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UNIQUE SENSES

Nyah is a simple girl who lives a simple life with her family. She thought
it’s already perfect. However, things aren’t as perfect as she thinks it is. One
night while going home, she found herself inside their house with another man
whom she doesn’t even know and there lies her parent’s on the floor. With so
much emotion going on inside of her she stands still crying herself out that her
beloved family is gone. The man saw her and there she realize she needed to run
as fast as she could to get away from that man who gives her a signal that
something bad will happen. While running across the street, she was hit by a
truck and was rush to the hospital.
Luckily she was saved however she was in coma for 60 days. Upon waking
up, she cannot remember anything that happened that night that her parents
were massacred. Everything seems normal to her aside from the change in her
sense of sight where her right eye turned into green and she can see and smell
through it. She was in panic and everything doesn’t seem right. She doesn’t
know what to do, do not know where to go and doesn’t know who she is. The
doctor who saved her life, took her in and adopted her as he sees his daughter
who passed away 2 years ago in her. He was the one who took care of her and
she considers him as his own father.
On the night of the incident, Ethan was with his younger sister which is
Nyah. He was the one who raise her ever since their parent’s died. He loves him
so much that he is willing to do everything just to make her happy. Nyah was
hospitalized because of over fatigue. Ethan went to the nurse station to talk to
them regarding the condition of his sister.
The mysterious man went to the hospital just knowing the name of Nyah
to kill her as she will serve as the only witness for his crime. Since, he saw
Ethan’s sister with tag “Nyah” he assumes that she was the same Nyah who had
the accident, he did not hesitate and slit her throat. Ethan who came back from
the nurse station saw his sister who was suffering a lot, lost his mind and was
crying a lot, shouting for help that his beloved sister was killed. After a few days,
he went to his work without his senses and was feeling numb as it doesn’t sink in
to him that his sister is not with him anymore. He got into an accident and was
slip into the pool. He woke up in the hospital where he do not feel anything at
all. He cannot feel any pain and that’s when he realize he lost his sense of touch.
In the funeral, Ethan vows to give justice to his sister’s death. He
promised to work hard to become a policeman so he can access the file of his
sister and investigate on what really happened that night. He promised to look
for the culprit and kill that person himself.
Few years after, Nyah worked so hard to make her father proud of her.
She was working as an apprentice in a clinic that her father built. They lived
happily ignoring the past that she can’t even remember. She uses contact lenses
to hide her right eye. She can still see smell using that eye but only her knows
about it. She was asked to buy some food for all the staff so she hurriedly grabs
the car and went to the café. When she was finished, she went back and drove
her car, when she hit Ethan on his motorcycle chasing a theft. She immediately
checked on Ethan and was so afraid when she saw him bleeding but then Ethan
grab her keys and went to the car to chase the theft. She went into the car too,
as she was so confused why the man she hit was not even complaining about
being hurt.
She accompanied Ethan while he was still chasing the theft. The theft
blends in to a lot of people so Ethan would find it so hard to look for him.
However, Nyah saw the scent of the theft so she grab Ethan’s hand and followed
the scent. Ethan was so confused but he still followed her. Nyah was so confident
that she said “I’ll help you find that theft:” She has that fascination with detective
stories and find this as an opportunity for her to test her senses.
She followed the theft until they found it stop in a public sauna. She told
Ethan that the owner of that certain locker was the theft. Ethan was not that
sure if he should trust the girl but this is the only way he can be in the detective
team so he waited for the man to go into that locker and finally he saw the theft
and arrested him.
She thanked her and asked for her name which she said it was Nyah. He
was so shocked that she had the same name with his sister. She saw his reaction
and was curious on what happened. He ignored her and went back to his
superior. The team leader, was amazed by him catching the theft so he was
promoted to the detective team. He has now the access to the case of his sister
and will be able to investigate on the case.
Nyah can’t help but think of him and was so worried that she thought that
she owe Nathan a treatment. In a café, they saw each other again so Nyah took
the chance to offer him a treatment at her father’s clinic to compensate with the
injury that Ethan had. However, Ethan does not want to do this and instead ask
her to help him about his investigation. She was shocked that he wanted her to
help him but also thought that this is the chance for her to be in an actual
detective duty.
Ethan hired her as an apprentice, but he said in order for her to be
officially included in the investigation she needs to let him know her secret on
how she found the theft the first time they met. She was hesitant but decided to
tell him the truth since she thinks, he couldn’t be a bad guy since his a
policeman. She told him that she had an accident in the past and because of that
she acquired her ability to see scents. She thought Ethan will be shock but he did
not. Ethan also shared to her that he also got into an accident and he acquired
the ability to not feel anything like pain, or even taste food.
They had tested each other’s ability and trusted each other in solving the
case. Upon tracking all the things that happened in the past, they found out that
the Nyah had an accident was also the same day that Ethan’s sister died. They
were thinking that’s not just a coincidence as Ethan’s sister and Nyah have the
same name. Nyah also explained to Ethan and she could not remember anything
and was afraid that something terrible might had happened in the past that’s
why she choose to forget everything.
Ethan wanted to help Nyah too so he went alone looking for answers. He
went to the place that he found that had the same incident as Nyah and trace
back their house. There he saw a diary about what happened and who was the
mysterious man who killed Nyah’s parents. Ethan then realized that his sister was
mistakenly thought by the killer as Nyah who is the daughter of those who were
killed. He was so shocked that he wanted to hate Nyah having the same name as
his sister. He wanted her to remember so that she can let them know the face of
the killer and they can put an end to all of his crimes.
Nyah was working on her father’s clinic when fragments of her memory
keep on flashing back on her mind. She was so afraid when a face of a man
flashes in her mind. She immediately calls Ethan and informed him of what she
remembers. Ethan asked her to describe the man and they ask someone to draw
the person’s face. Upon confirming the face from Nyah, Ethan submitted the
image to his superior and they look into all the places in the city to find that man.
They found him in a squater’s area doing some majong and they immediately
arrested him. During the investigation, Nyah’s memories came all back and there
she finally stood up to serve as witness against the killer. The killer was found
guilty with all the evidences that the policemen gathered.
Nyah was so angry at him for killing her parent’s and she was also blaming
herself for she was the reason Ethan’s sister was killed. Ethan never blamed her
and said that it is not her fault as she was still young at that time. He explained
that she was also a victim and it is a good thing that they both got the justice
they had always wanted.
DREAMS
Your dreams do come true
Just have to work hard for it
Will eventually paid off someday.

MIRACLES
Miracles happen every single moment
You have to keep that faith burning
Someone from above is watching.

COST OF AMBITION
Nights turned into mornings,
Lots of colleagues, but few are friends,
Being misunderstood is almost as always,
Being single is normal, unless you’re lucky enough,
To find someone who understands your lifestyle,
You are obliged to do good but not better than them,
For these reasons, more things will be done alone.
CREATIVE WRITING

Submitted by:
IVAN JOSEPH P. NABATAR

Submitted to:
JERLYN G. GALANG

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