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Nama Najla Khairunnisa
Mata Kuliah EIN 1 Kode Mata Kuliah BAE 111
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Batas akhir Tanggal mengumpulkan 17 Juni
17 Juni 2016
pengumpulan 2016
Nama PJMK : Erlinna Nur S & Meidina Dewati

Dengan ini saya menyatakan bahwa isian dalam portofolio saya adalah karya saya
sendiri dan tidak untuk dicontoh tanpa sepengetahuan saya.
Apabila dengan sengaja terdapat kesamaan (plagiarisme) dalam pengerjaannya. Saya
bersedia untuk mengulang pengerjaan portofolio sebagaimana ditetapkan bersama
dengan PJMA BAE 111.
Tanggal : Kamis, 16 Juni 2016

Nama pembuat pernyataan : Najla Khairunnisa
NIM : 131511133120
ACTIVITY 1: FIND THE GENERIC WORDS
FROM THIS PARAGRAPH!!!
In fact there is some cross-linguistic contrastive research to suggest that the foreigner is
at a disadvantage. Even where the grammar and vocabulary may be perfectly adequate, it seems
to be the case that a non-native may tend to transfer the discourse patterns of her native
language to English. It has been suggested, for example, that Asian languages such as Chinese,
Japanese and Korean have different patterns of argument to English [3]. Thus one study found
that those Korean academics trained in the United States wrote in an ‘English’ discourse style,
while their colleague who had trained and worked only in Korea, with a paper published in the
same anthology, wrote in a Korean style with no statement of purpose of the article and a very
loose and unstructured pattern from the English point of view [4]. More generally Hinds has put
forward a widely discussed position that Japanese has a different expectation as to the degree of
involvement of the reader compared to English, with Japanese giving more responsibility to the
reader, English to the writer [5]. It might be objected though that this is relevant only to
languages and cultures which differ greatly to English. However, research on German has
shown that German academic writing in the social sciences has a much less linear structure than
English, to the extent that the English translation of a German textbook was criticized as
haphazard or even chaotic by American reviewers, whereas the original had received no
such reviews on the European continent [6]. Academic respectability in English is evidenced
by the appropriate discourse structure but in German by the appropriate level of abstraction
[7]. Similarly, academic Finnish texts have been shown to differ in the way they use
connectors and previews and are much less explicit than English in their drawing of
conclusions. Spanish also has a similar pattern [8]. English, therefore, would seem to be a more
‘writer-responsible’ language than at least some other European languages.
Answer Activity 1:
[1] Research : Survey
Foreigner : Stranger
Disadvantage : Detriment
[2] Even : Moreover

Perfectly : Flawlessly
Adequate : Suffice
Seems : Appearly
To be : Become
Case : Incident
May : Perhaps
Tend : Gravitate
[3] Suggest : Recmmend

Such as : Like
Different : Diverse
Patterns : Schemes
Argument : Reason
[4] Thus : Accordingly

Found : Discovered
Those : That
Trained : Be schooled
Style : Manner
While : Temporary
Publish : Issue
Purpose : Destination
Loose : Lax
[5] More : Over

Generally : Usually
Put Forward : Pose
Widely : Extensively
Position : Standing
Expectation : Hopefulness
Degree : Extent
Involvement : Complicity
Compare : Liken
[6] Only : Just

Different : Diverse
However : But
Research : Survey
Even : Moreover
[7] Respectability : Honor

Evidenced : Proof
Appropriate : Exact
Structure : Fabric
[8] Similarly : Likewise

Drawing : Picture
Conclusion : Inference
Also : Too
Similar : Alike
[9] Would : Should

Therefore : Hence
Than : Rather than
At least : Least of all
Paraphrase the paragraph above!

Several studies have found that traverse language may cause gringo are in a position
alarming. Grammar and vocabulary to be the case because they gravitate to use the original
language patterns to English. The Asian speech like Chinese, Japanese and Korean have diverse
schemes of opinion to the English speech. Some study say that the Korean people be schooled in
the United States wrote in the style of the English language, while those who only work in
Korea, with a same paper, written in the style of Korea without a statement of purpose of the
article and the pattern is very simple and orderly from English standpoint. Hinds has proposed
that the Japanese have diverse expectations with the level of participation of a reader than
English, and Japanese give more cognizance to the reader, while the English to the author. The
few objections think that language and culture to English very contrast. Research on Germany
has shown that writing in German have much defficient structure than English, while the English
translation of the German book be censured messy by American speakers. Appropriate lecture
structure in Germany is proof of academic respectability in English. The way they use the
connectors and previews and much easier to understand than English in their inference in the
Finnish text proved to be diverse. Spanish have a same schemes too. English will become more
'writer-responsible' language than some other European languages.
ACTIVITY 2 PARAPHRASING STRATEGY
Which paraphrasing strategy that had been used in these paraphrases?
Original:
Like drought, excess rainfall and flooding can also contribute to epidemics of waterborne
infectious diseases, in this case due to poor sanitation resulting from runoff from overwhelmed
sewage lines or the contamination of water by livestock.
(Source: Shuman, E., M.D. (2010, March 25). Global climate change and infectious
diseases. New
England Journal of Medicine; 362, 12, 1061-1063. Retrieved from nejm.org at MIT
Libraries.)
Paraphrase 1:
An overabundance of rainfall can also be a factor in spreading infectious diseases

carried by water, usually as a result of overflowing sewers and pollution from farm animals
(Shuman, 2010).
By comparing to original phrase, the pharaphrase strategy used was … Use synonyms
word with not generic words.
Reasons of your answer:
Paraphrase 2:
When there is an overabundance of rainfall, two situations can occur: sewers can
overflow and water can become polluted by the presence of livestock, both of which can lead
tooutbreaks of waterborne diseases (Shuman, 2010).
By comparing to original phrase, the pharaphrase strategy used was …Change the pattern
and use synonyms.
Original:
Current political and economic incentives favor industry and other interest groups at the
expense of health: consider the subsidies paid for corn-based agriculture and mass-produced
processed foods, the tobacco revenue generated in countries with a government-owned
tobacco industry, industrial growth in the face of environmental pollution, and the spread
of the sedentary automobile-and-television culture.
(Source: Venkat Narayan, K.M., Ali, M.K., and Koplan, J. (2010, September 23). Global
noncomunicable diseases – where worlds meet. The New England Journal of Medicine, 363;
13. 1196-1198. Retrieved from nejm.org at MIT Libraries.)
Paraphrase 3:
Researchers point out that in attempting to implement economic growth, industry is often
favored over health: government may subsidize certain forms of agriculture and food
production, contribute to tobacco consumption in nations where it owns the industry and
otherwise promote growth of industries that pollute. (Venkat Narayan et. al, 2011).
By comparing to original phrase, the pharaphrase strategy used was ..... Not change the
pattern but use synonym words.
Original:
The prevalence and impact of non-communicable diseases continue to grow. Chronic diseases
account for 60% of all deaths worldwide, and 80% of these deaths occur in low-or middle-
income countries, where the toll is disproportionate during the prime productive years of youth
and middle age.
(Source: Venkat Narayan, K.M., , Ali, M.K., and Koplan, J. (2010, September
23). Global noncomunicable diseases – where worlds meet. The New England Journal of
Medicine, 363; 13. 1196- 1198. Retrieved from nejm.org at MIT Libraries.)
Paraphrase 4:
The increasing spread of non-communicable diseases can be seen in figures that show these
diseases are responsible for 60% of all deaths on the planet, and that in countries where
the population is primarily of low or middle income, the impact is greatest, often focusing on
those who are young or middle-aged (Venkat Narayan et. al, 2011).
By comparing to original phrase, the pharaphrase strategy used was ..... Use synonyms
word with not generic words.
Article 1
Original Paraphrasing
To study the effects of fasting in Ramadan on Some researchers studied 465 patients with
cardiac patients, 465 fasting outpatients with heart disease as long as fasting to throughout
heart diseases were studied during the month of the impact of fasting in Ramadan.
Ramadan (October 24 to November 24, 2003).
Sumber : http://www.smj.org.sa/index.php/smj/article/view/5539/3313
Article 2
Every year, nephrologists around the world have In the month of Ramadan every year for the
to face their socio-medical duties towards their medical personnel had to face cases of patients
Muslim chronic kidney disease (CKD) patients with chronic kidney disease who want to fast.
who wish to fulfill their religious obligation of
fasting during the month of Ramadan.
Sumber : http://ckj.oxfordjournals.org/content/early/2014/05/30/ckj.sfu046.full
Article 3
Fasting during Ramadan is essentially a radical The month of fasting can train us in diet and
change in lifestyle for the period of one lunar provide health benefits in the example, can
month that may affect cardiovascular risk in reduce cardiovascular risk in patients with
patients with coronary artery disease (CAD) and coronary artery disease (CAD) and cerebro-
cerebro-vascular disease (CVD) [4, 5]. vascular disease (CVD)
Sumber : https://nutritionj.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1475-2891-11-69
Article 4
To our knowledge, this is thefirst study on Some study can add to our learning about the
the effects of fasting on patients with cardiac results of fasting in patients with cardiac
disease. disease.
Sumber :
https://www.researchgate.net/publication/8890783_The_effect_of_fasting_in_Ramadan_on_p
atients_with_heart_disease
Article 5
The present study was therefore aimed at to Some study observed in patients with risk
determine the effect of Ramadan fasting on factors for CVD and also to assess the effects
surrogate cardiovascular biomarkers (hs-CRP, of Ramadan fasting on body weight, blood
PAI-1) in patients with multiple CVD risk pressure, fasting lipid (FSL) and fasting blood
factors and also to assess the effect of Ramadan sugar (FBS) and HbA1c to determine the result
fasting on body weight, blood pressure, fasting and impact of Ramadan on biomarkers of
lipids (FSL) and fasting blood sugar (FBS) and cardiovascular replacement ( hs-CRP, PAI-1).
HbA1c.
Sumber : http://ispub.com/IJCVR/7/2/13033
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from week 8.
Develop min 3
Judul Tugas paragraphs to Tugas No. 9 and 10
show that you
have achieved new
skills
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Tanggal : Rabu, 15 Juni 2016

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Fasting during the month of Ramadan among patients with chronic

kidney disease
Ramadan is the ninth month in the Muslim lunar calendar this month Muslims perform
activities such as fasting, tarawih, warning the decline in the Qur'an, seek Laylatul Qadr night,
and the emphasis on reading the Koran, pay tithes and ends with the celebration, or a day of
victory. The month of Ramadan is a religious obligation for Muslims. The month of Ramadan
can be referred to as Syahrut Tarbiyah or Education Month. to maintain the health of our bodies
by eating regularly. Or we are taught in order to set the time when the time to eat, when to work,
when to rest and when to worship. The benefits of fasting is to maintain health, including
keeping physically and organ in our body. One of the organs that take care of is the kidney.
Diseases that can be caused by kidney is chronic renal failure. Chronic Kidney Disease (CKD) is
the process of kidney damage with a span of more than three months. CKD can cause simtoma
form of glomerular filtration rate below 60 mL / min / 1.73 m2 or above that amount but is
accompanied by abnormal urinary sediment. The presence of kidney stones can also be
indicative of CKD in patients with congenital abnormalities such as hyperoxaluria and
cystinuria. The symptoms of deteriorating kidney function are not specific, and may include
feeling generally unwell and experiencing a reduced appetite. Chronic kidney disease can also be
identified when it leads to one of the recognized complications, such as cardiovascular disease,
anemia or pericarditis. However fasting in the chronic kidney disease is not recommended by
doctors.
Fasting in the chronic kidney disease is not recommended by doctors. During fasting,
Muslims are expected to avoid drinking and eating from dawn until sunset every day for one
lunar month. Very little is known about the safety of exposing the patient to fast CKD under
climatic conditions during the fasting month. This study shows that changes in renal function
during fasting insignificant or even improved by the end of the month. In the article I get, there
are the results of comparative studies among people with chronic kidney disease who are not
fasting and fasting. Results of the study was in people with chronic renal failure who fasted had
higher levels of keratin compared with chronic kidney disease who are not fasting. Increased
levels of keratin in people with chronic kidney disease showed fall in glomerular filtration rate
and as a result of a decrease in the kidney's ability to excrete waste products. Increasingly, the
higher creatinine levels.
By looking at the effects of fasting on people with chronic kidney disease, doctors
recommend that you should not need to fast as it can cause increasing keratin in the kidneys to
cause death.
Sumber : http://ckj.oxfordjournals.org/content/early/2014/05/30/ckj.sfu046.full
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Judul Tugas lecture’s Tugas No. 11
command. Make
an essay about it.
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Communication with Anxious Clients
Anxious is a fear that is not clear and is not supported by the situation. When a person
feels anxious, someone is uncomfortable, fear may even have a hunch would get in trouble when
he did not understand why the emotion that threatens to happen to him. No object can be
identified as stimulus anxious.
Anxious to have two aspects, aspects of healthy and harmful aspects, which depend on
the level of anxiety, anxiety experienced long, and how well people pass coping with anxiety.
Anxiety can be seen in the range of mild, moderate and severe. Each level causing emotional and
physiological changes in individuals. Anxiety is different from fear, fear is the characteristics of
the object or source-specific and can be identified and can be explained by the individual.
The nurse is the person who is closest to the client so that we as a nurse should be able to
cope with clients who experience anxiety. What we can do is to communicate with clients. The
communication is therapeutic communication, in this case the communication made by a nurse at
the time of nursing interventions should be able to provide therapeutic benefits for the healing of
the client. Therefore, a nurse must improve the knowledge and skills applicable therapeutic
communication and patient satisfaction that the needs can be met.
Therapeutic communication is the interpersonal relationship between the nurse and the
client, in this connection the nurse and the client acquire a shared learning experience in order to
improve the emotional experience of the client. From some of the above can be understood that
the therapeutic communication is communication that have therapeutic significance for the client
and performed by nurses to help clients achieve back condition adaptive and positive.
Anxiety can arise due to the negative mindset embedded in the subconscious. Mindset it
is mindset and the mindset was formed from human interaction with the environment. Anxiety
experienced by clients can be many different forms for example, when the client knows a disease
that is diagnosed by a doctor, at the time of going to undergo major surgery, at the time after
surgery. For example, the client will perform major surgery, the client because never before
surgery then the client will be scared and imagining things - bad things that will happen at the
time of surgery, then the client will continue to think badly of things that will happen to him.
Anxiety will also affect the physiological condition of the client.
When we begin to communicate with the anxiety disorder first step we do is to give
confidence to each other between the client and the nurse and maintaining client privacy. Their
sense of security, closeness and openness will be greatly strengthened communication and
friendship. The nurse approached by referring clients to talk heart to heart with emotion.
Dialogue is delivered in a gentle and fun that can distract a client that is not focused on anxiety.
In a communication to the client should use good ethics and correct. For example saluted
and introduced himself, calling the client's name or family name, make eye contact, use the
volume sounds good, use of intonation are good, maintaining the dignity of clients, develop
positive behavior, using the techniques of active listening, do not interrupt or interrupt,
explaining in an easily understandable and concise, do not use language that is difficult to
understand, show attention to cues, approaching, or nonverbal communication others such as
smiles, respect the rights of patients, help, and attention, giving the impression that we are
listening and trying to understand what disclosed patient, answered every question patiently and
attentively.
It aims to provide an opportunity for the client to receive the actual situation, the client
feel comfortable and do not feel the anxiety again. In addition, for easy nurses in influencing the
problems experienced by the client.
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your new skills
Judul Tugas Tugas No. 12
mentioned no.1
until no.2
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Score: 150 point
NOTE TAKING
Note Taking Involves:
 Recording ideas and facts that you learn

 Helps you remember and use the information later
Rules of Note Taking:
 Record => Write all important and meaningful information

 Reduce => Make a key words
 Recite => Write again the information with your own words.
 Reflect => a. Do you have opinions?
b. Raise questions
c. Record your original idea
 Review => a. Re reading your notes
b. Skim over the main ideas and details
Note Taking from Reading

Rowntree (1976) SQ3R:
 Survey – flip through the chapter or book and note the layout, first and last chapters or
paragraphs, look at the headings used, familiarize yourself with the reading.
 Question – Ask questions about the way the reading is structured and think about the
questions you will need to keep in mind while reading. Think about whether or not you think the
book is relevant or if it’s current and if it suits the purpose of your study.
 Read – read actively but quickly, looking for the main points of the reading – don’t take
any notes – you might want to read through twice quickly.
 Recall – Write down the main points of the reading and any really important facts, and
opinions that help support the main points. Also record the bibliographic details.
 Review – repeat the first three steps over and make sure you haven’t missed anything. At
this point you might like to finalize your notes and re-read your notes or write down how the
material you’ve just covered relates to your question or task.
Note Taking Method
 The Cornell Method

 The Outline Method
 The Mapping Method
 The Charting Method
 The Sentence Method
Cornell Method
Outline Method
Mapping Method
Charting Method
Sentence Method
 Recognize and record specific / special sentence made by lecturer

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[2] Even : Moreover

[3] Suggest : Recmmend

[4] Thus : Accordingly

[5] More : Over

[6] Only : Just

[7] Respectability : Honor

[8] Similarly : Likewise

[9] Would : Should

Paraphrase the paragraph above!

An overabundance of rainfall can also be a factor in spreading infectious diseases

Nama PJMK : Erlinna Nur S & Meidina Dewati

Tanggal : Rabu, 15 Juni 2016

Fasting during the month of Ramadan among patients with chronic

Nama PJMK : Erlinna Nur S & Meidina Dewati

Tanggal : Selasa, 14Juni 2016

Tanggal : Senin, 13 Juni 2016

 Recording ideas and facts that you learn

Rules of Note Taking:

 Record => Write all important and meaningful information

Note Taking from Reading

Note Taking Method

 The Cornell Method

 Recognize and record specific / special sentence made by lecturer

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