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1015 South Park

Cameron,MO 64429

04 April 1934

Mr. and Mrs.Flanagan

Santa Monica,CA 90402

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Flanagan

Your daughter Natalie is showing signs of Autisim.

She has attachment to her buttons,for instance if I were to hide one she would know which one I hid.
She is not speaking clearly when I asked her what she wants she said outside.

I suggest the Esther P. Marinoff school.

Sincerely

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