Professional Documents
Culture Documents
English 5M
Intro:
Responding to a reading engages a student with the reading and invites a student to make con-
nections. In a class made up of the majority multilingual students, there will be readings that are
Thesis:
Readings like "What is a multilingual writer?" are readings that give deep explanation and work-
ing methods that will benefit others. Compared to readings like Reading and Writing Without
Authority which do not make influential connections with the audience, shape the writing of
P: Students encounter countless amounts of articles and readings each year, among those many
readings only a few of them manage to leave a great remark on these students, a connections.
P: As seen in the quote from What is a ml writer?, connections are made because of the content
and what is being discussed relates to a large group of people. The article states facts, but it also
contains emotions which is something the article Reading and Writing Without Authority does
not contain.
E: When an article contains a surplus of fact after fact and based of data, it loses its sense of
emotional and relativeness connection. A student can grasp so much more from a reading they
P: From forming a connection with the reading comes shaping ones own writing. For a piece of
writing to mold the writing of another is a concept not every author can pursue through their
writing.
P: On the other hand, it seems as though the author from Reading and Writing Without Authori-
ty attempts to share the data she collected so her audience can follow after Roger and not do
what the younger student did; in hopes of shaping the future writing of students.
E: For a piece of writing to shape anothers writing, there has to be elements and guidelines of-
fered that a students will take in and apply to their own writing. *Expand/explain on quotes
P: Just as any person in the intended audience would expect, and the purpose of every author,
agree that the lesson here is to be patient with oneself and to not change ones writing. Many mul-
tilingual writers confront hardships with assimilation to the American writing, from the reading
they can take that just because they cannot relate to the American writing in colleges, they do not
P: When it comes to the content of Reading and Writing Without Authority, yes a student can
take a thing or two from the reading; but to a really grasp a notion that can be applied to present
E: As stated previously, Reading and Writing Without Authority solemnly states data and evi-
dence of what it is like to write with and without authority, and what happens when one reads
and writes without authority. A student, or any other writer can gain the knowledge of the impor-
tance of what it is to write with authority and the strength authority can give to any writing they
P: Furthermore, between these two readings, it can be clearly seen that some readings are more
E: It is not to say that Reading and Writing Without Authority is a horrid and useless writing,
but not much can be taken from this writing and not much can be carried out to other courses.
One can argue that "What is a multilingual writer? was only intended for a specific kind of au-
dience, but anyone can take certain notions from it to be applied to present and future writing.
Conclusion:
Throughout the course of college education and beyond, people will come face to face with
many writing and will be introduced to many different flavors of writing, but some make a big-
ger impact than others. Truthfully, one can say that some writing are more important than others.
More elements can be taken from one writing compared to another, this regards the influential
connections being made with the reading, how much of an affect has been on ones own writing,
and the notions grasped by the end of the reading. It all comes down to the personal experiences
one feels towards the writing and whether one can pursue the notions expected from the author
on to other courses.