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Grammar>Fragments
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Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is digital sound, you can choose to
combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.
Analog sound uses electric signals to make sounds. Sound is really just changes in
air pressure
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Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is analog sound, you can choose to
combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.
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in a device
This sentence about Analog is missing a predicate. A sentence must always have a
subject and a predicate so it can express a complete thought. The predicate is the
part of a sentence that expresses what is said about the subject. It usually starts
with a verb.
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Second, digital
Grammar>Fragments
"The highlighted part is missing a subject and a verb, which makes it hard to
understand. The subject of a sentence is what or whom the sentence is about while a
verb is a word or compound word that expresses an action, events, or state of
being. To correct this, you should complete the sentence by adding a subject and a
verb. This will help you make a sentence with a complete thought.
Your sentence should be rewritten like this:
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Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.
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The word "single" is not correct in this sentence. This means one or alone. You
should have used the word "signal," because you are talking about a message, sound,
or image that is carried by waves of light or sound.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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a state in which you are not aware of what is happening around you
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The word "trance" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a state in which
you are not aware of what is happening around you. You should have used the word
"transfer," because you are talking about moving someone or something from one
place to another.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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The word "laugh" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to an expression of
happiness. You should have used the word "large," because you are talking about the
size of the device.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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The word "pile" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a group of things
put on top of one another. You should have used the word "file," because you are
talking about a collection of computer data.
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so you can use the right words in your writing.
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It can also be transferred like files on a computer
a collection of computer data that forms a single unit and that is given a
particular name
The word "convulsion" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a sudden
violent shaking of the body. You should have used the word "convert," because you
are talking about changing something from one form or use to another.
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so you can use the right words in your writing.
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the process of doing and seeing things and of having things happen to you
Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
"cape : a piece of clothing that does not have sleeves and that fits closely at the
neck and hangs over the shoulders, arms, and back
copy : making a version of something that is exactly or almost exactly like the
original"
converse vs. convert
Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
conversed : to talk usually informally with someone
Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
"divide : to separate something into two or more parts or pieces
device : an object, machine, or piece of equipment that has been made for some
special purpose."
"Bridge
The word "spices" is not correct in this sentence. This means a substance that is
used in cooking to add flavor to food and that comes from a dried plant and is
usually a powder or seed. You should have used the word "species," because you are
talking about a group of animals or plants that are similar and can produce young
animals or plants.
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so you can use the right words in your writing.
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Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
The word "bacteria" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to a kind of
microorganism. You should have used the word "symbiosis," because you are talking
about the relationship between two different kinds of living things.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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The word "step" is not correct in this sentence. This means one of a series of
actions that are done to achieve something. You should have used the word "type,"
because you are talking about one member of a group of people or things that have
similar features or qualities.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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The word "sores" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to painful spot on
the body. You should have used the word "sort," because you are talking about a
particular kind or type of person or thing.
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so you can use the right words in your writing.
Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
flea : a very small insect that lives on animals and that has strong legs used for
jumping
flea : a very small insect that lives on animals and that has strong legs used for
jumping"
type : one member of a group of people or things that have similar features or
qualities"
Par
Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
plant : a living thing that grows in the ground, usually has leaves or flowers, and
needs sun and water to survive
planet : a large, round object in space, such as the Earth, that travels around a
star, such as the sun"
Chopped/Short sentences
Mercury is nearby the sun. It has extreme temperature. It goes around the sun every
88 years."
Vocabulary>Awkward
Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is Mercury, you can choose to
combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.
"Mercury is near the sun, has extreme temperature, and goes around the sun every 88
years."
Birdie
Transcontinental Railroad
Interstate Highway System
Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is the Interstate Highway System,
you can choose to combine them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward
and strong.
"The Interstate Highway System was constructed after World War 2 and made the cars
more useful."
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Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.
Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.
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The word "fore" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to the front part of a
boat, ship, or airplane. You should have used the word "four," because you
enumerating the different engineering projects in the U.S.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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This sentence about the Erie Canal is missing a linking verb. Linking verbs do not
express action. Instead, they connect the subject of the verb to additional
information about the subject. For this sentence, use the linking verb "is" since
this sentence has a singular subject.
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The word "reshaked" is not correct in this sentence. This means to move violently
back and forth or up and down with short, quick movements. You should have used the
word "reshaped," because you are talking about the influence of these four projects
to the development of U.S. economy.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
The word "know" is not correct in this sentence. This means to have some kind of
information in your mind. You should have used the word "now," because you are
talking about the present time.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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The word "countries" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to an area of
land that is controlled by its own government. You should have used the word
"coast," because you are talking about the land along or near a sea or ocean.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
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The word "cost" is not correct in this sentence. This refers to the price of
something. You should have used the word "coast," because you are talking about the
land along or near a sea or ocean.
Listen to the script/passage very carefully and take note of relevant information
so you can use the right words in your writing.
"It starts at Lake Erie and connects all the coasts of the United States."
"Laying track between the two systems was an enormous feat of engineering."
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The Four Developments that Reshaped the U.S. Economy
Vocabulary>Incorrect Word
aloud : in a voice that can be heard
VOCAB
Incorrect word
You have incorrectly used the word "WORD1" in this sentence. This word means ___.
However, you seem to be talking about ___, and "WORD2" is the correct word for
that. So that you can help your readers concentrate on what you have to say, always
make sure that you use the appropriate words and phrases in communicating your
ideas. Here is how you could have written your sentence:
"Inappropriate
(colloquial)"
"
"inappropriate
(slang)"
awkward sentence/clause
This sentence has awkward wording. Therefore, the idea is hard to understand.
Always use proper words or phrases to help you express your ideas or opinions more
clearly. Here is an example of how you can write this sentence:
Your writing has too many short sentences, which makes it awkward. Since the
highlighted parts have the same subject, which is _, you can choose to combine
them. Doing so will make your statement straightforward and strong.
"_."
no use of synonyms
You used ________________ many times in your writing. However, you should not use
words or phrases over and over again because doing so makes your writing
repetitive. You can restate your ideas using different words to make your writing
more interesting and to develop your vocabulary skills.
For example, you could have written the phrase "PHRASE" this way:
Some of your sentences are with the same structure and length. It can grow
monotonous for readers. Varying sentence style and structure can reduce repetition
and add emphasis. Adding sentence variety can give your writing life and rhythm.
Grammar
missing subject
This sentence about ____ is missing a subject. The subject of a sentence is the
doer of the action or states what is being talked about. It is usually a noun or a
pronoun.
In this sentence about____, you are missing a subject. The subject in a sentence
is the one performing the action stated by the verb or predicate. Remember that all
sentences must have a subject and a predicate, so they can express a complete
thought.
missing verb
(predicate)
This sentence about ____ is missing a predicate. A sentence must always have a
subject and a predicate so it can express a complete thought. The predicate is the
part of a sentence that expresses what is said about the subject. It usually starts
with a verb. Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:
This sentence is missing a linking verb. Linking verbs do not express action.
Instead, they connect the subject of the verb to additional information about the
subject. For this sentence, use the linking verb "is" since this sentence has a
singular subject. Here is an example of how you could rephrase this sentence:
missing object