REVISE DRAFT:

RRL (OPTIONAL)
(Recommended discussions must be based on a community)
Flow: General - Philippines - Davao - Sasa
Inland - Waterfront

P. 25 - 27 - TACKLE MORE ON THE ISSUES OF WATERFRONT DEVT IN THE PHILIPPINES. - not

needed
P. 33 - REPLACE IT WITH A TABLE. - done
P. 42 - Add Mixed Use Developments in the Phil., Case Studies and etc. - case
studies not needed
p. 43 - Discuss more on D.C. Land Use Classifications. - deleted
p. 63 - 64 - Discuss further the climate of Davao City. Discuss Coastal Areas in
the Phil then Davao (Give examples and Case studies). Transfer 2.7.8.2 to Appendix.
Remove Bullet form in 2.7.8.3.
p. 67 - Remove measures of Density and Density Evolution. Remove Community
Population along the coastal area of sasa. Transfer 2.8.8 to Appendix. Remove
2.8.9. Discuss housing flexibility(ADU's and etc). Discuss the housing and
flexibility of housing in the Philippines(then Davao if possible)(Better if coastal
area). Discuss about informal Settlements and its problem in the coastal areas
(World, Phil, Davao). Enumerate Case Studies on how to solve them(Must be inlined
with the topic of the thesis).
p. 81 - Remove Curb Extension, Street design and its issues in the Philippines and
D.C.(and along the water. Refer to laws of street design by stating something in
the appendix).
p. 86 - Remove Davao City Objectives to tourism. Add and discuss topic about
communities'(coastal/inland) local assets and needs(General - Philippines - Davao -
refert to Sasa).
p. 106 - Discuss more on Marina Facilities and Amenities (Philippines - Davao).
Common Issues on land and water transportation in the Philippines then Davao.
Remove Davao City Transportation Objectives. Remove Fishing Practices.
p. 110 - Remove Davao City Land Use Principles.