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Trait 6 5 4 3 2 1
Unity/Focus (controlled by a presents a cogent, presents a presents an presents an presents a simplistic, presents an
thesisdriven thoughtful, thesis appropriate, thesis inconsistent or inappropriate, or inadequate, thesis
thesis or topic sentence claim)
analysis of or centered analysis of based analysis of or illogical thesis incoherent thesis irrelevant analysis of
response to the text or response to the response to the text related analysis of or tangential analysis of or response to the
You have a good focus and text response to the text or response to the text, ignoring the
stay well on track; however, which reflects an text, one that may topic’s demands,
there is quite a lot of incomplete suggest some unacceptable
understanding of the significant
repetition.
X
text or topic misunderstanding of
the text or the topic;
X
of the main problem. This
distracted the readers off the
true problem of your essay.
X
rhetorically effective sentences variety inaccurate word one in which
sentence variety choice; monotonous language word
or fragmented choice and syntax
sentence structure, obscure meaning,
inappropriate unacceptable
X
occasional major displaying many a pervasive pattern
merge short sentences into errors in grammar repeated errors in of errors in word
and usage or grammar and usage choice, sentence
longer sentences. Enhance
frequent minor structure, grammar
transition to improve errors and usage,
coherence. unacceptable
X
competent unacceptable
number of the quote. Also,
specify the name of the
referred studies.
Two Strengths:
1. Good unity and focus
2. Good reference and scientific sources
1. Rewrite some confusing sentences and citation
2. The solution part can be elaborated more.