb in this sentence, and “awake” is a predicate adjective.
In another of his grammar books, Roberts discusses the problem. He uses “grow” as an
example, as in:
a..) Tom grew quickly.
b.) Tom grew tall.
c.) Tom grew tomatoes.
In (a.) “grew” is intransitive; in (b.) it is linking; and in (c.) it is transitive. How do we know
that? Ultimately, the grammarians end up using the basic KISS instructional material on the
types of complements. (Or should I say that KISS instructional material is based on what
grammarians themselves do to determine the types of verbs and complements?) In (a.) there is no
complement. (Thus the verb is intransitive.) In (b.) the complement is an adjective that describes
“Tom.” (Thus the verb is “linking.”) In (c.) there is a complement, but it neither describes, nor is
it equal to, “Tom.” (Thus the verb is transitive.)
In order to analyze real sentences, students are going to have to master the KISS
instructional sequence. You can, if you wish, use the preceding information to give students
additional instruction, but I suggest caution. First, it may cause more confusion than it is worth.
Second, too much focus on knowing that word "x" can be a linking verb may easily detract from
the more important instruction on knowing how to decide what type of complement is involved.
Instructors of math (and professors of electronics) regularly complain that students are too
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focused on what the answer is (the “that”) and thus the students fail to learn the process (the
“how”) to work one’s way to the correct answer. The basic KISS instructional material on the
types of complements is, in addition, an introduction to procedures that will be used later within
KISS, but it is also important instruction in learning how to learn.
3. Steve painted his mother (IO) a beautiful picture (DO) {of her garden} [Adj. to
"picture"]. |
a.) Steve painted for his mother a beautiful picture of her garden.
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b.) For his mother Steve painted a beautiful picture of her garden.
c.) Steve painted a beautiful picture of her garden for his mother.
See the notes for 2. Version (c) raises a question which might or might not be
answerable if this sentence were in a context -- Whose garden is her garden?
5. Debbie got Sam (IO) a new brown coat (DO) {for the winter} [Adj. to "coat"]. |
a.) Debbie got a new brown coat for the winter for Sam.
b.) For Sam, Debbie got a new brown coat for the winter.
The "for" phrase can alternatively be explained as an adverb to "got."
6. Carla drew the police (IO) a picture (DO) {of the man} [Adj. to "picture"]. |
Carla drew a picture of the man for the police.
9. {In the evening} [Adv. to "read"] Rick read Margo (IO) a story (DO) {about
10. The director refused the man (IO) a part (DO) {in the play} [Adj. to "part"]. |
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"To" or "for" don't really work here, but "man" is still an indirect object -- the sentence
means "The director refused *to give* the man a part in the play."
12. The coach hit Sandra (IO) some fly balls (DO). |
The coach hit some fly balls to Sandra.
13. Can you win me (IO) a stuffed elephant (DO) {at the circus} [Adv. to "Can
win"]? |
14. {On Mother's Day} [Adv. to "brought"], the children brought their mother (IO)
15. Can you find me (IO) a book (DO) {about animals} [Adj. to "book"] {in South
1. The land {of the south} [Adj. to "land"] was ever bright (PA) and sunny (PA), |
but all {at once} [Adv. to "grew"] the sky grew dark (PA), | and the sun hid himself
(DO) {in fear} [Adv. to "hid"]. | Black storm-clouds came {from the north} [Adv. to
"came"]. | An icy wind blew {over the mountains} [Adv. to "blew"]. | It wrestled
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{with the trees} [Adv. to "wrestled"] {of the southland} [Adj. to "trees"], | and even the
oaks could not stand {against its power} [Adv. to "could stand"]. |
2. Will you make men love me [#1] ? |
3.) “Brave little hornet [#2],” said the king {of the south} [Adj. to "king"]. |
Notes
1. "Me" is the direct object, and "men" is the subject, of the infinitive "love." The infinitive
phrase functions as the direct object of "will make."
2. In context, "Brave little hornet" functions as both Direct Address and the direct object of
"said."
13 Assessment
Parents or others who are working with a limited number of students probably will not need
formal assessments to know what their students do and do not understand. Classroom teachers,
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however, have to deal with many students at a time. They also may need to report the results of
formal assessments, especially since the results of such assessment can be used to modify
objectives and methods for future instruction.
The KISS assessment quizzes for second grade are designed to include only core examples
such that all students can be expected to get everything right. (For example, “dare” and “ought”
do not appear in them as helping verbs because they are used so infrequently that we probably
should not expect second graders to remember them in addition to all the other materials that
they have been presented with during this year.)
The quizzes consist of selected sentences that should, as a whole, include at least one
predicate adjective, one predicate noun, one indirect object, one understood “you,” one
compound (subject, verb, or complement) and several prepositional phrases.
The format for KISS assessment quizzes remains fairly standard from second grade through
eleventh. Students are given a numbered sequence of sentences, and are asked to identify the
subjects, verbs, and complements (as they do in most exercises). The sentences are followed by
other words selected from the sentences, and students are asked to “explain how that word
grammatically connects to the subject, verb, or complement.” Note that the words are presented
in a specific sequence that moves further and further from the main pattern. For example:
They had stored away nuts (DO) and acorns (DO) in little holes in the ground.
The students might first be asked to explain “holes.” The expected answer would be that “holes”
is the object of the preposition “in,” and that the prepositional phrase functions as an adverb to
“had stored.” (I allow students to use abbreviations and incomplete sentences in these responses
– “obj. of ‘in’; pp. is adv. to ‘had stored’.”) Next, they might be asked to explain “little.” Because
they have already explained how “holes” connects to the pattern, all they need to write for
“little” is that it is an adjective to “holes.” Similarly, asked to explain “ground,” all they need to
write is that it is the object of “in,” and that prepositional phrase functions as an adjective to
“holes.”
Point values may differ from quiz to quiz, but as a general rule for second grade:
Every word that functions as, or as part of, a subject or verb is worth three points.
Every complement is worth one point; its type is worth one more.
The explanation of each listed word is worth one point.
It is not necessary to test every word in every sentence, so the listed words are selected to bring
the point value of the quiz to 100 points.
You may want to consider deducting points for, for example, words that are underlined as
verbs but that are not verbs. (I have seen college students underline “in” as a verb.) If the
students have done most of the exercises in this book, spread across the school year, every
student should be able to score at least a 95%. If they do not, you will probably find that students'
scores will fall into an inverted bell curve–either they understand most of the material, or they
are totally lost.
(I'd like to note here that most, if not all, of the students who are totally lost will be students
who simply refuse to pay attention, memorize short definitions, and/or do the homework. This is
easily documented. Teachers and school systems should be evaluated on what and how they
teach, not on how many student pass or fail.)
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Assessment Quiz # 1
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 24 x 3 ea. = 72
Complements 8 (x 1 + 1) = 16
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 12 x 1 ea. 12
Assessment Quiz # 2
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 23 x 3 ea. = 69
Complements 7 (x 1 + 1) = 14
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 17 x 1 ea. 17
1. Alice ran {to the dog}.
dog obj. of prep. "to"; pp. is adv. to "ran"
2. Spot had to find her kittens (IO) a mouse (DO).
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her adj. to "kittens"
3. Soon she came {to a bird}.
Soon Adv. to "came"
bird obj. of prep. "to"; pp. is adv. to "came"
4. I give rides (DO) {to boys and girls}.
boys object of "to"; pp. is adv. to "give"
girls another object of "to"
5. Soon little sister was fast asleep.
Soon Adv. to "was"
asleep adv. to "was"
fast adv. to "asleep"
6. Alice's sister was not sleepy (PA).
Alice's adj. to "sister"
not adv. to "was" and/or "sleepy"
7. A cow was {in the meadow}.
A adj. to "cow"
meadow obj. of prep. "in"; pp. is adv. to "was"
8. *You* Sing little sister (DO) {to sleep}.
sleep obj. of prep. "to"; pp. is adv. to "Sing"
9. Alice was a playful little girl (PN).
playful adj. to "girl"
little adj. to "girl"
10. I must make my nest (DO).
my adj. to "nest"
Assessment Quiz # 3
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 23 x 3 ea. = 69
Complements 7 (x 1 + 1) = 14
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 17 x 1 ea. 17
1. This is a very good Christmas tree (PN).
very adverb to "good" "Good" is adj. to "tree"
2. Now my kite is going {over the tall trees}.
Now adv. to "is going"
trees obj. of "over"; pp is adv. to "is going"
3. I shall never be dry (PA) again.
never adverb to "shall be"
again adverb to "shall be"
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4. The rabbits slept {in their warm home} and did not come out very often.
home obj. of "in"; pp is adv. to "slept"
their adj. to "home"
5. {In the fall} they had stored away nuts (DO) and acorns (DO) {in little holes}
{in the ground}.
away adverb to "had stored"
holes obj. of "in"; pp is adv. to "had stored"
little adjective to "holes"
ground obj. of "in"; pp is adj. to "holes" (or adv. to "had stored")
6. Bobtail tied the string (DO) {to the short stem} {of the oak leaf}.
stem obj. of "to"; pp is adv. to "tied"
leaf obj. of "of"; pp is adj. to :stem"
oak adjective to "leaf"
7. But she did not tell them (IO) her secret (DO).
not adverb to "did tell"
her adjective to "secret"
8. *You* Don’t call {for rain}.
rain obj. of "for"; pp is adv. to "Don't call"
Assessment Quiz # 4
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 22 x 3 ea. = 66
Complements 10 (x 1 + 1) = 20
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 14 x 1 ea. 14
1. {In the woods} it was very cool (PA) and shady (PA) {under the pine trees}.
very adv. to "cool"
trees obj. of "under"; pp. is adv. to "was"
pine adj. to "trees"
2. He quickly sat up {on his hind legs} and held up his long ears (DO).
quickly adv. to "sat"
legs obj. of "on"; pp. is adv. to "sat"
3. This is not a good kite (PN).
not adv. to "is" (or to "good")
4. *You* See this big oak leaf (DO)?
big adj. to "leaf"
5. Bobtail gave it (IO) a toss (DO).
6. Where has everyone gone?
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Where adv. to "has gone"
7. They sat up {on their hind legs} and nibbled away happily.
up adv. to "sat"
happily adv. to "nibbled"
8. Four little bright eyes watched Jip (DO) {from the oak tree}.
Four adj. to "eyes"
tree obj. of "from"; pp. is adv. to "watched"
9. He picked himself (DO) {out of the big pile} {of leaves}, and shook his long
ears (DO) back and forth.
pile obj. of "out of"; pp. is adv. to "picked"
leaves obj. of "of"; pp. is adj. to "pile"
Assessment Quiz # 5
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 23 x 3 ea. = 69
Complements 8 (x 1 + 1) = 16
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 15 x 1 ea. 15
Assessment Quiz # 6
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 23 x 3 ea. = 69
Complements 10 (x 1 + 1) = 20
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 11 x 1 ea. 11
1. The early morning sun was just beginning to shine {through the bamboo trees}.
just Adv. to "was beginning to shine"
trees Obj. of prep. "through"; pp. is adv. to "to shine"
In later KISS levels, students will have the option of explaining "to shine" as an infinitive
that functions as the direct object of "was beginning."
2. The windows {of the queer little house} were open (PA).
3. They took the crowded rice plants (DO) {from the seed bed} and planted them
(DO) {in the mud} {of the rice field}.
crowded Adj. to "plants"
mud Obj. of prep. "in"; pp. is adv. to "planted"
field Obj. of prep. "of"; pp. is adj. to "mud"
4. Manuel gave the carabao (IO) some hay (DO).
5. Bananas and rice are a fine breakfast (PN).
fine Adj. to "breakfast"
6. *You* Change your shirt (DO) and trousers (DO) quickly.
quickly Adv. to "Change"
7. I have caught a big mud fish (DO) {without a fish trap}.
big Adj. to "fish"
trap Obj. of prep. "without"; pp. is adv. to "have caught"
fish Adj. to "trap"
8. You must help us (IO) {with the rice plants} today.
plants Obj. of prep. "with"; pp. is adv. to "must help"
Some grammarians may explain "us" as a direct object here, so I would also accept that
explanation.
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Assessment Quiz # 7
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 24 x 3 ea. = 72
Complements 5 (x 1 + 1) = 10
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 18 x 1 ea. 18
1. So Juan was “It.” (PN)
2. Mother and the children climbed {into the two-wheeled carriage}.
carriage Obj. of prep. "into"; pp. is adv. to "climbed"
two-wheeled Adj. to "carriage"
3. {In some} {of the fields} the rice was ripe (PA).
some Obj. of prep. "In"; pp. is adv. to "was"
fields Obj. of prep "of"; pp. is adj. to "some"
4. {On the back} {of the carriage} he hung a lighted lantern (DO).
back Obj. of prep. "On"; pp. is adv. to "hung"
carriage Obj. of prep "of"; pp. is adj. to "back"
lighted Adj. to "lantern"
5. Juan had to hop {to each stick}, pick it (DO) up, and hop back {with it} {to
the stone}.
stick Obj. of prep. "to"; pp. is adv. to "had to hop"
up Adv. to "pick"
it (2nd) Obj. of prep. "with"; pp is adv. to "hop"
stone Obj. of prep. "to"; pp is adv. to "hop"
6. Finally the road left the ocean (DO), and ran along {between fields and fields}
{of rice}.
Finally Adv. to "left"
fields (2nd) Obj. of prep. "between"; pp. is adv. to "ran"
rice Obj. of prep "of"; pp. is adj. to "fields"
7. *You* Wake up!
8. The squealing {of the pig} could be heard {above the shouts} {of laughter}
{of the boys}.
pig Obj. of prep. "of"; pp. is adj. (or adv.) to "squealing"
shouts Obj. of prep "above"; pp. is adv. to "could be heard"
laughter Obj. of prep. "of"; pp. is adj. to "shouts"
boys Obj. of prep "of"; pp. is adj. to "laughter" and/or "shouts"
Assessment Quiz # 8
Complete Analysis Key
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Words in S or V slots 22 x 3 ea. = 66
Complements 10 (x 1 + 1) = 20
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 14 x 1 ea. 14
5. She gave her (IO) a nice dress (DO) and a pair (DO) {of shoes}.
shoes obj. of prep. "of"; pp. is adj. to "pair"
6. Susie was always pleasant (PA) {in her play} {with other children}.
play obj. of prep. "in"; pp. is adv. to "was"
children obj. of "with"; pp. is adv to "was" and/or adj. to "play"
7. She loved to go {about the house} and get things (DO) {for her mother}, and {in
this way} save her (IO) many steps (DO).
house obj. of prep. "about"; pp. is adv. to "loved to go"
mother obj. of prep "for"; pp. is adv. to "get" and/or adj. to "things"
Later, students will learn that "to go," "get," and "save" can be explained as infinitives
that function as the direct objects of "loved."
Assessment Quiz # 9
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 25 x 3 ea. = 75
Complements 8 (x 1 + 1) = 16
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 9 x 1 ea. 9
Assessment Quiz # 10
Complete Analysis Key
Words in S or V slots 23 x 3 ea. = 69
Complements 7 (x 1 + 1) = 14
Adj., Adv., + Prep. Phrases 17 x 1 ea. 17
One little bird had broken its wing (DO) and could not fly {with the others} [Adv.
to "could fly"]. It was alone [#1]
{in the cold world} [Adv. to "was"] {of frost and snow}
[Adj. to "world"]. The forest looked warm (PA), and it made its way (DO) {to the
trees} [Adj. to "way" or Adv. to "made"] as well as it could, to ask {for help} [Adv. to
"ask"].
Complete Analysis Key
WINTER was coming, | and the birds had flown far [#2] {to the south}, [Adv. to
"south" where the air was warm (PA)] and [Adv. to "south" *where* they could find
berries (DO) to eat [#3]]. | One little bird had broken its wing (DO) and could not fly
{with the others}. | It was alone [#1] {in the cold world} {of frost and snow}. | The forest
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looked warm (PA), | and it [#4] made its way (DO) {to the trees} as well [ [#5] as it