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Campbell
by Keldan Campbell
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Audience Analysis Keldan Campbell
GRADEMARK REPORT
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Instructor
T horoughness, 20%: B
T otal: 88%
Points: 132
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Comment 1
We've talked about the challenges with him being the primary audience. I think it works, though
he will def initely pass it on to someone else. A side note: I just remembered that the president
of WVC used to be a technical writer years and years ago--I suspect that you could make a
good appeal to him because of this.
Comment 2
Not accurate! You are a student at the college he is a president of --think this through more
deeply.
Comment 3
Use proper grammar, mechanics, and punctuation in this document--including capitalizing WVC.
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Comment 4
No, more like how will they use it later. Will they ref er back to again? If so, what will they look at
specif ically? Will they pass it on to others?
Comment 5
No, this question is asking what their knowledge of having such a system would be, knowledge
of what would be needed, knowledge of graphic design/design elements, etc.
Comment 6
Again, this isn't accurate--see question above.
Comment 7
Good.
Comment 8
T here are always cultural considerations. What is the culture of colleges and community
colleges in particular?
Comment 9
Also cost, time, how dif f icult it will be to implement.
Comment 10
Good--this seems likely.
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Comment 11
Again, good answer.
Again, good answer.
Comment 12
T his is a good start, but also
think about how ideas and issues/problems are handled, and if it's considered okay to bring
them up to people in charge. Is there a hierarchy? Are you going through the proper channels or
considering those aspects? T hat's something to think about, too.
Comment 13
Good idea.
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Comment 14
Should it be more f ormal in nature? Have a cover? Be f ormatted as a letter?
Comment 15
Good--and this could add to their course of f erings or their ability to of f er "real world"
experience f or interested students.