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OF RECOUNT TEXTS
A GRADUATING PAPER
By:
SYAIFUL AZHAR
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MOTTO
Keep on trying
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DEDICATION
2. My beloved family, especially for the most great, beautiful and wonderful women all over the
world; MY MOTHER, “Faizah” and also MY FATHER “Shonhaji”, and my beloved my brother
“Qoyyimul Ikhsan”, sister “Alfiatul Karimah”, and grandmother “Mbah Sukaenah”, thanks for
your kindness, togetherness, and love, I love you so much.thanks for all sacrifices, patience, trust,
3. My beloved girlfriend, Robi‟atul Awaliyah (MimiiQ) thanks for your helps, support, motivation,
spirit, love and attention to me in everything I have done, and all of experience, I love you so
much.
4. My best and beloved friends in life, especially Teguh, Pendel, Plolo, Kluwus, Kliwone, Danang,
Rifqy, Muna, Tuba, Zulfi, Tuba, White, Deny, Agung, Latep, Udin, Ari, Inas, Irsa, Sugeng, lucas,
Maya, Pak Jo, thanks for your support, help, kindness, experience, and togetherness. I would
5. All of SMC (Alfonso dkk, Dedicato, E- lano, Awarness, Willpower, Zealouz, Cambioso, Extender,
Fidelio, cakrawangsa, and next future generations) “MUSIK CERMIN MANUSIA BERXPRESI,
SALAM MELODI”.
6. All my English department friends in the academic year 2007 especially E class, keep me in your
ABSTRACT
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Azhar, Syaiful. 2013. “Analysis of Generic Structure of Recount Texts (The Study of Fourth Semester
Students of STAIN Salatiga in the Academic Year of 2012/2013)”. English and Education Department,
State Institute of Islamic Studies (STAIN) Salatiga. Advisor. Mustikasari, Rr. Dewi Wahyu.
The writer uses descriptive qualitative method by describing and analyze the data taken from 30
texts made by student. In conducting the study the writer uses documentation method for collecting
the data. The writer took 30 recount texts made by the student, the text were uploaded in blog staff
http://dewi20062012.staff.stainsalatiga.ac.id/. The writer classifying text passages recount text into a
generic structure to represent the extent to which students are able to understand the text according
to the generic structure of recount text.
After getting the result, the writer concludes that,the generic structure of student in writing recount
text, as show by the percentage. From 30 recount texts, Orientation 93%, event with one paragraph
40%, event with two paragraphs 36%, event with tri paragraphs 20%, event with four paragraphs
3.3%, and re-orientation 86%. The problem faced by the student in writing recount text is the
difficulties to faced orientation and re-orientation, there were two mistakes students in mastering
genetic structure of recount text. Firestly, mis-organizing the paraghrap, they didn‟t have Orientation
and Re-Orientation, as show in RT-07 and RT-25. Seccondly, mis organizing the paraghrap, they
didn‟t have Re-Orientation, as show in RT-19 and RT-27. And the implication of the result for
education is to be authentic material as teaching material in writing class.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
In the name of Allah, The Most Gracious, The Most Merciful, The Lord of the Universe.
Because of Him, the writer is able to finish this graduating paper as one of the requirements for the
degree of Sarjana Pendidikan in English Department of Education Faculty of State Islamic Study is
Institute (STAIN) of Salatiga. Peace and salutation always be given to our prophet Muhammad SAW
However, this success would not be achieved without supports, guidance, advice, help and
encouragement from individuals and institution, and the writer somehow realizes this is an appropriate
2. Rr. Dewi Wahyu M, S.S., M. Pd., the Chair person of English educational faculty, and The
consultant who has educated, supported, directed and give the researchers advices, suggestions,
pray and recommendations for this thesis from beginning until the end.
3. All my whole lecturers in English Department of STAIN Salatiga, thanks for your supports,
4. My beloved, my mother and my father. Allah will give you more. I really love you so much.
6. My beloved, my dearest, someone in my heart, Robi‟atul Awaliyah, thanks for all. I love you so
much.
7. My best and beloved friends and brothers, Teguh, Pendel, Plolo, Kluwus, Kliwone, Danang. Thanks
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11. All my friends in English department.
13. Those who can‟t be mentioned one by one because of their support to the writer in realizing the
study.
Finally, the writer expects constructive critics and suggestions from readers, because this paper
is still far from perfect. This paper is expected to be able to provide useful information to the reader.
The writer
Syaiful Azhar
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
TITLE .................................................................................................................... i
DEKLARASI ........................................................................................................ ii
ATTENTIVE COUNSELOR ................................................................................ iii
MOTTO ................................................................................................................ iv
DEDICATION ...................................................................................................... v
ABSTRACT ........................................................................................................... vii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT .................................................................................... viii
TABLE OF CONTENT ........................................................................................ x
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION
A. Background of the Study........................................................ 1
B. Discourse ............................................................................... 9
C. Discourse Analysis................................................................. 11
D. Text ....................................................................................... 12
E. Genre ..................................................................................... 13
F. Recount ................................................................................. 16
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C. Object of Research ................................................................. 24
1. Documentation ............................................................... 25
1. Categorizing ................................................................... 26
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CHAPTER V CLOSURE
A. Conclusion ............................................................................ 56
B. Suggestion ............................................................................. 57
BIBLIOGRAPHY
CURICULUM VITAE
APPENDIX
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
In this chapter the writer tries to present the introduction of study. It the background of the
study, problems of the study, limitation of the problem, objectives of the study, benefits of the study,
Writing is one of the four language skills: reading, writing, listening and speaking. Writing
and speaking are productive skill. That means they involve producing language rather than
receiving it (Mary Spratt, 2005: 26). Writing clear sentences requires you to learn the rules of
English grammar and mechanics such as the correct use of verbs and pronoun, as well as commas
and other marks of punctuation. It is also included in one of the existing syllabus.
English Education Department of STAIN Salatiga is one of the majors are taken into
account in STAIN Salatiga. In English Education Department, students acquire writing material
sequentially. For example, students can take a course in writing II if had graduated in writing I,
writing material in English Education Department, That student is required to understand and know
There are various ways to organize the sentences in a piece of writing. One of them is
recount text. According to Hyland, recount is a kind of genre that has social function to retell
event for the purpose of informing or entertaining ( Ken Hyland, 2004:29). In the recount text, the
sentences are usually organized according to time order or chronological order. One thing happens
and then another thing happens, and the events are told in the same order. Based on my experiences,
there are some problems found in field when giving writing materials to the students, especially the
recount text.
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Based on learning proses in English Education Department, there are many problems faced
by students when writing.The first problem is that the students‟ writing is not comprehensible.
Because the content of the composition is not relevant to the topic, the ideas are not clearly stated,
the ideas and sentences are not well organized. The second problem is that there are many errors in
The existence of some problems in learning English, especially in writing recount text,
writer tried to determine the extent of students' understanding of text recount, with doing this
research. In this study more specific about the generic structure of the text contained in the recount.
By conducting this research, the writer hopes to determine the extent of student
understanding in drafting recount text. In this study more specific about the generic structure of the
text contained in the recount, called Analysis of Generic Structure of Recount Texts (The Study
2012/2013).
B. Problems of Study
1. How are the generic structures in the recount texts made by fourth semester student of
2. What problem are faces by the fourth semester students of STAIN Salatiga in the
3. What are the implications of the research for English education department?
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C. Objectives of the Study
1. To analyze of the generic structure of recount texts made by the fourth semester student of
2. To find out the problems faced by the students in mastering the generic structure of recount
text.
3. To find out the implications of the research for English education department.
The Writer limits the study only in analyzing of generic structure of recount text the case
study fourth semester student STAIN Salatiga in the academic years 2012/2013.
The students of STAIN Salatiga can improve their ability in writing text especially in recount
text. Furthermore, they can transfer what they know cognitively about language features of
This result of the study helps the teacher to find out their student‟s weaknesses in writing and
The writer can increase his knowledge about generic structure in recount text.
It can enlarge the readers‟ knowledge about text or genre, especially recount text.
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1. Genre
literature. It is a type or kind of text, defined in terms of its social purposes; also the level of
context dealing with social purpose (Rudi Hartono, 2005: 4). The meaning of the genres
intended is that students are able to understand the concept and they would be able to identify
2. Text
Human being lives in a world of words. When these words are put together to
a message, there are constructing a text. When reading, listening or view a piece of text, there
are interpreting its meaning (Mark Andersons and Kathy Andersons, 2003: 1).
In general, text is an article which often read. It is the language unity that expresses
the meaning contextually. The limitation of the text is that the text is not measure the
number of sentence or page, but the text is measured from the meaning expressed and context.
Thus, the quality of the text is not measured from the quantity of the sentences (Tri Wiratno,
2003: 3-4).
3. Recount Text
Recount is a kind of genre that has social function to retell event for the purpose
of informing or entertaining. The tense that used in recount text is past tense. Social purpose
look at the sample of recount in personal letters, police report, insurance claims, and incident
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Recount text is based on the life experience and foreign language. Recounts are used in
4. Generic Structure
The common grammatical features of recount text (Ken Hyland, 2004; 135) are:
a. Orientation: provides the setting and produces participants. It provides information about
b. Record of Events: tell what happened, present event in temporal sequence. It is usually
recounted in chronological order. Personal comments and/ or evaluative remarks, which are
According to Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson (1998:49) the language features
b. Action verb
c. Descriptive word to give details about who, what, what, when, where, and how.
G. Thesis Organization
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Chapter I is Introduction it consists of the background of the study, problems of the study,
objectives of the study, limitation of the problem, benefits of the study, clarification of key terms
definition of discourse, discourse analysis, definition of text, and genre, recount text and generic
Chapter III is about the methodology of the research. It consists of the general description
of STAIN Salatiga, research methodology, and object of the researches, data and data source and
Chapter IV is finding of this research: it describes the generic structure of student in writing
recount text, the problem faces by the student in mastering generic stricture of recount text, and
Chapter V is about conclusion based on the analysis result. The writer also proposes some
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CHAPTER II
In this chapter the writer tries to present the related literature theories. It consists of the previous
research, definition of discourse, discourse analysis, definition of text and genre of text, recount text and
A. Previous Research
In this research the writer reviews some reports of related researches to enrich the data
about analysis recount text. The previous studies were from the students of English Education
Firstly, Haryanto in his researched conducted the 2007. He was analyses about grammatical
error analysis in students‟ recount texts. Which were made by (Twelfth Year Students of SMA N 1
Slawi in the Academic Year of 2006/2007). He was study of English Department Faculty of
Languages and Arts in Semarang State University (UNNES). This final project primarily dealt with
grammatical error analysis. It described the grammatical errors on recount texts made by the
twelfth year students of SMA N 1 Slawi in the academic year of 2006/2007. It used the
qualitative approach of which the data were obtained from the students‟ recount text writing. These
writings were then analyzed. The grammatical errors were classified into seven groups. It could be
concluded that the possible causes of errors are overgeneralization, and interference.
Secondly, Nur Happy Indahsari in her researched conducted the 2010. She was analyses
about an analysis of participant and process in recount text made by the eighth grade students in
SMP ALHUDA Semarang in the academic year 2009/2010”. She was the study of English
Department, faculty of Language and Art Education, Institute of Teacher Training and Education
PGRI Semarang. This research was categorized as qualitative descriptive research. The analysis of
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the data in this research used descriptive analysis. The qualitative data can be composed directly to
make decision of the research. The population of this graduating paper, the writer takes all of the
eighth grade students of SMP ALHUDA Semarang in the Academic year 2009/2010. The writer
took 30 students for sample. In collecting data, the writer took writing test. The main purpose of
conducting the test was to measure students‟ ability in writing recount text.
In contrast to previous studies, there are similarities in methodology and object in the
research, which is recount text. Furthermore there are underlying differences in this study, if in the
previous studies describe the grammatical error analysis and an analysis of the participants and
processes recount text, in this research the writer analyzed the generic structure of recount text, so
the writer can continue the research because there is no similarity among those previous studies.
B. Discourse
Discourse is a dicipline to the investigation of the ralationship berween from and fungtion
in verbal communication (Renkema, 1993:1). Verbal comunication relate to spoken language, while
written language is appeared in the form of text. Therefore, discource is different from text.
Discource focused on process, while text focuses on language production. Text is all forms of
language not just the words printed on sheets of paper but also all kinds of expressions of
communication, speech, music, pictures, sound effects, images, and so on. Context includes all
situations and things that are beyond the text and influence the use of language, such as participants
in the language, situations where the text is produced. The discourse here, then interpreted as text
Tarigan in Sumarlam (2008:7) states that discourse is a unit of language that the highest
or most comprehensive and largest on the sentence or clause with a high coherence and
cohesion and sustainable, has a real beginning and end, delivered orally or in writing.
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According to the definitions and statements above, it is clear that discourse is a linguistic
element that is relatively the most complex and most complete. Linguistic support unit includes
phonemes, morphemes, words, phrases, clauses, sentences, paragraphs, until the whole essay.
However, discourse is basically also an element of pragmatic language. Moreover, the use and
understanding of discourse in communication require different tools and it is quite a lot. Therefore,
the study of discourse becomes mandatory in the process of language learning. The goal is to equip
the language user in order to understand and use language properly and correctly. Each study
discourse will always associate the elements of the unit underneath the existing language, like
From the description and some definitions above, it can be concluded that discourse lies
higher than the level of sentence grammar on a scale of grammar and logical mind has regularity
(coherence) and also a link (cohesion) in its structure. Discourse is characterized by continuity of
the discourse is like a language unit, complete, address the sentence or clause, regular or compact,
sustainable, cohesion, oral or written, the beginning and end of the real.
C. Discourse analysis
Linguistic had focused its analysis on sentence until the beginning of decade 1950s. Then in
1952, a famous linguist in linguistic discipline, Harris published an article entitled “Discourse
Analysis” in Language magazine. He expressed a new opinion stating that the most complete unit
of language is discourse, not a sentence. That opinion had brought linguist started to analyze
Discourse analysis is not only widely recognized as one of the vastest, but also the least
defined areas in linguistics. One reason for this statement is that our understanding to discourse
analysis is based on scholar from a number of academic disciplines that are actually very different
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from one to another. However, as the least defined areas in linguistics, the study of discourse
According to Schiffrin (1994:20), there are three definitions of discourse which are
influenced by different paradigms where they reflect to different assumption between formalist,
particular unit of language (above the sentence), and a particular focus (on language use). These
two definitions of discourse reflect the difference between formalism and functionalist paradigm.
And Schiffrin also suggests two prominent definitions, namely as a unit of language larger than a
D. Text
When we study about genre, we must know about a text completely because genre ha very
close relation with a text. Generally, a text is something that we usually read. There is definition of
a text that the writer takes from Exploring How Text Works book; in order to support his study in
her book, (Derewianta, 1995:17) as quoted by (Himawati, 2009:20) stated that a text is any
Mean while, (Halliday, 2004:10) explained that text is not group of words hut as a semantic
unit. From the quotation above, it is clear that in defining about text we must also regard to the
Human being lives in a world of words. When these words are put together to
communicate a meaning, a piece of text is created. When speak ing or writing to communicate a
message, there are constructing a text. When reading, listening or view a piece of text, there are
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In general, text is an article which often read. It is the language unity that expresses the
meaning contextually. The limitation of the text is that the text is not measure the number of
sentence or page, but the text is measured from the meaning expressed and context. Thus, the
quality of the text is not measured from the quantity of the sentences (Tri Wiratno, 2003; 3-4).
According to Hartono, text is a unit of meaning which is coherent and appropriate for its
context (Rudi Hartono, 2005; 4).Human beings are different from other creatures that live in a
world of words. When these words are put together to communicate a meaning, a piece of text is
created. They will think to express their expressions; it is mean human need to express their own in
many ways that can be understood by others. Human can use a text as one of the ways to express
their own. It means that when the writer uses language to write, he is creating and constructing a
text. When the reader reads a text, he is interpreting texts. Moreover, creating and interpreting
E. Genre
It is a type or kind of text, defined in terms of its social purposes; also the level of context
dealing with social purpose” (Rudi Hartono, 2005; 6). The meaning of the genres intended is that
students are able to understand the concept and they would be able to identify a kind of texts that
Know as theory of genre about forward, methods and suggestion about the teaching of
writing. One of its main concerns is to discover and describe the major characteristic of kinds of
writing.
Genre are kind of text that each of them has communicative purpose, text structure and
characteristics of linguistic. Language is social phenomena and that to use language – to speak or
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2009:21). It means that anything about language is the kind of words. We use sentences, we
construct ways, we interact with language has social reason and social effect.
There are fifteen types of genre text, (Rudi Hartono, 2005; 6) they are:
1. Recount is a kind of genre used to retell events for the purpose of informing or
entertaining.
2. Narrative is a kind of genre used to amuse, to entertain and to deal with actual or various
3. News story is a factual text which informs reader‟s events of the day which are considered
newsworthy or important.
4. Anecdote is a kind of genre used to share with others an account of an unusual or amusing
incident.
7. Explanation is a kind of genre used to explain the processes involved in the formation or
8. Report is a kind of genre used to describe the way things are, with reference to arrange or
9. Analytical exposition is a kind of genre used to persuade the reader or listener to take action on
some matter.
10. Discussion is a kind of genre used to present (at least) two points of view about an issue.
12. Review is a kind of genre used to critique an art work or event for a public audience.
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13. Commentary is a kind of genre used to explain the processes involved in the information
14. Hortatory exposition is a kind of genre used to persuade the reader or listener that something
F. Recount
Recount is typically tells entertain by dealing with a sequence of events that establishes a
relationship between a writer/reader and speaker/listener. Recount is a kind of genre that has
social function to retell event for the purpose of informing or entertaining. The tense that used in
recount text is past tense. Social purpose of recount is to reconstruct past experiences by retelling
events in original sequence. We can look at the sample of recount in personal letters, police report,
Recount text based on the life experiences and familiar language. Recounts are used in most
subjects to show memory of series of events as in accounts of Science excursion, everyday life in
another time or culture. Personal letters to friends are often recounts of experience.
Recount retells past event. Recount begins by telling the reader who was involved,
what happened, where this even took place and when it happened.
It informs to the reader about what happened, where this even took place and
when it happened.
2) To entertain.
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Sometimes, recount retells a funny experience. It has a function to entertain the
reader.
Recount text focus on what an individual or a group of people were doing. It can be
written in the first or the third person. Fist person, is happening to the person writing the
recount. Example: I went to the park. The third person, an observer is telling it. Example:
Vera went to the park; she saw a pond near that park.
Past tense is the form a verb used to describe actions in the past. Many linguistics
explain by the own term but most of them have the same content.
c. Simple Past
The simple past indicates that the activity or situation began and ended at a
For example:
If a sentence contains when and has the simple past tense in both clauses, the action
For example:
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d. Past Progressive
The progressive indicates that the activity was in progress in the past.
For example:
Sometimes the past progressive is used in both parts of a sentence when two actions
For example:
While I was studying in one room my house, my brother was having a party in other
room.
e. Past Perfect
The past perfect expresses an activity that was completed before another activity or
For example:
If before or either is used in sentence, the past perfect is not necessary because the
For example:
The past perfect progressive emphasizes the duration of an activity that was in
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For example:
The police had been looking for the criminal for two years before they caught him.
This tense also may express an activity in progress recent t another time or activity
in the past.
For example:
When Agung got home, his hair was still wet because he had been swimming.
Material Processes are processes of material doing. They express the notion that
some entity physically does something-which may be done to some other entity.
G. Generic structure
Recount text has several elements, one of which is the generic structure. In making the
recount text should match the existing generic structure, because this is an early grounding in
making text recount According to Derewianka (1990) as stated by Miranti (2008:16) generic
1. Orientation
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The orientation provides all the necessary background information to enable the
audience to make sense of the text. To ensure that the orientation is detailed and thorough, use
the words (who, what, when, where, and why). The writer or speaker needs to gives information
about what happened, who or what was involved, when and where the events occurred and
why. An awareness of audience and purpose will assist the author in selecting the amount of
detailed needed.
2. Series of events
In series of events the writer writes the events chronologically. It begins from the first
event, followed by the second event to the last event. The sum of events depend on the
Events should be selected carefully to add to the audience‟s understanding of the topic.
Students should be prepared to discard events and details that are unimportant or uninteresting.
A recount, in most cases, is more than a „shopping list‟ of every possible detail. Students should
be guided to select only those events that are relevant and that can be expanded through the
3. Re-orientation (optional)
The final section concludes the recount by summarizing outcomes or results, evaluating
the topic‟s importance or offering personal comment or opinion. It can also look to the future
by speculating about what might happen next. But, not all of recount closed by re-orientation. It
is optional.
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
In this chapter the writer tries to present the methodology of the research. It consists of the
general description of STAIN Salatiga, research methodology, and object of the researches, data and
STAIN Salatiga is the State Institute of Islamic Student located in Salatiga, the air cool and
very conducive to learning. STAIN Salatiga integrate the development dimension of spirituality,
intellect, and professionalism, providing quality assurance process and output educators. STAIN
Salatiga graduates can enter the workforce and science with high competence and character as well
STAIN Salatiga has two campuses. Campus I on Jl. Tentara Pelajar No.2 Salatiga and
Campus II on Jl. Nakul Sadewa V No. 9 Salatiga. Lecturer in academically qualified STAIN
Salatiga: 4 Professor, Doctor of 11 people, 47 people were S3 and Masters 50. Employees in stain
salatiga there were 54, 8 SMA graduates, master of 6 people, DIII of 4 people, and 36 S1.
Salatiga stain has two majors. Firstly, the Department of Tarbiyah serve to organize
academic and professional education, whose goal is to establish Islamic Education Degree, who have
expertise in the field of education and teaching of Islam with special expertise in the field of Islamic
education studies, Arabic, and English, and be entitled to be a teacher or teaching in their field of
study.
which aims to establish Islamic Law degree, who have expertise in the field of Islamic law and
positive law with particular expertise in the areas of al - ahwal al - Syakhshiyah ( religious court ).
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In the Department of Shariah also D - III program, with a concentration in Finance and
Islamic Banking professional education aims to form an expert associate that has expertise in both
management and financial accounting in financial institutions and banks. He earned a bachelor's
degree is A.Md.
STAIN Salatiga this year opened four courses ( Prodi ) is new; Raudhatul Atfal Teacher
Education ( PGRA ), Islamic Broadcasting Communications ( IBC ), the Islamic Cultural History (
SKI ), and Science Quran and Tafsir ( IAT ). Prodi PGRA an opportunity for RA or kindergarten
teachers under the Ministry of Religious and Islamic activists such as early childhood education, KB
For KPI is projected to generate a reliable extension of Islam and dynamic, public relations,
and entrepreneur in the field of information. The SKI, It is expected that graduates become experts
in the field of history and social science, history philologist or society activists. While the IAT is
educated workers are oriented to professionals in the fields of science and Islam and teaching.
Development of society who are in the process of globalization of information and international
relations - West - East , demanding an increase in the role of science and professionals in the field to
B. Research Methodology
This research is a qualitative research and also called descriptive research. The writer chose
this method because it is compatible with this research where the data are in form of words.
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Qualitative writers have adopted a hermeneutic perspective on the text-that is, the
perspective which views the text as interpretation can never be judged to be true or false. Text is
only one among many possible interpretations (Patton 2002:114). It does not present the data and
the result in the form of statistics but it present in the form of description. This research was present
a descript analysis of generic structure of recount text the study of fourth semester student of STAIN
C. Object of Research
The research object is the recount texts which were made by the fourth semester students of
STAIN Salatiga in the academic year 2012/2013. To be specific in analyzing the data in the
Collecting a need data is one of the most important steps in a research. For this reason, a
writer should be able to determine an appropriate technique to collecting a data. There are several
techniques to collect the data including observation, questioner, interview and documentation study
(2004: 70) in this case, the writer uses documentation study as the way to collecting data.
1. Documentation
According to Arikunto (2002; 206) „mencari data mengenai hal-hal atau variable yang
berupa catatan, transkip, buku, surat kantor, majalah, prasasti, notulen, rapat, agenda dan
sebagainya’. In this study uses the data took the text made by students, which is documented
of research. While documentation is a record of events in the past in form of hand writing, or
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The data for a qualitative study most often are notes jotted down in the field or during
an interview from which the original comments, observations, and feelings are reconstructed or
text transcribed from audiotapes. “The basic data are these observations and conversations, the
actual words of people repro diced to the best of my ability from the field notes” (Diamond
1992:7). Many field research projects have slowed to a halt because a novice writer becomes
keeping track of what will be a rapidly growing volume of notes, tapes, and documents; it
provides a way of developing and outlining the analytic process; and it encourages ongoing
conceptualizing and strategizing about the text. Miles and Huberman (1994:53) provide a good
example of a contact summary form that was used to keep track of observational sessions in a
qualitative study.The data in this research were drawn the text recount of four students writing
examination. The writer takes 30 as the data of this study. In his case, the writer decided to text
recount made fourth semester student of STAIN Salatiga in the academic years of 2012/2013
1. catagorizing
in this activity the writer categorize text based on the type of generic structure of
recount text. After stage documentation, the writer classifying text passages recount text into a
generic structure to represent the extent to which students are able to understand the text
according to the generic structure of recount text. It to find out the student mistage in mastering
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Writen by: Al Haitami Ahkam
On Thursday, Darus, Mega and I gathered on campus. We were on group of writing III
courses. Once gathered, we started to discuss the task to open premier skills website which
ordered by lecture
On the website, we got new knowledge about learning method. It was very interesting.
We could learn while playing the games. And that didn’t make me bored. I saw the video as a
distraction at time of learning also. Although the procedure was a bit complicated, but it was
very beneficial for us. We were happy to learn and try what was on the website.
After we finished our assignment, we talked about what we got from the website. And
Generic
No Code Recount Text
Structure
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3 RT-01-3 After we finished our assignment,
we talked about what we got from the Re-orientation
website. And then we went home
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CHAPTER IV
DATA ANALYSIS
This chapter presents the result of the research to answer the problem statement in this research;
the generic structure of student in writing recount text, the problem faces by the student in mastering
generic stricture of recount text, and implications o the research for education. The completed
A. Data analysis
After the data are collecting, the writer red and learn the recount text one bay one than the
writer analyze the text based on identification, identifying the problem faced by the student in
The communicative purpose of recount is to retell events for the purposes of informing or
entertaining. In order to achieve this communicative purpose, some purposes are employed, to
orient the readers in respect to place, time and people in the text, to present a series of events
about given field. In this study, all recount texts belong to personal recount texts which the
purposes are to retell events that the writer has been personally involved in. From 30 recount
texts, the students could write personal recounts texts of which their communicative
To find the first objective of my study, I analyzed the generic structure from 30
students' works. Here, I analyzed whether the students wrote generic structure stages
completely or not. The stages analysis could be seen in this table below:
Table 1
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No Code Orientation Number of Event Re-Orientation
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17 RT-17 Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2, and 3 Paragraph 5
Table 2
Orientation analysis
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No Code Orientation in number Total in percentage
1 RT-01 1 3.3%
2 RT-02 1 3.3%
3 RT-03 1 3.3%
4 RT-04 1 3.3%
5 RT-05 1 3.3%
6 RT-06 1 3.3%
7 RT-07 - -
8 RT-08 1 3.3%
9 RT-09 1 3.3%
10 RT-10 1 3.3%
11 RT-11 1 3.3%
12 RT-12 1 3.3%
13 RT-13 1 3.3%
14 RT-14 1 3.3%
15 RT-15 1 3.3%
16 RT-16 1 3.3%
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17 RT-17 1 3.3%
18 RT-18 1 3.3%
19 RT-19 1 3.3%
20 RT-20 1 3.3%
21 RT-21 1 3.3%
22 RT-22 1 3.3%
23 RT-23 1 3.3%
24 RT-24 1 3.3%
25 RT-25 - -
26 RT-26 1 3.3%
27 RT-27 1 3.3%
28 RT-28 1 3.3%
29 RT-29 1 3.3%
30 RT-30 1 3.3%
TOTAL 28 93%
Based on the result table above, the orientation analysis result of students' works on
recount writing was 93%. It means that they almost know that at the beginning of a recount
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they should provide an introduction by introducing the participants and setting of the past
Table 3
Code Paragraph
information about who, what, when, and where the past experiences happened. The "who"
is clearly written in this sentence that "Darus, Mega and I ". It tells about was involved in
the text. Then, the words " we started to discuss the task to open premier skills website
which ordered by lecture " tell about what the text is. The word “On Thursday “ tells about
when it happened. And the last the word “on campus " tells about where it happened.
Table 4
Code Paragraph
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In subject writing 3, I have a new study group. Consist
we opened a website.
information about who, what, when, and where the past experiences happened. The "who"
is clearly written in this sentence that " Consist of Syafi’I, Tyas, and I ". It tells about was
involved in the text. Then, the words “we had assignments from writing 3’s lecturer, Ms.
Dewi. Our presentation about descriptive text and we should made a recount text about our
activities after we opened a website “tell about what the text is. The word “In subject
writing 3" tells about when it happened. But, in these sentences not have information about
where it happened.
Table 5
Code Paragraph
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Based on the result table above, these sentences refer to a background of
information about who, what, when, and where the past experiences happened. The "who"
is clearly written in this sentence that " I met with my group, Durotun and Dian ". It tells
about was involved in the text. Then, the words " we discussed to play Premier Skill
English on the internet " tell about what the text is. The word " On Monday, April 15 " tells
about when it happened. And the last the word " We met in news board of STAIN Salatiga "
Table 6
Code Paragraph
information about who, what, when, and where the past experiences happened. The "who"
is clearly written in this sentence that " I met with team ". It tells about was involved in the
text. Then, the words " to discussed our assignment to make a recount text about premier
skill." tell about what the text is. The word " On Monday, april 15th 2013" tells about when
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it happened. And the last the word " We met in front of news board of STAIN Salatiga "
Table 7
Code Paragraph
information about who, what, when, and where the past experiences happened. The "who"
is clearly written in this sentence that " I met with team ". It tells about was involved in the
text. Then, the words " my group discuss the schedule for meeting together to discuss about
recount text " tell about what the text is. The word " On 12th of april " tells about when it
happened. And the last the word " in front of the whole climbing " tells about where it
happened.
Table 8
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No Code Event in number Total in percentage
1 RT-01 1 3.3%
2 RT-03 1 3.3%
3 RT-05 1 3.3%
4 RT-09 1 3.3%
5 RT-10 1 3.3%
6 RT-12 1 3.3%
7 RT-14 1 3.3%
8 RT-15 1 3.3%
9 RT-16 1 3.3%
10 RT-24 1 3.3%
11 RT-28 1 3.3%
12 RT-30 1 3.3%
TOTAL 12 40%
Based on the result table above, the records of events with 1 paragraph result was
40%. It means that 12 student just write 1 paragraph series of events. It refers to the one of
language features of recount in which the use of words that showed order in which the
events in the text happened just with one paragraph. I provide some examples below:
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Table 9
Code Paragraph
for us to play but I chose one for my self and I thought it was
the easiest one. I chose Match the Kit. The game was the
RT-10-2
way how to described one by one what the player wear by its
color. I thought it was easy but it was not. I kept trying and
won. I was very happy. After that I saw the time and it was
english skill.
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In the first meeting, we discussed about spoof text
skill and play game in this site. After we got some materials,
did not say anything. Finally I found the funny trick, I made
RT-24-2 the sky, they were flying when I walked around my house at
thought they were clever, the leader divided aliens into five
The examples above, there are some sentences written to show event. In series
of events the writer writes the events chronologically. Records of the story tell what
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Table 10
1 RT-02 2 3.3%
2 RT-04 2 3.3%
3 RT-06 2 3.3%
4 RT-07 2 3.3%
5 RT-11 2 3.3%
6 RT-13 2 3.3%
7 RT-17 2 3.3%
8 RT-19 2 3.3%
9 RT-22 2 3.3%
10 RT-23 2 3.3%
11 RT-26 2 3.3%
TOTAL 11 36%
Based on the result table above, the records of events with 2 paragraph result was
36%. It means that 11 student write 2 paragraph series of events. It refers to the events in
the text happened with two paragraph. I provide some examples below:
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Table 11
RT-13
Code Paragraph
Table 12
RT-19
Code Paragraph
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borrowed my friend‟s laptop to open
premiskills.britishcruncil.org and tried to play many games
fun in this website with Fatim. I tried to open many games,
sometimes I can play some games but there is a game that I
didn‟t understand how to played it.
Table 13
RT-23
Code Paragraph
Table 14
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No Code Event in number Total in percentage
1 RT-08 3 3.3%
2 RT-18 3 3.3%
3 RT-20 3 3.3%
4 RT-21 3 3.3%
5 RT-25 3 3.3%
6 RT-27 3 3.3%
TOTAL 6 20%
Based on the result table above, the records of events with 3 paragraph result was
20%. It means that 6 student write 3 paragraph series of events. It refers to the events in the
Table 15
RT-20
Code Paragraph
RT-20-2 First, I and my group open the web and reading the
web. There game and some causes of programs. I and my
group open one of the programs. Then I was playing the
game, we shared our felling when we play it. We discuss
about the arrangement of the game. We finished the game and
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cast about the next programs.
Table 16
RT-27
Code Paragraph
RT-27-2 On April 2nd our group met for the first time.
Actually that was hard to met each other because we had full
schedule everyday. We could meet after had lecture at noon
and we met without Aisah because she was sick. We started
with search for the material such as game in internet.
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4) Text With 4Paragraph Event
Table 17
1 RT-29 4 3.3%
TOTAL 1 3.3%
Based on the result table above, the records of events with 4 paragraph result was
3.3%. It means that 1 student write 4 paragraph series of events. It refers to the events in the
Table 18
RT-29
Code Paragraph
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RT-29-3 We did not make any conversation at first meeting.
Eventhough, I thought we had tried to be friendly. We knew
each other character of the member of the group after the first
meeting.
Table 19
Re-Orientation analysis
1 RT-01 1 3.3%
2 RT-02 1 3.3%
3 RT-03 1 3.3%
4 RT-04 1 3.3%
5 RT-05 1 3.3%
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6 RT-06 1 3.3%
7 RT-07 - -
8 RT-08 1 3.3%
9 RT-09 1 3.3%
10 RT-10 1 3.3%
11 RT-11 1 3.3%
12 RT-12 1 3.3%
13 RT-13 1 3.3%
14 RT-14 1 3.3%
15 RT-15 1 3.3%
16 RT-16 1 3.3%
17 RT-17 1 3.3%
18 RT-18 1 3.3%
19 RT-19 - -
20 RT-20 1 3.3%
21 RT-21 1 3.3%
22 RT-22 1 3.3%
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23 RT-23 1 3.3%
24 RT-24 1 3.3%
25 RT-25 - -
26 RT-26 1 3.3%
27 RT-27 - -
28 RT-28 1 3.3%
29 RT-29 1 3.3%
30 RT-30 1 3.3%
TOTAL 26 86%
The last functional stage is re-orientation. Based on the result table above, Re-
orientation analysis results of the students' recount texts was 86%. It means that not all
students used re- orientation. Although it is an optional stage which the student may not use
it in their recount writing. From 24 texts, I provide some examples of reorientation taken
Table 20
Code Sentences
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After that, I told my little sister and my friends to visit
and knowledge.
has completed.
Based on the result table above, there are some sentences written to show re-
orientation which is used like conclusion that might include a personal comment or closure
2. Identifying The Problem Faces by The Student in Mastering Generic Stricture of Recount
Text
In this sense, the writer tries to identify the problem faced by the students in
mastering generic structure in writing recount text thoroughly the mistakes that have had in
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their text. Based on the analysis resultsThere are two mistakes that were made in accordance
Table 21
(RT-07)
Generic
No Code Recount Text
Structure
Based on the RT-07analysis result, can be found that this text has inappropriate
recount text organization. It just consists of 2 events. In this text doesn't inform clearly about
detailed and thorough (who, what, when, where, and why), The writer has ben started text to
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tell what happened. And the writer didn‟t make a completely event and there was not a re-
orientation. But on the underlined sentence could indicate a re-orientation in the text.
Table 22
(RT-25)
Generic
No Code Recount Text
Structure
Based on the RT-25analysis result, can be found that this text has inappropriate
recount text organization. It consists of 3 record of event. The writer doesn't inform clearly
about detailed and thorough (who, what, when, where, and why). The writer just inform
about what he had experienced. In this text the writer didn‟t make a completely text with a
re-orientation.
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b. Mis organizing the paraghrap don‟t have Re-Orientation
Table 23
(RT-19)
Generic
No Code Recount Text
Structure
Based on the RT-19 analysis result, can be found that this text has inappropriate
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reorientation in the text. Can be concluded the writer doesn‟t conclude or summarize all the
stories in writing.
Table 24
(RT-27)
Generic
No Code Recount Text
Structure
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Based on the RT-27 analysis result it can be found that this text has inappropriate
recount text organization. It consists of orientation and 3 record of event at the text there are
3 event forceps‟s at devout, but writer withholds re-orientation who tells about summarizing
opinion.
From the analysis conducted, do not all the students know about the generic
Structure of recount text. There are four text that the students are mastering the generic
structure not comply with the theory. Furthermore, the implications of this study can be used as
teaching material in writing class learning, better for text appropriate or not appropriate with the
theory.
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CHAPTER V
After analyzed the data from the fourth semester student years of stain salatiga, the writer
draws conclusion based on the analysis result. The writer also proposes some suggestion to improve
A. Conclusion
1. The Generic Structure of Student in Writing Recount Text, as show by the percentage.
Orientation 93%, event with one paragraph 40%, event with two paragraphs 36%, event
with tri paragraphs 20%, event with four paragraphs 3.3%, and re-orientation 86%.
2. The problem faced by the student in writing recount text are the difficulties to faced
orientation and re-orientation, there are two mistakes students in mastering genetic structure
of recount text. Firstly, Mis organizing the paraghrap don‟t have orientation and re-
orientation, as show in RT-07 and RT-25. Secondly, Mis organizing the paraghrap don‟t
3. Implication of the research for education to additional teaching material in writing class.
B. Suggestion
Based on the conclusion above, the writer proposes the following suggestion to the
teacher, student and the other writers who are interested in studying writing recount text as
follow:
1. To the Teachers
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The teacher can make this research as additional teaching material in writing class.
2. To the Students
b. They have to face the generic structure of recount text correctly and studies more improve
3. To other Writers
Research based on analysis of generic structure of recount text, so that this research
paper can be useful as starting point to investigate the topic more completely.
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