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SENTENCE STRUCTURE _ _ _ _ __
It is important when you are producing material on the TOEFL iBT that you use a variety of
correct sentence structures. You should be sure that you know how to use simple sentences,
compound sentences, and complex sentences.
The first sentence is incorrect because it has the verb is bui: is rnissing a subject. The second
sentence is incorrect because it has a subject ideas but is missing a verb.
Another type of incorrect simple sentence is one that íncludes a subordinate adverb clause
connector in l'ront of the subject and the verb. The following chart lists common subordinate
adverb clause connectors.
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The first sentence is incorrect because the subordinate adverb clause connector Because is in
front of the subject manager and the verb in.structed. The second sentence is incorrect because
The following chart outlines the key information that you should remember about using
correct simple sentences.
APPENDIX EXERCISE Bl: Underline the subjects once and the verbs twice. Put parenthe-
ses around the subordinate clause connectors. Then indicate if the sentences are correct ( C)
or incorrect (!).
6. Fortunately, the piece of paper with the crncial information was found.
1L As no one else in the world would have made the sarne decision.
16. We forgot.
17. To take the medicine at the righl time to be the most effective.
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Appendix B2: USE CORRECT COMPOUND SENTENCES
A cornpound sentence is a sentence that has more than one main clause. 5 The main clauses in
a compound sentence can be connected correctly with a coordinate conjunction (and, but, 01;
so, yet) anda comma O or with a semi-colon(;). Look at the following examples.
In the first example, the two main clauses Jack studies hard and He gets high grades are not
combined into a compound sentence. In the second example, the two main clauses are com-
bined into a compound sentence with the coordinate conjunction so and a comma. In the
third example, the same two main clauses are combined into a compound sentence with a
semi-colon.
· It is possible to use adverb transitions in compound sentences. (See Appendix A3 for a list
of transition expressions.) It is important to note that adverb transitions are not conjunctions,
so either a semi-colon ora coordinate conjunction with a comma is needed.
Look at the following examples of sentences with adverb transitions.
Jack studies hard. As a result, he gets high grades.
Jack studies hard, and, as a result, he gets high grades.
Jack studies hard; as a result, he gets high grades.
In the first example, the two main clauses Jack studies hard and he gets high grades are not
combined into a compound sentence even though the adverb transition As a result is used. In
the second example, the two main clauses are combined into a compound sentence with the
coordinate conjunction and and a comma; the adverb transition as a result is included after
the coordinate conjunction. In the third example, the same two main clauses are cornbined
into a compound sentence with a semi-colon, and the adverb transition is set off from the
second main clause v.cith a comma.
The following chart outlines the key information that you should remember about using
correct compound sentences.
5 A main clause is an independent clause that h.as both a subject anda verb and is not
introduced by a subordinate clause connector.
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APPENDIX EXERCISE B2: Underline the subjects once and the verbs twice in the main
clauses. Put parentheses around the pun~tuatíon, transitions, ~~d ~~nnectors that join the
. main clauses. Then indicate if the sentences are c01Tect ( C) or incon-ect (I).
3. She expected to graduatc in the sp1;ng, howevcr she did not graduate until fall.
4. My family moved a lot duríng rny youth; as a result, I always had to make new
friends.
S. I made a firm promisc to my friend and J vowed 1.o keep it.
7. The students waited in a long line to registe1: Finally, they got to the front of the
line.
8. His parents advised him to think abou1. it sorne more he <lid not take their advice.
9. My firstjob in the company was as a part-time worker, later I was given a full-time
job.
1O. Tom really '.vanted to be successful, yet he <lid not know how to accomplish this.
11. We must return tbc books to the library today, otJ1erwisc we will have to pay a fine.
12. She always tries not to get too angry. Howevet~ she sometimes loses her temper.
13. Therefore she has gotten a joh, she can pay all of her bilis.
_ _ 14. She had the surgery recommended by her doctor; as a result, she is doing better
now.
15. They left the moncy in a savings account, it began to col!ect sorne interest.
16. I wanted to get a high-paying job last summer; unfortunately, this was impossible.
18. An accídent happened at the comer, afterwards, the police came and wrote a
report.
_ _ 19. The plan has a number of advanlages it also has a nurnber of disadvantages.
_ _ 20. The directions must be followed exactly; otherwise, the outcome will be ver:y bad.
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Appendix 83: USE CORRECT COMPLEX SENTENCES .
A cornplex sentence is a sentence with one main dause and at least one suhordinate clause. 6
Noun, adjective, and adverb clauses are all types of subordinate clauses. Each of the following
sentences is a complex sentence because it contains a subordinate clause.
The first complex sentence contains the subordinate noun clause what he did. The second
complex sentence contains the subordinate adjective clause who fi.nishes first. The final com-
plex sentence contains the subordinate adverb clause when I am ahle.
A variety of errors with cornplex structures can occur in student writing, but two errors that
occur with great frequency are (1) repeated subjects after adjective clauses, and (2) repeated
subjects after noun clauses as subjects. To understand these two problems, you must recognize
adjective and noun clauses. The following chart lists connectors that introduce adjective and
noun clauses.
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Look at the following examples of errors With adjective and noun clauses.
1
A good friend (who lives down the street) she* did me a favor.
SUBJECT SUBJECT VERB
The first sentence is incorrect because it contains an extra subject. The correct subject friend
comes before the adjective clause who lives down the street, andan extra subject she comes
after the adjective clause_ To correct this sentence, you should omit the extra subject she. The
second sentence is also incorrect because it contains an extra subject. 'What my advisor told me
yesterday is a noun clause subject, and this noun clause subject is followed by the extra subject
it. To correct this sentence, you should omit the extra subject it.
6 A subordinate clause is a dependent dause that has both a subject and a verb and is
introduced by a su bordinate clause connector.
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The following chart outlines the key infonnation that you should remember about using
correct cornplex sentences .
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APPENDIX EXERCISE B3: Underline the subjects once and the verbs twice in the main
clauses. Put parentheses around the subordinate noun and adjective clauses. Then índicate if
the sentences are correct (C) or incorrect (I). ·
L The reason (that) he took the money !!'. was to pay the bilis.
3. The ticket that 1 need to get onto the plane was not íncluded in the packet.
5. The day when 1 found out the news it was a good day.
6. The teacher whose advice I remember to this day was my sixth grade teacher.
9. The man who helped me the most in my life he was my high school coach.
1O. How the paper got finished on time remains unclear to me.
12. The plans that we made for our trip were not carefully thought out.
13. The process by which the decisions were rnade it was very slow.
15. The employee who has the inforrnation that you need is out of the office.
17. The officer who stopped me on the highway he gave me a ticket for speeding.
_ _ 20. Why they said what they said to the man who tried to help them it was not clear.
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APPENDIX REVIEW EXERCISE (Bl-B3): Correct the errors in the following passages.
l. 1 have two very personal reasons for corning to this conclusion. One of the reasons is
related to my family relationshlps, the other is related to my finances.
2. A decision has been reached but the decision has not yet been announced. We must wait
until four o'dock, that is when the decision will be announced.
3. What just happened this moming it was a complete shock to me. My math professor
announced in class this morning that the exam that was scheduled for next Friday
it would be given this moming. Unfortunately, I was not prepared for the exam this
morning because did not expect the exam to be given then.
4. The departrnent has announced that only two scholarships will be awarded and that
more than a hundred applications for the scholarships have already been received.
Nonetheless, 1 am still going to submit my application.
5. My family never really wanted to make so many moves, it had to do so. Because it was
necessary for my father's career; so we moved almost every year.
6, I expect your papers to be very clearly organized; thus, you are required to turn in an
outline befare you complete your papers. Your outlíne should be turned in within two
weeks; the final paper is not due for two months.
7. The university is considering implementing an focrease in tuition for the coming year.
The students believe that tuition should not be raised, however, the students willmost
li.kely not get what they want.
8. The details of the reportare confidential, they will not be rnade public. If want to find
out about the report, what you must do it is to file a petition to get hold of the report.
9. My dream house is one that would be in the mountains. It would be surrounded.by trees
and it would have a view of a gorgeous lake. Moreove1~ the only noises that coLtld be
heard they would be the sounds ofbirds singing.
10. You must develop your ideas thoroughly. If you make a staternent, you should be sure
to support that statement. You may use many kinds of ideas to support a statement. For
example, you may use details, reasons, or examples.
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