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To begin, some people think that art-subjects represent a waste of time for
students. They support this argument by saying that these topics take study-
time away from essential subjects. In addition, it is argued that a lot of
pointless homework such as drafts and drawings are given to the students.
However, some people oppose these views. Firstly, they claim that artistic
subjects help to improve soft skills (like creativity and imagination),
increasingly required for jobs. Also, these practical art subjects can release
stress and tension in students.
In my opinion,
Whilst some people are of the opinion that ..., others believe that ...
I agree that
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