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Students will be able to identify the topic sentence, supporting sentences, and concluding sentences.
They will also be able to create a paragraph using a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a
concluding sentence.
2. Teacher explains the components of a hamburger. She uses pictures to demonstrate her point.
A topic sentence is written on the hamburger bun. A supporting sentence is written on lettuce.
Another supporting sentence is written on tomatoes, and so on. Finally, the concluding
sentence will be on the bofiom hamburger bun. Students were given the strips of sentences and
had to place them in order on the board.
3. Teacher then gives students a list of paragraphs. Students have to identify the topic sentence
and eliminate sentences that do not belong in the paragraph'
4. Students were given a topic sentence and had to create supporting sentences and a concluding
sentence to complete the paragraph. The topic sentence was "The USA is a country that oflers
many opportunities. They read their paragraph out loud.
What did you learn about teaching or learning from this lesson as it relates to the theory you have
studied in TESOL classes?
I observed an ESOL classroom online which focused on writing a structured paragraph. The
class consisted of a variety of men and woman from different backgrounds and culture. The teacher
At the beginning of the lesson, I liked how she introduced the definition of writing with a
discussion. Students used prior knowledge on the selected topic. The students discussed the list and
how it made sense to them. They explained how writing gives people a voice and a sense of power.
They also discussed how writing can explain events about the past and the future. The teacher affirmed
their thoughts and expanded on their ideas. She gave positive feedback on their responses.
Next, the teacher explained the components of a hamburger. She asked if cookies or spaghetti
would make a hamburger. The class responded with a "no". She then explained that some sentences,
just like cookies or spaghetti, have no place in a paragraph. The teacher used this hamburger to help
students write a paragraph. Students were given strips of sentences on "hamburger pieces" and placed
them in order. This was a great example on checking for understanding. The teacher assessed their
During independent work, they were given several paragraphs on different topics. They had to
identify the topic sentence, the supporting sentence, and the concluding sentence. They also had to
identify sentences that did not belong. This activity also checked for student understanding.
The last activity allowed students to create supporting sentences with a given topic sentence.
The topic was "The USA is a country that offers many opportunities." The teacher allowed students to
use past experiences and prior knowledge when creating sentences. According to Richards and Farrell,
this strategy is a great example or learner centered teaching. lt gave students a great opportunity to feel
I really enjoyed watching this observation. The teacher used several strategies to teach writing
structure. She used visuals such as pictures to help students understand the relationship of paragraph
writing. I like how she didn't lecture for an hour and allowed students to work in groups so they can
share their thoughts. I also like how sentences were on strips of paper. This gave the students an
opportunity to delete sentences that do not belong in the paragraph and for students to order the