Oops!

Beautiful and Shiny Can Also Be Dangerous

MAYYA FIQI KAMALA

DP 12031142

HI-4

MR. MARES SOPLANIT

LBPP LIA DEPOK

 OOPS! BEAUTIFUL AND SHINY CAN ALSO BE DANGEROUS

An Essay

By

Name : Mayya Fiqi Kamala

Student Card No : DP 12031142

Day : Saturday

Time : 13.00-17.00

Term : I / 2016

Class Teacher : Mr. Mares Soplanit

LBPP LIA DEPOK

Topic : Jewelry

Specific topic : The disadvantage of wearing gold jewelry for people

Purpose : To persuade

Type of Writing : Argumentative Essay

Title : Oops! Beautiful and Shiny Can Also Be Dangerous

Thesis Statement : There are several disadvantages of wearing gold jewelry

such as : affecting on a person’s health, safety of a

person and affecting the lifestyle of a person

Body Paragraphs:

I. First, wearing gold jewelry may affects on a person’s health

 Problem in nervous system

 Problem in capillary system

II. Second, wearing gold jewelry may affect on the safety of a

person

 women who wearing gold jewelry become the target of criminals

 gold jewelry sellers also become the target of criminals

III. Last but not least, wearing gold jewelry affects a person’s

lifestyle

 gold jewelry supports a person’s lifestyle

 gold jewelry also causes loss bring in investments

IV. Concluding Paragraph

In conclusion, people must be carefull in wearing gold jewelry

because it may affects on a person’s health, on the safety of a

person and on a person’s lifestyle.

 Do you like to wear gold jewelry? If you do, do you know the

disadvantages of wearing it? and what do you know about jewelry? Jewelry is

personal ornaments, such as necklaces, rings, or bracelets, that are typically

made from or contain jewels and precious metal. Besides has advantages,

gold jewelry also has disadvantages. There are several disadvantages of

wearing gold jewelry such as: affecting on a person’s health, safety of a

person and affecting the lifestyle of a person

First, wearing gold jewelry may affects on a person’s health. People

who like to wear gold rings are not only women but also men. Maybe they do

not know the impacts of wearing gold jewelry. According to health experts,

there are two health problems such as the problem with nervous system and

the problem with capillary system when someone wears gold jewelry. For

example, wearing small gold ring can put pressure on one’s finger. Men who

wearing gold jewelry for long time can also brings impacts on his blood and

his urine which contain a gold atom. It means men will be exposed to

alzheimer. Women will not be exposed alzheimer by wearing gold jewelry

because each month, women gets routine period. Another impacts on a

person’s health are impact in nervous system such as dizziness ,nausea, and

depression.

Second, wearing gold jewelry may affects on the safety of a person.

Usually, women wearing gold jewelry become the target of criminals and this

can interfere their safety. Women become the target because women usually

likes to flaunt their jewelry, such as gold ring. Women wearing gold jewelry to

flaunt their gold jewelry at the wrong place for example women in traditional

market wears gold jewelry when they sell vegetable in the morning. They are
vulnerable from crime such as robbery or peek pocket. Women who wear a lot

of gold jewelry usually lack of attention to themself. They are wearing gold

jewelry just to flaunt to other people. The target of criminals is not only people

who wear gold jewelry but also those who are gold jewelry sellers. Gold

jewelry sellers become the target of criminals because they have a lot of gold

on deposit safes and this is the reason from criminals to do crime. Besides

stealing gold from gold jewelry sellers have a giving more opportunity to get

more gold than stealing gold from people who wear gold.

Last but not least, wearing gold jewelry affects a person’s lifestyle.

Usually women who often wear gold jewelry always buy gold jewelry for their

lifestyle. In this era, gold jewerly such as gold ring supports a person’s

lifestyle. Women wearing gold jewelry so that they will be considered rich.

When “Lebaran” or “Hari Raya” comes, many women will go to imitation gold

sellers to buy and show gold jewelry to other people. Therefore many women

spend their money to full feel their lifestyle. It means they spend their money

to buy things that are not so important. In addition, gold jewelry also causes

loss in investments. One of disadvantages of gold in the form of jewelry is

vulnerable to damage. For example, ring often become dull. It means it can

lower the resale price. Gold jewelry is not a good form of investment.

In conclusion, people must be carefull in wearing gold jewelry because

it may affects on a person’s health, on the safety of a person and on a

person’s lifestyle. Wearing gold jewelry is not a bad idea, but people must

know disadvantages of wearing gold jewelry as supports a person’s lifestyle,

because it can cause them some problems.

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