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It is consistent
with the TOR given by the ministry of Water Resources and we found it consistent
with the strategy and policy of the government which help to materialize the
development efforts at grass root. In this regard we have some general comments
that help to improve the document.
• There are some abbreviation that are in the body of the document
but not appear in the Abbreviation and Acronym section of the report.
For Example: MGF and SME- should be SMEs in page one of the Main
Report; MGT, MGP and CGS on page 12, 17 and 18 of the main report
respectively. If the documents are going to produced in different
volumes it should have their own complete list of abbreviations.
• With regards to the style and formatting if the report uses consistent
referencing style and the same font sizes for the same topic it will
improve the readability and understandability.
• There are some grammatical errors for example in the main report
the last paragraph on page 4 the first sentences should be corrected.
In general the report is important in making available the benefit of the fund for the
local community in particular and where it has high multiplier effect for the
economic growth in general. The rest of the comments will be provided in the time
of discussion.