and we graded you appropriately. We are asking for clarication on the current grading policy and if we can release your grades to you, we will (that s Dr. Hislop s preference. He likes transparency). We wrote some comments on your exams to help you understand how to do better. Now, some general comments. You should always ask yourselves questions about lectures. These can range from how might I tell that lecture otherwise? to why was x the way it is? to (for the really clever among you) what kind of test question might that dude ask about this? (That dude was excellent at this kind of question when he was an undergrad). Write these things down in your notes. It s a good way to really learn the material. It s an excellent way to develop your faculties of thought. Writing Since you have several written assignments coming up, this exam was an excellent way for us to assess some aspects of your skills. I think it is fair to say that almost every one of you can improve (I would say the same thing about myself for what that s worth). Some of you did really well. A. You ve been thinking about the course B. You have a good sense of what is logical and what is not. C. You were able to provide convincing evidence for a thesis in a short period of time Brilliant! But some of you do not know what a thesis is (not knowing is ne. Not learning is bad so thank for asking). Since this is not a class on writing, I need to refer you to a couple of sources. 1. 5 Paragraph Essay Style: https://en.wikipedia.org/ wiki/Five-paragraph_essay A basic description of this very common Anglophone essay structure (including critiques of it). Worth a look if you have not been taught this style in primary and secondary school. (We were aiming for the second kind of 5 paragraph essay described in this article) And 2. The Craft of Research (Wayne Booth and others). This is a classic among classics for writing. It s been around for years but has also been continuously revised. (The dude used in 1982 in Frosh Writing at Stanford and we were all expected to keep a copy of it for our other writing intensive courses as well). But: 1982 = no internet so get a current copy so you can get help with internet materials in research. This is a book you work through and with. You can not really learn to write by just reading the book. Next week: I will give you some specic comments on the book report after I have spent a bit more time thinking about how the exams you wrote relate to the book report project. NB: No tutorials next week. Prepare for your presentation.