Professional Documents
Culture Documents
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Instructions:
1) Re-read the paper (and teacher feedback).
2) Complete this reflection sheet.
3) Revise the paper accordingly and highlight any changes.
4) Submit the revision and this reflection sheet.
How did you perform in relation to the expectations of the writing rubric?
I performed well to the expectations of the writing rubric I received a 90 and the only mistakes I had were
grammar mistakes such as adding commas and getting rid of contractions.
What aspect of this piece did you do well? (give example/quotes to support claims)
I did well with having examples for blind ambition in today’s society for example I use the example of the
New Orleans Saints setting up bounties to win games. I also used the example of an athlete using steroids to
win games too. I also like the example I used of Donald Trump on building the wall because it’s something
that’s happening right now in today’s society.
What will you do better in your next writing assignment, and how will I do it?
In my next assignment I will add comas in the correct spot. I will go over the essay again to find mistakes
To what degree of success did you achieve your previously stated goal(s)?
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