IFIXIT RESUME

by Jose Mercado

Submission date: 11-Sep-2018 08:32PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 1000492952
File name: If ixit_resume.docx
Word count: 222
Character count: 1311
 Two Successes: Great job showing you have
experience leading, and great organization of
content. Two Challenges: Try being more concise
on a resume. You don't need the " I did " before the
actual actions you've done.

Bullet s--f ix

Try: "Notetaking, room booking, etc.--omit the opening

clause

Show Don't T ell

Whit e Space
IFIXIT RESUME
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Text Comment. T wo Successes: Great job showing you have experience leading, and
great organization of content. T wo Challenges: T ry being more concise on a resume. You don't
need the " I did " bef ore the actual actions you've done.

QM Bullets--f ix
Remember to use consistent syntax and grammar at the start of a set of bullet points.

Text Comment. T ry: "Notetaking, room booking, etc.--omit the opening clause

QM Show Don't Tell

Can you show your reader this is true, rather than just saying it's true?

QM White Space
White space is used to set sections apart. Avoid cramming headings and paragraphs together
and f ollow this common rule f or headings:
two white lines bef ore a heading, one white line af ter the heading. When creating columns
(which are vertical), separate them with vertical white space.
RUBRIC: IFIXIT RESUME RUBRIC 2

ORGANIZ AT ION Advanced

ABSENT OR BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or
BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
ef f ectively

PERSUASION Advanced

ABSENT OR BELOW Job description's details may not be addressed; evidence of qualif ications is lacking
BASIC or irrelevant

DEVELOPING Generalizations attempt to address the job's description; evidence of qualif ications
isn't yet adequate

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details address the job's description directly; evidence of qualif ications
is adequate

ADVANCED Specif ic details address the job's description directly and aptly; evidence of
qualif ications is plentif ul and convincing

DESIGN Prof icient

ABSENT OR BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the resume.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

READABILIT Y Prof icient

ABSENT OR BELOW Bullet Point clauses/phrases are hard to understand and structured inconsistently;
BASIC errors impede readability throughout.

DEVELOPING Bullet Point clauses/phrases may be hard to understand or structured inconsistently;

errors impede readability at times

PROFICIENT Bullet Point clauses/phrases are usually ef f ective and structured consistently; a f ew
 errors

ADVANCED Bullet Point clauses/phrases are ef f ective and structured consistently; nearly error
f ree

RHET . FOCUS Advanced

ABSENT OR BELOW Audience's needs are of ten not recognized: language needs adjustment f or the
BASIC audience. Purpose (to prove one is capable of the named team position) isn't clear or
achieved.

DEVELOPING Shows some attention to audience's needs and sometimes uses audience-
appropriate language. Purpose (to prove one is capable of the named team position)
may be unclear at times, and it may not be achieved convincingly.

PROFICIENT Shows attention to audience's needs and uses audience-appropriate language.

Purpose (to prove one is capable of the named team position) may be implied, but it's
clear and achieved.

ADVANCED Shows sophisticated attention to audience's needs and uses audience-appropriate

language. Purpose (to prove one is capable of the named team position) is clear and
achieved with style.