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Table of Contents 3
Business Email Format 92
How to organize and write a business report 96
Business Proposal 99
Business Progress Report 100
Type of language and level of formality in a business letter 102
Business Tone 102
Organizing presentations 106
Routine messages 116
References 120
Table of Contents 5
Part One
Communication
Types of communication
References
Stakeholder Analysis
Intercultural Communication
Information Dissemination
References
Table of Contents 7
Part One
Overview of Communication
Chapter One
in Business
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Define communication
Necessity of Communication
On a daily basis we interact and work with people who may have similar
or different opinions, values, beliefs, and needs than our own. Our
ability to exchange ideas with others, understand others perspectives,
put forward our own thoughts, solve problems and successfully use
or share the information provided will depend significantly on how
effectively we are able to communicate with others.
Take for example the profile that you may have created for yourself
on a social networking site such as Facebook or LinkedIn. You are
using an electronic medium to communicate, with the outside world,
information about yourself. Such a thing was not a popular practice 10
years ago, however it is the norm today. Communication patterns are
thus changing rapidly and the demands on a person to communicate
with others is growing.
The importance Communication is like the knots in knitting that holds people together-
of communication and at the same time its the thread that keeps coming apart. Good
communication can be a great influence behind somebodys success
and poor or ineffective communication can also be responsible for its
destruction.
Stages of the The communication process is made up of four key components. Those
communication components include encoding, medium of transmission, decoding, and
process feedback. There are also two other factors in the process, and those
two factors are present in the form of the sender and the receiver. The
communication process begins with the sender and ends with the receiver.
The following diagram is a visual display of all these components.
Source/Sender
The source can be an individual, group, or organization who initiates
the communication. This source is initially responsible for the success
of the message. The senders experiences, attitude, knowledge, skill,
perceptions, and the culture s/he dwells in, influences the message which
is communicated. All communication begins with the sender. Examples
of sender can be an employee telephoning his supervisor to call in
sick or a customer writing a letter to the branch manager requesting a
cheque book or a bank generating an automated system generated letter
to the customer with information regarding credit card transactions.
Encoding
This is the process of transferring the information one wants to
communicate into a form that can be sent and correctly decoded at the
other end (to the receiver). When encoding a message, the sender begins
to decide what needs to be transmitted. This decision by the sender is
based on:
Channel
To begin transmitting the message, the sender uses some kind of channel
(also called a medium). Channel is simply the means used to convey
the message. Most channels are either oral or written however visual
channels are becoming common as technology expands. Common
channels include:
Decoding
After the appropriate channel or channels are selected and you can
use more than one channel to deliver the same message (for example
a bank may send its customer a letter reminding about a credit card
payment and may also telephone him to remind him about the same),
the message enters the decoding stage of the communication process.
Decoding is conducted by the receiver. Once the message is received,
the receiver interprets the message in order to assign a meaning to it.
It is this processing stage that constitutes decoding. The receiver begins
to interpret the symbols sent by the sender, translating the message to
his own set of experiences in order to make the symbols meaningful.
Successful communication takes place when the receiver correctly
interprets the senders message. Continuing the example of the bank
which has sent the payment reminder the receiver may interpret it as
useful or a nuisance depending on his own personal frame of
reference.
Receiver
The receiver is the individual or individuals to whom the message is
directed. The extent to which this person comprehends the message will
depend on a number of factors, which include the following: how much
the individual or individuals know about the topic, their receptivity to
the message, and the relationship and trust that exists between sender
and receiver.
Feedback
Feedback is the final link in the chain of the communication process.
After receiving a message, the receiver responds in some way and signals
that response to the sender. The signal may take the form of a spoken
comment, a long sigh, a written message, a smile, or some other action.
Many communications are intended by the senders to illicit a response
from the receiver for example the bank sent the payment reminder to
encourage the customer to take action and make the payment. However,
sometimes the intended communication is the only provide knowledge
Context
The situation in which the message is delivered is the context. This may
include the surrounding environment or broader culture (i.e. corporate
culture, international cultures, etc.) Most obvious is the physical context;
that is whether we are talking to someone in our living room or in an
office environment. Then there is the social context, which is to do with
the occasion involved and the people in it. This might be a group of
friends in a party or a group of mourners at a funeral or a business
luncheon meeting. Next, is the cultural context, which refers to an even
broader set of circumstances and beliefs, which affects as to as to how
we communicate. For example, it would matter if the funeral was in a
Muslim or an Anglican context. It is particularly important to see that
the media are part of the cultural context in which we operate. How
we talk, what we talk about, what music we listen to, has a lot to do
with the influence of the cultural context of the media. In the business
communication context where we strive to maintain a professional
standard and minimize nuances, cultural context is still important and
reflects in the manner greeting, of dressing and of our message.
1. Internal Communication
2. External Communication
1. Internal Communication
Communication within an organization is called Internal
Communication. It includes all communication within an organization.
It may be formal or informal function. Effective internal communication
is a vital means of addressing job responsibility, expectations and
organizational concerns. Good communication may help increase job
satisfaction, safety, productivity, and profits and decrease grievances and
turnover.
a. Upward Communication
b. Downward Communication
c. Horizontal/Lateral communication
a. Upward Communication
Upward communication is the flow of information from subordinates
to superiors, or from employees to management. Without upward
communication, management works in a vacuum, not knowing if
messages have been received properly, or if for instance problems
exist in the organization. Upward Communication enables exchange
of information, ideas, solutions etc; which lead to job satisfaction and
employees providing their feedback.
b. Downward Communication
Information flowing from the top of the organizational management
hierarchy is known as downward communication. Downward
communication generally provides enabling information which allows
subordinates to perform- for example, instructions on how to perform
a task, or what to do in which situation, policies and procedures.
Downward information also provides organizational perspective,
strategy and communicates culture for example the mission, vision,
values, credo and goals etc.
c. Horizontal/Lateral communication
Horizontal communication normally involves coordinating
information, and allows people with the same or similar rank in
an organization to talk, cooperate and/or collaborate. Horizontal
communication is essential for solving problems, accomplishing tasks,
improving teamwork and boosting efficiency.
External Communication
Communication with people outside the organization is called external
communication. External communications can be with customers,
suppliers, vendors, business partners, professionals and professional firms
such as: lawyers, accountants, audit firms, tax consultants, marketing
agencies, advertisers etc. Within the financial services industry and
particularly banking it is a norm to communicate with other banks on
a multitude of matters.
Filtering
Filtering is the alteration or concealment of information to control a
persons reactions. The most common use of filtering is to hide bad news
from people, generally superior in a management hierarchy, to avoid
their disapproval. Common examples are hiding customer issues from
supervisors, understating operational capacity to avoid workload, not
communicating performance related issues to employees in anticipation
of a negative reaction from them etc.
Information Overload
Information overload is the state of receiving information faster than
it can be processed, as desired. The most common cause of this is too
many sources of information flooding the recipient. An example of this
is a manager on a phone call being interrupted by an email message
and interrupted again by a colleague asking for his attention while he
deals with the first two tasks. This often leads to oversights and in some
cases important information completely being ignored and forgotten,
resulting in loss of business and reputation. Information overload can
also take form of a single channel of information being used but not
optimally for example very long and detailed letter to a customer by the
bank, the extent of detail which the customer is unable to understand.
In todays day and age where the volume of information flowing from
all angles is significant, recipients suffer from information overload on
a constant basis. Communication should thus be concise and clear to
Emotional Disconnects
An emotional disconnect is the state of a sender and receiver being
unable to communicate effectively due to their feelings or opinions
about: a. the subject or b. the other person or both which keeps them
from to listening to each other. For example a subordinate may have a
grievance with his supervisor and is unwilling to accept the performance
appraisal that he has made for him. Emotional disconnects also happen
when the Sender or the Receiver is upset, whether about the subject at
hand or about some unrelated incident that may have happened earlier.
An effective communication requires a Sender and a Receiver who are
open to listening to one another, despite possible differences in opinion
or personality. One or both parties may have to put their emotions
aside to achieve the goal of communicating clearly. A Receiver who is
emotionally charged tends to ignore or distort what the Sender is saying.
A Sender who is emotionally charged may be unable to present ideas or
feelings effectively. Emotions, though a vital part of a person, are best
kept out of business communication.
Messages from senders that receivers do not know well or trust can often
be misconstrued. This can be solved by encouraging people (employees)
to interact with each other (and customers) to create familiarity and
ease. Some organizations also encourage employees to interact in less
formal or informal settings to encourage a close-knit and strong team
bonding. This has worked in some cases and not in others.
Some downsides of the office grapevine are that gossip offers politically
minded insiders a powerful tool for disseminating communication
(and self-promoting miscommunications) within an organization. In
addition, the grapevine lacks a specific Sender, and provokes a question
in the mind of the management as to who is at the root of the gossip
network? When the news is volatile, suspicions may arise as to the
person or persons behind the Message. Managers who understand the
grapevines power can use it to send and receive Messages of their own.
They also decrease the grapevines power by sending official Messages
quickly and accurately, should big news arise.
Gossip is Hurtful
Gently remind rumormongers of others feelings with statements such
as: I would hate for someone to say that about me. Remind others that
gossip can hurt or destroy lives and careers, and is therefore NOT an
innocent pastime.
Set up Deterents
Use strong language to deter persistent gossipers: If this is gossip, I dont
want to hear it. Remember, if they gossip about others, they will gossip
about you as well.
Be a Cofee Filler
If you are faced with criticism, act like a coffee filter. Strain out the
emotional grounds from the facts. This allows you to respond to the
information and not the criticism.
Semantics
Words can have different meanings for different people and in different
contexts. This could be a factor of the culture or sometimes even
familiarity with the language of the message. At times people attach
strong emotions with certain words such as reference to self I or
You, parents, family, political parties etc. Broad generalizations and
opinions should be avoided to reduce clutter in communication. Use of
superlatives is also conceived as arrogant in many cultures.
In some cases words can mean nothing at all to a receiver which is often
true in the case of trade specific terminology called jargon being used
to communicate to an individual unfamiliar with it. Jargon can be an
effective tool for quick and precise communications if used between
parties who both understand it but can cause listeners to fall out, lose
interest or develop bad feelings if they do not understand it and are
given too much space. It should thus be used sparingly and only with
people who understand it. For example within the banks a relationship
manager is called an RM. A long-standing customer may understand
this terminology and also refer to it as such in verbal communications
however for written communication use of the entire term is advised.
A new customer may not be familiar with the term at all and may be
baffled even if the banker uses it in passing in a telephone conversation.
Different messages can mean different things to the sender and the
recipient. Senders need to consider their target audience and how they
will interpret the message before they communicate it or it can produce
Biased Language
Business communication should not make use of any words that
stereotype or discriminate others on the basis of race, gender, age or
any affiliation. Instead business communication should focus on
communicating a clear message to achieve a goal.
Our sales performance has been exemplary this quarter and I would
like this to continue in the next quarter. The only section of our team
that is currently underperforming is our team members coming from
north of the country. I suspect this is due to language difficulties or
not understanding the culture of the firm very well and trust this will
improve with time.
The above statement from the manager will not inspire the team and
will instead put their defenses up and make them feel judged and
discriminated. Such statements are known as communication freezers.
These must be avoided and communication should be made with
consideration for the recipient with the intent of communicating a
message and not shaming them.
Poor Listening
Poor listening is often a consequence of the listener being distracted,
thinking what they have to say while the other speaks, interrupting at
inappropriate times, not acknowledging whats been communicated,
not asking questions about whats not been understood and sometimes
looking out for what they want to hear instead of what is being said.
3. Conciseness
4. Completeness
5. Consideration
6. Concreteness
7. Courtesy
Correctness
At the time of encoding, if the encoder has comprehensive knowledge
about the decoder of the message, it makes the communication easy.
The encoder should ideally know the status, knowledge and educational
background of the decoder.
Correctness means:
Hi Aziz,
Thank you for meeting today. I really enjoyed our conservation and look
forward to working on this project with you.
Regards,
Mahwish
Clarity
Clarity demands the use of simple language and easy sentence structure
in composing the message. When there is clarity in presenting ideas, its
easy for the receiver/decoder to grasp the meaning being conveyed by
the sender/encoder.
Online activation can be done using the Activate New Card option in
your online banking. This option is displayed in the top left corner of
your online banking home screen.
You will need to provide your full name as it appears on card, the 16
digit number at the front of the card and the 3 digital security code at
the back.
Conciseness
A concise message saves time of both the sender and the receiver.
Conciseness, in a business message, can be achieved by avoiding wordy
expressions and repetition. Using brief and to the point sentences,
including relevant material makes the message concise.
Hope this email finds you in good health. I found your contact details
on LinkedIn and am writing to you to discuss the possibility of setting
up a reseller agreement for us to sell your products. Our company details
can be found at our web address as below.
www.xyz.com
Regards,
XYZ Representative
Contact Details
Completeness
Completeness means the message must bear all the necessary
information to bring the response one desires. The sender should answer
all the questions with facts and figures and only when desirable, go for
extra details.
An example of this is the letter below sent by the bank to a new account-
holder.
Thank you for opening an account with ABC Bank, TR Road Branch.
We will endeavour to make all our services both helpful and pleasant
for you.
For security purposes your bank account details and ATM card will be
posted in separate mails to you.
Please feel welcome to call us or drop in at the branch at any time you
would like us to assist you.
Sincerely,
A Kazi
Branch Manager
For Example:
We-attitude
I am delighted to announce you that we have extended the branch
banking hours by 2 hours in the evening making banking with us more
convenient.
You-attitude
You will be able to banks with us in evenings with the extended hours.
Concreteness
This includes being definite, vivid and specific rather than vague, obscure
and general. Also, the facts and figures being presented in the message
should be specific.
Different channels Several types of communication methods are available for individuals
of communication working in the business environment. Each method has its advantages
(verbal, written, and disadvantages and offer individuals an opportunity to choose how
electronic) they will convey their message and create specific communication styles
for various receivers.
Verbal Communication
Verbal communication is a common way in which an individual
transfers his message to the other individual and businesses. Verbal
communication methods may include meetings, in-person interviews,
telephones and video conferencing. Verbal communication may be the
best communication method because it allows people to assess the verbal
or nonverbal inferences by individuals giving a message. It may also
create a more comfortable environment for receivers to ask questions
and get feedback from individuals giving the message. It however at
times forces people to react to the information at that point. While a
good way to avoid instant reaction, if it is so required, is to say I will
come back to you however body language may relay your initial feeling
about the matter. This can be used as an advantage and can also be
considered as a drawback. For example if a customer has asks for loan
concessions, the bankers initial response to that may be yes it can be
considered which the customer takes well. However, bank management
may feel otherwise and the banker may have to subsequently decline the
customer. In another situation the banker may display instant hesitation
either verbal or through body language which may upset the customer.
While the message needs to be given to the customer whether positive
or negative, it can be framed in a manner such that an adverse reaction
can be avoided. Verbal communication at times limits that capacity.
Electronic C0mmunication
Technology has opened up new types of business communications.
While these fall in the categories of verbal and written as discussed
above, the electronic medium has brought many new things which are
briefly touched upon under this heading.
Impact of using the If a wrong channel is used while communicating that is if the channel is
wrong channel of not effective for the type of message and meaning one wants to create,
communication in then it is likely that the message will not create the desired impact or
a business setting create a misunderstanding, or worse and the sender may have been
better off not sending the message at all. Not only does using the wrong
channels impede communication, but doing so can cause mistrust in
others, particularly about ones sincerity and commitment to them.
There are a number of reasons why this is so, but the most important
one is that when a person talks, the other person has to try to figure
out the main points, or main messages, and this applies to all sorts of
communication channels. When the speaker buries, or surrounds the
main points or messages with too much of other messages, the impact
of the target message gets lost. The person listening gets distracted or
simply starts focusing on other things that are less important (at least to
the speaker).
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Communication
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Determining Target In the fast-paced professional world of today it is important to know who
Audience you are communicating with. Time has become a precious commodity
and it is imperative to know how much time will be devoted to which
activity. It is thus difficult and perhaps not optimal to target everyone.
Target audience determination is something that businesses use
extensively when they market their products. For example many small
businesses effectively compete with large companies by targeting a niche
market. Determining the target audience is a very vital ingredient for
effective communication. Time and attention spent on this aspect can
drastically improve the effectiveness of the communication.
Second Step
The second step is geared to identifying the target audience in the
instance the audience is not easily identifiable from the first step. Lets
use the marketing example as above. From the preliminary basis we
What is the size of the target audience that we are looking for?
Third Step
Once you have completed the first two steps, it is important to evaluate
the findings against the purpose of your communication. The following
question can help you make that assessment.
You are encouraged to read more about this topic in reference books
and online search.
Factors that need Once we have determined who are target audience will be on a
to be considered preliminary basis we will try and understand more things about
when conducting our audience and get to know them better so that we can create an
an audience appropriate message which can be transmitted through an optimal
analysis medium so that our intended audience understands our message as we
would like it to. This can be very detailed or limited exercise. The depth
that you want to pursue depends on the purpose of the message. Some
key points to consider are:
For the audience to feel satisfied from the report or presentation and for
it to be successful, the presenter should see in advance what is valuable
to them and what information they expect from what is being presented
to them.
Audience expectations
When people become audience members in a speech situation, they bring
with them expectations about the occasion, topic, and speaker. Violating
Audience size
Many elements of speech-making change in accordance to the size of
the audience. In general, the larger the audience the more formal the
presentation should be. Sitting down and using common language when
speaking to a group of ten people is often quite appropriate. However,
that style of presentation would probably be inappropriate or ineffective
if you were speaking to thousand people. Large audiences often require
that you use a microphone and speak from an elevated platform.
Setting
The setting of a presentation can influence the ability to give a speech
and the audiences ability and desire to listen. Some of these factors are:
the set-up of the room (both size and how the audience is arranged), time
of the day, temperature, external noises (traffic), internal noises (phones,
coughs), and type of space (meeting room, auditorium, outside). Finding
out ahead of time the different factors going into the setting allows a
speaker to adapt their speech appropriately. It is best to take into account
the way that the setting will affect audience attention and participation.
Voluntariness
Audiences are either voluntary, in which case they are genuinely
interested in what a presenter has to say, or involuntary, in which case
they are not inherently interested in the presentation. Knowing the
difference will assist in establishing how hard a speaker needs to work to
spark the interest of the audience. Involuntary audiences are notoriously
hard to generate and maintain interest in a topic (think about most
peoples attitudes toward training or mandatory meetings they would
prefer to not attend.)
Egocentrism
Most audience members are egocentric that is they are generally most
interested in things that directly affect them or their work space. An
effective speaker must be able to show their audience why the topic they
are speaking on should be important to them.
Choose the best words, stories, tone, style and delivery that will
engage the audience
The result of investing effort in all this is that the chances of the
communication being successful drastically increase. Communication
though appears simple, involves a lot of factors and has a lot of steps
to it. As studied earlier in this chapter, there are many barriers to
effective communication. Understanding the target audience helps in
minimizing errors and equipping the sender with information to work
though the barriers.
Primary and Primary audience is the person people who are actually addressed in the
Secondary communication whereas the secondary audience is someone other than
Audience the intended receiver who will also advertently or inadvertently receive
the communication. Thus, primary audiences are those for whom the
communication is meant directly. Secondary, or hidden, audiences
include anyone who may indirectly receive the communication. These
include people who will:
Gate Keepers
Who receive the communication to pass it on to the primary audience
e.g. a secretary taking a phone message or receiving a letter on behalf of
the boss. Gatekeepers have the power to keep your message from even
your primary audience. The gatekeeper can be someone with power in
the company or can be the assistant who answers the phone or opens
the mail.
Hidden Audiences
Who receive the communication for information purposes, such as
lawyers, record-keeping staff etc.
What other interests does the stakeholder have that may conflict with
the communication?
Importance of We have discussed earlier in this chapter what demographic factors are.
Demographics and It is conducive to establish the demographics while communicating
its Analysis with specific business audiences in order to understand various aspects
of their thought and life-style pattern. For example a motorcycle shop
with a focus on heavy duty racing motorcycles might define its target
1. Language
5. Authority conception
7. Time conception
Language
Among the most often cited barriers to noise-free cross-cultural
business communication is the use of different languages. It is difficult
to underestimate the importance that an understanding of linguistic
differences plays in international business communication. Difficulties
with language fall basically into three categories:
First, they are generally the easiest language difficulty to detect. Many
gross translation errors are either ludicrous or make no sense at all. Only
those errors that continue to be logical in both the original meaning
and in the mistranslated version pose a serious concern. Nonetheless,
even when easily detected, gross translation errors waste time and wear
on the patience of the parties involved. Additionally, for some, such
errors imply a form of disrespect for the party into whose language the
message is translated.
1. Climate
2. Topography
3. Population size
4. Population density
Social Organization
Social organization, as it affects the workplace, is often culturally
determined. One must take care not to assume that the view held in
ones own culture is universal on issues such as social organization,
nepotism and kinship ties, educational values, class structure and social
mobility, job status and economic stratification, religious ties, political
affiliation, gender differences, racism and other prejudices, attitudes
toward work, and recreational or work institutions.
Authority Conception
Different cultures often view the distribution of authority in their
society differently. The view of authority in a given society affects
communication in the business environment significantly as it shapes
the view of how a message will be received, based on the relative status
or rank of the messages sender to its receiver.
Nonverbal Behavior
Among the most markedly varying dimensions of intercultural
communication is nonverbal behavior. Knowledge of a culture
conveyed through what a person says represents only a portion of what
that person has communicated. One of the most apparent differences
is the interpretation of dress. The message given by polished shoes,
for instance, could easily be lost on a culture in which sandals are the
standard footwear. Similarly, a womans decision to wear her best suit
would be lost in a culture in which no women wear business suits.
Time Conception
International business communication is also affected by cross-cultural
differences in temporal conception or the understanding of time. The
sentence Lets do it now may mean immediate action for some or
merely the approval that we will do it in future for others.
Factors to Consider When speaking to a diverse audience the most important point to
when Speaking to remember is to be Positively Conscious, of who is in the audience and
a Diverse Audience understand how to make people feel included. The more people feel
included, the more they will listen to you.
1. Use words that include rather than exclude: While some women
dont mind being called ladies, in a professional setting, the word
women is more appropriate. Be positively conscious of pronouns
when discussing hypothetical cases. Using masculine examples only
may reflect gender bias.
5. Do not use humor that puts down any particular group. If you are
not sure, get feedback from others.
6. Examine your assumptions about people who are different than you.
Be open to letting go of those assumptions.
You are encouraged to read more about this topic in reference books
and online search.
Writing
Memos
Connecting Devices
Business Letters
Business Fax
Business Proposal
Business Tone
Organizing presentations
Routine messages
References
Chapter 2: Reading
Business Reading
Comprehension Skills
References
Chapter 3: Speaking
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Effective Interpersonal Skills
Business Meetings
Oral Communication
References
Chapter 4: Listening
Listening
References
References
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Prepare a memorandum
Prepare a fax
Effective Writing 49
Conceptualize how a presentation is organized
1. Prewriting
4. Final drafting
Prewriting
The first step of the writing process is Prewriting, where we must
decide what we want to write and what topics and details we want to
Thinking
Writing
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Review higher-order concerns:
Organization of paper
Paragraph structure
Once our first draft has matured after review and any required changes
to the content have been considered, we must go back and rewrite that
draft; rearrange ideas, add details, and change the sentence structure, if
necessary. Reading our writing aloud and hearing ourselves speak the
ideas is often very useful.
Only after we are satisfied with the content of the subject, should we
edit for surface correctness. That is, only at that point should we look for
grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors, as they are later-order
concerns. This does not mean that we should not correct such errors if
they come to our attention before; however, we should not go out of our
way to find these errors in our first draft. We must instead concentrate
on our organization and content.
Unskilled writers try to do too many things at once because they want
to write one draft and have the activity over with. Skilled writers know
that no matter how good they are, they will need at least two drafts
of anything before then can consider it finished. Skilled writers make
different editing passes looking for different errors during each pass. For
example, one pass might be to check for run-on sentences and other
sentence structure problems, another for spelling, another for precise
vocabulary.
Making it better
Final Draft
You may or may not have the luxury of a typist who completes the final
draft, but even if you do, it is your responsibility to proofread the final
Spelling
Punctuation
Sentence structure
Documentation style
It is important to realize that all of these steps are not mutually exclusive.
In practice, we will be moving backwards and forwards through these
steps as we revise our thoughts of what is important to the essay itself.
Making it correct
Publishing
This is also considered a step of the writing process by individuals.
Publishing is an individualistic term, which has different meanings to
people working on different types of content.
For example, bloggers need to upload, format, and post their piece of
completed work on a public medium. Students also need to produce a
final copy of their work in the correct format and additional content.
This often means adding a bibliography, ensuring that citations are
correct and adding details such as their student reference number. On
the other hand, journalists need to submit their completed piece (usually
called a copy) to an editor.
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Creating a book of your work
To provide information
To request information
To instruct
To inquire
To respond
To persuade
In this day and age of conversational e-mail and instant messages, written
communication has become very important. We are now writing a lot
more than we did previously. Traditionally business communication
consisted of letters, memos and reports etc. Written communication was
treated as the most formal means of communication. Now with emails
and instant messaging our use of written communication has increased
and is being substituted for other means of communication for example
instead of calling a person to tell him something, you text message him
or you write an email to a colleague or customer asking for time to meet
instead of speaking with him on the telephone.
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mistake may cost him that job. It is a fact that, for many employers, it
is a major put off when they receive a poorly written cover letter with
a job application. Those organizations who receive numerous resumes
every day may simply toss such applications away without taking it into
consideration. Therefore, there is a strong emphasis on grammar and
spelling for effective and clear communication.
How to Write
In the age of text speaks, many people throw grammar to the wind
when writing. However, in the corporate world grammatically incorrect
writing is regarded unprofessional. Employers still expect refined writing
for effective communication, especially texts from front-end employees
who write to clients. Learning to write with appropriate grammar may
not only play a vital role in career progression but it could provide an
edge over other employees and build strong professional image. Some
of the common mistakes in sentence structuring and their solutions are
discussed as follows. Please note that these are simplified examples to jog
your memory and refresh your concepts. For complete understanding
please refer to text books on business communication as per the reference
guide provided.
Sentence Fragments
The first step is to structure sentences properly. A sentence fragment is
an incomplete sentence that leaves out pertinent information. In fact, a
sentence fragment leaves a receiver with more questions than answers.
Furthermore, when a sentence fragment is read out loud, it sounds
incomplete. The remedy for this grammatical error is to extend the
structure of the sentence by adding explanation.
For example: She opened an account and she got the cheque book.
We also need to watch for tricky pronouns, such as The customer was
so angry, they yelled. The pronoun they is plural, whereas the subject
customer is singular, hence the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
The correct sentence would be The customer was so angry that he
yelled.
For example: He and his supervisor is going for lunch is incorrect. The
correct sentence would be He and his supervisor are going for lunch.
Subject-verb agreement
Verbs and subject must match to avoid subject-verb disagreement. We
must be watchful for sentence construction that contain subject-verb
disagreements such as everyone have or neither of them are and
should be read everyone has and neither of them is. When the subject
of a sentence is singular, then the verb must be singular. Alternatively,
when the subject of a sentence is plural, then the verb must be plural.
Parallel sentences
The items in a series should be presented in a balanced form so that
they add to the readers understanding. A parallel sentence consists of
the same grammatical form throughout the sentence. For example the
sentence The teller manages cash receipt and to count cash involves
two different types of tenses. The correct grammar of the sentence
would be The teller manages cash receipt and counting.
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Subject verb agreement refers to the subject and verb of a sentence
matching in both quantity, as in singular or plural, and tense, as in past
or present. Thus, if a subject is singular, its verb must also be singular; if
a subject is plural, its verb must also be plural.
Nouns ADD an s to the singular form BUT Verbs REMOVE an s from the
singular form.
singular singular
singular singular
A phrase or clause between subject and verb does not change the
number of the subject.
prepositional phrase
The verb stays agrees with the subject file, not with corporate clients
The branch managers who had to attend the meeting were late.
dependent clause
The verb were agrees with the subject branch managers, not with
meeting.
singular singular
plural plural
singular singular
Some of the bank tellers sit on the first floor of the building.
Plural plural
Bank tellers are countable; therefore, the sentence has a plural verb.
Plural plural
With compound subjects joined by or/nor, the verb agrees with the
subject nearer to it.
Neither the bank nor the employees of the bank are responsible for
stolen cheque books.
In the above example, the plural verb are agrees with the nearer subject
employees.
Neither the employees nor the bank is responsible for stolen cheque
books.
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In this example, the singular verb is agrees with the nearer subject
bank.
plural plural
The board of the bank has decided to lay off the sales team.
singular singular
In this example, the board is acting as one unit; therefore, the verb is
singular.
The board members of the bank have decided to lay off the sales
team.
plural plural
Singular Singular
singular singular
Singular Singular
Singular Singular
Plural form subjects with a plural meaning take a plural verb. (e.g.
Assets, ATMs
plural plural
singular singular
In this example, the subject of the sentence is set; therefore, the verb must
agree with it. (Because cheque books is the object of the preposition,
cheque books does not affect the number of the verb.)
singular singular
plural plural
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With one of those ________ who, use a plural verb.
XYZ banks is one of those few banks that offer premier banking
solution to its customers
Singular verb
The above example implies that others besides XYZ bank also offer
premier banking solution to their customers. Therefore, the plural verb
is the correct form to use.
XYZ bank is the only one of the commercial banks that offers premier
banking solution to its customers
Singular verb
The above example implies that no one else except for XYZ bank that
offers premier banking solution. Therefore, the singular verb is the
correct for to use.
Singular verb
plural verb
Singular verb
Singular verb
Types of Memos
Its hard to group memos into types because the type of content varies,
but there are several broad classifications of memos.
1. The first type of memo is the directive memo. The directive memo
serves to tell the reader to follow a certain procedure.
2. The second type of memo is the response memo. This type of memo
is generally an answer to a preceding memo (often a directive).
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Conjunctions are the part of speech or (word class) that serves to connect
words, phrases, clauses, or sentences. The common conjunctions- and,
but, for, or, nor, yet, and so- join the elements of a coordinate structure.
Conjunctions make our writing (or speech) flow. Text which flows
appeals to an audience, be it readers or listeners, far more than text
which is abrupt and disjointed. We run the risk of being misunderstood
when the connection (or relationship) between our ideas or thoughts is
not clear. Conjunctions make this connection.
To fix a time (i.e. as long as, ever since, until, after, when, now that,
before)
Ever since we installed that new software, tracking our shipments is
easier.
Using the right linking words, we can articulate our ideas and present
them through a flowing narration that supports a clear and persuasive
argument.
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The useful life of emails is limited as compared to text books since
emails are mostly deleted or filed away after being read.
Additionally, business emails are not read or written for leisure. Business
executives and management often have to read, write and respond to
numerous emails every day. Hence, emails need to convey their message
very clearly and concisely.
Example
An email from a project manager to a client after the client approved the
companys quotations to deliver a service.
Dear Shahana,
Kind regards,
Rehan Ahmed
1. Correctness
In written communication, correctness refers to using appropriate
grammar, punctuation and spelling. Instead of fluff words, we are
required to use only the most necessary phrases to convey the message.
2. Conciseness
Conciseness means keeping the message as brief as possible, yet having
it contain all the necessary information. A lengthy message may
contain flowery words and repetition of content but may lack required
information hence leading the reader nowhere. We need to ensure that,
as a sender, our message is precise and comprehensible. The message
must be well-organized and logically arranged to ensure that only
important facts are included.
3. Clarity
Clarity means that the message should be clear along with being
complete and concise. For clarity in the message, we need to ensure that
we use the right level of language. We should avoid using complex words
that are hard to understand. We need to use simple and familiar words,
correct sentence structure and appropriate punctuation in our emails
to lead the reader in the intended direction. Messages lacking clarity are
confusing and generally misleading.
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4. Completeness
A complete message contains information readers need in order to
understand the message immediately. If the writer or sender can
anticipate the receivers possible questions, he is more likely to elicit
meaningful feedback. When answering questions, the sender should
address them appropriately and in the sequence in which they were
asked. If possible, add additional useful information as long as it is
relevant to the message.
5. Concreteness
For concreteness in the message, we should avoid using sentences or
ideas that are vague or ambiguous and add information that has a
solid ground. We should use specific and measurable facts and figures
instead of words that are inexact or immeasurable, such as few, big
and soon.
6. Consideration
In order to have an effective communication, we need to be empathetic
or considerate about the reader. We always have to keep the readers
ability to understand the message our priority while constructing
the message hence we should deliver clear messages which are honest
truthful and do not mislead the reader in wrong direction. We need to
structure our message in a manner that the target audience understands
and is able to comprehend the message without any difficulty.
7. Courtesy
A courteous writer is not only concerned about his/ her own agenda, but
also with the other persons feelings. Being courteous does not refer to
being polite or prompt in responding to emails, but it also means being
respectful to the recipient. In sending messages, we must avoid sarcasm,
inappropriate use of language or offensive tone.
Subject: Meeting
Dear Sir,
Best wishes,
Ali
Dear Sir,
Regards,
Siraj
The subject line is specific yet complete. The reader may not even open
the email and get most of the relevant information. The concise nature
of the subject line serves the purpose of reminder. Every time the reader
glances at his saved emails, he will be reminded about the meeting.
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Make One Point per Email
One of the advantages of an email compared with traditional letters is
that it does not cost any money. Therefore if we need to communicate
with the CFO or any other personnel about multiple issues, we should
draft a separate email on each subject. This way, the correspondent can
address each issue individually and in the appropriate time frame.
Dear Rukhsana,
I read through your email and feel that you need more
specific information regarding our sales figures in
Chapter 2. The report has been sent to the Accounting
Team, for making changes to the Return Inwards
figure.
Thanks.
Sarah
Sarah has an appropriate subject line and she is also clear on the changes
that will be incorporated in the report. However, the second paragraph
about the meeting is very important yet she has incorporated it into the
same email instead of addressing it separately. If the CFO does not put
it straight in her calendar, she may have to make a mental note that the
meeting details were in the email titled Revisions for Sales Report.
Dear Rukhsana,
I read through your email and feel that you need more
specific information regarding our sales figures in
Chapter 2. The report has been sent to the Accounting
Team, for making changes to the Return Inwards
figure.
Regards,
Sarah
AND
Dear Rukhsana,
Thanks.
Sarah
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Example
Subject: 10/5 Meeting, 10am, Conf. Rm. A, On PASS
Procedure EOM
April 4, 2011
Mr. M.A. Shaikh
Chief Financial Officer
XYZ Corporation (Pvt.) Ltd
Head office, Port Qasim
Karachi, Pakistan
Dear Mr. Shaikh,
Sincerely,
Ali Khan
Relationship Manager
Head office, XYZ Bank
Karachi, Pakistan
to hit the nail on the head; (to accurately explain the truth to do
the right);
For example, the field of industrial relations has given new meaning to
the verbs walkout, lock out, sit in, and go slow. The noun forms walkout,
lock-out, sit-in and go-slow are used almost exclusively in this context.
The word hard, as used in hard copy, for example, has taken on the
specialized meaning readable by the eye; in other words, it is not only a
machine-readable output as on magnetic tape.
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vibrant. Mastering idioms means we use and understand the language
as good as a native speaker would. It is important to know that the tough
part about mastering idioms is that all individual words in a phrase may
not help us understand the meaning of the phrase.
Business Business vocabulary is a set of words that are commonly used in business
Vocabulary and workplace communication. Business vocabulary includes general
business terminologies as well as numerous trade specific words which
are relevant to specific industries.
Computer Industry
Adware, application, browser, crash, bug, driver, firewall, login, sign up,
virus, log-in, password, vt, Trojan, spyware, GUI
Recruitment
Finance
Example 2
King Charles walked and talked half an hour after his head was cut off
has a very different meaning from King Charles walked and talked;
half an hour after, his head was cut off.
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Importance of Editing, Revising and Proof-reading the Write-up
Producing a finished text or write-up may it be a short email or status
report, goes through a series of steps which includes thinking, drafting,
revising, editing and proof reading. Once the write-up is ready and
completed we need to ensure appropriate editing, revising and proof
reading to avoid errors and mistakes.
These three steps can be performed in any order since all of them are
equally important and contribute towards the quality of a finished text.
Revising
Revising is the process of reading and changing with the intention of
improving or correcting. Revising is different from editing. Some of us
may approach both the tasks simultaneously but it is not considered a
good practice.
Content
When revising and assessing the content of the text, we look at the theme
of the text along with the individual points made in writing and the
elements other than paragraph text such as lists, graphics, flow charts
etc.
Organization
Organization of writing refers to the arrangement of various elements
of text such as sections, sub sections, graphics, paragraphs or even
sentences.
Style
Revising to assess the style of writing is to see if the style of writing is
appropriate for the type of writing and the audience it is being presented
to. The situation, purpose, audience and occasion should guide the style
of writing.
Importance of Revising
Good revision skills are very important and have extensive benefits
especially if we are responsible to prepare business or management
reports and draft formal emails. It is one of the most creative parts of
the writing process that allows us to examine the content, organization
and style of our writing.
Initial drafts are hardly mature presentable texts. Multiple revisions are
helpful in improving the text of the drafts. Regardless of how clear we
are on the content of the report, how quickly we can type or how good
our writing style is, revising will always allow us to discover areas that
need improvement. Revising also helps in ensuring that all the necessary
Editing
Editing is the step that polishes the written text. This is different from
revising which focuses on content, organization and style. Editing
mainly involves two kinds of changes.
Importance of Editing
For any text in a business environment to appear credible and
professional, it must express the ideas of the writer in a clear and
effective way and must be free of grammatical, spelling, punctuation
and formatting mistakes.
Editing is not only about finding typographical errors but it also helps
the writer to put his/her ideas or a certain perspective across to the
reader by writing a clear, cohesive text. It ensures the text will have the
desired effect on the reader whether it is to educate them or influence
their opinions in a certain way. Without editing, only few written pieces
would achieve these objectives.
Proof Reading
Proof reading refers to the final read through of a text for errors of
any type especially for spelling, spacing, duplication, omission and
formatting problems.
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Business letters are written for various purposes. One writes a letter to
enquire information, apply for a job, acknowledge someones work, and
appreciate ones job done, etc.
As the motive of writing the letter is different, the style of the letter
changes and you get different types of business letters. The various types
of business letters are used by different people to serve their purpose of
sending the message across.
Cover Letter
When you are applying for a position, write a cover letter to accompany
your resume. Use this as your opportunity to explain something that is
not apparent on your resume and to express why you want to work for
that specific company.
Acknowledgement Letter
This type of letter is written when you want to acknowledge someone
for his help or support. The letter can be used to just say thank you for
something you may have received from someone as well.
Apology Letter
An apology letter is written for a failure in delivering the desired results.
If the person has taken up a task and he fails to meet the target then he
apologizes and asks for an opportunity to improve, in this type of letter.
It can also be if the person has made a mistake.
Appreciation Letter
An appreciation letter is written to appreciate some ones work in the
organization. This type of letter is written by a superior to his junior. An
organization can also write an appreciation letter to other organization,
thanking the client for doing business with them.
Complaint Letter
A complaint letter is written to show one that an error has occurred and
that needs to be corrected as soon as possible. The letter can be used as
a document that was used for warning the reader. For example, you may
write, I was told when I placed my order that I would receive the item
in six to eight weeks. Currently, it has been 12 weeks since I placed the
order and I have yet to receive the item or receive any communication
from your company regarding my orders status.
Inquiry Letter
The letter of inquiry is written to inquire about a product or service. If
you have ordered a product and yet not received it then you can write a
letter to inquire when you will be receiving it.
Letter of Recommendation
This type of letter is written to recommend a person for a job position.
The letter states the positive aspects of the applicants personality and how
he/she would be an asset for the organization. Letter of recommendation
is even used for promoting a person in the organization.
Resignation Letter
This is written, if you decide to leave your current position. Your human
resources department may require this so there is written documentation
about the specifics of your departure. Even if it is not a requirement at
your place of work, writing an official resignation letter is a respectful
and professional course of action.
1. Return Address
The return address, which is the address of the sender, should come
first. (Return address is not required to be typed if the sender is using
letter headed paper). The return address should be positioned:
2. The Date
Directly beneath the return address, we put the date on which the letter
was written. To avoid any confusion, especially if you are writing to a
business abroad, it is best to put the date in word rather than number
form (Example: 30th July, 2011).
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3. Reference Line
We may include a reference line, starting with Re: This is often used
when corresponding with large companies, or when applying for a job.
The reference line can either appear beneath the date or beneath the
recipients address. The reference line should be left-aligned for both full
and modified block formats.
5. The Greeting
After the recipients address, we leave a lines space and add a greeting
for instance Dear Mr. Alavi or Dear Manager or Dear Sir/Madam
as appropriate, followed by a colon or a comma.
6. The Subject
We have an option to include a subject for the letter. It has now become
a common practice to add subject to the letter, perhaps as people have
become used to the subject lines of emails. If you do put a subject line, it
should be in title case, right after greeting or salutation.
The subject (if we choose to include one) should be left-aligned for full
block format, but can be either left aligned or centered for modified
block format. It is preferred to include a subject so that the recipient can
figure at a glance what the letter is about.
8. The Closing
After the body of text, the letter should end with an appropriate closing
phrase and a comma. The safest option is Yours faithfully (when you
dont know the name of the person to whom you are writing, i.e. when
you begin with Dear Sir/Madam. If we are already acquainted with the
recipient, it may be appropriate to use a phrase such as Best regards,
With warmest regards, Yours Sincerely or Kind regards.
The blank space above the name is left for the signature. This provides
evidence that the letter is from the person whose name is typed at the
bottom. Sometimes, another person may sign the letter on senders
behalf. If this is the case, he/she should put the letters p.p. before the
senders name, which stands for the Latin per procurationem meaning
by agency.
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Example of Business Letters
Sales letter
XYZ Bank
Main Branch, Clifton
Karachi, Pakistan
Tanya Rashid.
3489 Greene Ave.
Islamabad, Pakistan
Sincerely,
(Signature here)
Rashid Burhan
Customer Relationship Manager
Dear Customer,
Sincerely,
Ali Khan
Branch Manger
Encl: As above
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Letters of Acknowledgment
Since Mr. Nawaz is out of the office for the next two
weeks I am acknowledging receipt of your letter
dated May 20, 2011. It will be brought to his attention
immediately upon his return.
Yours Sincerely,
Yawar Saleem
541 Ramsey Court
Multan, Pakistan
Sincerely,
Sehr Falak
Credit and Loans Officer
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Sales and Promotional Letter
Leenah Ghaffar
Finance Officer
784 Liberty Road
Model Town, Lahore
Sincerely,
Sehr Falak
Customer Relationship Manager
Attention line can be added it the If the letter is not addressed to any
specific person. We skip one space after the inside address and add,
Attention: . We can make the letter go to the attention of a
department.
Postscript is two spaces below the last text on the page. It includes P.S.
and then a short sentence. Postscript though has become virtually
extinct with the advent of word processors.
The main formats for business letters are called full block format
and modified block format.
Full block format means that all the elements of the letter are left-
justified so that the start of each line is at the left-hand margin. This is
the more formal style hence we should use this style if we are unsure
which to go for.
Modified block format means that some elements of the letter are
shifted over to the right. Nowadays, this style is appropriate in most
contexts.
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Example of full block format letter
Yours sincerely,
Sarah Hameed
Yours sincerly,
Sarah Hameed
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All memos are structured similarly. They have the following elements:
An addressee: Flush left, in capital letters, near the top of the page
Use suitable paper for your memos white, either note size or standard
to fit most desk in-baskets.
Memorandum
Keep it up!
Business Fax Except for memos that serve as informal reports or instructional
documents, the standard memo format is no more than one page long.
Include your name, position, address, phone number and e-mail address.
Write Company Name: on the following line, with the name of the company
to which you are sending the fax.
Follow this with To: and the name of the person you are addressing.
Write Number of pages including this cover sheet: and list the total number
of pages in the fax.
Finish with Notes: and include any relevant details that should be considered
along with the information in the fax.
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Sample Fax letter format
Message:
Business Email The business email format is a form of internal and external form of
Format communication.
The business email format is similar to the business memo and therefore,
it wont be difficult to understand the basic rules. It is very important to
follow a correct format of a business email, as it directly describes your
personality. In case you write business email in a haphazard manner,
the reader will understand that you have no proper email etiquette. In
order to reflect professionalism in your personality, you need to sharpen
your skills.
The business email format should be set on left margin. We should avoid
using special formatting and tabs unnecessarily. The tone of the letter
should be kept formal and we must ensure the proper use of grammar
and spelling.
The email should be brief, if possible and to the point. Also, we should
avoid excessive or unnecessary attachments unless expected by the
recipient.
Asfandyar,
Regards,
Faiza M. Khan
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Example
Regards,
Safdar Ali
Human Resource Manager
Tel: 000-0001
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How to organize Writing formal reports can be an intimidating task for even the most
and write a experienced employees. And while it may never be completely painless,
business report it can be made less overwhelming with planning and preparation.
A report is made up of many parts and when these parts are put together,
a report for a simple comparison can end up being a lengthy document.
A business report may be written according to the following structure:
Table of contents
The table of contents contains relevant information followed by the
page numbers. The table of contents for a report is best done when the
report is near completion. This way, there is less chance of making an
error with page numbers.
Acknowledgement
The acknowledgement section of a report outlines the people who have
directly contributed to the preparation of the report usually by supplying
Executive Summary
The executive summary provides the reader with an overview of the
reports essential information. It is designed to be read by people who
will not have time to read the whole report or are deciding if this is
necessary; therefore, in your executive summary you need to say as
much as possible in the fewest words. The executive summary should
briefly outlines the subject matter, the background problem, and the
scope of the investigation, the method of analysis, the important findings
arguments and important issues raised in the discussion, the conclusion
and recommendations.
Introduction
A reports introduction summarizes the contents by describing the
purpose of the report and giving an overview of the main ideas
expressed within it. It provides general background information the
reader needs to know to understand the report, such as the methods and
theories used to gather the information. Also, it explains the scope of the
reports contents, including what is covered and, if necessary, what is not
covered. For example, your report may include findings made during an
investigation but not recommendations about how to respond to those
findings.
presents the information from your research, both real world and
theoretical, or your design
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Conclusions/ Recommendations
This section of the report has two parts:
First, it reviews the main findings and results, and expresses them in
general terms. Second, it draws a main conclusion and links to the
recommendations by showing a need for action. In some reports the
conclusion also contains some discussion of the main findings, in which
the writer discusses possible reasons for them. Then a main conclusion
is drawn and is linked to the recommendations by showing a need for
action.
References
This includes the sources from where the material has been taken.
Glossary
If necessary, you should provide an alphabetical list of the abbreviations
you have used in the report, especially if they may not be familiar to all
readers of the report.
If you have used a lot of technical terms, you should also provide a
glossary (an alphabetical list of the terms, with brief explanations of
their meanings).
Appendices
An appendix contains material which is too detailed, technical, or
complex to include in the body of the report (for example, specifications,
a questionnaire, or a long complex table of figures), but which is referred
to in the report. Appendices are put at the very end of the report, after
everything else. Each appendix should contain different material.
Number each appendix clearly.
Use subheadings
Number each page (a neat header and/or footer makes your work
look more professional)
Common problems
Some common problems with research report writing that we should
avoid are:
Business Proposal Business proposal is a document which includes information about the
company and the products and services it provides. A business plan
proposal is drafted for several reasons such as:
1. To interest investors
2. To propose change
Whatever the reason may be; using the correct business proposal format
with the appropriate content is recommended and the matter included
in the proposal must be in line with the purpose of why the proposal is
being drafted.
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We need to be extremely careful while writing a business proposal as
this will either make or break the deal. Following is an explanation on
how to use the correct business proposal format.
Business Progress A progress report provides management with enough useful information
Report to make sound business decisions.
The third step is to divide the progress report into different subheadings
relating to the various topics it needs to address. For example, have a
section heading titled Sales to address the progress of the companys
selling initiative. Each section should provide some background
information regarding the subject at hand. For instance, cite actual sales
results before delving into current sales progress.
Next, assemble your business report progress team. These are the
members responsible for helping you gather information for inclusion
in the report. Assign responsibilities to particular team members who
have expertise, knowledge or information pertaining to the assigned
topic in the report. You may also assign responsibilities across various
departments depending on the structure and nature of the report.
Next, assemble the different parts of the business progress report. If you
assigned this duty to another person, meet with him/her to monitor the
progress report in its different writing stages.
Edit the progress report for grammatical errors, typing errors and
inaccuracies. The progress report is not ready until you give it a final
perusal and approval. The business progress report bears your name
and, due to that, you want to make sure it reflects the highest level of
professionalism. Typing errors and other such mistakes give a negative
connotation, which could lead to embarrassment. Your professional
reputation is at stake.
The final step is to review the final copy of the business progress report
with your team members to ensure that everyone is in agreement
regarding its contents. After reaching a consensus of satisfaction with
the final copy, submit the progress report to management and other
interested parties.
Adopting the proper tone requires the writer to consider both the
purpose of the document and reader of the document.
Step 1: Be Confident
If the CRM was preparing to have a lunch meeting with the high-worth
client to convince him in purchasing the credit card, he would feel more
confident about the meeting if he carefully prepared and thoroughly
educated himself about the product in anticipation of any questions
that the client may have. The manner in which the CRM writes should
assume a confident tone because a confident tone will have a persuasive
effect on the reader. However, the CRM needs to be careful not to
appear overconfident because such an attitude could be interpreted as
aggressive or presumptuous. For example:
Confident: You are our most valued customer and we wish to continue
strengthening our relationship with you by providing you the most
competitive credit rates.
Inappropriate level: If you are willing to purchase the card, you need to
follow the steps given on our website.
Example:
Highly Informal: Will you please consider using our free-of-cost internet
banking services?
Precise: The gold card will offer you more benefits therefore you may
consider purchasing it.
The presentation should always start with the title and contact
information. The title should have meaningful content - not just an
expedient such as: The Program Plan. We may want to provide context
for the briefing by identifying the intended audience on the cover
page e.g., Presented to the management Committee of the ABC Asset
Management Company. The contact information introduces us the
presenters. It also provides a link for the audience in case they want
to take some action after hearing the briefing. The beginning of the
presentation should tell the audience what we are going to tell them. For
a long briefing, an outline sets expectations and shows the relationship
of topics to the goal of the presentation. For a shorter briefing, a simple
statement of purpose will suffice.
We must avoid cluttering the slide with text. The best way is to break
up the space with open areas (white space) and graphics. This is visually
pleasing. Group items together, under key points and use connector
graphics to show cause/effect or before/after comparisons.
Finally, we must remember that not everyone learns best from text. Our
briefing should include captioned graphics that backup your conclusions.
A good graphic provides a visual representation that speaks to visual
learners in the same way that text speaks to readers. Meaningful graphics
can be time consuming and need higher mental input to create.
The final slide in the presentation summarizes the key points. We have
to tell the audience what should be concluded and what actions, if any,
should be taken by them. Strategically, the cover sets the assertions
and the final page provides the conclusions. The text between the
cover and the last page is the justification and explanation to support
the conclusions. Sometimes presentations take on a life of their own
they are copied, shared, and used for reference. Therefore, presentation
materials should be self-explanatory because we may not be there to
explain what we meant.
Inform
Inspire
Motivate
Advocate
3. Now you should consider the points you want to make. Inevitably
there will be several. Write down all of them. Once you have listed
them all, you have the chance to rationalize the list.
6. Your three main points provide the basis for your presentation
its either theme or thesis. Writing down the presentation thesis, the
central argument, is useful for the next stage. And, of course, its
invaluable when you want to promote your presentation beforehand.
There are three easy ways to organize your points.
2. Get organized.
Draw up an outline of the key points you want to hit upon. Arrange
your material in the same order that your business plan is organized in.
Eliminate gaps and inconsistencies in your outline.
3. Prepare a script.
Write your speech on 3x5 inch index cards, or type it using a large, easy-
to-read font. If you dont want to write a full speech, jot down bullet
points instead.
7. Practice
Read your script out loud alone. Then do a dry run by giving your
whole presentation to a group of friends. Ask them to critique your
performance. Be sure to rehearse the audiovisual portion of your
presentation as well.
In any persuasive situation, readers want to know how they will benefit
from doing as we suggest: how the product or service will benefit them,
what they will gain if they change their thinking about an issue, or how
they can avoid difficulties by changing their thinking or behavior. Some
situations may require more than one persuasive message, with each
new message picking up where the previous one was left.
In general, the more difficult the persuasive task, the slower the writer
should proceed. People generally do not appreciate; hence resist being
rushed into the matter. We need to give them time to decide for
themselves how they will benefit from acting on our message.
We need to ensure that our message is appropriate for the situation and
in accordance with the audience. A message that is more persuasive
than it needs to be is often less successful than a message that is less
persuasive than it should be.
Persuasive Requests
Everyone needs to write a persuasive request at one time or another.
Would you like Mr. XYZ to attend a meeting? Do you need to secure
donations (of either time or money) for a charity? Have you had a
problem convincing a company to replace a defective product? Each
of these situations would call for a persuasive request. The four types
of persuasive requests are requests for favors, adjustments, credit, and
donations.
People who respond to requests for funds fall into two general categories:
(1) major donors (wealthy donors, foundations, and corporations), who
respond primarily to rational appeals, and (2) donors of small amounts
who respond primarily to emotional appeals.
Basit Khalid,
General Manager
Mobile and Co.
123 Main Street
Karachi, Pakistan
Yours sincerely,
[signature]
Shehzad Shah
Loans Officer
XYZ Bank Limited
Collection Letters
Consultants and those who own small retail establishments are the most
likely to have sold goods or services on unsecured credit, but everyone
in business should have a basic understanding of collection procedures:
a sale is not complete until the seller has been paid.
Reminders
Reminders of overdue bills usually consist of
3. A short note (usually a form) specifying the amount due, the due
date, late charges, and the account number.
Appeals
When the reader has failed to respond to one or more reminders and
one or more inquiries, the writer must assume that the reader will not
pay unless he or she is persuadedperhaps even forced legallyto do
so. Because you would not be writing an appeal unless you had gone
through the reminder and inquiry stages, you should assume that the
reader is going to be well-prepared to resist your message. For this reason,
many organizations turn the debt over to a collection professional.
The reader should be told that by not paying, he or she is likely to lose
the following:
1. Credit privileges.
If your reader fails to respond to your appeal (or appeals, if you choose
to send more than one), give him or her one last opportunity to pay
along with notification of the action you will take if payment does not
arrive. This final letter is known as the ultimatum. Your assumption in
writing is that the reader will have to be forced to pay.
In this last effort to collect, you should review the facts (what the reader
purchased and when and your efforts to collect over time), set an end
date, and tell the reader that on that date you will turn the debt over to
a collection agency or to a lawyer. Avoid threatening the reader (which
is illegal), and avoid accusing the reader of personal shortcomings or
engaging in name-calling (deadbeat, crook, loser, etc.).
Even at this point, you may be able to retain your readers goodwill
and cash business, so remain fair, reasonable, and logical throughout.
Routine messages Routine messages are messages that are used generally used to deliver
routine information within or outside the organization. These are
formally written messages where we first state the request using the right
tone and keeping in mind our audience. Then we justify the reasons
or the request in the routine message and then close the messages
courteously.
We also make sure that the request is clearly understood by the receiver
and that there are no confusions. When we are done with the message,
we have to make sure that we add contact information, especially if the
message is to be sent outside the organization, so that the receiver is
easily able to contact the sender.
Negative messages
A negative message is any message to which the reader will have
an unpleasant emotional reaction. Readers find negative messages
disappointing or threatening in some way. Such messages require
special care to avoid damaging the quality of the relationship because
the negative message- the bad news- will hurt the readers feelings or
cause him or her to lose face or bear a financial loss.
The best preparation for bad news is a logical and believable reason
that the negative message is in the readers long-term best interest. If
the situation does not allow that approach, we must at least show that
our reason is legitimate, and help our reader save face by suggesting
alternative courses of action or ways to compensate for a shortcoming.
The fact that a positive alternative exists, however, is not a reason for
refusal. The advantages of buying with cash (such as a discount) are not
a reason to refuse credit.
1. Give the reason for the refusal before the refusal itself when you
have a reason that readers will understand and accept. A good reason
prepares the reader to expect the refusal.
Example:
Dear Mr. Ali:
Sincerely,
Usman Khawaja
Senior Associate Corporate Banking
1. Start the message with subject. For example in the first example of
active voice given below, the subject is Mr. Qureshi.
2. Add a verb (along with helping verb) after the subject will inspect.
These examples are a proof of the advantages of the active voice. At the
same time, it does not mean passive voice is incorrect or one should
never use it. Passive voice is correct, and it has a place. The problem is
that many writers tend to over use it, especially when writing reports.
To use active or passive is just not a matter of choice but also relevance
to context and audience.
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Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Skills used in There are three unique reading skills we can use to improve our
Business Reading reading:
Following directions
Perceiving relationships
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Recognizing comparison/contrasting information
These different ways are not mutually exclusive. In real life our reading
purposes constantly vary. Reading involves a variety of skills. Thus
reading is constant process of guessing, and what one brings to the text
is often more important than what one finds in it.
Reading Stage
At the reading stage, we need to focus on garnering major ideas as well
as important details from the material. We need to understand and
comprehend what we read. Thorough reading helps us in determining
Post-Reading Stage
Once we have read the material, we need to engage in post-reading
activities to assure long-term retention of what we have read. We must
remember what we have read and this can be achieved only when pre-
reading stage is cleared.
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Connect Reading to What You Already Know
Remembering what you already know about a topic will improve your
reading comprehension.
Pre-Reading: Paragraphs
Reading is made up of paragraphs. A paragraph is a group of sentences.
Paragraphs tell you a complete set of thoughts. Look at the first page of
what you will be reading on your own. Locate the first paragraph.
Paragraph Beginning
Choose the most important sentence in this paragraph. You can
choose only one.
Paragraph Middle
Look at rest of the paragraph and find a detail. A detail is a small
thing that tells you something more about the topic. Details are
likely to be located in the middle of the paragraph.
The middle of the paragraph is the place where details are added
to the paragraph topic.
The concluding sentence is what the topic and details build up to.
The concluding sentence often sums up the paragraph.
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Speaking
Chapter Three
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Effective Amina, a branch manager for a bank, had heard of the difficult
Interpersonal Skills reputation developed by Usman, one of the customer relationship
managers, but had never had any difficulties with this individual herself.
Amina approached Usman one day, and found him sitting with his feet
up on a table, reading a magazine. She apologized for disturbing him,
assuming that perhaps this might have been his break period.
Usman, when you can, could you please visit ABC Company today
and get the account opening forms filled out? Amina asked politely.
Usman answered rather curtly, Right now? She was not going to be
intimidated, and responded, That will work great for me, thanks!
Usman continued to show difficult behaviors with other individuals,
but from then on never showed Amina any discourtesy.
Amina, being confident and straight-forward, got her work done. She
knew Usman is difficult to be dealt with therefore she came right to the
point without giving him room to start an argument. Amina used her
people skills or interpersonal skills.
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the desired results. The balance in different situations and good physical
and mental health is important for a tireless service.
Ways to improve Think positively, maintain a mindset to work well with others and
interpersonal skills maintain good relationships.
Be patient.
When youre unhappy, try your best to act happy anyway. You will
end up feeling better and so will the people around you, your mood
is contagious.
Analysis
The manager clearly did not use her interpersonal skills as effectively as
she should have. She was more concerned about the task at hand rather
than receiving the information in front of her. If she would have just
asked her why she was agitated, she would have known that Aliya was
concerned about her routine work. They might have even completed the
presentation in half the time if Aliya was encouraged to prioritize her
work according and the manager could have guided her through this
process.
Business Meetings Meetings can be one of the biggest time drains for us as an individual
and for a business. A meeting, with 7 people, all costing Rs.200 per hour
costs a business Rs.1400 per hour. If it is a meeting for seven people
every week and there are 15 minutes wasted at each meeting, the total
yearly waste comes to over Rs.25,000. Half the meeting being wasted is
not very uncommon and entire meetings that are unproductive are also
not unheard of.
Here are some ways we can facilitate more effective meetings and get
more done in less time.
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Make people show up on time
If people trickle in over a 10 minute period, that is a lot of wasted time.
Often people come late because they know the meeting isnt going to
start on time, anyway. If we start meeting with no one there, it is hard
to get any productive work done. If we wait for everyone, then it is likely
that people will come late to the next meeting. We can make people
come to the meetings on time by following one or more tactics given
below:
Hold the meeting somewhere that being late will make them look
bad or at least be more noticeable.
It is better to give people the agenda ahead of time. For short meetings,
it is probably best to have it in the body of an email. If we send it as
an attachment, there is a good chance people wont read it before the
meeting. If we have it in the body, they will probably at least skim it. At
the very least, we want to get the meeting agenda into their subconscious
mind before they show up.
Having an agenda also helps show that we are organized and have a
plan. It sets the expectation that our meeting isnt going to be a waste
of time. It helps put the meeting in the right perspective and makes it
carry a more valuable perception.
There can be list of people we want to make sure we dont invite. These
types of people cannot make a decision, and usually have nothing
to add. We should also avoid, if we have an option, such people who
distract everyone from the objective of the meeting, exert their opinions
on other or counter argument on every issue.
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pass on the meetings contents to people who need to know about the
discussion, but cannot come due to other commitments.
End on time
We expect people to show up on time for important meetings. We need
to give them the same level of respect and end meetings on time. If we
are on top of our agendas time schedule, ending on time shouldnt be
too difficult and ending early is always good too.
Ten Ways to Where meetings require increased participation, there are a few things
Increase Group we can choose from in order to increase group participation and member
Participation in involvement.
Team Meetings
1. Get their input on agenda topics prior to the meeting.This can be
done outside the meeting by sending the proposed agenda in an
email asking for comments or with a phone call to each person after
it is sent.Another way to get their inputs is to always plan the next
meeting agenda together at the end of each meeting.
5. When doing idea generation in the meeting, always use the round
robin brainstorming technique. This technique insures everyone
takes turns contributing until most people begin to run out of
ideas.
8. For any meeting topics that warrant discussion, plan extra time to
allow everyone 2-3 minutes of talk time each.Be sure to encourage
everyone to share thoughts, opinions, pros and cons during the
discussion time.
10. Ask the group for ideas to make meeting more interactive.Members
may have particular exercise they want to try or techniques they have
used before that the team may benefit from.Be sure to try some of
the different ideas in following meetings.
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Essential Negotiation can be defined as the process of involving different groups
Negotiating with different interests across the negotiating table through dialogue
Skills in Business and discussion in order to resolve differences amicably. Great nations
Communication resolve their long standing issues by way of effective negotiations. Many
an industrial dispute is resolved amicably through these means so as
to achieve their goals and objectives which would have been hampered
otherwise. It is the process which takes place in our day to day life
in the families, at the work places, at all places either consciously or
unconsciously.
These skills are important in many jobs, especially areas such as marketing,
sales, advertising and buying, but are also valuable in everyday life.
Persuading
One scenario where persuading skills can be important is the job
interview, but the following tips are valuable in many other settings.
Focus on the needs of the other party. Take time to listen to them
carefully and find out about their interests and expectations. This
shows that you are really interested in them and they are then more
likely to trust and respect you. It will also make it easier for you to
outline the benefits of your proposal in terms they understand.
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Argue your case with logic. Do careful research on your ideas and
those of your competitors (if there are any) and make sure that any
claims you make can be verified.
The more hesitant language you use such as isnt it, you know,
um mm and I mean the less people are likely to believe your
argument.
Subtly compliment the other party. For example: I see that youve
done some really excellent research into this. Even though they may
realize that you may not proceed with their findings, but evidence
shows that they will still be warm to you and be more open to your
proposals.
Negotiating to win
This involves pursuing your own interests to the exclusion of others: I
win: you lose! Persuading someone to do what you want them to do and
ignoring their interests: keeping your cards hidden. Pressure selling
techniques involve this.
Negotiating jointly
This involves coming to an agreement where everyone gets what they
want, reaching a mutually satisfactory agreement: win-win
Clarify issues you are not clear about by asking how, why, where,
when and what questions.
List all the issues which are important to both sides and identify the
key issues. Identify any personal agendas. Question generalizations
and challenge assumptions.
Keep calm and use assertive rather than aggressive behavior. Use tact
and diplomacy to diffuse tensions.
Allow the other party to save face if necessary via small concessions.
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Basic Skills: Intermediate High Level Negative
Skills: Skills: Strategies!
Use Ideas
Persuasively Gain Support Develop
Strategies.
Engage the Emphasize Use a range of Negotiating to
attention of others. how costs and approaches and win (see earlier)
problems can be strategies to gain
Explain the Gain power by
minimized support for ideas.
benefits of your undermining the
argument. Handle Give an position of others.
objections. example of when
Develop a Dont show
your idea has been
line of reasoned Challenge the respect for others
used successfully
argument points of view in some other views. Put down
expressed by context. their ideas.
Put your points
others.
across clearly and Make Impose your
concisely Get other own views rather
concessions when
people to support required to reach than reasoning
Understand
your views. agreement: work with others.
the concerns
for a win-win
and needs of the
situation.
person you are
dealing with. Form
long term
relationships.
Time Frame
One of the most important communication skills business people can
learn is to know the best time to communicate sensitive information.
This skill is also extraordinarily important in the business negotiation
situation: business negotiators need to know when it is appropriate to
begin the negotiation or to indicate that they wish to come to a better
solution than the one currently proposed. For example, it would be
inappropriate to negotiate a salary during an interview but acceptable
after job offer has been made.
Knowledge of Audience
Good communicators need to have a good understanding of the
audience and know how to best get information across to that audience.
An audiences age, how they feel about the topic being discussed, their
prior knowledge and their position will all affect how a communicator
Clarity
Being clear is essential for good communication and good negotiation
to take place. Although most people do not like to negotiate, avoiding
confrontation by being unclear will not help in this situation. Clarity
is the key, for example, you might say, I agree that we need a new
employee handbook, and I am more than pleased to work on one with
you, but there are a few points in your current outline that I could not
sign my name to.
Listening
Good communicators know how to understand what another person
is saying, to synthesize it with their own thoughts, and to begin to
verbalize that synthesis to work towards a solution, or a negotiation. An
important part of negotiation is the communication skill of listening.
Without good listening skills, negotiation cannot take place. Both
parties will just begin to feel as if they have not been heard, and an
argument is likely. Instead, good communicators and negotiators need
to check with each other to ensure they understand the arguments at
hand before breaking them down into smaller components that can be
combined as part of a negotiation.
Discussion
Speeches
Debates
Lectures
Presentations
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Oral communication occurs in many different settings during the
course of successful innovation and change. These may be divided into
three main types:
The speaker needs to be clear. Clarity does not only mean, clarity of
words and language, but the speaker also needs to be clear regarding the
purpose of the speech. Clarity is often blended with the word relevant.
Relevance deals with as to how something relates to something
else. When making a speech or a presentation, the speaker needs to
include information which is relevant to the topic for the clarity of the
audience.
Tone
Pitch and
Pace
How we sound when we speak does influence others and it is not about
accents (although those do give out an impression) but rather the tone of
our voice, its clarity, its passion and enthusiasm and its variances.
So we should try varying the pitch and pace of our voice and try
blending our voice with some passion. If we talk in a high pitched voice
we may appear to be unconvincing and less credible. Its best to talk at
low volume, talk slow pace and take a few breaths in between talking in
order to sound mellow and polite. We need to understand who we are
communicating with and then decide how we should pitch our voice
and words to use.
We should match the pace and tone of our voice with the person we are
conversing with. This does not mean we imitate them but if they speak
softly and slowly then we should also lower our voice and slow it down.
If the other person speaks quickly, we should try and quicken up.
Words
Tone of voice
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The non-verbal elements are particularly important for communicating
feelings and attitude, especially when they are incongruent: If words
disagree with the tone of voice and nonverbal behavior, people tend to
believe the tonality and nonverbal behavior.
Volume
We should practice controlling the volume of our voice according to the
specific situation in which we are communicating orally. For example,
if we are presenting in front of board members, a softer voice would be
ideal. However, if we are giving a motivational speech our subordinates,
a louder voice would be more appropriate.
Pace
The pace, or the speed, at which we are speaking must also be controlled
depending on the situation we are in. For example, if we are about to
strike a deal while trading a security and we have limited time at hand,
a faster pace of speech may be acceptable. If we are speaking to a focus
group, a slower pace will be much more effective. We should avoid
speaking at fast pace during formal or professional events.
Inflection
We should practice using appropriate voice inflection in oral
communication to express emotions. We can use higher-pitched voice
to express excitement, happiness or positive emotions. We can lower
the pitch of our voice to express sympathy, sincerity or authority during
meaningful communication. The inflection of our voice should never
sound over-exaggerated or artificial.
Punctuation of words
The main purpose of correct use of grammar and punctuation of words
is ensuring the receiver of the information listens to it accurately. One
mistake in punctuation can change the entire context of the sentence.
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Clear, using familiar words to prevent misunderstandings
If than more than one speaker, what kind of presentations will they
make?
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When we analyze our audience, we should focus on their professional as
well as personal attributes. Our analysis will suggest what we should say
or write, what we should not say, and the tone we should use.
What kinds of cultural biases will they likely have toward me and
my topic?
Or, if our audience is not readily familiar with the subject, we may want
to include background material to help them grasp and process our
main points. We should inform the audience about the points or topics
we plan to cover so that our audience can sense and follow the direction
of the presentation accordingly.
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Because listening is more difficult than reading, narratives can be
particularly effective in retaining the attention of our listeners. In short,
we need to vary our content type, ensuring that the information we
include pertains to the goal of our presentation.
The introduction should clearly tell the audience what the presentation
will cover so that the audience is prepared for what is to come. We need
to ensure that we state our goal in the beginning. Even if we use some
type of anecdote or question to interest our audience, we should state
the goal of our presentation next. We should then share the outline of
the presentation. The main ideas we have developed during research and
content planning stage should also be discussed along with the outline.
Generally, the introduction serves the purpose of executive summary in
the presentation.
The conclusion reiterates the ideas presented and reinforces the purpose
of the presentation. The conclusion to the presentation should help the
audience understand the significance of the presentation and remember
the key points. At a minimum, we should restate the main issues we
want our audience to remember, but concisely. We should include
a concluding narrative or statement that will have an impact on our
audience. The conclusion should not be long, but it should leave the
audience with a positive feeling about us and our ideas.
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Avoid long, cumbersome sentences and use phrases a variety of
sentence lengths.
Avoid overuse of jargon, unless we are certain that our audience will
be readily familiar with all specialized terms.
Some presentations may require only one kind of visual aid; presentations
conveying complex information however may require several. The point,
Because the visual aids will be seen while the audience is listening to us,
we need to ensure that the visuals used are as simple as possible and as
easy to read. Hence we should:
Avoid visuals that use too many colors--more than four on any one
aid.
Avoid making the audience study our aids. If they are busy trying to
decipher our visual aid, they will not be listening to us.
Use bar graphs, line graphs, or circle graphs rather than tables,
particularly if the table has more than one column. Tables are harder
to interpret than a graphic presentation of the content. Also, tables
can easily contain excessive information and are more acceptable in
written reports where the reader has time to study them. Bar graphs,
circle graphs, simple diagrams, pictures, and lists are standard types
of visual aids. We must limit the aid to the concept, data, or point we
are trying to make.
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Taking the time to learn techniques for good telephone communication
makes every call we take or make more effective.
Arriving at a Resolution
We need to determine whether a resolution has been achieved before
finishing the call. We or the other party made a phone call for a reason:
to gather information, solve a problem or to make contact with someone
else. If we called for information, we should recap what we learned with
the other party to make sure we have the complete information and it is
correct. If the other party initiated the call to solve a problem, we restate
the problem and the solution that we have offered to ascertain whether
the caller has reached a resolution.
Never let a phone ring more than four times. Doing so tells callers that
their call is not important to you or you are busy or not available
Smile Im sure youve heard this before. Yes, its true. You can hear
a smile. Try it; youll be surprised how people react differently
when you put a little smile in your voice. If the person on the
other end hears dread or boredom in your voice, they will mimic
it. Its human nature to mirror one another. So make it routine
that, the second you put the phone to your ear, you are physically
smiling.
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conversation. The person on the other end will likely be able to
tell if you arent listening. And weve all heard the tap-tap of the
keyboard in the background while on the phone with someone.
Its very rude and, no matter how good you think you are at
multi-tasking, its likely that you arent catching everything the
person is telling you if youre busy doing something else.
Telephone etiquettes
While not as impactful as a face-to-fact meeting, a telephone call is a real
time business communication and our caller deserves our undivided
attention, difficult though that may be. As a manager, it is very possible
that an administrative assistant will answer our incoming phone calls
and screen them for us. Depending on our specific function within the
organization, we may take many calls or only a few. Regardless, the
The problem with humor is that it is can go wrong at times. One persons
idea of a good joke can be another persons insult. How do we avoid
humor that has the potential to offend our co-workers? There is one
simple answer: Use jokes about situations, not people. Why? Because
regardless of age, hair color, sex, national origin or anything that
distinguishes us as humans, we all can identify with a situation.
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Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
We should stop talking and stay silent. It might sound obvious, but one
of the biggest obstacles to listening, for many people, is resisting the
impulsive thoughts. Likewise, many think empathy means sharing with
the speaker similar experiences that the listener has had. Both can be
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helpful, but they are easily abused. We need to put aside our own needs,
and wait for the other person to talk at their own pace.
We can follow and encourage the speaker with body language. Nodding
our head will indicate that we are listening to the speaker, and this will
encourage them to continue. Adopting body postures, positions and
movements that are similar to the speaker (called mirroring) will allow
the speaker to relax and open up more. We can follow the techniques
given below:
Our expression: We need to look interested and meet the gaze of our
speaker from time to time. We should not overwhelm the speaker by
staring intently, but should reflect friendliness and openness to what
we are listening to.
Read between the lines: We should be watchful for issues that have
been left unsaid or for cues that can help us gauge the speakers
true feelings. We should watch the facial and body expressions of
the speaker to try and gather as much information as we can, but
necessarily by asking for it.
We should wait for the person to open up. In the process of encouraging
a constructive response, an active listener must continue to be patient
and let the speaker acquire his or her full flow of thoughts, feelings,
and ideas.
Do not be judgmental
We should:
Remember that when our counterpart feels that he or she has been
listened to, he or she is much more likely to listen to our ideas.
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Avoid phrases that imply that we have not listened closely such as
Yeah but... Instead, learn to use phrases that provide confirmation
that we have heard the other side completely, such as I see. Now tell
me what you would do...
When we look at the person we are listening to, we should try to look
into their eyes. This shows that we are focused. However we must try
not to stare the speaker down or look at him disapprovingly.
Avoid parroting by repeating every word after the speaker. This can
be quite annoying to the person you are trying to listen to.
Barriers to listening
We generally tend to focus more on becoming good speakers and ignore
the importance of effective listening. We can improve our listening
abilities if we are willing to listen effectively. Nearly every aspect of
human life could be improved by listening effectively-- from family
matters to corporate business affairs to international relations.
Even more disruptive is interrupting the speaker in the middle and show
disagreement with his or her view. This is a common problem since most
of our opinionated and difference of opinions generally results into an
The knowing the answer barrier also causes the listener to pre-judge
what the speaker is about to say -- a kind of closed-mindedness.
We should commit ourselves to learn at least one new thing from every
conversation. Looking for something new and interesting will make us
more attentive and receptive while listening.
Trying to be helpful
Another significant barrier to good listening is trying to be helpful.
Although trying to be helpful may seem beneficial, it still counts as
interference. If the listener is thinking about how to solve what he
perceives to be the speakers problem, he may get lost in trail of thoughts
and miss some important points of the conversation.
An old proverb says, When walking, walk. When eating, eat. In other
words, When listening, Listen.
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sometimes mean that the listener doesnt have complete respect for the
speaker.
Except in a very rare case where we truly disagree with speaker is saying,
we should avoid dismissing his or her statements completely.
The speaker may not have actually meant the word in the way that the
listener understood. However, the listener will be so distracted by the
red flag that he or she will not notice what the speaker actually did mean
to say.
When we hear a word or expression that raises a red flag, we should try
to stop the conversation, if possible, so that we do not miss anything that
the speaker says. We can ask the speaker to clarify and explain the point
in a different way.
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Believing in language
One of the trickiest barriers is believing in language -- a misplaced
trust in the precision of words. Language is a guessing game. Speaker and
listener use language to predict what each other is thinking. Meaning
must always be actively negotiated.
Of course, the naive assumption here is that all over the place means
well spread out, however here it is being used in an entirely different
context meaning not in one place or unfocused.
The words reflect the experiences the speaker shares with the listener. If
the listener hasnt had the experience that the speaker is using the word
to point at, then the word points at nothing. Worse still, the listener may
quietly substitute a different experience to match the word.
We should not assume that words or expressions mean exactly the same
to us as they do to the speaker. We can stop the speaker and question the
meaning of a word. Doing that too often causes a lag in the conversation
but it is better to be on the same wavelength with the speaker rather
than getting the entire conversation wrong.
Some of the speakers act as trees as they prefer providing concrete and
complete explanations. They might explain a complex situation just by
naming or describing its characteristics in no particular order.
Other speakers are forest people. When they have to explain complex
situations, they prefer to begin by giving a sweeping, abstract birds-eye
view.
Forest people, on the other hand, often baffle their listeners with
obscure abstractions. They tend to prefer using concepts, but sometimes
those concepts are so removed from the world of the senses that their
listeners get lost.
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Selective listening
People tend to hear what they expect to hear, need to hear, or want to
hear and block out the rest. For example, if we have been feeling lack of
confidence in ourselves lately, we might hear everything that is said to us
through a filter of Im no good. Or we might tune out everything that
is critical, unpleasant, or negative because it appears to be threatening.
We should keep in mind that everybody uses some form of selective
listening. We need to learn our form of selectivity and observe our
tendency to block listening with it.
Mindful listening
Many common symptoms of poor listening, such as interrupting other
speakers, come from a deeper cause: communication anxiety. Techniques
for developing mindful listening can improve the effectiveness of
listening by helping to manage communication anxiety. To be mindful
means to become consciously aware of what would otherwise be unseen
due to inattention.
Communication anxiety
Communication anxiety lies at the root of many hindrances to
wholehearted and effective listening. It strikes nearly all listeners and
speakers - especially in challenging situations, where effective listening
is critically important.
Fidgetiness - Fidgetiness is also a clear sign that the listener may feel
overwhelmed or anxious. In many cases fidgeting seems to be caused
by the body starting to act and then being consciously overruled. The
fidgety listener would rather get up and run away, but that movement is
constrained by conditioning, such as a learned sense of responsibility to
stay and finish the conversation.
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Yawning seems to happen when we feel restricted in some way. Its a
stretching response, a response to feeling suffocated psychologically,
if not physically.
When the eyes go unfocused, or glaze over, the brain is saying, I dont
want to be here right now. It isnt surprising that the eyes themselves
reflect the fact that the person is paying attention to the daydream,
memory, or perhaps to a captivating thought.
Effective listening Expressing our wants, feelings, thoughts and opinions clearly and
techniques effectively is only half of the communication process needed for
interpersonal effectiveness. The other half is listening and understanding
what others communicate to us. When a person decides to communicate
with another person, he/she does so to fulfill a need. The person either
wants to share a view or give an advice or opinion, needs a favor, feels
discomfort, and/or has feelings or thoughts that he or she needs to
share.
2. Defensive listening
3. Judgmental listening
4. Active listening
5. Selective listening
6. Passive listening
7. Pseudo listening
8. Empathetic listening
9. Evaluative listening
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Judgmental listening
During judgmental listening opinions and critics are made on the
counter part rather than concentrating on the issue. Example of
judgmental listening is when a person says, I was hurt and the other
person thinks, You deserve it. One of the traits of good listening skills
is to have a neutral attitude and outlook towards the issue.
Selective Listening
Only a part of information is absorbed during selective listening.
This could be due to various reasons such as noisy place, too many
interruptions like phone calls, or low volume by the speaker, or
disinterest from the listener. However, selective listening, sometimes, is
also effective. For instance, when a manager is blasting, the subordinate
selectively listen the issue rather than focusing on the harsh words.
Pseudo listening
Listeners of this type seem to be listening but they are not. Nodding
head, looking interested, or uttering words such as ahan..ok.. are
some verbal cues that are contradicting to the fact that they are actually
thinking about something else rather than listening.
Empathetic Listening
Empathetic listening is similar to active listening. In a conversation, when
the person puts himself/herself in the place of other person accounts for
empathetic listening. Common phrase used during empathetic listening
include, I understand, I know how you feel, and How can I help you.
Empathetic listening is one the most effective listening skills, which is
prominent among successful sales professionals, corporate trainers, and
winning leaders and managers.
Evaluative Listening
Analyzing the issue, getting deep in the challenge to understand and to
find the solution are some of the characteristics of evaluative listening.
Though critics are made to see whether the issue is good or bad, right or
wrong, finding the solution is the focus during evaluative listening.
Reflective listening
Reflective listeners are waiting for the other person to stop talking so
that the listeners can proceed talking. In fact, sometimes they are not
Detective
Defensive
Judgmental
Pseudo and
Active
Selective
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Part Two
Non-verbal communication
Chapter Five
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
In recent times research and analysis have been done on the non verbal
elements that people read. Research has shown that many of the gestures
are unconscious and in born. We all signal our thoughts and emotions
involuntarily. Much of our basic non-verbal behavior is learned from
our environment and culture we need to be careful in displaying the
right culture.
Facial Expression
Gestures
Posture
Body Movement
Artifacts
Clothing and accessories convey information to others about how we
carry ourselves. Artifacts express personality of the person and his
Haptic
Haptic refers to touch in communication, and how it is used or avoided.
It is one of the most powerful types of nonverbal communication and
should be used carefully. Different cultures have different rules about
touching, and what is appropriate in one might not be in another. A
soft pat on the shoulder will communicate far more empathy than mere
words.
Proxemics
How close people stand to each other is a nonverbal cue in communication.
Proxemics means the use of space, the personal space around us, where
we choose to stand and how comfortable we are with our surrounding.
This, too, is culturally determined. Level of intimacy in the relationship
also affects personal space.
Paralanguage
Paralanguage is how we say what we say. Tone and inflection of voice as
well as loudness all convey messages to others. Saying something kind,
but saying it in a harsh voice, sends a definite mixed message, and it is
the harsh voice what will be believed.
When people fail to look others in the eye, it can seem as if they are
evading or trying to hide something. On the other hand, constant eye
contact can be confrontational or intimidating. While eye contact is an
important part of communication, it is also important to remember
that good eye contact does not mean staring at someone. How can we
determine the appropriate level of eye contact? Some communication
experts recommend intervals of eye contact lasting four to five seconds.
A single gesture can mean a lot or maybe even nothing. The key to
accurately reading nonverbal behavior is to look for groups of signals
that reinforce a common point. If we place heavy emphasis on just one
signal out of many, we might come to an inaccurate conclusion about
what a person is trying to communicate.
8. Consider Context
Example 2
Bob is getting ready to go to lunch; he picks up a trade
magazine to read while eating lunch and heads for the
exit. He runs into a group of his co-workers who are on
the hallway chatting with each other.
Example 3
Tom is asking his supervisor Frank for a raise, his
supervisor looks at his watch. Tom interprets that
gesture as a signal that Frank doesnt want to talk about
a raise at this time. Tom decides to test his suspicions.
He asks his boss: Would you rather talk at another time,
do you have to leave now?
Notice how Tom interpreted Franks gesture correctly and that Frank
gave him a verbal message that contradicted his nonverbal behavior.
When this happens, the nonverbal behavior is likely to convey the true
message, as in the example above.
We are aware of the fact that the meaning of what we say is contained,
in part, in the words, or what we say, but that HOW we say things also
contains powerful messages. The word, Yes, for example, can be
interpreted in many different ways depending on HOW it is said.
Vocal Qualifiers
The non-technical term, tone of voice is same as vocal qualifiers. There
are various factors that can vary, and that affect our perception of tone
of voice; increasing loudness or softness (of a syllable, word phrase or
sentence) is one obvious one. A second set of vocal qualifiers involves
raised or lowered pitch, which can convey feelings such as fear, anxiety
or nervousness, or designate a question. Third, there is a spread register
and a squeezed register which refers to the spreading or compressing of
the time interval between the pitches when one speaks.
Vocal Identifiers
These refer to the small sounds we make that are not necessarily words
per se, but have meaning. For example, ah-hah, un-huh, and huh-uh.
Kinesics
The most obvious form of paralanguage is body language or kinesics.
This is the language of gestures, expressions, and posture. We commonly
use our arms and hands to say good-bye, point, count, express
excitement, beckon, warn away, threaten, insult etc. In fact, we learn
many subtle variations of each of these gestures and use them according
to situations. We use our head to say yes or no, to smile, frown, and wink
acknowledgement or flirtation. Our head and shoulder in combination
may shrug to indicate that we do not know something.
While the meaning of some gestures, such as a smile, may be the same
throughout the world, the meaning of others may be completely different.
Proxemics
When we speak to another individual or group, the distance our bodies
are physically apart also communicates a message. Proxemics is the study
of such interaction distances and other culturally defined uses of space.
Most of us are unaware of the importance of space in communication
until we are confronted with someone who uses it differently. For
instance, we all have a sense of what is a comfortable interaction distance
to a person with whom we are speaking.If that person gets closer than
the distance at which we are comfortable, we usually automatically back
up to reestablish our comfort zone. Similarly, if we feel that we are
too far away from the person we are talking to, we are likely to close
the distance between us. If two speakers have different comfortable
interaction distances, a ballet of shifting positions usually occurs until
one of the individuals is backed into a corner and feels threatened by
what may be perceived as hostile or sexual overtures. As a result, the
verbal message may not be listened to or understood as it was intended.
Whispering and shouting generally get our attention more than speaking
with a normal voice. In addition to specifying comfortable interaction
distances, culture tells us when and how it is acceptable to touch other
individuals.
judge usually wears a black robe and sits behind an elevated desk.The
other desks and chairs in court are positioned so that all attention is
focusedon the judge.This intentional setting makes those present feel
respectful and subservient to the judge, thereby making it easier for him
or her to control the proceedings.
Subconsciously
Usually body language occurs unconsciously. Yet the body language
we use decides to a large extent the quality of our communication.
Therefore it would be good to become conscious of our own and others
body language. We can learn to use our body language for a purpose
as well as learn to understand and interpret body language of others.
It is important to note that body language has different meanings in
different cultures. How we can interpret body language depends on the
situation, the culture, the relationship we have with the person as well as
the gender of the other. This means that there is not one signal that has
the same meaning all over the world. If you do not take this into account
you may get yourself in some serious trouble. Body language is also
interlinked with spoken language and a whole pattern of behavior from
a person. As well as that, various body language signs can complement
each other to make a particular meaning crystal clear or strengthen
the meaning of what we communicate. Some groups have developed a
whole specific body language which can be very explicit in its meaning
and is used to communicate where the use of words may otherwise be
difficult or dangerous. Examples of this are mostly groups, such as gay
people, people in slavery, prisoners, etc. who have a history of prejudice
against them from the dominant culture.
We will know which body gestures make us appear confident and create
a favorable first impression during an interview. This can greatly increase
our chances of being hired for a position.
No one would talk much in society if they knew how often they
misunderstood others.
People will be much more apt to listen to and believe in what we have
to say when we use confident, persuasive body language. We will appear
more trustworthy and reliable.
The next time you are in a conversation, start analyzing your own body
language. Pay attention to the unconscious signals you may be sending.
Then begin to analyze the facial expressions, movements and gestures
used by others. Youll be surprised at how much more you can learn
about yourself and others.
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Flow in communication
Flow in communication refers to the direction that information is sent.
In business communication, employers, employees and customers play
important roles in the communication process. Effective communication
enables all three parties to communicate and send feedback to each other.
An important part of this involves selecting methods of communication
in which others can respond with questions and/or concerns. For
example, an employer should designate a portion of time at a staff
meeting to get feedback from his employees.
Information overload
Several communication challenges exist within day-to-day business
operations, especially with technology. Technology benefits
organizational communication by lifting communication restrictions
caused by time and distance. At the same time, the removal of time
and distance as communication factors has led to the challenges of
information overload and constant accessibility. Information overload
occurs when messages lose their value because of too much information
is being sent at one time. The issue of constant accessibility has a negative
impact on personal and professional lives to some extent.
Emotions
Emotion serves as an obstacle to effective communication, as emotion
can interfere with making rational and logical decisions. Emotions
reflect lack of professionalism and one of the ways to fight emotion in
the workplace is by avoiding using stereotypes1. The use of stereotypes
can fuel emotion and cause dissension between people. If there is a
situation where we are emotionally involved, we must avoid making
decisions and waiting until we can think and act rationally.
Cultural Differences
Multinational organizations often struggle with communication
barriers due to cultural differences. Not understanding the language
and customs may cause misinterpretation or incorrect decoding of
messages which can result in a loss of business transaction.
Listening
Possibly the most important aspect of communication is effective
listening. However, it may be very difficult for managers to develop
this skill. Because of the innate pressures of maintaining success in the
business, there may not be time to sit and listen to the needs of the
employees and the customers. Without truly taking the time to listen
and finding a way to understand others point of view, managerial staff
may never fully understand or be aware of the needs, wants, frustrations
and hardships of company staff and customers.
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Stereotype: A stereotype Technology
refers to a social group or
It is easy for businesses to rely too heavily upon technology for
types of individuals with
specific characterstices communication purposes. Email, fax, voice mail and Intranet messaging
Meetings
Many businesses are moving away from meetings in order to save time
and to promote efficiency. Employees often see meetings as a waste
of time. However, meetings are an integral practice in any business.
They can build teamwork, making employees feel more involved in
the organizational decisions. Meetings are avenues where workers can
provide input and share their opinions. The simple challenge of using
meetings as a channel of communication is creating meetings that are
concise, informative, participatory and positive.
Solution
Organizations can take some measures to overcome the challenges
that abound in business communication. As mentioned, listening is
on top of the list. We can use various techniques such as surveys and
comment boxes to encourage healthy and confidential feedback.
Those in leadership roles should have strong communication skills, be
empathetic and natural problem solvers. If trouble persists, a business
might outsource the problem to a neutral negotiator to resolve the
situation in an unbiased manner.
Communication Method
We work in a tech-savvy environment and our organizations
offer us variety of communication methods. Email, texts, memos,
telephones, videoconferencing or other messaging methods have now
become common forms of business communication. Speakers and
communicators must understand the best way to reach their audience
with the least amount of filtering or confusion.
Avoiding filters
Communication filtering is the process of individuals adding or
taking away information from the senders original message. The most
common filter may be communicating to front-line employees through
operational managers. Operational managers may add or delete necessary
information when communicatingwith executive management or other
important individuals. Using the wrong type of communication can
also be a communication filter; written communication may allow
employees to interpret the message according to their understanding
rather than the senders original intent.
Exploit opportunities
Anticipate change
Common Challenges
One leadership challenge that a business of any size can face is a lack of
good leadership. Reasons for a lack of leaders in a business can include
insufficient training and motivation for workers to become leaders or a
lack of pay or benefits sufficient to attract good talent to an organization.
A business can correct these problems by training employees to become
managers before a manager is needed and by increasing employee pay,
benefits or perks to attract or retain better managers.
2. Interpersonal facilitation
This is the dimension many people first think of when they think
peoples person. Individuals with high scores here are keenly attuned
to the interpersonal aspects of a work situation. They intuitively focus
on others experiences and usually work quietly behind the scenes to
keep their colleagues committed and engaged so that projects dont get
derailed. They naturally ask themselves questions like What group will
work together best to get this job done?
3. Relational Creativity
At its core, this dimension is about forging connections with groups of
people through visual and verbal imagery. This is the relational work
being done when an advertising account team conceives of a campaign;
when a marketing brand manager develops a strategy to reach a
particular consumer segment; and when a senior manager develops a
motivational theme that will focus and inspire her employees.
4. Team leadership
Individuals who score high in this dimension need to see and interact
with other people very frequently to feel satisfied. Conversely, the more
time they spend in front of a computer screen, the worse they feeland
perform. Professionals with a high level of interest in team leadership
love managing high-energy teams in, busy service environments, and
enjoy working, both with the team and with the customer.
Its important to note that the four relational dimensions are not discrete
types. A person can have great interest and skill in two or more of these
areas or in none of them. And scoring high in more dimensions isnt
necessarily better; some are irrelevant or even detrimental to certain
types of work.
Cultural Differences
In todays world of globalization, understanding and appreciating
cultural differences in business has become of vital importance to all
organizations.
Gestures
Gestures involve sensitivity and awareness. Gestures that are not
offending to us might be very offending to others, as in the case of
beckoning someone to come over by holding out their hand with the
palm up, and then moving the fingers gesturing the person to come. In
American culture it may be considered rude; however in sub-continent
of Asia this is acceptable.
Problem Solving
Teamwork is important due to the problem-solving synergy gained from
multiple minds working on a solution. When one person works on a
specific problem, that person only has his or her personal experience
and knowledge from which to pull for solutions. Using teamwork, team
members pool their collective ideas together to generate unique ideas
for dealing with problems. Problems in this case are not purely negative.
Example: The problem could be developing a product for a consumer to
address a need that the consumer does not know that she has.
Communication
Teamwork is the backbone of effective communication within a
company. When employees work as individuals or independently on
projects, they may not readily share knowledge or new information. This
lack of communication increases the time it takes to complete projects,
tasks or the development of solutions. Teamwork promotes conversation
between employees regarding the task at hand, possibly preventing
employees from working in opposite directions.
For example, if one employee does not communicate that one method of
addressing a problem is a dead end, and another employee is still trying
to use that method, productivity is lowered.
Cohesion
Cohesion is an important byproduct of teamwork within a company.
This cohesion could be the result of increased chemistry, trust or both
from working on projects as a team. Cohesive employees are less likely
to be confrontational towards one another and more accepting of each
others decisions. Cohesion from teamwork can greatly increase the
workflow speed of a company.
Learning
When employees work together as a team within a company, every
employee learns from one another. This knowledge is not limited
Division of Work
Teamwork ensures that there is an equal and fair distribution of work
within the organization. A fair work distribution ensures that every
person or every working unit executes any task at hand, with the best
possible efficiency. The division of work, also, ensures that the work is
done on time and deadlines are not extended.
Reduction of Risk
When the task at hand is executed with the maximum possible efficiency,
there is a reduction in risk. The best advantage of teamwork in business
is that the burden of failure is borne by all the members of the team and
it does not fall on the shoulders of just one person.
Specialization in Work
Another very good advantage of teamwork in business is that a person is
able to specialize in one specific field. That is, he can optimize the quality
of the work that he does, and can also work with the maximum possible
efficiency. This ensures a high quality output from all individuals and
the whole team.
Timely Completion
Teamwork is one of the best ways to ensure the timely completion of
any work, with the maximum possible efficiency. This ensures that the
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Cultural Differences
Language and wording must be considered in relation to the culture of
the speaker. Issues regarding cultural language differences, even if the
primary communication is in the same language, can, and have caused
problems in business.
For example, many Asian cultures, such as India and China, discourage
the word no as it sounds impolite. Instead, they may use a substitute
word, which means no but sounds more positive.
Ambiguity
Ambiguity of wording is notorious in legal cases. In fact, much of the
language used in daily life is very ambiguous.
For example, the phrase Ill call you later can be taken to mean that
a call will be placed seconds after the initial phrase or days later; both
would be correct.
Let us now look as to how to over come the possibilities of using incorrect
written language in business communication. This in turn will explain
the challenges which are posed due to the incorrect usage.
Less is more
In business writing as in virtually every other kind of writing, concision
matters.Ironically, as written information becomes more and more
important to the smooth functioning of businesses, people are less and
less willing to read. Use words sparingly, cut out the florid prose, and
avoid long, meandering sentences. Its best to get straight to the point,
say what we want to say, and be donewith it.
At the same time, we should remember that informal should not mean
unprofessional keeping the personal comments, off-color jokes, and
snarky gossip out of our business communications. We should remember
that many businesses (possibly ours) are required by law to keep copies
Includes words like cant, wont, unable to, that tell the recipient what
the sending agency cannot do.
b. We fail to understand...
a. You should...
c. You must...
e. We must insist...
a. No doubt...
Positive Phrasing
If we are going to eliminate negative phrases, we will need to replace
them with more positive ways of conveying the same information.
Below are some examples of positive phrasing.
If you can send us [whatever], we can complete the process for you.
How to improve
We should pull a few memos we have written and go through each one
word by word, and phrase by phrase, highlighting sentences that have a
negative tone.We should be alert to subtle aspects of our memos that
send bureaucratic or demeaning messages and then rewrite the memo.
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Feedback focuses on our own reactions rather than the other persons
Example:
If a client complains about the long wait for her
withdrawal of cash, we could respond by explaining
that each withdrawal is processed in the order it was
received and that there are several steps involved in the
process.
Vague criticism
It is best to get useful feedback in order to understand the nature of
the criticism. For example, if our supervisor tells us You dont know
anything about customer service, it would be easy to become upset and
The tone of voice is a means by which the speaker implies his or her
attitude to the message. It is also a means by which he seeks a reaction
from the listener. In a political debate, for instance, the tone of voice is
likely to be loud and persuasive, whereas on television the daily news is
communicated in a more factual tone.
If you feel yourself speeding up, pause, take a deep breath and
continue at a slower pace. We often speak too quickly because we try
to include too much in our allocated time!
It is essential that everyone can hear what you are saying. Before you
begin ask a friend to stand at the back, whilst you speak to, and do
a sound check. You might also ask the audience if they can hear you
once you begin and adjust accordingly. You may need to arrange to
use a microphone.
Retention of information
When we write, we transmit information on a topic that we know
well. We are in familiar territory; the information is part of a body of
knowledge stored in our memory. For the reader, however, this is new
Information processing
What exactly happens in the readers brains when they read a text? First
of all, the information enters their short-term memories, also known as
working memories. The information is stored in this memory for about
30 seconds. Then two things are possible: the readers either forget the
information or transfer it to their long-term memories.
Information retention
We need to ensure that the largest possible amount of information goes
from our readers short-term memories to their long-term memories. To
do that, we have to look at the number of items of information we are
providing, the order in which we present them and our readers degree
of familiarity with the information.
The writer can write and rewrite at great length, a span of time, which
in some cases can be measured in years. Similarly, the reader can read
quickly or slowly or even stop to think about what he or she has just
read. More importantly, the reader always has the option of re-reading;
even if that option is not exercised, its mere possibility has an effect
upon a readers understanding of a text. The written word appeals more
to a contemplative, deliberative style.
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Jargon is neither good nor bad, says Suzanne Bates, author of Speak
like a CEO: Secrets for commanding attention and getting results.
The biggest mistake executives and professionals make is to fail to ask
themselves if what theyre saying is the best way to communicate to the
audience that theyre targeting.
The best time to utilize jargon is in conversations with people who have
command on the subject; they typically expect such language as evidence
Lets take this offline To talk about it in-person or over the phone.
For people who are new to a profession, business jargon can seem quite
confusing or overwhelming. Although we may have learned many
words relevant to our profession while in school, the reality is that the
more familiar we become with our job, the more we will realize there is
a lot to learn.
Lazy thinking: An even bigger reason is that people have not thought
through the ideas, so they dress up incomplete thinking with all kinds
of random word usage.
Over their heads: There are people who are in way over their heads, and
cant communicate clearly because they dont know the subject matter
well enough. Jargon is tap dancing, hoping no one finds out that you
dont know what youre doing.
Reading
This is the ability to understand the information given in form of text and
augmenting the understanding with prior knowledge and experience.
Verbal
This is the ability to understand verbal communication which can be
used in meetings, presentations, webinars, over the phone etc. This
constitutes many numerous skills such as good listening, analyzing
information at a faster pace as it is communicated and asking the right
questions at the right time.
Financial Loss
Decades ago, contracts were signed and sealed with a thumb impression
or sign X and the authorized signatory of the contract would trust
the document was indeed how it was described to them by the party
presenting the contract. In modern times, with fraud and deception
and fine print being common issues, it has become very important
for business executives to have the ability to understand the contracts,
especially those with unclear language, deceptive words and misleading
jargons. The business executives must have the expertise to filter only
the important information from the contract that are helpful to make
correct choices and protect themselves and the organizations they
represent from lawsuits and financial loss in future.
Loss of Reputation
The lack of ability to communicate effectively often results in hurting
the reputation of the organization and leaving a bad mark on the
clients, suppliers and associates. In the dynamic world of today, time is
of essence and nobody appreciates losing time working with someone
who is unable to understand them and their requirements correctly.
This can also lead to loss of business as clients turn to other suppliers
who understand them and their needs.
A speaker often has ample time to structure the message carefully, but a
listener must be able to follow the ideas instantaneously. We sometimes
forget that taking notes or drawing flow charts can help us to see the
connections between concepts and thoughts. On the other hand, we
sometimes indulge ourselves in taking notes to the extent that we
completely forget to listen to meaning.
Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
Obtain information,
Identify problems,
Resolve conflicts,
Solve problems,
Can I help?
Example:
I understand that you are upset by what happened.
The targets that you have set for the sale team appear
to be unrealistic and unachievable.
Most of the time when we are listening to others, we look for faults or
weaknesses in what the other person says. We often end up disagreeing
If we dont make people feel that we respect their points of view, they
wont feel understood and will consider us a bad listener.
But to listen well, we must put these thoughts aside and be with the
other person. We need to fully attend to the other persons words and
inner emotions. We have to actively work to put ourselves in their
shoes and listen to them speak.
So what can we do to keep this from happening? How can we be sure that
we get the right message out there and that people understand what we
are saying? The first lesson comes from a basic skill known as listening.
Listening is always a two part process.Both the speaker and the listener
have the ability to ensure the message is clearly understood.
For example, if we know where the speaker is going and dont want
to wait to get there, go ahead and jump in with a statement: So you
are saying that you dont approve. We can also use feedback to get the
For example, when a coworker has long forgotten the topic of importance
we can ask, Do you think we can ask the manager to bring this up at
our staff meeting? Our coworker will be brought abruptly back to the
matter of the subject.
A final tip is to use our own nonverbal clues to give the speaker messages
about our comprehension. If we are confused give the I dont have a
clue look and hopefully, the speaker will stop to ask whats wrong.
We speak We listen
The difficult part for us as speakers is taking all the listening skills we
have learned and practiced and using them in reverse. We must be able
to listen while we speak.
When we are speaking, we can use many of the same skills we use when
we are listening maintain eye contact, lean in, watch for reciprocal
nonverbal and ask questions. If their eyes are roaming, we should
try to bring them back in by asking a question to make sure they are
listening to us. Do you understand what I am saying? Is this a bad
time for you? When should I check back with you to see how you are
progressing on this assignment?
Paraphrasingis a great listening skill that can be used both when we are
listening and when we are speaking. When it is essential that the person
we are talking understandsour message, we should politely ask them to
paraphrase what we have said. Just to ensure we both understand how
The first time we do this it may seem awkward but it will become more
natural. Also, when the person we talk with know we are going to ask
for a recap at the end of an important conversation, they will be more
likely to listen up.
If we are at the speaking end, the feeling of knowing that the person we
are talking with is completely engaged in what we are saying is one of
great satisfaction. We do the receiver of our information a great favor
when we listen as we speak and take responsibility to ensure our message
is understood as intended.
Inactive Listener - Focuses only on facts and believes the rest of the
speakers talk is only opinion.
Inactive Listener - Loses main ideas and themes because time is spent
trying to organize and find a pattern.
Faking attention
Active Listener - Continually refocuses attention on the speaker
knowing that attention may sometimes wander.
Allowing distractions
Active Listener - Filters out distractions and concentrates on whats
being said.
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Ethics
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Learning Outcome By the end of this chapter you should be able to:
How would you answer these questions if you were an employee of the
organization? Would your answer be different if you are the manager
or the shareholder? There are many situations in business where
individuals are tempted to do something that violates their ethical
standards. How you handle each ethical issue reflects your values and
communicates critical messages to others about you. Organizations
Invasion of Privacy The legal term invasion of privacy refers primarily to a persons right
and How to Avoid it to keep his or her life private and free from the intrusion of others.
Privacy lawrefers to the laws which deal with the regulation of personal
information about individuals which can be collected by governments
and other public as well as private organizations and its storage and
use.Invasion of privacy is the intrusion into the personal life of another,
without just cause, which can give the person whose privacy has been
invaded a right to bring a lawsuit for damages against the person or
entity that intruded.
Every person has the expectation that the personal work area is free from
invasion by others. When there is an un-consented, unprivileged, or
unreasonable intrusion into the private life of an individual, it is called
invasion of privacy. Note that in this definition, privacy can be violated
although no publication to a third party occurs. In fact, the concept of
3. What is the expectation from you of the person who has shared this
information.
Discussed below are some critical points which popularly come under
the aspect of workplace privacy.
Personal Disabilities
It is recommended that anytime you as an employee must deal with
private health matters, they need not be publicized. If you as an employee
are privileged to such personal information of any other person be it
employee, customer or vendor, you must exercise discretion and caution
in sharing this information with anyone. A quick test against the 3
points stated above will help you judge what should be part of business
communication.
Advertising Message
It is ethically wrong to advertise products or services in ways that confuse
the targeted audience. The rule for ethical advertising is consistent: Tell
the truth, dont misrepresent and dont manipulate language to create
a false impression. The small gain realized by misrepresentation is not
worth the loss of reputation and customer trust.
Language
Have I represented the product/service or event using clear, straightforward
language, taking care not to make exaggerated claims? Is the language
truthful? Can the product/service be taken at face value?
Graphics/ Print
Do the graphics used in the advertising depict the product/service
Omission
Have I omitted any key details that may affect the way the customer
views the advertised product/service? Is significant information unstated?
Would it change the customers perception of the product/services if this
information were included?
Truth
Does the product/service live up to the claims made in the advertising?
Is it a quality product/service that can fulfill all the expectations of the
customer?
Accountability
Would I be comfortable if my advertising techniques were scrutinized
by a customer products magazine and the results printed for the public
to read? Would I want to have a face-to-face meeting with a group of
consumers who purchased my product/ service?
A type of fraud which has become common with the increase in use of
electronic communication is wire fraud. Wire fraud is an act of fraud that
uses electronic communications, such as making false representations
on the telephone, to obtain money. The essential elements of wire fraud
are devising or intending to devise a scheme or trick to defraud another
by means of a material misrepresentation, with the intent to defraud
through the use electronic communications.
Ethics in Communication
The following points can assist in applying ethics in communication:
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