Professional Documents
Culture Documents
TEACHING SEQUENCE
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 1 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
ATESOL NSW PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT PROGRAM 2005
This unit of work was developed by Rose Stockwell of Casimir College Marrickville, with some assistance from Robyn Conlan
of De la Salle College, Ashfield, as part of the 2004-5 ATESOL NSW Quality Teacher Programme Project: Programming ESL
in English 7-12 within a Quality Teaching framework.
Disclaimer
The views expressed herein do not necessarily represent the views of the Australian Government Department of Education, Science and
Training.
Acknowledgement
This project was funded by the Australian Government Department of Education, Science and Training as a quality teacher initiative under
the Australian Government Quality Teacher Programme.
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 2 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 3 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Unit of work on ‘Holes’ by Louis Sachar
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 4 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Outcomes Language to be taught Teaching and learning activities Resources
Developing a character profile
Students:
1.5 Skills: Access website
2.2 Skimming and www.kidsreads.com/authors/au-sachar-louis.asp Worksheet 4
ESL scanning Answer comprehension questions Teacher’s ref 4a
Scales 5.8 Inference Read book review and design book Butcher’s paper
Discussion cover Coloured markers
Referencing www.kidsreads.com/reviews/0374332657.asp Text of ‘Holes’
Elaborating Read Chapters 1-8 with support Computers
from teacher
Choose a character and work in
pairs to come up with a basic premise about that
character
Find excerpts in the book which
demonstrate this and explain their reasons
Write their findings on butcher’s
OHT 4b
paper under the headings: idea / example/
explanation – include page references
Teacher gives model example of character ‘Mr Sir’
After discussion and refinement students word process
this information and edit their drafts.
Quality Teaching Pedagogy
Quality learning environment – engagement, social support, students’ self-regulation
Intellectual quality – substantive communication
Significance – background knowledge, cultural knowledge
Outcomes Language to be taught Teaching and learning activities Resources
2.2 Grammar: Students:
ESL Conjunctions Read description of X-Ray’s OHT 5
Scale Ways to start character from website Cards (template 5a)
s 6.8 sentences www.teachit.co.uk on OHT
Dependent clauses Deconstruct the passage
in first position Underline words/phrases starting
Punctuation sentences and unknown vocabulary
conventions Discuss as a class
Developing vocabulary Teacher removes OHT and gives students cards with
individual phrases from above passage typed on to it
Students re-order text in pairs
Time limit given
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 5 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Quality Teaching Pedagogy
Quality learning environment – engagement
Intellectual quality – substantive communication, metalanguage, problematic knowledge
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 7 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
ESL Recognising cues in Introducing visual literacy DVD Holes The film-script was
Scal nonverbal Students watch the DVD of ‘Holes’. This is to show that, written by Louis Sachar and the
es communication throughout a story, details of a character’s body language, script is very true to the novel
6.2 Informal/formal expressions, personality, racial/cultural background and
language use way they react to events provide the audience with a
bigger picture of that character
Quality Teaching Pedagogy
Quality learning environment – engagement
Significance – cultural knowledge
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 9 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 1
Describing People
build
length hobbies
hair
attitudes
face likes and dislikes
Name
eyes
age
colour
bad points
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 10 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 1a Teacher’s Reference
Describing People
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 11 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 1b
Describing people
When we describe a person’s/people’s appearance, remember:
He has
Liam freckles.
He has
Moses wavy hair
He is
Liam short.
They are
Julio and David
When the subject of the sentence is a part of the person’s body, remember:
Her
smile is crooked.
His
Her
eyebrows are bushy.
His
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 12 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 2
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 13 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 2a Teacher’s Reference
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 14 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Cards Template 2b
Putting Things in Order
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 15 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
verb/past tense adverb adjective noun
agree/agreed agreeably agreement
agreeable
honourable
admirable
acceptable
fabulous
appropriate
pleasant
marvellous
splendid
suitable
Worksheet 3
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 16 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Word Groups ‘Good’ Adjectives
Name: ___________________________ Date: ______________________
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 17 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 3
appalling
beastly
villainous
dreadful
delinquent
frightful/frighten
shocking
dishonest
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 18 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
verb/past tense adverb adjective noun
agree/agreed agreeably agreement
agreeable
honour/honoured honourably honour
honourable
admire/admire admirably admiration
admirable
accept/accepted acceptably acceptance
acceptable
fabulously
fabulous
Appropriately Appropriacy
appropriate
please/pleased pleasurably pleasure
pleasant
marvel/marvelled marvellously marvel
marvellous
splendidly
splendid
suit/suited suitably suitability
suitable
Worksheet 3a Teacher’s Reference
Word Groups ‘Good’ Adjectives
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 19 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 3a Teacher’s Reference
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 20 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Cards Template 3b
agreeable shameful
appalling honourable
beastly villainous
dreadful admirable
delinquent delightful
acceptable fabulous
appropriate pleasant
marvellous chronic
frightful ghastly
shocking dishonest
splendid suitable
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 21 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 3c
1. He spoke _____________ .
dishonest
dishonesty
dishonestly
2. He is a _____________ person.
dishonest
dishonesty
dishonestly
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 22 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
7. I made an ___________ with my parents to work hard this year.
agreeable
agreement
agreeably
Now make up three questions using the good/bad words for your friends to do:
10 __________________________________________________
_______________
_______________
_______________
11 __________________________________________________
_______________
_______________
_______________
12 __________________________________________________
_______________
_______________
_______________
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 23 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 4
www.kidsreads.com/authors/au-sachar-louis.asp
3 Louis Sachar decided to be a children’s writer – but what was his other job?
11 What are the names of his wife and daughter? How old is his daughter?
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 24 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 4a Teacher’s Reference
www.kidsreads.com/authors/au-sachar-louis.asp
3 Louis Sachar decided to be a children’s writer. What was his other job? Lawyer
4 Name five of his hobbies:- playing chess, cards, skiing, playing guitar, singing
5 How long does he write for each day? Two hours a day
7 Why is Tippy, his dog, very clever? After 2 hours she taps him on the leg.
8 Does he talk about the books he is writing? No, not until the book is finished.
10 What did he do between 1980 – 1988? He worked as a part time lawyer and
writer.
11 What are the names of his wife and daughter? How old is his daughter? Wife is
Carla and daughter Sherre. The daughter is 18, born in 1987.
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 25 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
OHT 4b
Holes
Describe the relationship between Mr Sir and Stanley.
He says, ‘My name is Mr Sir. Whenever you speak to me you He wants to show Stanley that he has a
lot of power over him.
must call me by my name, is that clear?’
He also says, ‘You’re not in the Girl Scouts anymore.’ He says this to Stanley to let him know he
needs to toughen up to survive at Camp
Green Lake.
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 26 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Template 5a
and the other boys ‘did whatever X-Ray asked them.’ (53)
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 27 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
This nasty sarcasm finally provokes the fight
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 28 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
OHT 5
Script from www.teachit.co.uk
is also very much ‘the leader’ (53), and the other boys ‘did whatever
X-Ray asked them.’ (53) This shows that X-Ray is powerful: Stanley
‘didn’t want to get on his bad side.’ (52) Those words – ‘bad side’
shovel (27) and he decides who gets their lunch first. Later, X-Ray
gets the whole group to gang up on Stanley, teasing him with, ‘he’s
better than all of us.’ (133) This nasty sarcasm finally provokes the
On the other hand, when X-Ray first meets Stanley ‘he smiled and
shook his hand.’ (18) This proves that he can be warm and friendly. It
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 29 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet Scaffold 5b
Character Profile
When you are writing about your character please include the following:
Character’s name/nickname:
When you write about the character’s personality and appearance include:
quotations from the text
the page number where you can find this information
and give an explanation
Examples
X-ray did not care much about his appearance. ‘He wore glasses, but they were so
dirty that Stanley wondered how he could see out of them.’ page 19
X-ray was prepared to support and stand up for Stanley. In the Wreck Room one of
the other inmates wants to have a fight with Stanley. X-ray puts his hand on
Stanley’s shoulder and warns the other boy, ’You don’t want to mess with the
Caveman.’ page 44.
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 30 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
OHT 7
Stanley Yelnats
is an overweight boy who does not have any friends from school and is
often picked on by his classmates and the school bully, Derrick Dunne.
Stanley's family is cursed with bad luck and although they do not have
much money they always try to remain hopeful and look on the bright
side of things. Stanley shares these traits with his family and although
threaten him, like the Warden, and while he tries not to get in trouble
he also stands up for his own right and the rights of his friends. Stanley
opinions of the majority of the boys and form a friendship with Zero,
the least popular kid in the camp. Although the cruelty of those around
him initially causes Stanley to become hard and treat Zero with
form a strong friendship. They each make sacrifices for one another
and by the time that he leaves Camp Green Lake, Stanley is physically
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 31 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
OHT 8
Zero
Zero's real name is Hector Zeroni, but he has been called Zero for most
of his life. He has been homeless for most of his life, and his mother
abandoned (or lost) him when he was still small. Zero has not had
Despite all the adversity that he has faced, Zero knows that he is smart
friends with Stanley, the reader learns that Zero is silent because he
does not like answering questions and most likely because he is wary
of people like Mr. Pendanski, who always mock him. Zero has suffered
exemplified by the fact that he shares his last jar of "sploosh" with
begins to talk more and scowl less. Zero is also very honest and
valuable things so that people will not mind as much. It is really Zero
who has stolen the shoes that Stanley was accused of stealing and
Zero feels bad for Stanley and apologizes for stealing them.
www.sparksnotes.com/lit/holes/characters.html
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 32 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 9
Words other than……
(My Wordbank - RIC publications p. 62-63)
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 33 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 10
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 34 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 11
Describing a Person
When you are writing about your character think about making your work as interesting
as possible.
I live with my brother, sister and guardian. They all have very different characters. I
have decided to describe my sister.
Although…..
Although my sister is very clever, she is also quite lazy.
After…..
After she finishes doing something she never tidies up.
Sometimes…
Sometimes she says she wants to be an actress.
While….
While she studies she sings.
At first,…….
At first, she made me really angry but now I am used to her.
Whenever……
Whenever she has free time she plays the guitar or listens to her favourite music. She
loves…..
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 35 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Card Template 12
Although I… After I…
While I… At first I…
If you ask me I… If I…
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 36 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 13
My Character is ____________________
Give some information about yourself, your job or how you came to be at Camp Green Lake
Talk about the major event or issue that happens to you in the book. This part needs to be at
least150 words.
Don’t leave without saying good bye….Make sure you do it the way you would have done in
the book
Your first draft needs to be written in your exercise book for collection on Thursday 17th March.
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 37 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 14 Teacher’s Reference
Question Dice
Co-operative Learning and Critical Thinking
Chuck Wiederhold 1999
When/Where will
Why might/could
How can
What did/is
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 38 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville
Worksheet 15
1. Describe 2. Evaluate
…. the current situation/practice …… the strengths and weakness of the current situation/practice
ATESOL NSW AGQTP Stage 4 unit – Novel Holes 39 Rose Stockwell – Casimir Catholic College, Marrickville