Professional Documents
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Rubric
Citations 3 2 1 0
Map A Citation is correct for use Citation is mostly correct Citation is incomplete or No attempt at citations
of style, style is consistent with 1-2 errors, style is has more than 3 errors, ,
with Map B consistent with Map B and/or style is
inconsistent with Map B
Map B Citation is correct for use Citation is mostly correct Citation is incomplete or No attempt at citations
of style with 1-2 errors, style is has more than 3 errors, ,
consistent with Map and/or style is
A inconsistent with Map A
Evidence of Analysis 3 2 1 0
Map A TODALSIGS used as well as TODALSIGS used only TODALSIGS used, not No evidence of analysis
one original unit of applied correctly
analysis (eg. visual appeal,
effectiveness)
Map B TODALSIGS used as well as TODALSIGS used only TODALSIGS used, not No evidence of analysis
one original unit of applied correctly
analysis (eg. visual appeal,
effectiveness)
Image of Map 2 0
Written Argument 3 2 1 0
Thesis well-developed, includes Units of analysis not clear, No units of analysis but No thesis present or map
units of analysis, has clear has clear choice of map includes choice of map choice indentifiable
choice of superior map
Evidence 5 or more specific pieces of 4 specific pieces of 3 pieces of evidence 2 or fewer pieces of
evidence present evidence present present evidence
Analysis Strong analysis of why 3 or Analysis of why 2 or more Attempted, but No attempt of analysis
more pieces of evidence pieces of evidence exists unsuccessful analysis
exist (eg. statement
explaining why Map A or B
has a title, etc.)
Grammar and Grammar and writing Grammar and writing Grammar and writing Persistent grammar and
Writing Conventions conventions (punctuations, conventions (punctuations, conventions writing issues so
syntax, etc) followed with syntax, etc) followed with (punctuations, syntax, etc) prevalent as to provide
1-4 errors 5-9 errors followed with 10+ errors numerous distractions
Written Argument Total _________ Total Pts __________ (26 pts possible) Percent Grade _________________
Name:____________________________________________________________Date:________________Pd:__________
Map 1
Source (citation)
Routley, Nick. Infographic: A Map of Internet Censorship Around the World.
Visual Capitalist, 30 Sept. 2017, www.visualcapitalist.com/internet-censorship-
map/.
Name:____________________________________________________________Date:________________Pd:_________
Map 2
Source (citation)
Islamic State and the Crisis in Iraq and Syria in Maps. BBC News, BBC, 21 Sept.
2017, www.bbc.com/news/world-middle-east-27838034.
Name:____________________________________________________________Date:________________Pd:__________
Evidence of Analysis
Use this page to show evidence of the ways in which you analyzed your sources
T Internet Censorship World Map How did IS(Islamic state) spread across Iraq and
Syria?
A Nick Routley, to show different levels of BBC, to show different political groups in Iraq
internet censorship in different countries. and Syria.
S There is no scale, but you dont really need There is a scale, it looks roughly inch to 50
one because its a thematic map. miles.
I There is not an alphabetical list of places on There is no alphabetical list of places and no grid
the map and no grid to show them. to show them.
G There are no latitude or longitude lines. There are no intersecting lines on this map.
Did you use any other units of analysis (you dont have to, you can use TODALSIGS alone)? Did you analyze
maps based on their visual appeal? Effectiveness at illustrating an idea? You can use your OWN units of
analysis if you can defend them in your argument. Describe your unit/units of analysis here and your thought
process as you used them.
Visual Appeal The map uses simple colors The map has a wider range
and blends nicely. of colors, also has some
topographical bumps.
Written Argument
Your written argument should include a thesis (which map is superior), at least 5 pieces of evidence, and
strong analysis of at least 3 of these pieces of evidence. A suggested outline of your writing is provided below
based loosely on the AP World History writing rubric.
First Paragraph: Thesis statement, including units of analysis (how you are comparing the two)
Second Paragraph: 3 pieces of evidence to support superior map (probably three sentences)
2-3 sentences to analyze this evidence (commentary on why this evidence exists)
Third Paragraph: 2-3 pieces of evidence that provide reasons why second map is lacking
2-3 sentences to analyze possible reasons why this evidence exists
Fourth Paragraph (probably 1-2 sentences) summary
Final Draft of Written Argument:
The map of Syria and Iraq from BBC showing how the jihadist group Islamic State (IS) is superior to
the map of censorship in Asia using the units of source and readability. Using these factors, one can get a good
understanding of which map is better.
Firstly, The IS maps source is the BBC news company, and BBC has been around for almost 100 years
now. This means that BBC is a trustable news source. Also, the IS map comes from the IHS Conflict Monitor,
which is a highly established information source for Iraq and Syria. With BBC and HIS collaboration, it is most
likely a very accurate map. Furthermore, the data that the map is based off is dated September 18, 2017. This is
within the past month so it should be accurate on what is going on right now. This map comes from a reputable
site and is included in a long and detailed article, so there is no reason not to believe it. Also, it is relatively easy
to see the distinct colors. This makes the readability much better
The internet censorship map is lacking in many ways. Most importantly, it uses info that has not been
updated recently. Since the advent of the internet age, rules and restrictions on the internet can change almost
instantaneously, so these types of maps need to be updated regularly. On this topic, some of the sources used
havent been updated since 2014, and a lot can change in 3 years. For looking at the map, sometimes it can be
hard to discern where one country begins and another one ends. This makes the readability go down as you
must try extra hard to figure out what you are looking at. The map was trying to go for a modern color scheme,
but it wasnt executed as well as it could have.
Overall, both maps can be used to get information, but one is superior. With up to date sources and great
readability, maps can provide one with plenty of information about the subject they are researching.