Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.

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ASB abstract
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Fri, Mar 9, 2018 at 5:30 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

Here is the latest version of the abstract. Looking forward to hearing what you think.

Have a good weekend.

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092

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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Fri, Mar 9, 2018 at 5:32 PM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Thanks Simi. I'm looking forward to reading it.

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From: Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu>

Sent: Friday, March 9, 2018 5:30:37 PM
To: Grabiner, Mark Dean
Subject: ASB abstract

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Sun, Mar 11, 2018 at 3:41 PM

To: "Grabiner, Mark Dean" <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

Hope you have been having a good weekend. In case you have not had time to read the abstract, the version I sent you
does not cite the G&P paper but I will include it after I receive your next round of feedback.

Thanks,
Simi

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092
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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 9:01 AM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Simi,

I re-wrote the introduc on and I think that it a more direct path the what we did and why we did it than what you
had previously composed.

As you will see, I had many comments and cri cisms about much of the rest of the abstract. Some of the errors are
repeats. Some are new.

I think this abstract con nues to need work.

Mark

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutri on

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

From: Simisola Oludare [mailto:soluda2@uic.edu]

Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 5:31 PM
To: Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu>
Subject: ASB abstract
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 9:10 AM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Mark,

Okay, thanks. I will get to it.

 Thanks,

Simi
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 12:45 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

Here is the latest version of the abstract.

Thanks,
Simi

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research and Teaching Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
Department of Kinesiology
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092
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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 1:17 PM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Hi Simi…Please let everyone know that I am running about 15 minutes behind. See you soon a er a coffee stop an
DD.

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutri on

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

From: Simisola Oludare [mailto:soluda2@uic.edu]

Sent: Monday, March 12, 2018 12:45 PM
To: Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu>
Subject: Re: ASB abstract
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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 3:35 PM

To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Please review. I deleted and replaced quite a bit of content that you had added. I am happy with the content but there
the reference list and the numbers in the text that refer to references need to be fixed. After you fix the references and
 unless you make any changes to the current text, I think it will be ready to go. Let me know if you’d like me to look it
over once more. Either way, send me a version of the final, submitted version.

Mark

Mark D. Grabiner, PhD

Professor, Department of Kinsiology and Nutrition

Professor, Department of Bioengineering

Associate Vice Chancellor for Research and Research Integrity Officer

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 4:31 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

Thanks. I will take on last look at it and let you know if you need yo give it a final review.

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Simi
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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 8:08 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

I made a few changes to the body of the text and fixed the references.

The changes I made to the text were to make sure that "1/f characteristics" is used consistently instead of white and pink
noise. I have removed all mentions of white and pink noise. I also removed the Lipsitz reference.

Can you take a look and let me know if you are in agreement?

Thanks,

Simisola O. Oludare
Graduate Research and Teaching Assistant
Clinical Biomechanics and Rehabilitation Lab
Department of Kinesiology
University of Illinois, Chicago
Email address: soluda2@uic.edu
Mobile: 478-731-1092

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Grabiner, Mark Dean <grabiner@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 8:12 PM
To: "Oludare, Simisola O" <soluda2@uic.edu>

Hi Simi...it sounds pretty straight forward to me. I'd say it's time to put this bad boy to bed. Go ahead and
submit. Mark

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From: Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu>

Sent: Monday, March 12, 2018 8:08:41 PM
To: Grabiner, Mark Dean
Subject: Re: ASB abstract

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Simisola Oludare <soluda2@uic.edu> Mon, Mar 12, 2018 at 8:43 PM

To: Mark Grabiner <grabiner@uic.edu>

Hi Mark,

Awesome, thanks. I will send it in.

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Simi
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