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Vince Pavey

SUPERHU(CK)MAN
A MILLARWORLD GLOBAL TALENT SEARCH 2017 ENTRY

By

Vince Pavey

DRAFT DATE: 11/09/2016


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1/ We open on a wide shot of three men walking away from an old museum. Theres Scott, a thin
man with neatly brushed brown hair Jack, athletic looking, with wild and curly red hair -- and Huck,
who just looks like he hasnt shaved in a few days. They look like theyre up to no good. Scott holds
in his hands a large monkey statue its made of solid gold.

SCOTT: When we sell this ancient relic, well have enough money to do anything we want. Thats
right! Ill finally be able to afford to take girls on dates!

2/ Jack has his hands raised theyre clenched in childlike excitement. To his right, we can see
his daydream, where hes hugging a large dark blue box.

JACK: and I wont need to save for a PlayStation 2!

3/ Huck has a huge grin on his face.

HUCK: and I can get that that stair-lift Mrs. Robinson really needs!

4/ Scott looks disappointedly at Huck.

SCOTT: Oh dude, come on! Were crooks on the run now. Be cool!
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1/ Huck looks at the other two with a knowing smile. Hes brimming with confidence.

HUCK: I am being cool see - Im no villain

2/ Huck performs an exaggerated hero pose like one of the heroes from Power Rangers. His
outfit has transformed too. He looks sort of like a classic long underwear character from the 1930s
or 40s.

HUCK: Im SUPERHU(CK)MAN!

2/ Scott face palms. Jacks face has Im out written all over it.

SCOTT: Not this shit again...

3/ Huck puts his hands on his hips and gives Scott a stern look.

HUCK: You shouldnt swear, Scott. What would Mrs. Taylor think?
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1/ Scott energetically hops into a very sleek silver sports car with an open top. The ancient relic
is on the back seat.

NO DIALOGUE

2/ He drives off at high speed down a long dirt road. Lots of dust is being kicked up into the air.
Hes gripping the wheel tightly like a boy racer. His face looks intense. We see Huck and Jack in the
distant background, looking unsure of what to do.

SCOTT: I DONT CARE WHAT MRS. TAYLOR THINKS! IM GREAT-SCOTT! YOUR DASTARDLY FOE!

3/ Huck looks confusedly at Jack. Hes gone a little cross-eyed trying to work it out.

HUCK: Jack does dastardly foe mean bad guy?

4/ Jack rubs the back of his head. He looks fed up.

JACK: Yes, Huck.

5/ Huck leaps towards Scott with a heroic vigour. His cape flares out behind him and looks like
an angels wings in silhouette against the sun.

HUCK: THEN I HAVE TO STOP HIM!


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1/ Huck grabs the car from the front and starts to lift it up. Scott looks shocked and afraid.

SCOTT: HUCK! NO!

2/ Close-up on Huck. Confused.

HUCK: What?

3/ Huck looks up. Hes surprised.

HUCK: Oh.

4/ Suddenly, were outside an orphanage. Huck is an innocent looking little kid in a light blue,
old timey mens swim suit. He has a worn white towel clothes pegged together around his neck. This
whole thing has been a game of pretend. Hes holding his very shocked friend (in a ride-in toy car)
above his head. The ancient relic is clearly crudely made from cardboard cereal boxes and PVA
glue.

HUCK: Are we not playing pretend anymore?

5/ A close up on Jack. Hes stunned. Completely amazed.

NO DIALOGUE.
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1/ Flash-forward to: Huck (now the adult we see in the original series), stood next to a coffin
with Jack. They both look a bit lost in their black tie funeral outfits. Nearby, there is a large framed
photograph of Scott.

Jack looks mostly like he did when they were playing pretend in the flashback (so we can recognise
him), but also needs thick framed glasses and has a small bald spot -- little touches that a kid
wouldnt imagine.

JACK: Hey Huck? We always wondered How ARE you so strong, anyways?

2/ Huck shrugs.

HUCK: I eat all of my vegetables.

3/ They laugh quietly.

NO DIALOGUE

4/ In this final panel, we get a look at Hucks good deeds notepad. It says

TALK TO JACK. HELL BE SAD AT SCOTTS FUNERAL.

THE END

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