Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.

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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 8:47 AM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Hi Simi,

Here is the 2nd revision and responses to reviewer comments for the deception paper. Please let me know what you
think.

See you later this afternoon.

Mark

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutrition

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

Second Revision Body of Text References Captions.docx

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 8:52 AM

To: "Grabiner, Mark Dean" <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

Thanks. When do you want me to get it back to you? Will tomorrow by end of day work?

Regards,
Simi

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092
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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 9:07 AM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>
 That will be great Simi. Thanks.

Mark

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutri on

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

From: Simisola Oludare [mailto:soluda2@uic.edu]

Sent: Monday, January 22, 2018 8:52 AM
To: Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu>
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 9:09 AM

To: "Grabiner, Mark Dean" <grabiner@uic.edu>

Awesome. See you later today!

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Simi

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 11:51 AM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

You might enjoy this...

https://twitter.com/sfiscience/status/955487649841795073

Simisola O. Oludare
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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 12:58 PM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Santa Fe Ins tute…the home of the discipline of complexity in the US.

 Yep…I do buy the concept.

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutri on

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

From: Simisola Oludare [mailto:soluda2@uic.edu]

Sent: Monday, January 22, 2018 11:51 AM
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 1:05 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

That's, the one!

And I have come to appreciate the concept a lot. Thank you.

Simisola O. Oludare
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 1:23 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Not to be too cloy but I am exceedingly glad I chose you as my advisor.

Simisola O. Oludare
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 5:31 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

https://www.amazon.com/Scale-Universal-Innovation-Sustainability-Organisms/dp/1594205582

Geoffrey West's book.

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Tue, Jan 23, 2018 at 4:15 PM

To: "Grabiner, Mark Dean" <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,
 Overall, I think the paper reads clearly and is bolstered by the additions.

A few comments/changes:

- Why use parentheses as opposed to square brackets in intro paragraph 5 and discussion paragraph 6? Is this a G&P
stylistic thing?
- Results section paragraph 1 sentence 1 should be changed to: "resulted in reduction of"

That's all I got!

Thanks,
Simi

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092

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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Wed, Jan 24, 2018 at 10:57 AM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Thanks for those finds Simi. I’ve made the correc ons. I’ve also done the wordsmithing and reduced the total words
in the body of the manuscript to 2994. I’m going to package it up and resubmit.

Mark

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutri on

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

From: Simisola Oludare [mailto:soluda2@uic.edu]

Sent: Tuesday, January 23, 2018 4:15 PM
To: Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu>
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Hi Mark,

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Wed, Jan 24, 2018 at 11:07 AM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>
Awesome, thanks Mark.

Simisola O. Oludare
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