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Learning Target:
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences using effective technique, well-chosen
details, and well-structured event sequences.

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Formatting Name, class, teacher, & date in upper left hand corner
Header with last name and page number, hidden from first page
Times New Roman font
Size 12, Double Spaced

Hook/Introduction
Engages reader
Sets out problem,
situation, or
observation
Multiple POV
Introduces narrator

Organization
Smooth progression of
experiences
Events build on one
another to create a
coherent whole

Narrative Techniques
Dialogue
Pacing
Description
Reflection
Multiple plot lines
Developed experiences,
events, & characters

Word Choice
Sensory language
Paints pictures in
readers mind

Conclusion
Reflects on experiences
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