Rhetoric Essay 2.

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by Mylene Ibus

Submission date: 14-Oct-2018 04:24PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 1019755830
File name: Rhetoric Essay 2.pdf
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

95
Mylene,

Well done here. You clearly understood the

rhetorical task and why each one of your claims was
important to a perspective audience. Other than a

/100
f ew grammar errors, this has been a very strong
analysis. I look f orward to your next paper.

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Sp. T his word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

Comment 1 | Lang & Design

You need a creative title

Comment 2
Good.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the

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Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Missing "," Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

Comment 3 | Rhet Focus

Good.

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 Hyph. Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

Comment 4 | Rhet Focus

Very good discussion here.

Hyph. Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

S/V T his subject and verb may not agree. Proof read the sentence to make sure the subject agrees
with the verb.

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Strikethrough.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Comment 6 | Rhet Focus

Very good discussion here

S/V T his subject and verb may not agree. Proof read the sentence to make sure the subject agrees
with the verb.

Missing "," Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

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RUBRIC: 30 1 DEFINITION RUBRIC

RHET FOCUS Advanced

Rhetorical Focus: Write f ormally and inf ormally, in-class and out-of -class, f or a variety of audiences and
purposes.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

ORGANIZ AT ION Advanced

Organize, f ocus, and communicate one’s thoughts clearly and ef f ectively to address a rhetorical situation.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

LANG & DESIGN Prof icient

Academic Language and Design: Recognize, evaluate, and employ the f eatures and contexts of language
and design that express and inf luence meaning and that demonstrate sensitivity to gender and cultural
dif f erences.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

CIT AT ION Advanced

Use your major’s customary citation style to ethically cite and communicate inf o f rom a variety of
appropriate sources

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC
DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED