Hi Alex,

I am glad that you asked me about voluntary work at a

hospital for sick animals. I would tell you more about it
and my experience from there.
At first, I thought that would be hard, but it was not. It
was pretty nice. Firstly, you should clean the cage, where
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they live, then you must put there the food and the
water, and then you help the vet with the
medicamentsmedication/ medicine. At some animals you
need to do massages and in that time, you can also play
with them, talk with them and of course, the most
important thing, to show the love.
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The reason why I enjoyed it, it is because of their you do not need to repeat it.

affection that you seem receive from animals and the

feeling that you do something good for this world is so
nice. You should have this experience.
Please write soon. I can’t wait to hear from you and I
look forward to seeing you again.
Take care,
Naomi
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