BERSAMA MENUJU SURGA-NYA

Synopsis
Fadlan (18) a student who saw his father too often (45) and his mother (42) quarreled. He is still
unstable, with such an environment that has an impact on his behavior, he is lazy, lazy to worship and as
if he does not care about the surrounding conditions. Until the words of his classmate, Wafa (18), touched
his heart, made him think that he was the one who could change his life, his family, to be better together
by starting to get closer to the creator. With the attitude, worship and communication shown to his
parents, slowly but surely his life changed, his father and mother no longer quarreled and Fadlan became
better in terms of religion and attitude, made him think again, made him aware of Heaven, the place he
should back.

The message to be conveyed is that we are the ones who can start to change our lives for the
better. Every problem there will be a solution, by remembering God, worshiping Him and being sure.

The title : Bersama Menuju Surga-Nya

Theme : The Story of the Missing Heaven
Duration : 5-7 minutes
Category : Drama
Players : 1. Sahid (Fadlan)
2. Fatraya (Wafa)
3. A.N. Fajri (father)
4. Amanda Risma (Mother)
5. Student (4BPA)

Scenario writer: Mellina Sekarsari

Music: 1. Anandito Dwis - Loves Loss
2. Kang Abay - Soulmate of the Hereafter
3. Adera - More Beautiful
Location: 1. Sriwijaya State Polytechnic
-Coridor Adm. Business
- Campus Mosque Area
-Class Room (4 BPA)
2. House
-Living room
-Room
-Kitchen

1. INT. HOUSE FADLAN - NIGHT

Fadlan (18) woke up from sleep, he left his room when he heard the argument of his father (45)
and his mother (42).

Father
You, look at this shirt (throw) not neat at all.
 mother
This is neat !, I am always wrong in your eyes.

Fadlan
Why are you guys? Always fighting, trivial things, ashamed to be heard by neighbors.

Fadlan left the house with resentment in his chest.

The second time, broken glass, crying and screaming were heard from the living room, a common
place that was always a place for contention. Fadlan was annoyed to see that it kept repeating, he went
straight into the room, closed the door to the room quite loudly. He sat leaning on the door, he hit his knee
and lowered his head, he held his chest which was painful. The screaming sound from his mother was
heard to the room, Fadlan took his cellphone and headseat on the bed and immediately paired his headseat
to his ears, he sighed, lay down and closed his eyes.
FX Anandito Dwis – Mencintai Kehilangan

2. INT. CLASSROOM - AFTERNOON

The lesson is over, but there are still students in the class. Adhan dzuh echoed, a sign of the men
to pray Friday. Fadlan was still in his class ignoring the call to prayer, he lay down in the two chairs that
he united. Wafa (18), a female friend, sat in her chair with two tables from Fadlan's place, she was busy
with her laptop, but she rebuked Fadlan while shouting a little knowing that Fadlan was not moving from
his current position.

WAFA
Fadlan, Fadlan! (While looking at Fadlan).

FADLAN
Eem ..

WAFA
What are you not praying for? You didn't pray last week, right ?, you know, three times ...

FADLAN
Already, keep quiet. I know, I don't have to take care of my life.

WAFA
What?
Hmm ... astaghfirullah.
 His other friend just looked and shook his head with Fadlan's attitude. Wafa put his things in a
bag and went straight home.

3. EXT. CAMPUS CORRIDOR - AFTERNOON

Fadlan sat while playing games on his cellphone. Wafa saw Fadlan, but just passed by. Fadlan
was surprised because Wafa did not reprimand him at all. Fadlan stopped the game and chased Wafa.
Fadlan talked with Wafa while walking.

FADLAN
It's amazing that you don't have my country anymore, remembering for Friday prayers.

WAFA
Is it necessary for me to remember every week?

FADLAN
You are the only one who cares, but you don't know what my life is like.

Wafa stopped his steps,

WAFA
Whatever your life is, there is no reason not to pray. Because prayer can change lives. You, you are a leader
for yourself, you are the one who can change it and one more, you are a candidate for an imam, you have
no desire to bring your family to Heaven?

Fadlan was silent, Wafa left Fadlan in his reflection.

FX Kang Abay – Jodoh Dunia Akhirat

4. INT. RUMAH FADLAN - SIANG

Fadlan entered the house, he saw the scene again, his facial expression immediately changed,
seeing an argument like endless. He went to the room and returned to the living room where the fight took
place while carrying a container. Fadlan prayed in the room, his parents saw, they were surprised,
stopped. His mother went to the room and his father left the house. After the prayer, Fadlan rubbed his
face, he felt comfortable, there was comfort in his chest. His father went home, he saw Fadlan was
reciting in the middle room, a space that often became a place of contention. His father justified his
clothes ape and sat on the sofa. Fadlan read the meaning of the verse an-nisa [4]: 122 in the Qur'an,
 FADLAN
Heaven that flows beneath the rivers ... (smiles).

Fadlan saw his father and finished his reading. He sat down, trying to talk to his father. Fadlan
also spoke with his mother who at the time was in the kitchen, like a child and an elderly person.

5. EXT. CAMPUS PARK - MORNING

The streets, the trees with accompanying buildings looked beautiful to Fadlan, the air blew so
cool, he remembered the meaning of the sura rahman.

FADLAN
So which of your Lord's favor do you deny? This world is beautiful, but I'm sure, Heaven is more beautiful,
more comfortable, I'm curious about that (smile). Can I enter it? (Looking up at the sky) I want to enter it
with the people I love (clenching my hands). I have to start, because I can change it.

6. INT. HOUSE FADLAN - NIGHT

Mrs. Fadlan prepared food at the dining table, Fadlan and her father sat in the dining table chair.
It feels a long time ago, it feels a little awkward with that condition, but they eat the food that is there.
Fadlan gestured by holding his father's shoulder while nodding his head after finishing eating. They
stretched out in the middle of the room, Fadlan smiled, they prayed together.

7. INT. CLASSROOM - AFTERNOON

The lesson was over, Fadlan immediately rushed out of the classroom, but one of his friends
asked,

CLASSMATE
Where are you going?

FADLAN
To the mosque

Fadlan immediately glanced at Wafa who was sitting in his chair, Wafa realized that, he was
surprised, but smiled as Fadlan left.

8. EXT. CAMPUS MASJID AREA - SIANG

Fadlan took ablution and prayers at the mosque.

FADLAN
If I am allowed, I want to go to two places, Mecca and Heaven, I want to love You in truth, I want to meet and
go back to Heaven, the place I should return to.
 FX ADERA-LEBIH INDAH

"For him (humans) there are angels who always take turns, from the front and back. They guard it
by Allah's command. Indeed, Allah will not change the state of a people before they change their own
condition. And if God wants evil against a people, then no one can reject it and there is no protector for
them other than Him. "(Surat Ar-Ra'd [13]: 11)
 Sinopsis
Fadlan(18) seorang mahasiswa yang terlalu sering melihat ayah(45) dan ibunya(42) bertengkar.
Dia masih labil, dengan lingkungan seperti itu sangat berdampak pada tingkah lakunya, dia jadi pemalas,
malas untuk beribadah dan seakan tidak peduli dengan kondisi sekitarnya. Hingga perkataan dari teman
kelasnya, Wafa(18), menyentuh hatinya, membuatnya berpikir bahwa dialah yang bisa mengubah
hidupnya, keluarganya, untuk sama-sama menjadi lebih baik dengan memulai mendekatkan diri pada
sang pencipta. Dengan sikap, ibadah serta komunikasi yang ditunjukkan pada kedua orang tuanya,
perlahan tapi pasti hidupnya berubah, ayah dan ibunya tidak lagi bertengkar dan Fadlan menjadi lebih
baik dari segi agama juga sikap, membuatnya berpikir kembali, membuatnya tersadar akan adanya Surga,
tempat yang seharusnya dia kembali.

Pesan yang ingin disampaikan, Bahwa, kitalah yang bisa memulai merubah hidup kita menjadi
lebih baikSetiap masalah akan ada jalan keluarnya, dengan mengingat Allah, beribadah kepadaNya dan
yakin.

Judul Film : BERSAMA MENUJU SURGA-Nya

Tema : Cerita Hijrah Sang Perindu Surga
Durasi : 5-7 menit
Katagori : Drama
Pemain : 1. Sahid (Fadlan)
2. Fatraya (Wafa)
3. A.N. Fajri (Ayah)
4. Amanda Risma (Ibu)
5. Mahasiswa/i (4BPA)

Penulis Skenario : Mellina Sekarsari

Musik : 1. Anandito Dwis – Mencintai Kehilangan
2. Kang Abay – Jodoh Dunia Akhirat
3. Adera – Lebih Indah
Lokasi : 1. Politeknik Negeri Sriwijaya
-Koridor Adm. Bisnis
-Area Masjid Kampus
-Ruang Kelas (4 BPA)
2. Rumah
-Ruang Tengah
-Kamar
-Dapur
 1. INT. RUMAH FADLAN – MALAM
Fadlan(18) terbangun dari tidur, dia keluar kamarnya saat mendengar pertengkaran ayah(45) dan ibunya(42).

Ayah
Kamu itu, lihat baju ini(melempar) tidak rapi sama sekali.

Ibu
Ini sudah rapi!, aku dimata kamu itu selalu salah.

Fadlan
Kalian itu kenapa sih? Selalu bertengkar, hal sepele, malu didengar tetangga.

Fadlan keluar rumah dengan kekesalan didadanya.

Kali kedua, Pecahan kaca, tangisan serta teriakkan terdengar dari ruang tengah, tempat biasa yang selalu jadi
tempat pertengkaran. Fadlan kesal melihat hal itu terus terulang, dia langsung masuk ke kamar, menutup
pintu kamar dengan cukup keras. Dia duduk bersandar dipintu, dia memukul lututnya dan menundukkan
kepala, dia memegang dadanya yang terasa sakit. Suara teriakkan dari ibunya terdengar sampai ke kamar,
Fadlan mengambil handphone serta headseat diatas tempat tidur dan langsung memasangkan headseat
ketelinganya, dia menghela nafas, membaringkan tubuhnya dan memejamkan mata.

FX Anandito Dwis – Mencintai Kehilangan

2. INT. RUANG KELAS – SIANG

Pelajaran sudah berakhir, namun masih ada mahasiswa/i berada di kelas. Adzan dzuhur berkumandang, tanda
para lelaki untuk sholat jum’at. Fadlan masih di kelasnya tidak menghiraukan suara adzan itu, dia
membaringkan tubuhnya didua kursi yang dia satukan. Wafa(18) teman wanitanya, duduk dikursinya
yang berjarak dua meja dari tempat Fadlan, dia sibuk dengan laptopnya, namun dia menegur Fadlan
sambil sedikit berteriak mengetahui Fadlan tak beranjak dari posisinya sekarang.

WAFA
Fadlan, Fadlan!(sambil melihat Fadlan).

FADLAN
Eem..

WAFA
Kamu gak sholat jum’at apa?. Minggu kemarin kamu juga gak sholat kan?, kamu tau kan, kalau tiga kali..

FADLAN
Udah, diam bawel. Gue tau, gak usah ngurusin hidup gue.

WAFA (C.U)
What?
Hm.. astaghfirullah.

Temannya yang lain hanya melihat dan menggelengkan kepala dengan sikap Fadlan. Wafa memasukkan
barang-barangnya ke dalam tas dan langsung pulang.
FADE OUT

3. EXT. KORIDOR KAMPUS – SIANG

Fadlan duduk sambil memainkan games dihandphone-nya. Wafa melihat Fadlan, namun melewatinya begitu
saja. Fadlan heran karena Wafa tak sama sekali menegurnya. Fadlan memberhentikan permainannya dan
mengejar Wafa. Fadlan berbicara dengan Wafa sambil berjalan.

FADLAN
Tumben kamu gak negur gue lagi, ngingetin buat sholat jum’at.

WAFA
Emang perlu ya saya ingetin tiap minggu?

FADLAN
Cuma kamu yang perhatian, tapi kamu gak tau hidup gue kayak gimana.

Wafa memberhentikan langkahnya,

WAFA
Gimana pun hidup kamu, gak ada alasan untuk gak sholat. Karena sholatlah yang bisa merubah hidup. Kamu,
kamu itu pemimpin untuk diri kamu sendiri, kamulah yang bisa memulai merubahnya dan satu lagi, kamu
itu calon imam, kamu gak punya keinginan membawa keluarga kamu ke Surga?

Fadlan terdiam, Wafa meniggalkan Fadlan dalam renungannya.

FX Kang Abay – Jodoh Dunia Akhirat

4. INT. RUMAH FADLAN – SIANG

Fadlan memasuki rumah, dia melihat adegan itu lagi, ekspresi wajahnya langsung berubah bete, melihat
pertengkaran seperti tak berujung. Dia menuju kamar dan kembali lagi ke ruang tengah tempat
pertengkaran itu terjadi sambil membawa sejadah. Fadlan sholat di ruang itu, kedua orang tuanya melihat,
mereka heran, berhenti. Ibunya pergi menuju kamar dan ayahnya keluar rumah. Setelah sholat, Fadlan
mengusap wajahnya, dia merasa nyaman, ada kenyamanan didadanya. Ayahnya pulang ke rumah,
dilihatnya Fadlan sedang mengaji diruang tengah, ruang yang sering menjadi tempat pertengkaran.
Ayahnya membenarkan kera bajunya dan duduk disofa. Fadlan membaca arti ayat an-nisa [4]:122 dalam
al-qur'an,

FADLAN (V.O)
Surga yang mengalir dibawahnya sungai-sungai… (tersenyum).

Fadlan melihat ayahnya dan menyelesaikan bacaannya. Dia duduk, mencoba berbicara dengan ayahnya.
Fadlan juga berbicara dengan ibunya yang saat itu ada didapur, layaknya anak dan orang tua.

5. EXT. TAMAN KAMPUS – PAGI

Jalanan, pepohonan dengan gedung-gedung menyertainya terlihat indah bagi Fadlan, udara berhembus begitu
sejuk, dia teringat arti dari surah ar-rahman.

FADLAN (V.O)
Maka nikmat Tuhanmu yang manakah yang kamu dustakan?. Dunia ini indah, tapi aku yakin, Surga itu lebih
indah, lebih nyaman, aku penasaran akan itu (tersenyum). Bisakah aku memasukinya?(melihat ke langit)
 aku ingin memasukinya bersama orang-orang yang aku sayang(mengepal tangan). Harus memulai, karena
aku bisa merubahnya.

6. INT. RUMAH FADLAN – MALAM

Ibu Fadlan menyiapkan makanan dimeja makan, Fadlan dan ayahnya duduk dikursi meja makan. Terasa
sudah lama, terasa sedikit canggung dengan kondisi itu, namun mereka memakan makanan yang ada.
Fadlan memberikan isyarat dengan memegang pundak ayahnya sambil menganggukkan kepala setelah
selesai makan. Mereka membentangkan sejadah diruang tengah, Fadlan tersenyum, mereka sholat
bersama.

CUT TO

7. INT. RUANG KELAS – SIANG

Pelajaran selesai, Fadlan langsung bergegas ke luar kelas, namun salah satu temannya bertanya,

TEMAN KELAS
Mau kemana?

FADLAN
Ke Masjidlah

Fadlan langsung melirik Wafa yang sedang duduk di kursinya, Wafa menyadari itu, dia heran, namun
tersenyum saat Fadlan berlalu pergi.

8. EXT. AREA MASJID KAMPUS – SIANG

Fadlan mengambil wudhu dan sholat di masjid.

FADLAN (V.O)
Bila aku diizinkan, aku ingin pergi ke dua tempat, Mekkah dan Surga, aku ingin mencintai-Mu sebenar-
benarnya cinta, aku ingin bertemu dan kembali ke Surga, tempat yang seharusnya aku kembali.

FX ADERA-LEBIH INDAH

“Baginya (manusia) ada malaikat-malaikat yang selalu menjaganya bergiliran, dari depan dan belakangnya.
Mereka menjaganya atas perintah Allah. Sesungguhnya Allah tidak akan mengubah keadaan suatu kaum
sebelum mereka mengubah keadaan diri mereka sendiri. Dan apabila Allah menghendaki keburukan
terhadap suatu kaum, maka tak ada yang dapat menolaknya dan tidak ada pelindung bagi mereka selain
Dia.”(QS Ar-Ra’d [13]: 11)