8 point Odyssey paper

by Celeste Denny

Submission date: 16-Oct-2018 08:06AM (UT C-0400)

Submission ID: 1020915475
File name: Odyssey_paper.docx (21.35K)
Word count: 292
Character count: 1458
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Clear. Nice
work.

T ense Shif t

Improper Cit at ion

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Watch tense throughout

Sp.

Improper Cit at ion

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8 point Odyssey paper
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

/0 Instructor

Celeste -- your claim is good and clear. I know

exactly what to look f or as I go into your paper.

Your quote integration, too, is f luid and creates a

continuous f low to your paper.

What I think you need to look out f or is choosing the

best evidence f or your points. I don't always think
that what you're saying in your analysis is in support
of the quote you've given. T his might also mean that
some of your quotes are longer (not whole
sentences, but with, perhaps, more context).

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Nice work here.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Nice work here.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the

Text Comment. Clear. Nice work.

Strikethrough.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

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I think you could probably add some evidence about their plan here.

QM Tense Shif t
T ense Shif t:
Verb tenses should be consistent throughout your writing in order to make it clear when an
action takes place. You will conf use your readers by switching f rom one tense to another within
the same sentence or paragraph. When discussing literature or a published source document of
some kind, readers expect you to use the present tense, even though the source you're writing
about may have been written many years ago. When writing an essay about historical events,
however, readers generally expect that you use the past tense.T ense Shif t

QM Improper Citation
Improper citation:
Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to f ind links to inf ormation regarding specif ic
citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

Comment 3
Based on your ref erence to conf idence in the f ollowing sentence, I don't think you need this. It
doesn't really add any additional inf ormation or analysis like the next sentence does.

Text Comment. Watch tense throughout

Strikethrough.

Comment 5
T his is true and good, but is it relevant here to your claim?

QM Sp.
Spelling error

Sp. T his word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

Comment 6
How does this analysis relate to the given quote? Is there evidence about Athena that you
could use there instead?

QM Improper Citation
Improper citation:
Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to f ind links to inf ormation regarding specif ic
citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html
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T ry not to end with assumptions about what is to come; rather try to recap, in a new way, what
you've worked through in your paper.

Comment 8
Centered, no colon

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