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Contents
DIAGRAMS Nhng chin lc chung
Ti sao y li l dng kh chu nht 5
Li khuyn quan trng nht 5
Chin lc chung 6
D hiu, mch lc v r rng 7
Hng dn cch s dng bi mu 7
Hng dn vit M bi, Tng quan v Chi tit bi Diagrams 8
T vng v Ng php cho dng bi Diagrams 9
DIAGRAMS Bi mu
Bi mu 1: Life cycle of the honey bee 14
Bi mu 2: Solar energy 16
Bi mu 3: Hydro electric dam 18
Bi mu 4: Skeleton systems 21
Bi mu 5: Bow tie 24
Bi mu 6: A volcanic island 27
Bi mu 7: A map 30
Bi mu 8: Carbon cycle 33
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DIAGRAMS
Nhng chin lc chung
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Ti sao diagrams li c nh gi l dng bi kh chu nht?
S hay diagrams thng l dng bi thi cc th sinh IELTS ngn nht bi hai l do:
V ni dung, nhiu khi th sinh nhn vo diagrams v chng bit n l ci g, ting Vit cn
khng hiu, ni g n chuyn miu t bng ting Anh.
Thiu t vng
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Chin lc chung
ng hc thuc bi mu, trong iu kin thi c cng thng, thng l bn s khng nh c ci
g u, c bit l vn mu
Hy t mnh vit first draft (bn u tin) v hy hon thnh n tht nhanh, trnh va vit va sa
ch no khng bit th c tm chn ting Vit vo cng c. Thm ch 90% first draft l ting
Vit cng c.iu quan trng nht l bn ang thc s vit d hc bao nhiu l thuyt m
bn khng thc s cm bt ln vit th cng khng n thua u.
Hy hc thuc lng v hiu bn cht cch dng ca nhng t vng v dng thc ng php ph
bin dnh cho dng bi Diagrams. Chng khng nhiu, rt d hiu v d ng dng hy hc
thuc lng v s dng chnh xc.
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D hiu, mch lc v r rng
y l tiu ch quan trng nht. Ti sao? n gin l bi, nu bi miu t ca bn cn phc tp
hn ci hnh v th h nhn ci hnh v lun ch c bi ca bn lm g.
Hy nh, vic c bi mu Task 1 hon ton khc vi vic c cc vn bn ting Anh bnh
thng khc. Vi cc vn bn ting Anh khc, bn c th c mt cch th ng; trong qu trnh
c, c ci g hay th nh du li m thi. Cn vi bi lun Task 1, bn cn phi c mt frame
sn trong u ri, bn c bi mu ch lp y cc ch trng trong frames m thi.
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Hng dn vit M bi, Tng quan v Chi tit bi Diagrams
M bi: vit li bi bng ngn ng ca ring mnh
on tng quan:
nu l quy trnh th n bt u bng vic g, kt thc bng vic g, c bao nhiu bc
hon thin quy trnh
nu l my th gm nhng b phn chnh no
Lu : on tng quan ny c th ch cn mt cu v c th gn vi m bi
Thn bi
Do s lin quan ca cc quy trnh, vic bn trnh by tt c cc bc ca quy trnh trong mt
on l hp l. Tuy nhin, bn vn nn tch thnh 2 on thn bi bi lun bt nng n v cu
trc.
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T vng v Ng php cho dng bi Diagrams
Key words cn thuc lu
Khi miu t diagrams, bn s lun cn n nhng t vng nh quy trnh, cc bc trong quy
trnh, b phn, chi tit cu thnh my mc. Hy hc thuc nhng t sau:
a step: mt bc
a stage: mt giai on
a process: mt quy trnh
a cycle: mt vng tun hon
a detail: mt chi tit
a part/a component: mt b phn
T ni quy trnh
At/in the first stage,. | At/in the following stage,. | Next, |
Finally,.
then
During the first/second/third/final stage of.
Passives: cu trc b ng
Dng thc b ng c s dng rt nhiu trong IELTS Writing Task 1, th sinh cn nm chc
ng dng. Mt cch nh n gin nht l vi loi ng php ny, ting Anh v ting Vit rt
ging nhau.
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Thi ca ng t s dng
Trong mt s trng hp, th sinh cng c nhu cu s dng thi tng lai; v d: sau khi gch
c nung, chng s c lm ngui trong mt bung ring. Lc ny, bn c th la chn s
dng hai cch sau din t thi tng lai:
After bricks are baked at a temperature, they will be cooled down in a separate chamber.
After bricks are baked at a temperature, they are to be cooled down in a separate chamber.
Cu trc be + to do (ch ng) v be + to be done (b ng) th hin sc thi ngha tng lai
hay trch nhim cn lm. Ci hay ca cu trc ny l y l thi tng lai trn l thuyt, tc l
theo quy trnh , th tip theo, iu g s xy ra, ch khng phi l sc thi tng lai v thi gian.
V c im ny, cu trc be + to do c khuyn khch s dng hn so vi will + do.
Hy xem mt s v d khc:
In the next step, the air is to be sucked back into the column to turn the turbine.
Phn tch: Trong bc tip theo, khng kh s b ht li vo trong ng v lm quay tuc bin. (s
th hin s tun t thi gian ch khng phi l thi tng lai.)
Noun phrases
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Vi bi diagrams, noun phrase bt u bng how, where v when l ph bin nht. Trong cc
v d di y, cc noun phrase u c th c thay th bi mt danh t, chnh l l do gii
thch ci tn noun phrase
where clause
The powerehouse is where the electricity is generated.
The powerhouse is the place where the electricity is generated.
when clause
This is when the process comes to an end.
This is the moment when the process comes to an end.
Mnh tnh ng rt gn
Cn lu , khi mnh tnh ng c rt gn, ng t lun dng v-ing (ch ng) hoc past
participle (b ng) ch khng chia ng t nh thng thng.
water trapped in the reservoir behind the dam is forced through an intake (y : water
which is trapped)
It then flows into a narrow chamber called a penstock (y : a narrow chamber which
is called)
on/in which
on/in which l dng mnh tnh ng rt hu ch cho dng bi diagrams ch s tng quan v
tr gia hai vt c miu t, mang ngha trn /trong
The diagram illustrates a natural process in which a volcanic island grows from beneath the
sea, explodes, and then eventually sinks to become an underwater reef. (S miu t quy
trnh t nhin trong mt o ni la hnh thnh t di mt bin, phun tro v cui cng
li st xung to thnh mt rng ni di mt bin.)
In these regions, people employ a much simpler way to protect houses which is simply to
raise the height of the pillars on which houses stand.
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Bn cn dng which, when, where ni di v tng ni dung thng tin cho cu.
which, when, where rt d s dng v cch dng cng nh ngha ca chng ging ht ting Vit
(ci m, ni, khi.). Chng ta hy xem nhng v d sau:
The process involves a structure which is mounted on the side of a cliff or sea wall. (Quy
trnh bao gm mt cu trc c dng trn vch hoc bin)
In these regions, people employ a much simpler way to protect houses, which is to raise the
height of the pillars on which houses stand. ( nhng ni ny, ngi ta dng mt phng
thc n gin hn bo v nh ca, phng thc tng chiu cao ct nh).
The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg. (Vng i ca
ong mt bt u khi con ci trng).
It is formed of volcanoes and the active ones are at the south-east tip of the archipelago,
where Hawaii itself is located. (N c hnh thnh bi cc ni la v cc ni la ang hot
ng nm ra ng nam ca qun o, ni hnh thnh ln chnh Hawaii).
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DIAGRAMS
Bi mu
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Source: IELTS Simon
The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are:
1. how to summarise the diagram before describing the stages in detail
2. whether to use active or passive verb forms
...
...
nymph = immature form of an insect
moult = shed or lose old feathers, hair or skin to allow for new growth
The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that the complete
life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the
development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect.
The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays
one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature
insect, or nymph, appears.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times.
This process of moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and
again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult
honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full
maturity.
(171 words, band 9)
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Vocabulary and Grammar
mature (adj) | maturity (n): trng thnh
t ngc ngha: immature (adj)
to last (v)
ko di trong bao lu
there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee
c nm giai on chnh trong qu trnh pht trin ca ong mt | lu : hy hc thuc cu trc there
is/are. v y l cu trc rt ph bin trong ting Anh
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Source: IELTS Simon
The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic
use.
The picture illustrates the process of producing electricity in a home using solar panels.
It is clear that there are five distinct stages in this process, beginning with the capture of energy
from sunlight. The final two steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the external power
supply.
At the first stage in the process, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take energy from the
sun and convert it into DC current. Next, this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to
AC current and regulates the supply of electricity. At stage three, electricity is supplied to the home
from an electrical panel.
At the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for sending any
extra electric power outside the house into the grid. Finally, if the solar panels do not provide
enough energy for the household, electricity will flow from the utility grid into the home through the
meter.
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Vocabulary and Grammar
stage | there are five distinct stages in this process: c nm giai on khc nhau trong quy trnh ny
Mnh tnh ng rt gn | there are five distinct stages in this process, beginning with the capture of
energy from sunlight = there are five distinct stages in this process, which begin with the capture of
energy from sunlight
how + to do & how clause | The two final steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the
external power supply: hai bc cui cng cho thy cch in s dng trong gia nh c kt ni vi
ngun in t bn ngoi
Grammar: how + clause l mt mnh c bit, c chc nng ging ht nh danh t, c th ng sau
ng t vi chc nng tn ng; chng ta hy xem hai v d sau:
The two final steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the external power supply. (verb +
how clause)
The two final steps show the way domestic electricity is connected to the external power supply.
(verb + noun)
convert | to convert energy from the sun into DC current: chuyn nng lng mt tri sang dng in
Grammar: convert sth into sth
current | AC DC
this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to AC current and regulates the supply of
electricity: dng in ny c truyn vo b i in, b i in gip bin i dng in ny thnh dng
xoay chiu v iu khin dng cung cp in
current: dng in | DC (direct current): dng in mt chiu | AC (alternating current): dng in xoay
chiu
to supply sth to sth/sb | electricity is supplied to the home: in nng c cung cp cho h gia nh
Grammar: Passives
Dng thc b ng c s dng rt nhiu trong IELTS Writing Task 1, th sinh cn nm chc ng
dng. Mt cch nh n gin nht l vi loi ng php ny, ting Anh v ting Vit rt ging nhau.
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Source: IELTS Academic
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Vocabulary and Grammar
a hydroelectric dam: p thy in
to require sth | The process requires the construction of a large dam connected to a powerhouse. (Quy
trnh i hi vic xy dng mt con p ln c kt ni vi nh my in.)
noun phrase where clause | the powerhouse is where the electricity is generated (nh my in l ni
in c to ra).
Grammar: where + clause l mt mnh c bit, c chc nng ging ht nh danh t, c th ng sau
ng t vi chc nng tn ng; chng ta hy xem hai v d sau:
The powerehouse is where the electricity is generated.
The powerhouse is the place where the electricity is generated.
Mnh tnh ng rt gn
Trong mt bi ngn nh th ny m c ti hn 4 cu s dng mnh tnh ng rt gn. iu ny cho thy
tm quan trng ca n.
ng t trong mnh tnh ng c cn gi dng th v-ing (ch ng) hoc past participle (b ng).
Cc v d trn ng t u l past participle, th hin dng thc b ng.
resulting (adj)
Tnh t ny th hin ngha mt s vt, hin tng sinh ra t kt qu ca mt quy trnh hoc l do trnh
by trc .
Water then flows into a narrow chamber called a penstock, where the resulting high pressure turns
a turbine. (Nc s chy vo bung cha nh, c gi l penstock, to nn p sut cao quay
tuc bin.)
The turbine is connected to a generator in the powerhouse above, and this is where the movement
of the turbine is converted into electricity. The resulting electricity leaves the powerhouse via cables
that carry it over long distances to where it can be used. (Tuc bin ny kt ni vi my pht in
trong nh my pha trn, v y l ni m chuyn ng ca tuc bin c chuyn thnh in
nng. in nng sinh ra ny i ra khi nh my thng qua cp truyn ti in, nhng si dy cp
ny s a in qua nhng khong cch di, ti nhng ni chng c s dng).
over | gii t over c dng vi khong cch v c khng gian v thi gian
over long distances
over the years
It is interesting to note that a hydroelectric dam creates no harmful byproducts and relies entirely on natural
forces to produce electricity. The process is renewable, thanks to the water cycle in nature.
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Why does this Task 1 answer get an IELTS Band 8 score?
Task achievement: The introduction paraphrases the question and describes the constituent
parts of the process. The body describes each stage of the process in sequence.
Coherence and cohesion: The model answer has an introduction, body and conclusion.
Sequencing expressions such as first of all, then and after are used appropriately. The
articles a and the are used effectively to introduce and refer back to different elements of the
process.
Lexical resource: The labels in the diagram are well integrated into the model answer and
appropriate verbs such as converted, flows and leaves are used throughout. Less-common words
such as byproducts and renewable are introduced by the writer. Spelling is always accurate.
Grammatical range and accuracy: The writer uses the present simple tense and has good
control of subject-verb agreement and active/passive forms. A good balance of simple and
complex sentences is used throughout.
Teachers Notes
This IELTS Writing Task 1 question asks you to describe a process. Usually
the process diagram will include some technical vocabulary. The challenge
is how well you can integrate the vocabulary into a coherent report. The
examiner is also looking at how you use sequencing expressions to show
the order of events. Finally, remember that most processes happen at any
time, so use only the present simple tense.
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Source: IELTS Academic
The diagram shows the skeletal systems of two ancestors of modern human beings.
Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer describing the diagram and making
comparisons where relevant.
Teachers Notes
You might panic when you see this IELTS Writing Task 1 diagram due to
the number of words. However, it isnt necessary to describe every feature.
Instead, highlight only the most interesting points for comparison. In this
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example, we would definitely want to mention the width of the body and the length of the legs. A
high-scoring answer will also include some kind of overview or general statement. In this case, the
physical differences between our ancestors are clearer connected to their different lifestyles, as
mentioned in the headings.
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Source: IELTS Academic
The illustration below shows the process of tying a bow tie.Write a report explaining
to a university lecturer how to tie his bow tie.
Write at least 150 words.
To begin with, the tie should be placed around the neck, with one end slightly longer than the
other. Then place the longer end over the other and pass it upwards and behind the point where
the two ends cross.
Next, take the other end of the tie and bend it twice to form an S shape. Bring the longer end
down and in front, so that it holds the S curve in place. Now comes the trickiest part of the
process. Take the long end of the tie and form a similar S shape before passing it through the
narrow gap behind the other end. This creates a knot and the bow should now be held securely in
place.
Finally, adjust both sides of the bow to make it symmetrical and prepare to be the envy of your
friends.
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Vocabulary and Grammar
knot a bow tie: tht n
Khuyt ch ng
Cu sau trong bi khng c ch ng: Then place the longer end over the other; v y l vn
phong hng dn dng nh do this, do that nn vit nh vy l chp nhn c.
o ng | Now comes the trickiest part of the process. = The trickiest part of the process comes
now. (o ng gip tng sc thi nhn mnh cho ny.)
Coherence and cohesion: The model answer uses a range of sequencing expressions to
describe the order in which the actions should be carried out. The answer is divided into several
paragraphs for ease of understanding, with the inclusion of a general sentence Now comes the
trickiest part of the process to aid coherence.
Lexical resource: A range of appropriate vocabulary is introduced, including action verbs such
as knot, bend,pass and adjust.
Grammatical range and accuracy: The correct forms imperatives, modals are used to give
instructions. Sentence patterns vary and are always grammatically accurate.
Teachers Notes
As I mentioned in my introduction above, this IELTS Writing Task 1
question is not entirely serious. It would be quite shocking to have to
describe a process like this one in the real exam. It does illustrate a serious
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point though. Almost every diagram in IELTS Writing Task 1 contains some vocabulary in the form
of labels. The vocabulary is there to help you, not to make the task more complex. So be grateful
for all those labels!
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Source: IELTS Academic
The diagram shows the growth cycle of a volcanic island. Write a 150-word report
for a university lecturer describing the main features of the cycle.
The diagram illustrates a natural process in which a volcanic island grows from beneath the sea,
explodes, and then eventually sinks to become an underwater reef. The process is divided into
nine stages.
In the first two stages, called the preshield and protoshield stages, a mountain gradually builds
under the surface of the sea. In the third or explosive phase, hydro-explosions occur which
deposit a cone of ash. A large number of cinder cones then pile up to form a shield on top of the
volcano.
This shield gradually erodes and subsides to form reefs below the surface of the sea. However,
there may be ongoing volcanic activity including lava flows. By the time of the coral atoll stage,
the original form of the volcano has disappeared, and the whole structure sinks further under the
sea during the guyot stage.
In summary, huge volcanoes rise and fall under the sea in a natural process known as the
volcanic island growth cycle.
The diagram illustrates a natural process in which a volcanic island grows from beneath the sea,
explodes, and then eventually sinks to become an underwater reef. (S miu t quy trnh t
nhin trong mt o ni la hnh thnh t di mt bin, phun tro v cui cng li st xung
to thnh mt rng ni di mt bin.)
Hy xem mt s v d di y.
The air is pushed upwards into the column.(khng kh b y ln trn, i vo trong ct)
A volcanic island grows from beneath the sea(o ni la mc ln t di bin)
Coherence and cohesion: The body of the report groups the natural process into two paragraphs
rather than attempt to describe each of the nine stages separately. Events are clearly sequenced
and summarised.
Lexical resource: The candidate uses vocabulary from the diagram but transforms it where
necessary to fit a sentence: erosion > erodes; subsidence > subsides. The model answer also
introduces other relevant vocabulary not in the diagram such as deposits, surface and structure.
Grammatical range and accuracy: The candidate writes in complex sentences using
conjunctions and relative pronouns. Most of the sentences have multiple clauses. There are no
grammatical mistakes. In addition to the present simple tense, the present perfect tense is used to
show how events are related in time: the original form of the volcano has disappeared.
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Teachers Notes
This natural process diagram includes nine stages, which are difficult to
describe in detail in so few words. Therefore, you should take this
opportunity to practice grouping stages together and summarising where
possible. Its not a good idea to write nine sentences to describe each of the
nine stages. You will simply not have the time. Writing skills like grouping
and summarising will come in very handy in the real test.
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Source: IELTS Academic
to transform sth into sth: bin i ci g thnh ci g (thng l theo hng tt ln)
a pedestrian: ngi i b
a cyclist: ngi p xe
this will mean reducing the number of lanes for cars and other vehicles: iu ny s ng ngha vi
vic gim s lng ln ng dnh cho xe t v cc phng tin khc
Lu : the number of sth mang ngha s lng ca ci g cn a number of sth mang ngha nhiu, s
lng ln
a pedestrian crossing = a zebra crossing: ng vch trng dnh cho ngi i b qua ng
under these proposals/plans = according to these proposals/plans: theo cc k hoch, quy hoch ny
the needs of local residents will be better served by making Foster Road a safer and more pleasant
environment: nhu cu ca ngi dn a phng s c p ng tt hn bng vic bin Foster Road
thnh mt mi trng an ton hn v d chu hn.
Grammar:
passive: the needs + be + better served
by + doing sth: by l t ni rt hu ch mang ngha thng qua, bng vic lm g
make noun 1 + noun 2
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Why does this Task 1 answer get an IELTS Band 9 score?
Task achievement: The candidate writes at least 150 words and describes all of the proposed
changes. The changes are summarised at the beginning and end, and described in detail in the
body of the report. The changes are connected to their function and their location on the map is
also clearly described.
Coherence and cohesion: The body of the report is divided into two paragraphs, one describing
the changes that will improve safety, and another describing changes that will improve the
environment. These paragraphs are clearly linked (In addition to the safety measures above,).
There are several uses of reference links such asthis and these to refer back to a previous
sentence.
Lexical resource: The candidate introduces relevant vocabulary not on the original maps such as
pedestrian, cyclist, measures, and tree-lined. The candidate transforms certain words as
in proposed > proposal andinstallation > installed. There are no spelling mistakes.
Grammatical range and accuracy: The model answer includes a range of complex sentence
structures. Tense is always used correctly to show that the changes will occur in the future. There
are no grammatical errors.
Teachers Notes
When describing changes to a map in IELTS Writing Task 1, you will
usually start by comparing the diagrams, identify four or five changes that
seem important, and write about these. But its worth taking 1-2 minutes
first to reflect on why the changes are significant and if there is a common
theme or themes. Being able to identify a common theme or tendency is
one way to get a high score for Task Achievement.
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IELTS Writing Task 1: Question
The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature.
Write a 150-word description of this diagram for a university lecturer.
The diagram shows how carbon moves through various stages to form a complete cycle. This
report will give a brief description of the main stages in this cycle.
First, we can see that energy from the sun is transformed into organic carbon through a process in
plants known as photosynthesis. This organic carbon is then transferred underground when
plants, and the animals that feed on them, die and decay. Some of this carbon is trapped
underground in the form of fossils and fossil fuels.
Carbon is also released back into the atmosphere, however, through various means. One is when
animals and plants respire, and another is when humans burn fossil fuels in cars and factories. All
this carbon enters the atmosphere as CO2. It is then reabsorbed by plants, and the cycle begins
again.
Overall, we can see that carbon moves in a natural cycle, although human factors may now be
affecting the balance.
to transform sth into sth | sth be transformed into sth: bin i ci g thnh ci g (thng l
theo hng tt ln)
a process in plants known as photosynthesis: mt quy trnh trong thc vt, cy c c bit
n vi tn gi quang hp
Grammar: mnh tnh ng rt gn a process in plants which is known as
fossils: ha thch
through various means: thng qua nhiu phng tin khc nhau
to respire: ht th, h hp
absorb/reabsorb sth: ht ci g
Coherence and cohesion: The model answer is divided into clear paragraphs with a logical
separation between the body paragraphs and connective markers first, then, however, and overall.
There is a general overview in paragraph 1 and a summary in paragraph 4. Referencing
techniques such as ellipsis (one is) are used to avoid over-repetition of key words.
Lexical resource: The writer makes good use of the language in the cycle diagram and is also
able to change forms in the case of respiration > respire. The writer also introduces a range of
verbs for describing a process or cycle such as transform, transfer and release.
Grammatical range and accuracy: The model answer uses a wide range of forms accurately
including countable/uncountable nouns, active/passive structures, and transitive/intransitive verbs.
Teachers Notes
Cycle diagrams are almost always natural processes: nature is one big
wheel after all. Usually you will find that the labels on the diagram contains
lots of unfamiliar scientific nouns. If you think you know the verb forms, then
use them as this will definitely contribute to a higher score. Otherwise youll
have to rely on phrases such as in a process known as Animal
Respiration.
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