I just read the attachments. Sin o ni nag obra ta?

Gindiscuss man ni ang content draft sa aton before ni gin

obra? Damo sala.
-Una-it is just either service contract or service agreement. Redundant na ya kun service contract agreement.
- Ang 1st whereas clause nga gadescribe sang obra sa homeless is TOO SHORT, it's an understatement.
LOL.
-sa description sang parties, nakabutang nga Foundation ang HPFPI, indi na ya foundation ah. Dapat islan ina
kay ang foundation lain man ina sa PO fed.
-Pwede kita karequest sang copy sang General Partnership Agreement?
-Dapat irephrase ang project location stating further ang total allocated land area. Dapat una ang pagmention
sang adjacent projects before ang block numbers.
-sa project description sa item 2 section 1, nagmention "as attached in annex 1" pero wala man sang
nakaattach nga annex 1. After sang kada items nga nakaletters a to d, dapat may semi-colon then maperiod sa
letter e.
-I rephrase man ang item 3.Target clients kay sa 1st sentence ya palang nga daad sala na. ..."the housing
units will target...INDi ya housing units ang gatarget sang client ah, ang housing project guru. Kag kwaon lang
ang "totally" nga description, displaced lang instead of totally displaced. Karon indirectly nag impose
ining agreement sang additional qualification requirement nga within the authority and discretion lng
sang HPFPI. Indi man tanan nga naqualify naton totally displaced gid.
-Item 4-project cost- delete for this after sang "the approved cost per unit" direcho na lang -the approved
project cost per unit is..then mention the total number of units before stating the total project cost.
-Section 2-Scope of work-first sentence: LGU engagement na lng and other partnerships instead of engaging
LGU and other partners.sa last sentence sina-instead of related end-user related activities- choose lang
between-end-user related activities or related end-user activities. Paulit-ulit lng tayo eh. kakaistress! LOL.
Damo pa grammatical error after sina halin sa item 2 hasta item 6- natak an na ko mag correct. pwede pasa na
lng di ang word nga doc para kita na lng maedit? haha.

Side comment: ang iban nga scope of work nga ari diri pwede nga igeneral statement na lang-like sa HOA
formation, savings, etc. Something like- introduce and facilitate HPFPI rituals (savings, HOA governance. etc.)

-Estate Management was also mentioned- Kita lang gid ni ya tanan? wala involvement sang LinkBuild?
Theoretically, while the housing loan are not fully paid, LinkBuild ang tag iya sang mga balay, in effect, sila ang
may authority to regulate and monitor incremental developments sang mga housing units. If LinkBuildpolicies
are already integrated in the contract to sell. occupants/qualified applicants are accountable to LinkBuild and
not to Homeless. Kun wala ka authority magsaway, ngaa mangsaway ka imo, karon daw workin in excess of
your jurisdiction na karon. Kun kita sini ang in charge-amo ni nga provision ang mainstitutionalize sang fear
naton nga Mukha sang HPFPI ang iblame, himuon responsible kag accountable sa project.
-No need to facilitate ang formation sang community team kay wala man sila gid role sa house design hasta sa
actual construction. Ang ginform naton nga savings groups kag HOA na lang ang himuon nga vehicle or means
para maanswer ang concern sa Item 2, letter e sng sec. 2

-Sec2.Item3-Paraphrase lang- kay we dont collect equity, we only collect deposit slips for recording purposes.
Maximize ang na lang abi ang role sang CoreACS as collection and microfinance arm sang Philippine Alliance
kay amo gid man ina ang major purpose sang iya creation. Take note nga hambal sa Sec. 3 Cost of Delays
caused by noncompliance of Section 2 will be charged and covered by HPFPI. Kun amo sini ka damo ang
ulubrahon sang HPFPI-kag amo ini ka bug-at ang iya accountability, indi enough ang 200,000 para sa 45 units.

-Item 6, sec 2 on research- wala sang capacity ang HPFPI to conduct a i. Land research ii. Research on
existing socialized housing demand and supply, and potential markets / target groups - IF kun ang ginamean
nila formal research gid. Informal guru PWEDE pa, so dapat ni klaruhon.

-For formality sake, dapat may ara nga board resolution authorizing each parties to sign, This is an inter-
institution agreement kag pursuant sa aton gusto nga magkaroon sang sistema, dapat mastart naman kita
comply sa mga formalities.

Side comment: The stipulations in the agreement sounded like HPFPI and LinkBuild are not Partners, or co-
implementers, it sounded like HPFPI is LinkBuild's Employee. Basi sensitive lang ko tita, pero makabulig ang
paraphrasing sang agreement para matry ibalanse ang mga legalidad. Hehe!