 through an enormous development in the technology.

without any barriers, which I think positive step towards the global
advancement. Apart from the reduction in the unemployment, it is contributing to strengthen the economy of these states. I am of
the author is expected to write with
the opinion that the advantages of such development outweigh its pitfalls.
cautious language, which means she cannot jump to conclusion unless she has provided a
proof for his argument.
 The verb “to intend” is not a synonym of “to think”.
 Hasty generalization is perfectly okay in the IELTS Speaking test, but not in the Writing one (unless the author has provided an evidence, then he can
follow up with an anecdotal example).
 hedging in writing (the way of making cautious claims).
 Equally importantly, though, this development has broadened our horizon and has a very positive impact on our society
 I believe that this has more benefits than drawbacks.