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Eman M. Eltukri
EDHP 586- Teaching Reading and Writing in a Second Language for the Literate Student
With the growing number of Libyan students granted scholarships to study in the United
States, students in Libya need assistance in academic English reading and writing. Providing
a course that aims at developing better understanding of the complex nature of academic
readings, improving their writing skills and enhancing their critical thinking is a crucial phase
for those students to succeed in their academic studies. From this perspective, this paper
demonstrates a specific unit from a reading and writing class in which reading and writing
activities are integrated together through authentic samples of academic texts that are related
Context
The prospective students are adult Libyans who are either teaching assistants and/or
master's degree holders from different majors at the University of Garyounis in Benghazi,
Libya. They all have scholarships to study towards their different degrees in the United
States. Their levels of English proficiency are upper intermediate and their first language is
Arabic. The class has an approximate number of 20 students. It consists of males and females
whom ages range between 24 to 30 years. The class is a two hour daily session for 2 months.
The learning goals of the present unit are (a) to practice the following reading strategies:
speed reading, note taking, visualizing the main ideas, scanning, skimming, and reading for
the main idea vs. reading for details; (b) to build students' vocabulary; and (c) to practice
The curriculum consists of 5 units. Each unit has 2 chapters. The current unit is unit 4
which consists of chapter 7 and 8. In the previous units, students have already been
introduced to some of the reading strategies such as skimming and scanning as well as some
writing strategies such as summarizing, writing an outline and compare and contrast. In the
current unit students will be reviewing and doing more practice for some of the strategies
they have already learned in the previous classes as well as learning new strategies.
Academic Reading and Writing Unit 3
Therefore, the present unit, for example, starts by reviewing speed-reading strategies and
Reading Instruction
For the reading part, this material (Williams, 2007) has been chosen because it provides a
variety of reading strategies via authentic academic reading passages that are related to the
American history and culture which might be of help for those students who are going to
study in the US. Also, the activities in the material prepare students to standardized tests such
as TOFEL and GRE readings and writings. Moreover, the material has pre-reading and post-
reading activities. Pre-reading activities are activities that introduce students to new
surveying the content of the chapter, so that they can get an overall idea about the topic and
what they expect to learn. Post-reading activities are tasks that ask students to demonstrate
their understanding of the text in such ways as answering reading comprehension questions
The methodology that will be used in order to teach this unit is to have students, in most of
the activities, work individually at first and then work either in pairs or groups in order to
share their strategies together (Grabe & Stoller, 2002). For instance, in the pre-reading tasks
like understanding the content of the topic from pictures; students examine each picture
individually and then they discuss them and answer the questions for comprehension related
to the pictures either in pairs or in groups. In this way, students will have the opportunity to
share different viewpoints and learn from one another different thinking skills.
The types of assessment that will be conducted are class activities which are tasks like
scanning to find specific information, surveying and visualizing the main ideas. Also,
assessment. Moreover, at the end of chapter 7 in this unit, there will be a reading test in
The reading and writing are integrated in a way that makes the writing practice based on
the reading section. In other words, in both pre-reading and post-reading activities, in
addition to practicing reading strategies, students will have different writing tasks such as
summarizing, outlining, taking notes and writing reflections. Moreover, there is a writing
task after every post-reading activity in which students write paragraphs or essays that are
Writing Instruction
Since the reading and writing sections are integrated, the choice of this material (Williams,
2007) is based on the idea that at the same time as students continually read and analyze
academic English, they begin to acquire insight into its organization and style, and their own
writing develops a more academic tone. For instance, at the same time as the students read
the reading passage, they will learn how to take notes, write an outline, summaries and
reflections. Also, they will write in-class essay in order to compare and contrast specific ideas
Based on the idea that "writing is learned, rather than taught, and the teacher's best
methods are flexibility and support" (Hyland, 2002, p.78), the methodology that will be used
is encouraging students to write as much as possible individually, and then trade their pieces
of writing in order to have peer feedback and examine different writing styles.
The types of assessment that will be conducted for the writing section are class activities
such as writing summaries, reflections, notes and in class-essays. Moreover, after finishing
with chapter 7 of this unit, there will be a writing test in which students will be evaluated
subjectively.
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After having given information about the target students, the reading and writing
instruction, the following part will be demonstrating the weekly plan for the reading and
Preparing to read:
1. Teacher reviews the strategies for increasing reading speed 30 min
(App. A).
2. Students practice speed-reading strategies by reading,
calculating time and answering questions for comprehension (App. A).
3. Now, students read the text "The Roots of American Values"
again (App. B).
Writing: 30 min
1. In-class essay: students choose any 3 proverbs from the text "Compare
them to similar proverbs in your culture." (App. D)
2. Teacher collects the papers and gives feedback.
Assignment:
* Students write the new vocabulary in their vocabulary notebook.
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Post-reading Tasks:
1. Teacher discusses the reading and new vocabulary
2. Students reread the text to find support for the main ideas.
3. Individually, students highlight evidence in the text that supports each of
the following values (then each student checks with a partner):
• Self-reliance 40 min
• Optimism
• Taking risks
• Egalitarianism
Writing:
1. Students review the diary entries in the boxed text (App. G).
2. Students write reflections on what they think life was like for pioneer
families:
• For men
• For women 30 min
• For children
3. Teacher collects the papers and provides feedback.
Assignment:
* Students write the new vocabulary in their vocabulary notebook.
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Writing:
1. Students summarize the reading passage using their notes.
2. Students check their summaries in group of three.
Assignment:
* Students prepare for the following day reading test.
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Post-reading Tasks:
1. Students skim the text (the headings, the introduction and the first sentence 20 min
of each paragraph) and think about the best way to take notes on the text.
2. Students can choose one of the note-taking techniques they studied in the
earlier chapters: using a chart, highlighting, outlining or using a map.
3. Students reread the text and take notes using the technique each has
chosen.
4. Students review their notes and organize the information into categories.
Writing:
1. Teacher introduces common words that are used frequently in academic
writing to describe trends and make generalizations about beliefs or behaviors
that are no too strong. E.g. tend (not) to, be (un)likely to 30 min
2. Teacher explains the use and provides examples:
- Voters in cities tend to vote for Democrats.
- Voters in farming communities tend not to vote for
Democrats.
- Today, women are more likely to go to college than man.
- Today, women are less likely to go to college than man.
3. Students write a paragraph to describe group of tendencies that they have
observed in their own lives.
Assessment 40 min
* Reading test (App. M, 'Rubric' App. N)
Assignment:
* Students prepare for the following day writing test.
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Writing:
1. Students write an outline for the reading passage.
2. Students trade their outlines with one another and check for the
sequences of the ideas.
40 min
Assessment:
* Writing test (App. R, 'Rubric' App. S)
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References
Hyland, K. (2002). Teaching and researching writing. Edinburgh Gate, England: Longman,
Williams, J. (2007). Academic Encounters: American Studies Reading, Study Skills, Writing.
Appendix A
(Pre-reading Task Strategies for Increasing Reading Speed (Williams, 2007, p.144
Academic courses often require a lot of reading. However, there
is not always time to read every text slowly and carefully.
Reading speed can be as important as reading comprehension.
Here are some strategies for increasing your reading speed:
• Read the text straight through. Do not go back to
any parts of it.
• Do not stop to look up any words.
• Skip over words you do not know if they do not seem
too important.
• Try to guess the meaning of words that seem
important.
• Slow down a little to understand important parts
such as definitions and main ideas.
…Now
Enter your starting time. Then read "The Roots of American Values," .1
-using the speed
reading strategies. Starting
___________ :time
Fill in the time finished Finishing .2
__________ :time
:Then calculate your reading speed .3
Number of words in the text (562) ÷
Number of minutes in took you to
read the text = your Reading Speed Reading
speed: __________
Many American values have their origins in the early history of the
country and the people who settled it. They include the importance of
freedom, hard work, self-discipline, and self-reliance. They stress the
significance of individual rights, responsibility, and choice; the power
individuals to control their own lives; and the basic equality of all
individuals. There is a deep belief in the equality of opportunity, that is,
the idea that all people should have an equal chance to succeed an d
that everyone should have an equal say in what the country does.
Indeed, this is at the root of the American idea of democracy. Finally,
Americans are often seen as full of energy, optimism, and the willing -
. ness to take risks in order to succeed
Certainly, these values are not exclusively American, but there are
historical reasons for the presence of these consistent themes in
American society, and they have consequences in public and private
life. The founders of the nation, the men who wrote the Declaration of
Independence and the Constitution, put their egalitarian beliefs into
these documents. They believed in the fundamental equality of all
men, and that individuals should be judged by their achievements. At
that time in Europe, family background and class were more important
than individual achievement. If you were from an upper-class family,
your world was secure and comfortable; if you were poor, you had little
chance of success. In the New World, the settlers found a society
without a strong class system that would limit their dreams. Many of
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the first settlers were Protestants, who shared a belief in the power of
hard work and self-reliance. They believed these were ways of improv -
ing themselves in the eyes of God, who would reward them for their
discipline. This attitude toward life is sometimes referred to as "the
Protestant work ethic." The significance of individualism was also
apparent in many aspects of Americans' lives, in their desire to make
their own choices, in their wish for privacy, and in their wish for others,
including the government, to stay out of their lives. Finally, the settlers
came to a land that seemed to have endless resources, such as land,
food, wood, and water. This natural wealth encouraged their optimism
. and made them feel confident of success in their new country
Appendix C
(Post-reading Task Building Vocabulary: Key Terms (Williams, 2007, p.147
1. Match the key words from the text in with their meanings. Write the
appropriate word in the blank below its meaning.
1. ability to make yourself do things that you should even when you
don't want to ___________________
2. hopefulness and belief that good things will happen
___________________
3. belief in the importance of individual and personal independence
___________________
4. beliefs about what is right and wrong and what is important in life
___________________
5. actions or situations that might turn out badly___________________
6. belief that all people are equally important ___________________
7. ability to succeed without help or support of
others___________________
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The settlers were famous for their _________. They lived alone in .1
.the wilderness and rarely asked for help from their neighbors
The men who wrote the Constitution believed in _______, that is, .2
.the fundamental equality of all men
Many new Americans had to take _________in their efforts to make .3
.a new life. Some found success; some failed
The immigrants who landed on Ellis Island were filled with .4
._________about starting a new life in a new country
Many Americans believe that hard work and ___________ are the .5
keys to success. Many new Americans have done work they do
.not like in order to succeed
Americans' belief in _________means they think people should .6
make their own choices. It also means that each person's
.independence is very important
such as hard work and self-discipline were especially _________ .7
typical of the Christians who were the majority in the first waves
.of immigrants
Appendix D
Writing Task
.If you can't stand the heat, get out of the kitchen •
Appendix E
Pre-reading Task Thinking About the Topic before You Read (Williams, 2007, p.149)
• Look at the picture on page 145, and look at these pictures. All three pictures
are of the American West in the early days of the country. Then discuss the
questions below:
• The words in bold are from the text. Find the definition for ach word in
bold, and write the word in the blank after its definition.
o The pioneers left their towns in the east and began to move west,
where the country was still wild.
o Only a few white people lived on the western frontier.
o The pioneers believed it was their destiny to develop and live on
the new land.
o The pioneers built homes in the wilderness, which was full of
forests and animals.
o The idea of the western frontier is part myth and part truth.
1. a border between developed land where white people live and undeveloped
land where Native American live ________________
2. an idea that is incorrect but that many people believe is true ________________
3. people who are among the first to do something ________________
4. events that are going to happen in the future; events that no one can
control________________
5. land that has not been farmed or developed ________________
Appendix F
(American Values from the Past (Ch.7
(Text (2) The American West (Williams, 2007, p.150
Few images have as powerful a place in the American imagination as
the symbols of the American West, such as the covered wagon, the log
cabin, and the cowboy. Why are these images so powerful? One reason
is that these images of the West are deeply connected with the tradi -
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tional values that many Americans believe give their nation strength
and character. It is important to remember, however, that the idea of
the western frontier is partly a myth; it includes what Americans want
to believe happened. What really happened as Americans moved west
. was not always what they would like to remember
Large numbers of pioneers from Europe and the Eastern part of the
United States began moving west in the nineteenth century. For these
people, the West, which meant land west of the Mississippi River,
seemed to be a place of unlimited opportunity and resources:
excellent farmland and land rich in minerals, thick forests, and lots of
animals for hunting. The land and the sky seemed to stretch without
end, wait ing for them. Many people also moved west to get away from
. the cities. They dreamed of a freer life in a wilder place
However, this search for a new life had a cost. The journey west and
life in the West were difficult. There were many physical hardships and
few comforts or conveniences. Only the toughest and most self-reliant
pioneers did well in these circumstances. They had to be able to build
houses for themselves, farm, raise animals, hunt for food, and protect
themselves and their property. A final important characteristic of the
frontier was its social equality. In the struggle to survive, success
depended on individual strength and resourcefulness, not on money or
. family background
Appendix G
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Writing Task
1. Review the diary entries in the boxed text (Williams, 2007, p.151)
2. Write reflections on what they think life was like for pioneer families:
• For men
• For women
• For children
Pioneer Diaries
Many of the pioneers kept diaries of their experiences on
the journey west. This is from the diary of Amelia Stewart
Knight, on her journey to Oregon in 1853. She was
pregnant with her eighth child.
May 17th
We had a dreadful storm of rain ... It killed two oxen. I
never saw such a storm. The wind was so high that I
thought it would tear the wagon to pieces. The rain beat
into the wagons so that everything was wet. In less than
two hours, the water was a foot deep all over our camp
grounds. We could pitch no tents at all so we all had to
crowd into the wagons and sleep in wet beds with wet
clothes, without supper.
June 6th
Still in camp, husband and myself being sick (caused we
supposed by drinking the river water).
June 11th
We crossed this afternoon over the roughest . . . piece of
ground that was ever made. Not a drop of water, not a
spear of grass to be seen. Nothing but ... bare and broken
rock, sand and dust.
July 4th
It has been very warm today. I never saw mosquitoes as
bad as they are here. Sick all day with fever, partly caused
by mosquito bites.
July 25th
A calf took sick today and died before breakfast. Soon after
... one of our best cows was taken sick and died in a short
time. Cattle are dying off very fast all along this road.
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Appendix H
Pre-reading Task Note Taking: Using a Map (Williams, 2007, p.154)
Read the content of the circles, and discuss what you think the text will
be about.
2. As you read the text, finish the map by adding more lines and circles.
Appendix I
(American Values from the Past (Ch.7
(Text (3) The Marketplace (Williams, 2007, p.155
Americans admire people who take risks. Throughout the nation's his -
tory, the biggest success stories have been about people who took
risks. These people started with very little and, with a good idea and
hard work, became successful. In the business world, we call such
.people entrepreneurs
The rise of big business in the nineteenth century was often at the
workers' expense. Many successful industrial entrepreneurs of the time
believed that any business strategy was fair in the race for higher prof -
its. Frequently they did not treat their workers well, demanding long
.hours and paying low wages
Low wages were not the only problem facing work ers. Industrial
workplaces were often dangerous: hot metal in the steel factories and
dust in the mills caused injuries and disease. Workers had no protection
and lost their jobs if they became sick and could not work. In the second
half of the nineteenth century, the com bination of these dangerous and
difficult conditions and low wages encouraged the establishment of the
labor movement, that is, the creation of trade unions to fight for and
protect workers. The struggle to cre ate unions and expand their power
was difficult and sometimes violent. Factory owners were often opposed
to the unions because they knew that strong unions would demand
better pay and working conditions for their members, and better pay for
.workers would lower the company's profits
Appendix J
Post-reading Task Note Taking: Checking Your Notes (Williams, 2007, p.157)
Your notes will only help you if they are complete and accurate.
One way to check your notes is to ask yourself questions about
the text. If your notes do not provide the answers, go back to
the text, find the missing information, and add it to your notes.
Look at the questions below. Can you answer them with information .1
from your map? If not, find the necessary information in the text and
.add it to your map
1. What are two main reasons for the success of entrepreneurs
like Carnegie and Rockefeller?
2. What were some of the difficulties that workers faced as a
result of the Industrial Revolution?
3. How was the success of big business related to
these difficulties?
4. What were some of the positive effects of big
business?
5. What were some of the negative effects?
Appendix K
(Pre-reading Task Building Background Knowledge of the Topic (Williams, 2007, p.159
a. What do you think education was like for the “toil and earn” class in
Europe?
b. What do you think education was like for the “seize and enjoy” class?
5. How are Horace Mann’s ideas connected to some of the basic themes that
were introduced in “The Roots of American Values,” page 145?
Appendix L
(American Values from the Past (Ch. 7
(Text (4) Education for All (Williams, 2007, p.160
In the early nineteenth century, education in urban areas was mostly for the
rich. The public did not want to pay to educate poor children; only churches
were willing to provide schools for the poor. These schools were generally open
for just a few hours and a few months a year.
Gradually this situation changed. One reason for the change was necessity. The
cities were filled with thousands of uneducated poor children, and people were
afraid that the children would make trouble if they were left alone. In addition,
immigrants were pouring into the cities from all over the world. They needed to
learn the new language and c_. -_ People began to see schools as the solution to
these problems. In school, children learned not only reading and arithmetic but
moral and cultural lessons as well.
By the middle of the nineteenth century, a new kind of school was established
in some eastern cities, and these schools soon spread to other parts of the
country. The education in these schools was based on several important ideas
that are at the heart of American values. First, education is essential for
democracy. Only the educated can participate as full citizens in a democratic
society; therefore, it is essential that all citizens receive a basic education.
Another central principle was the belief that education could provide a reliable
workforce and contribute to the strength and stability of the nation.
The general public's view of the power and function education was also
beginning to change. People began understand that without an education, it
would be difficult for children to succeed. They saw education as a way of
providing equal opportunity to all citizens. It was the ladder to economic
success, but just as importantly, it was a way for individuals to have some
control over their own future. It was a path to the American Dream. This was
the beginning of American public schools that were free for all children.
Higher education
Higher education, that is, college and university education, also reflects the
broad, egalitarian value that all people are equally important and have equal
rights. The United States has a system of state and local colleges with low-cost
tuition that has encouraged a large percentage of Americans to get a college
education. The goal of this system has been to provide a college education to as
many people as possible. Many older adults, as well as recent high school
graduates, take advantage of these educational opportunities. The result has
been a continuing rise in the number of people attending colleges and
universities.
Today, a college degree is increasingly necessary for success. Fifty 7 years ago,
there were good jobs in factories for workers without a college education;
however, many of those factories have now closed because manufacturing is
cheaper in countries where workers earn less money. Most good jobs in the
twenty-first century in the United States require at least some higher education.
Therefore, more Americans are going to college than ever before. In 2004, 18.34
million high school graduates enrolled in college, a rate more than nine times
higher than in 1950.
The average pay for a college graduate is more than 60 percent 8 higher than for
a high school graduate. Lifetime earnings for a person with at least a college
degree are $1 million more than the lifetime earnings of a worker with no college
education. Statistics suggest that there are also differences in many other
measures of success. People with more education tend to have better health, are
less likely to become unemployed or go to prison, and are more likely to vote
and participate in their community. The difference affects the next generation,
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Appendix M
(Assessment (1
:Skim the following reading for one minute to answer the two questions below .1
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American business has changed a great deal since the days of Andrew Carnegie
and John D. Rockefeller. Monopolies are prohibited, and the government has
passed laws to make sure that workplaces are safe. Trade unions continue to
protect workers' rights, although these unions are not as strong as they were in the
past. Some in the business world argue that these changes have made it more
difficult for entrepreneurs to be successful. Yet there have been many examples of
extremely suc cessful entrepreneurs in recent years. Surprisingly, the factors in their
success are not very different from the factors in the success of the business
leaders in the past. The founders of these modern businesses all had good ideas for
a new product or service or simply a new and better way of running an old business.
They combined their ideas with a good education, hard work, and an understanding
that their busi ness would have to adjust constantly to changes in the market and in
. technology. Not surprisingly, many modern success stories involve technology
products. With this concept, he created Wal-Mart, a discount retail chain. Walton also
used new business practices: He bought products in such large quantities that he could
demand very low prices from his suppliers; he bought directly from manufacturers all
over the world; he built enormous stores that sold everything from toys to light bulbs at
such low prices that smaller stores could not compete. Finally, Wal-Mart was one of the
first retail businesses to completely computerize its operations, significantly increasing
efficiency. The only computer system in the country that is larger than Wal-Matt's belongs
to the U.S. Department of Defense. Wal- Mart was so successful that Sam Walton became
one of the r ic h e s t mine the
n country. Many people say that Wal-Mart has hurt small businesses
and has not always treated its workers and suppliers fairly; however, it very successful in
.the United States and around the world
.Name three important factors for success in the twenty-first century marketplace .2
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3. Give two reasons why customers prefer Wal-Mart over small stores.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
4. Reading for details: read the phrases in the left column. Put a check (√ ) under the name of
the company that the phrase describes. In some cases, the phrase applies to both
companies.
Google Wal-Mart
1. started with a good idea
2. pioneered new business practices
3. began in a garage with borrowed money
4. uses computer technology
5. can help you find a date
6. has been very successful
7. has many stores
8. is used more than 200 million times a day
9. offers services in many languages
Appendix N
Assessment (1) Rubric
(Max. 15 Points)
1.
• What is the topic about? (1 point)
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2. Name three important factors for success in the twenty-first century marketplace. (5
points)
Good education .
Hard work.
Understanding that the busi ness would have to adjust constantly to changes
3. Give two reasons why customers prefer Wal-Mart over small stores. (3 points)
4. Reading for details: read the phrases in the left column. Put a check (√ ) under the name of
the company that the phrase describes. In some cases, the phrase applies to both
companies. (5 points)
Google Wal-Mart
1. started with a good idea √
2. pioneered new business practices √
3. began in a garage with borrowed money √
4. uses computer technology √
5. can help you find a date √
6. has been very successful √
7. has many stores √
8. is used more than 200 million times a day √
9. offers services in many languages √
Appendix O
(Pre-reading Task Building Vocabulary: Previewing Key Terms (Williams, 2007, p.166
1. Read the title of the text and the titles of the heading.
1. What “right and responsibilities” do you think the title refers to?
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2. Both headings contain the word versus. What does this term
mean?
3. What do you think the text under each heading will be about?
Now Read the text “The Individual and Society: Rights and
”.Responsibilities
Appendix P
(American Values Today (Ch. 8
Thirty years after the Great Depression, there were still people
struggling to succeed. Once again, the government helped people who
were unable to help themselves. In the 1960s, the aim of the Great
Society programs, under President Lyndon Johnson, was to end pov erty
in the United States by providing jobs, health care, housing, and better
education for the poor - especially for African Americans, who had
limited access to these services. The Great Society programs had some
. success but did not reach the goal of ending poverty
Appendix Q
(Post-reading Task Visualizing the Main Ideas (Williams, 2007, p.169
1. The drawings below show two situations that illustrate the main ideas in
the text. Fill in the blanks with the appropriate terms.
versus _______________1
_________________
2. Work with a partner. Take turns explaining one example from the
text for each of the situations illustrated above.
3. Look through the previous text in the book, and find a least two
situations that involve a conflict between the individual and society.
As a class, discuss what happened in each situation. Was the
conflict resolved? Explain.
Read the functions listed below. Match each one to a paragraph in the
text. Write the paragraph number in the blank before each function. In
.one case, several paragraphs match a single function
Established and explains the main idea 1 _____
Provides and explains an example 2 _____
Reviews previous information about the topic and provides 3 _____
background for the
main idea
Brings the topic into the present time 4 _____
Appendix R
(Assessment (2
• Equal opportunity
• Self-reliance
• Optimism
• Hard work
• Risk taking
• Individual achievement
• Basic equality of all individuals
3. Choose two examples of evidence that can help you illustrate the influence of
your theme.
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4. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence that connects your theme with your
example.
5. Include some details to support how your examples show the importance of the
theme.
Writing Test
Content Total
:Introduction .1
Hook____
Relevant to topic____
Thesis statement____
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:Body .2
Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence____
Example____
Support____
Concluding sentence or transition____
Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence____
Example____
Support____
Concluding sentence____
:Conclusion .3
Transition____
Restate claim, summarize main points____
Opinion____
:Overall .4
Coherence____
Transition____
Grammar____
Punctuations____
Spelling____
:Comments
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