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PROFESORES SUPERVISORES
MG. HCTOR MATURANA
MA. EDUARDO SENZ
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Abstract
This innovative project investigated the relationship that exists between the explicit instruction
of collocations and the development of reading comprehension and written production. This study
intends to demonstrate how collocation knowledge can help students improve their reading and writing
skills in a more efficient and effective way.
This research was carried out with 24 10th grade students from Colegio Ingls Purranque in a
24-week period. To measure the effectiveness of the intervention period, quantitative and qualitative
methodologies were used. Regarding the quantitative methodology, pre and post tests were used, and
also a survey was given to gather data. Concerning qualitative methodology, ethnographic notes were
taken as supportive evidence for the attainment of the objectives.
The pre-test results showed that the median for the reading section was 28,5 point and the
mean was 28,04 points, whereas in the pos-test the median was 38,5 points and the mean was 38,8. In
writing section of the pre-test the median was 26 point and the mean was 23.2 points, whereas in the
pos-test the median was 44 points and the mean was 37.4. Moreover, the observed value for t in the
reading (9.8248) and the written (5.1973) sections were greater than the critical value for t (1.6794).
These results provided evidence of the significant improvements in the students average reading
comprehension and written production achievements after the intervention period, which suggests that
collocation knowledge can significantly influence the development of both abilities.
Key words: Collocation, explicit instruction, reading and writing.
1. Introduction
Since the beginning of the XX century English has become the main language of international
communication and business around the world. Nowadays, we are immersed in a globalized context
which has demanded every nation to adopt the instruction of the English language at the core of their
curriculum due to its huge importance in the different fields of science, commerce, education and even
entertainment.
Chile is no exception to the rule. In our country only 4% of our work force speaks English
(TOEIC, 2012) so, in the year 2003 the Chilean Ministry of Education started an ambitious plan to turn
Chile into a bilingual country called English Open Doors. Nevertheless, this project did not produce
the so desire effect of having a bilingual country as the recent result of the first English SIMCE in
Chile (prepared by the Educational Testing Service) showed that only 11% of students comprehend
everyday phrases and short texts and only 1 out of 10 students gets a certification. (LaTercera,
2011)
Based on the facts already mentioned and the experience as student-teacher, it was possible for
me to notice that students had many problems reading texts in English and also producing short
sentences or phrases. These observations led me to identify that one of students main problems was
poor lexical development, which they addressed as lack of vocabulary.
It is already known that learners do not acquire vocabulary in isolation, but instead they learn
family words and chunks of language at early stages of language acquisition. Following the previous
idea, we have to keep in mind that whenever we read a text or plan to write anything, most of the time,
a set of prefabricated words and phrases are triggered according to the theme or subject we are
dealing with. We have the ideas and arguments to develop our texts and also we use these chunks of
language to read or write. However, many times we are not conscious of the importance of those sets of
words that are stored in our memories and the way in which they can help us organize our ideas and
the lexicon to be used.
Furthermore, the different sources of written texts that are available also provide us with a
great variety of structures, patterns of organization, vocabulary and discourse markers. These are what,
from now on, I will refer to as collocations: linguistic signals of semantic and discourse function that
are very much concerned with the surface of the text (McCarthy, 1999). The analysis and study of these
lexical elements can help students improve their reading comprehension and as a consequence the
composing task. Based on this assumption and considering the difficulties students presented, it was
decided to approach reading and writing skills by making students aware of collocations in the
different texts they read in an everyday basis.
This innovative project was carried out from April to November in 2008 in a 10 th grade with 24
students in Colegio Ingls Purranque. It investigated the relationship that exists between the explicit
instruction of collocations and the development of reading comprehension and written production. This
study intended to demonstrate the importance of collocations in a more comprehensive sense,
determining how this knowledge can help students improve their reading and writing skills in a more
efficient and effective way, bringing a discourse dimension into teaching languages. For that purpose
pre and post test were given and a survey was applied to gather quantitative data, and also field notes
were taken to complement the statistical results with qualitative data to support this research.
In the following sections a theoretical framework will be provided in which the rationale for
this study is going to be reviewed. Also the methodology used in this research will be explained, and
quantitative and qualitative data will be analyzed focusing in the accomplishment of the premise that
the explicit instruction of collocations can have a positive impact on students reading and writing
skills.
2. Literature Review
As the aim of this research is to enhance reading comprehension and written production by
means of explicit instruction of collocations, it is important to define these skills and collocation as
they have been considered for the purpose of this investigation. First, the four language skills will be
briefly defined and it will be explained why reading and writing were chosen to be developed at the
same time. Also, collocation will be described and defined according to the aim of this research, and a
final connection between the two abilities and lexical development will be drawn while considering
other investigations in the same area. I will present a review of literature where it will be stated what I
mean for each term presented in this project from an English Language Teaching (ELT) perspective.
2.1 The Four Language Skills
At the moment that we start learning a language there are four skills that we need for complete
communication which are: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Listening is receiving language
through the ears. Listening involves identifying the sounds of speech and processing them into words
and sentences to understand spoken speech (English Club, 2012). Speaking is the productive skill in
the oral mode, which includes face-to-face conversations, telephone calls, etc., in which we are
alternately listening and speaking decoding spoken messages (Orwig, 1998). Reading is the process of
making meaning from written texts, in which a reader has to identify the words in a print and construct
from them decoding a message (Leipzig, 2001). Finally, writing is a method of representing language
in visual or tactile form, utilizing symbols to represent the sounds of speech to be later recovered
without the necessary intervention of the utterer (Omniglot, 2012)
According to what has already been mentioned, any language has four skills, in which two are
for producing output (speaking and writing) and two are for receiving input (reading and listening).
Moreover, we can also reclassify them making a difference between those used for spoken
communication (listening and speaking) and written communication (reading and writing) (Essberger,
2001). Based on the observations and analysis of needs and difficulties students had, it was decided to
focus on the two abilities for written communication, as they have in common similar processes of
development which can have a significant impact on students. Both of them require analysis of text and
lexical development to be improved, and share in common that there are no time limits and plenty of
room to correct any mistakes that might happen in the way. In addition, both skills allow resourcing to
learners which aids them in the process of self-developing the two abilities. In the following segments
reading, writing and collocation will be described according to this innovative project, as well as an
integration section in which it will be explained how the explicit instruction of collocation can be used
to improve reading comprehension and written production achievements.
2.1.1 Reading Comprehension
Reading, as it was described previously, is a receptive skill which involves responding to a
text, rather than producing it. It involves making sense by understanding the language at word level,
sentence level and whole-text level (Grabe & Stroller, 2002). Unfortunately, reading a text is a little
more complex than this previous definition: we have to interpret links created by cohesive markers
across sentence boundaries, pair and chain together items that are related and on top of that, make
sense of them. Making sense is an act of interpretation that depends as much on what readers bring to a
text as what the author puts on it (McCarthy, 1999).
Reading comprehension is an interactive process in which many processes happen at the same
time, such as recognizing words very rapidly, keeping them active in our working memories, analyzing
the structure of sentences, building text comprehension in our minds, monitoring comprehension, etc.
(Tindale, 2003, in Gonzalez, 2009). Good readers understand the processes involved in reading and
consciously control them. This awareness and control of the reading processes is called metacognition,
which means "knowing about knowing." (Smith, 2003) Readers also connect the message of a text to
their knowledge of the world, in which linguistic information from a text interacts with information
activated from the readers long-term memory, as background knowledge (Baez, 2011). In order to
develop reading comprehension, learners need to develop background knowledge, extensive oral and
print vocabularies, knowledge of various kinds of texts, the purposes for what they are reading and
strategies for constructing meaning (Leipzig, 2001).
As previously stated, reading is a complex process which demands the reader to activate a lot
of mental structures and bring them to the act of decoding the information of a text. An important
component of reading comprehension is the ability to recognize discourse organization. Students who
recognize and follow a texts basic discourse organization recall more information from it. Differing
discourse organizational schemes, or rhetorical frames, in texts can lead to different results in recall of
information (National Education Association, 2007). In addition, when reading any authentic text of
any type being it descriptive, narrative, argumentative or expository, the reader has to decode words
presented in them that mark the discourse organization and also the text structure. Following the same
idea, different expository texts can have different text structures such as listing, cause and effect,
comparison contrast, problem solution and time order (National Education Association 2007). These
are aspects any reader has to bear in mind when approaching any text that could make the task of
decoding a message a much fluent process.
To sum up, reading is an interactive process which demands several processes to happen at the
same time. It not only implies being able to recognize words, analyzing structures and making sense,
but also it connects what is being read with our background knowledge. In the following section,
writing will be defined from an ELT perspective.
2.1.2 Written Production
Writing is a productive skill which means that it involves producing a text instead of decoding
it. Writing is a process in which we put together a combination of letters to form words, phrases,
clauses, and sentences, and put sentences together to make coherent text. (Lindsay and Knight, 2006).
According to Hedge (1988) writing is a complex process with a number of operations going on
simultaneously, which some writers know how to better work and produce more successful pieces of
writing. Following this idea, the process can be guided and the teacher can help the student improve
the processes of producing text by including analysis of written texts.
We write for many different reasons, for instance to pass on information and opinions, to ask
questions, to request for something, etc. Moreover, most of the times we write to communicate and the
text we produce has to be effective in order to communicate our ideas and thoughts.
According to Lindsay and Knight (2006) we write:
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to help memorization
The process of writing can be broken down into three stages: preparation, draft and editing and
rewriting (Lindsay and Knight, 2006). These three stages can take place as many times as needed and
the previous order is not necessarily fixed, because we have the chance to change our creation many
times. It is more accurate to characterize writing as a recursive activity in which the writer moves
backwards and forwards between drafting and revising, with stages of replanning in between (Hedge
1988).
The process of writing is often described as consisting of three major activities or groups of
activities: pre-writing, writing and rewriting, and editing (Hedge 1988). In the following section,
collocation will be defined and described for the purpose of this project.
2.2 Collocation
For the purpose of this project, now I am going to define what a collocation is. One of the
definitions of collocation that is available is that a collocation is a predictable combination of words
(Hill, 2000, in Lewis, 2000, p 51) English, and any language, is full of collocations which are
recurrent combinations of words that co-occur more often than expected by chance according to
Lewis (2000, in Gonzalez 2009, p 11). These two previous definitions share in common the fact of
establishing the basis to understand that collocation is the co-occurrence of words in any type of text.
The challenge for the teacher is to make simple categories which will help their students see some
order and organization in the lexicon (Hill, 2000, in Lewis, 2000, p 51) So Hill states the seven most
common combinations of words that could be taught to students.
Adjective + noun
a huge profit
Noun + noun
a pocket calculator
Verb + adverb
live dangerously
Adverb + verb
half understand
Adverb + adjective
completely soaked
Hill proposes the previous seven kinds of collocations because they can be very useful, as these
categories can draw learners attention to collocations of different kinds and set the principles to study
and analyze them. He also says that the term collocation should help bring all the chunks of language
to students attention (Hill 2000, in Lewis 2000). On the other hand, it has to be noted that not all
collocations are fixed. According to Thornbury (2007, p 6) we have seen that groups of more than
one word, such as bits and pieces, do up, look for, can function as a meaningful unit with a fixed or
semi-fixed form. Technically these are known as multi-word units, but they are often called simply
lexical chunks. There are also some strong collocations that have the status of idioms; some may be
so common that they hardly seem worth remarking upon, so the teacher should be aware of the
different types of collocation as learners may tend to transfer from their mother tongue into the target
language forming wrong collocations (Thornbury, 2007). This same researcher says that collocation is
not as frozen a relationship as that of compounds or multi-word units, and two collocates may not even
occur next to each other they may be separated by one or more other words (Thornbury, 2007, p 7)
Here this author gives us a hint to other types of collocations to look for, because words are not always
bound to appear next to each other, but they can be near. In addition, there also exist sentence frames,
which are a set of semi-fixed multi-word units that provide a structure on which to produce a new
sentence reducing planning time in rapid speech. An example of sentences frame is Its amazing how
because based on this starting point we can have Its amazing how words can happen together and Its
amazing how collocations behave in a text, an example of how a sentence frame can be used to
produce two new sentences (Thornbury, 2007).
Compiling what has already been stated, it can be said that collocations hunt in packs and
two words are collocates if they occur together more than chance frequency, such that, when we see
one, we can make a fairly safe bet that the other is in the neighborhood (Thornbury, 2007, p 7). The
term collocation in this project considers the definition given by Lewis (2000) and Thornbury (2007),
as well as the idea of collocation as any marker present in texts. In this sense collocation is a linguistic
signal of semantic and discourse function, very much concerned with the surface of the text
(McCarthy, 1999). Cohesive markers create links across boundaries and pair and chain together items
that are related. According to the definition given by Lewis (2000), collocation is not a semantic
relation between words and therefore it does not belong to the term lexical cohesion. On the other
hand, lexical cohesion in this project means only exact repetition of words and the role played by
certain semantic relations between words in creating textuality (McCarthy, 1999). Reiteration means
either restraining an item in a later part of the discourse by direct repetition or else restraining its
meaning by exploiting lexical reiterations. Lexical relations are the stable semantic relationships that
exist between words (McCarthy, 1999).
In the different types of texts text structures can often be identified by certain signal words,
which in this project are also considered collocations.
Text structure
Description/List
Structure
Description
This section resembles an outline. Each
section opens with its main idea, then
elaborates on it, sometimes dividing into
subsections
Cause
and
Effect The reader is told the result if an event or
Structure
occurrence and the reason it happened.
Comparison/Contrast
These texts tell about the differences and
Structure
similarities of two or more objects, places,
events or ideas by grouping their traits for
comparison.
Order/Sequence
These texts tell the order in which steps in
Structure
a process or series of events occur.
Figure 1 (National Education Association, 2007)
Signal Words
For example,
specifically, in
addition
for instance,
particular, in
Consequently, therefore, as a
result, thereby, leads to
However, unlike, like, by contrast,
yet, in, comparison, although,
whereas, similar to, different from
Next, first, last, second, another,
then, additionally
The figure above (Figure 1) presents us with the different text types and the signal words that
describe them. As it was stated previously, these words are also considered collocations because every
time they appear in a text, they co-occur with others and behave as collocations, signaling text
structure. That is to say, when we see one, the others are probably in the neighborhood (Thornbury,
2007).
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The notion of collocation, as it has been described so far, is present in any type of text. Not
only expository texts have collocations but all the different text types that exist in English or in any
other language.
It often happens that two parts of a text are connected in meaning. For instance, in a story, the
events described in one sentence often follow the events described in the previous one and they
connect each other. Here it is when connectives such as then, nevertheless, but and in spite of help
chain the story (Hudson, 1995). Because of the importance of these words in adding cohesion and their
high probability to be present in texts, connective have also been considered collocations.
Of course, collocations of the connective type can be found in any sort of text type. Examples
of these are those presented by Hudson (1995)
Addition connectives, example and
Opposition connectives, example yet
Cause connectives, example therefore
Time connectives, example then, in
In any kind of text or text structure, collocations are bound to be found as they organize the
logic of any language. They are present and work in certain contexts and are accompanied with specific
lexicon. According to the definitions already given, it can be said that collocation, then, is best seen as
part of a continuum of strength of association (Thornbury, 2007). This latter definition gives as the
sense that they are not only repetition of words, but real associations that happen in texts.
After presenting some definitions of collocation and examples of other lexical chunks and
signal words, it will be summarized what a collocation is.
A collocation is any signal word that can often help identify text structures in descriptive texts
(National Education Association, 2007), these words (e.g. for example, consequently, however, etc.)
help identify text structure and they always happen in their corresponding text types. A collocation is
any sentence frame present in texts, including prefabricated phrases such as its amazing how..., I
would like to say... etc. (Thornbury, 2007). Also, it is any predictable combination of words, which can
be found in any text type (Lewis, 2000). In addition, it is any key word or words that repeat in any text
and help to make a text coherent (Hudson, 1995) because they not only carry meaning, but also trigger
other words that are most likely to co-occur. Expanding the previous idea, it is any connective that is
used to indicate a specific connection between different parts of a text, including conjunctions,
adverbs and prepositional phrases (Hudson, 1995), as they add fluency and cohesion to texts.
In the following section it will be stated how this project intends to aim at enhancing reading and
writing by means of explicit instruction of collocation and also include what other researchers have
found in the same area.
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develop the ability of decoding text, but it also can help producing texts as many sets of pre-fabricated
phrases are available for learners to be used in their compositions. It can turn students into more fluent
and lexically competent writers. Moreover, the process of explicitly teaching chunks serves two
purposes in the development of language acquisition: it enables the student to have collocations of
language available for immediate use (be it for decoding or producing a text) and also provides the
learner with language patterns to hold in reserve for latter analysis and reutilization in compositions
(Thornbury, 2007).
Teaching signal words that help recognize text structure in expository texts can aid students in
monitoring comprehension (National Association, 2007). This type of collocations are important in the
analysis of written texts because students can incorporate those lexical items and, if the student has
learned them well, later use them to create their own pieces of writing. In any kind of text or text
structure collocations are bound to be found as they organize the logic of any language. They are
present and work in certain contexts and are accompanied with specific lexicon. Applying this notion
to the analysis of any text can set a new way in which students are going to prepare to read thus
enhancing writing because students will have frames in which to build their compositions. For
instance, when a student wants to write a letter, certain collocations such as best wishes, see you soon,
sincerely yours, etc, can be used making her text more lexically accurate than a mere translation.
Moreover, in related investigations in the field of lexical development to improve
comprehension, some interesting experiences can be found. For instance, Gonzalez (2009) proposed in
his research that the development of lexical knowledge, as well as strategies to learn vocabulary, could
improve students average reading comprehension, concluding that the teaching of multi-word units
can improve students average reading comprehension achievements, especially in less advantaged
students. In addition, Baez (2010) in his research investigating the influence of vocabulary acquisition
in the improvement of reading comprehension, suggested that it is necessary to continue developing
students lexical competence and reading comprehension in order to acquire communicative
competence, by focusing on lexical development as it had a significant impact in students with a low
level of understanding of English.
To end the literature review, the rationale for the study was presented. It was explained why
reading and writing were considered to be enhanced during the intervention period. Collocation was
defined and connected to the two abilities and explained how it is expected to help students improve
their reading comprehension and written production, by means of explicit instruction of collocations.
3. Methodology
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In this section it will be described the triangulation of data used in this research, the
instruments and methods used to collect data, who the subjects were in this investigation, which the
objectives were, what procedures were used, and what the hypothesis and research questions in this
study were.
3.1 Triangulation
In this section of my project I will explain why I took into account the Pre- and Post-test
results, the field notes and the lesson plans, and the survey for the triangulation of data.
Pre- and Post-Tests
Lesson
Plans
Field Notes
They indicate students reading comprehension, written production and collocation knowledge before
and after the intervention period. The post-test indicated if there were any changes or improvements
both in the reading and writing skills after the intervention period of 24 weeks. It also presented
findings regarding acquisition of collocation knowledge that was the core of this innovative project.
Moreover, the results verified the hypothesis which stated that: If 10th graders from Colegio Ingls
Purranque are taught during a direct period of instruction based on the analysis, study and use of
collocations present in texts, they will improve their reading comprehension and thus their written
production significantly.
Lesson Plans
They can show how I planned my lessons, how I designed the activities, how I chose the
contents that I included and the learning objectives that I decided students should attain in every lesson
and activity. These lesson plans were chosen to reflect whether the work carried out was coherent with
the objectives of the project. They also presented an overview of how my lessons were organized in
general. Overall, these lesson plans are the evidence of how I performed in theory and hint how the
classes may have been taught.
Field Notes
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The field notes represent the performance of my students as well as my own work during the
intervention period. I consider that they are very important because they indicate how I put the lesson
plans into practice. These field notes can show directly whether what was planned and designed
worked during regular classes. They can show the aspects my students were able to achieve and also
the way I conducted myself as a teacher. They give a clear idea of my overall work as a teacher and at
the same time they show the actions I did appropriately or not during a lesson.
3.2 The Survey
A survey (see appendix 7.6) was carried out in order to determine learners beliefs and
experiences towards their experience learning English in general. The instrument consisted of a set of
eleven questions with three options each in which they had to select the answer that represented them
the most. It was presented in printed form and in Spanish, so that students would not have problems
understanding the questions and what they had to do. The survey investigated what were the
difficulties learners had when reading a text, what they could understand from written and spoken
messages. It also intended to know if students were able to understand instructions in English and what
strategies and attitudes they had when they were asked to write a text. The survey gathered data related
to students attitudes and beliefs towards English, the difficulties they had during the lesson, whether
they had developed some reading skills, what were the attitudes and strategies they used when having
written tasks and the frequency in which they were asked to write in English.
3.3 The Test
The objective of my project was to determine to what extent a period of instruction focused on
collocation knowledge development could improve reading comprehension and written production
achievements. This way, I designed a test with two sections: one to measure reading and one to
measure writing. They were intended to assess students skills as well as their lexical knowledge.
The test (See appendix 7.4) was used to compare the reading comprehension and written
production results before and after the direct instruction period. I gave the pre-test to 24 tenth-grade
students at Colegio Ingls Purranque on April 24 th and the post-test on November 28th, 2008. The tests
were the same and assessed the same aspects both times. The ideal score for the reading section was 55
and for the writing section was 50. First I will describe the reading section of the test and then I will
present the writing part.
Reading Section
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In this part of the test (See appendix 7.4) two short texts were used to check reading
comprehension and lexical knowledge and three paragraphs were used only to assess lexical
knowledge, which adds up to five pieces of reading.
In the first item students had to read a text called Exotic Shopping in Paris. One important
aspect about this text was the presence of collocations. It was a key factor when choosing the text that
it contained collocations of different types to produce questions about the lexicon. In item I students
had to choose the correct title for each paragraph from a given list of names. The objective was to
evaluate what students understood from a paragraph. The ideal score for this item was 4 points.
The second item was based on the same text. Here students had to read extracts from the
passage and relate them to either [1] Paris or [2] Shops. The intention of this item was to evaluate
students capacity of establishing a connection between what they read and a key concept. The ideal
score for this item was 8 points.
II. Multiple Choice. Put the corresponding number if the information is related to [1]Paris and [2]Shops. (8 points)
1.
1
It is the best city for people who like to buy things.
2.
2
There you can find from furniture to clothes.
3.
2
They are located on Bonaparte and Jacob
4.
1
The river Seine is part of it.
Streets.
5.
2
Woolen skirts, leather jackets and designer 6.
2
They are open from eight to ten in the morning till
clothes can be bought in them.
about seven in the evening.
7.
1
Dont miss the chance to go shopping.
8.
2
There is always something to suit everyones
pocket and taste.
The third item intended to evaluate whether students were able to identify a collocation and see
how it worked in a sentence. Some collocations were extracted from the text and others were made up.
The ideal score for this item was 8 points. They had to decide whether the collocations presented in
sentences corresponded to any of the kinds of collocations and if they were correctly used in the
extracts.
In the fourth item students were given a passage called The Terrible Twins: El Nio en la
Nia. Students had to reorder this text. The aim was to evaluate students capability to discover the
organization of a text. The ideal score of this item was 4 points.
Item V was based on the same reading passage. Students had to answer true or false according
to the text. The aim of this item was to check understanding of the text and students capacity to
discern and to evaluate information. The ideal score for this task was 8 points.
In item number six (extract 2), students had to analyze collocations taken from the text. They
had to choose between meanings proposed for each preposition and identify what the purpose of that
word was. The ideal score for this item was 4.
VI. For the possible meanings of the prepositions FOR, OF, FROM, identify which one is the most appropriate sense for each
one in the extracts from the previous text. (4 points)
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FOR
[1] used to indicate purpose or reason
[2] used to compare one thing with others of the same type
9.
1
Meteorologists are studying these Terrible Twins so they can prepare for possible future disasters.
OF
[1] used to mention or introduce new elements
[2] used to show origin or reason of something
10. 1
During El Nio the distribution of dry and wet weather changes radically
11. 2
El Nio is the result of very warm water in the equatorial Pacific
FROM
[1] used to show the place where someone or something starts
[2] used to indicate or introduce a disease or problematic situation
12. 2
Other regions suffer from abnormally dry conditions.
In item seven, students had to read three different paragraphs. Students had to identify the text
markers and decide if they corresponded to: comparison contrast, cause and effect or chronological
order. The ideal score was 3 points.
In item number eight, students were proposed 10 signal words. They were required to discern
based on their meanings and uses what text pattern they marked. The aim was to test students ability to
identify and classify words based on their meaning and use in a sentence or phrase.
VIII. Look at the words and phrases below and classify them according to their meanings in the paragraphs above: [1] effect, [2]
comparison, [3] contrast, [4] chronological order (10 points).
13. 1
Take away pain
14. 4
Three major stages
15. 2
Similarities
16. 3
However
17. 4
By 1920
18. 2
Both countries
19. 1
Stop a fever
20. 4
Finally
21. 3
But
22. 1
result in
In item nine students were proposed three collocations. They were required to decide whether
these collocations were used correctly in six sentences. The aim was to test students skill to evaluate
collocations. The ideal score for this item was 6 points.
Writing Section
In this part of the text students were also required to read two texts. One was a pen friend
request and the other was a letter from one friend to another. Students had to answer in written form
and also produce compositions of their own.
In item number ten (extract 4) students were required to fulfill two tasks. The first part (X-I for
the statistical analysis) was to complete a table with specific information and the second part (X-II for
statistical analysis) was to complete the same chart with their own personal information. The aim was
to evaluate students capacity to extract information and write fluently. The ideal score for this section
of the item was 30 points assessing the two tasks separately.
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X. Read the advertisement for pen-friends and complete the table with the information about Anna and yourself (15 points).
Then write your own pen-friend advertisement (15 points)
Hello. My names Pierre and Im seventeen years old. I live in Paris, France. I have got short straight dark hair and
brown eyes. Im quite tall and slim. I love playing computer games and I can play tennis very well. I like reading too. Please email me today!
Hi! My name is Anna and I am eleven years old. I live in Moscow, Russia. I have got long straight fair hair and green
eyes. Im quite short and I like skiing. I can play the piano quite well. Please be my e-mail pen pal.
Pierre
Anna
You
Age
17
11
Lives in
Paris, France
Moscor, Russia
Hair
Short straight dark
Long straight fair
Eyes
Brown
Green
Height
Quite tall
Quite short
Build
Slim
--------------------------Likes/Loves
Playing computer games, reading
Skiing
Can
Play tennis very well
Play the piano quite well
Extract 4 from the test See appendix 7.4. Here is item X showing the first task students had to fulfill.
In item number eleven students were given a text from which they had to extract certain
information. The students had to list down information extracted from a letter. The aim was to evaluate
students capacity to obtain specific information. The ideal score for this section was 5 points.
In item number twelve students had to write a letter. Here the objective was to assess students
capacity to organize information and replicate a model already seen. The ideal score for this item was
15 points.
It is important to notice that students writing tasks (X-I and XII) were evaluated according to a
rubric which was detailed in the aspects that were considered to assess the compositions (See appendix
7.5 Criteria to Asses Writing).
3.4 Subjects
The subjects who participated in this research were 24 students: 12 boys and 12 girls from a
school in Purranque, X Region, Chile. The group was a 10 th grade at Colegio Ingls Purranque, whose
ages ranged from 15 to 20 years old.
3.5 Objectives
General Objective
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Specific Objectives
To identify the strategies students use to write during the direct instruction period.
To detect the effect of the collocation knowledge on the development of students reading
comprehension and writing skill.
To verify the level of proficiency that students can accomplish after a period of explicit
instruction of collocations in their reading and writing development.
3.6 Materials
In this innovation project various resources were used. These include: lesson plans, to show
how classes were planned and how activities were designed; a pre and post test, to measure students
achievements at the beginning and at the end of the instruction period; a survey, to identify students
beliefs and problems when learning English; and field notes, to identify problems and virtues of the
mentor teacher as well as the student-teacher.
3.7 Procedures
Concerning quantitative methodology, a pre-test was given to assess students reading
comprehension and written production at the beginning of the intervention period. After twenty four
weeks of instruction, tenth grade students at Colegio Ingls Purranque were given a post-test which
was the same instrument. The comparison between both tests proved that the intervention period
improved students reading and writing skills. In addition, a survey was carried out in order to know the
students interests in learning English, their needs and beliefs. The results shown by this survey helped
me to decide how I should deal with the students and what other aspect I should consider when
teaching the language.
With respect to qualitative methodology, ethnographic notes were taken as a supporting
evidence for the attainment or not attainment of the objectives. Also, extracts from students
performances were taken to show the development of their written production, contrasting both the pre
and post tests.
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3.8 Hypothesis
The hypothesis formulated was:
H1: If 10th graders from Colegio Ingls Purranque are taught during a direct period of instruction
based on the analysis, study and use of collocations present in texts, they will improve their reading
comprehension and thus their written production significantly. ( 0,05)
3.8.1 Variables
X (dependent): enhancement of reading comprehension and written production.
Y (independent): the study, analysis and use of collocations in texts.
3.9 Research Questions
What is the level of proficiency when reading and writing that students can accomplish after a
period of explicit instruction of collocations?
What are the difficulties students face when they read a text or start writing?
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In the first question the results suggest that 16 students were able to understand general ideas
when they were required to read in English which represents 67% of the class. Only 6 students were
able to understand specific and general ideas and just 2 students said that they were able to understand
some words but not the content of the text which represent the 25% and 8% respectively. It indicates
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that most students by the time the questionnaire was taken were developing their reading skills and
only a few were not making significant progress.
2.Cuando usted escucha algn texto en ingls, ya sea una cancin,
slo algunas palabras pero
no el contenido principal;
42%
ideas generales y
especficas; 16%
In the second question when students were required to answer according to their experience
when listening to texts, 10 students said that they were able to identify general ideas which is 42% of
students, only 4 were able to understand general and specific ideas which amounts to 16% of students
and 10 students were able only to identify some words but not the general content of the text. These
results show that students had problems in general in developing their listening ability. These numbers,
compared to the previous results of the question about reading comprehension, prove that listening
comprehension was one the weaknesses of students.
3.Cuando leo y/o escucho identifico de qu se trata el texto (tpico/tema)
si, generalmente lo
identifico; 42%
me cuesta identificarlo; 8%
In general students showed that they were able to identify most of the times the topic of a
reading or listening passage. It was proven in question 3 when 10 students said that they generally
identify the topic and 12 of them pointed out that they sometimes were capable of understanding the
topic depending on the text, which amounts to 42% and 50% of the students respectively. The 2
students left suggest that they are the students who have more problems when reading and listening to
texts, as it was also pointed out in question number 1.
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nunca ; 17%
a veces ; 66%
In item number four students were required to answer if they were able to identify the type of
text that they were presented. Here the results show that only 4 students were able to do it all the times,
16 students sometimes and 4 students were never able to do it, which amounts to 17%, 66% and 17%
respectively. It is clear according to these results that students needed to develop expertise in
recognizing the type of texts they were presented in the reading and listening lessons.
5.Con respecto a las instrucciones que el (la) profesor le da en ingls:
no me las han enseado
pero las deduzco; 33%
In question number 5 it is clear that students had developed certain expertise in understanding
the activities either because they had been taught the instructions or because they had the abilities to
deduce and understand them. 16 students pointed out that they had been taught how to comprehend
instructions and 8 students said that they were able to understand them without having been taught
directions which amounts to a 67% and 33% respectively, which suggests a great level of knowledge of
classroom vocabulary. It is clear that this was one of the strengths of students and that they were
capable of comprehend what they were required to do.
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In this item students were asked if they knew how to write appropriately a text. The intention
of this question was to determine if students had certain understanding of grammar rules, organization
and style. The results obtained showed that 14 students acknowledged that they had been taught and
given clear examples on how to write appropriately which amounts to 58% of students. 8 students
pointed out they knew the rules but did not have clear examples and only two students said that they
had never had instruction of grammar rules, organization and style which amount to 33% and 9% of
students respectively. Based on the results it can be noticed that students had some grammar
knowledge and knew how to write a text.
7.Antes de escribir diseo un plan para escribir una historia.
nunca; 8%
siempre;17%
a veces; 75%
In this question the idea was to identify the strategies that students used to produce their
compositions in English. It can be noticed that 4 students always designed a writing plan, 18 students
sometimes designed a plan and only 2 students never prepared to write which amounts to 17%, 75%
and 8% of the students. It is clear that most students had already developed the planning strategy and
that most of the times they used it to produce their texts, which could clearly help them write in a more
organized manner.
24
siempre ; 21%
a veces ; 71%
In question 8 students were required to answer whether they were able to recall texts they had
previously read to produce their own compositions. In this question it was intended to measure how
often students were able to use previously seen or studied patterns to produce their own compositions.
In this item 5 students said that they always recalled previously studied texts, 17 students said that they
sometimes did it and only two said that they never recalled any previously seen composition which
amounts to 21%, 71% and 8% respectively. These numbers suggest that most students had already
developed the ability to reflect on the texts they studied and that they also could analyze them and use
the patterns seen for their own pieces of writing.
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9.Cuando escribo en ingls
escribo y chequeo mi trabajo
chequeando si hay errores
de forma ; 42%
In question number 9, students were required to answer about the stages of their work when
they had to write. Most of them said that they wrote and corrected or asked for corrections. 10 students
said that they checked their works and 6 students said that they revised and asked the teacher for
corrections which amounts to 42% and 25% of the total of students. Nevertheless 8 students recognized
that they were careless of their work and did not ask for corrections or revised their own compositions.
They amount to 33% of the total of students who do not pay attention to their written production.
25
no s como hacerlo o me
cuesta mucho; 29%
In this question students were asked what their attitudes or feelings were regarding activities in
which they had to write. The results to this question were varied. 8 students said that they felt they
were able to write and did not make mistakes or very few, whereas 9 students said that they could do it
but making many mistakes which amounted to 33% and 38% of the total. 7 students pointed out the
fact that they did not know how to write or that it was difficult for them. These students amounted to
29% of the total of students. In general 17 students recognized that they could write with little or many
mistakes and 7 students feel that it was difficult for them which suggest a great variety in the levels of
students regarding writing tasks.
11.En la clase estn dadas las oportunidades para que usted pueda
Si, pero slo a veces se nos
pode escribir ; 17%
Regarding the amount of writing activities and possibilities they had to write in English during
the lessons, students pointed out in general that there were plenty of writing tasks and that they were
required to produce composition most of the times. 20 students said that there was a great variety of
writing activities and 4 students said that they were only required some times to write which amounted
to 83% and 17% of the total of students. No student chose the last alternative which suggests that
students were given plenty of opportunities to write.
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Table 1 shows students outcomes final scores, item per item achievements, the sum, mean and standard
deviation, as well as the reliability and the mode(s) and median.
The ideal score of the pre-test in the reading sections was 55; the highest and the lowest scores
reached were 40 and 12 points respectively. The ideal score for the writing section was 50; the highest
and the lowest scores obtained by students were 36 and 3 respectively. These results immediately show
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a contrast: while the reading results are fair, the writing performances are not as good. These results in
general show that this is a group with a fair level of comprehension in English. In addition, when I
analyzed the test item per item, I could notice that in terms of comprehension results were good, but
concerning collocation knowledge and writing results did not show clearly that students had developed
that kind of abilities.
Score per item
Ideal Score
Students average score
I
II
III IV V VI
4
8
8
4
8
4
3.3 5.2 4.1 1.7 4.7 2.1
VII
3
1.4
VIII
10
IX
6
3.5
2.2
X-I
15
10.8
X-II
15
6
XI
5
2.8
XII
15
3.6
Table 2 shows students average item per item in the two sections of the test.
The items concerning lexical knowledge were number III, VI, VIII and IX. These items
showed the lowest averages compared to the comprehension activities. Also items X-II and XII showed
the lowest performances in the writing section. These results suggest that there is an appropriate level
of comprehension, a lack of collocation knowledge and a need to develop the writing skill.
Reading
Writing
12 50% 11 46%
12 50% 11 46%
0
0% 2
8%
24 100% 24 100%
Table 3 shows how many students were below and over the median.
In the reading section the median (28.5) and the two modes (26, 30) showed that the level of
English of the group in general was good. It can be explained as learners had 5 hours of English per
week and most of them had had English lessons for at least 9 years. Results were varied and helped the
test reach a reliability of 0.80. The median indicates that in general students obtained 53% of correct
answers. In the writing section the median (26) and the several modes (5, 23, 26, 28, 29, 31, 32, and
34) indicate that students written production is not appropriate and that they have some problems
when they are required to write. They got the lowest scores in items number X-II and XII in which they
were required to produce texts. The results in the written section were varied and helped the test reach
a reliability of 0.88 which indicates a clear dispersion of scores obtained by students. The median
shows that in general students obtained 52% of the total score.
In the next page there are two graphs. The first (graph 12) one shows the students scores and
the second one (graph 13) is a frequency polygon where one can see how many times a score value
was obtained by the students in the reading and writing sections of the pre-test.
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The previous graphic representation (Graph 12) shows that students outcomes were much
better in the reading part of the test, whereas the writing results were not as good, which indicates that
probably the main focus during students early instruction could have been reading comprehension and
some vocabulary development. Also we can see a tendency that shows that students outcomes in
general are good in the frequency polygon (Graph 13) in which many students obtain from 26 to 30 in
the Reading section, which suggests that they had some previous development of that skill. On the other
hand, the different modes in the writing section imply that students talents are diverse and not that
homogenous with scores ranging from 3 to 36 points.
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Table 4 shows students outcomes final scores, item per item achievements, the sum, mean and standard
deviation, as well as the reliability and the mode(s) and median.
The reading and writing sections of the pre and post tests were the same. They had the same
ideal score of 55 and 50 respectively. For the reading section the highest and lowest scores were 49 and
25, and for the writing section the highest and lowest scores were 49 and 12 respectively. The scores
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obtained by students in the post-test showed a great progress on their part. The outcomes of students
improved considerably, especially in those students whose performance was not so good in the pre-test.
These numbers suggest that the innovation project had a positive impact, considerably for students
with the lowest performance at the beginning of the intervention period.
Table 5 shows students average item per item in the two sections of the test.
The mean of the scores item per item also shows an improvement in students outcomes. It
suggests that students comprehension and lexical knowledge increased during the 24-week
intervention period as well as their written production. The median in the reading part of the post test
was 38,5 and the modes were 35 and 45, and in the writing part they were 39 and 44 respectively
which are higher considering the pre test. The median of the reading comprehension section shows that
in general students got 70% of correct answers in the post test which made the reliability of the test
decrease from 0.81 to 0.67. On the other hand, the median in the written production section indicates
that in general students obtained 78% of the total score of the test. The reliability of the test was 0.90,
proving the examination reliable both times.
Reading
Writing
12 50% 11 46%
12 50% 11 46%
0
0% 2
8%
24 100% 24 100%
Table 6 shows how many students were below and over the median
On the next page there are two charts (graph 14 and 15). The first one shows students scores
and the second one is a frequency polygon where it can be seen how many times a score value was
obtained by the students in the reading and writing sections of the post-test. They will be used to show
students achievements in the post-test as well as to comment the results obtained by students.
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Based on both graphic depictions of students outcomes in the post-test a general tendency
can be drawn. First it can be noticed that students outcomes are much better in the reading than in the
writing section of the test (Graph 14). It means that even though both skills have not been balanced,
there has been a real progress and that reading is still their main ability. Also the frequency polygon
(Graph 15) shows that the modes are located in the higher scores, being the highest mode 45 in the
reading section. Furthermore, the two graphic representations show a clear increment in students
outcomes.
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35
25
34
30
40
20
28
30
18
26
30
40
26
33
35
28
26
12
29
36
38
15
27
12
43
45
35
35
41
45
34
34
46
25
45
49
40
33
40
35
35
45
33
38
45
36
35
39
8
20
1
5
1
25
6
4
28
-1
15
9
14
0
5
7
9
33
4
2
7
21
8
27
673
28.04
8.1
29
931
38,8
5,8
25
258
9,82482E-06
Writing
Pre-Test
Post-Test
Scores
Scores
28
40
32
39
29
39
31
46
36
49
12
43
28
34
26
32
10
44
32
25
5
32
34
49
29
44
21
36
24
34
26
45
31
32
19
37
22
44
23
43
27
44
3
12
23
30
5
25
556
898
23.2
37.4
9.5
8.77
34
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Gain
12
7
10
15
13
31
6
6
34
-7
27
15
15
15
10
19
1
18
22
20
17
9
7
20
342
5,19728E-08
The column Gain indicates how many points the students gained in the post-test with respect
to the pre-test. According to the table above 22 students obtained more points in the post-test and only
one student obtained 1 less point and one did not gain any compared to the first measurement. The
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range of points gained goes from 1 to 33 points in the reading section and from 1 to 34 points in the
writing part which are pretty good results. The mean indicates that students increased their scores from
11 to 14 points average in terms of reading comprehension and written production respectively.
Another aspect to consider is the range because in the pre-test the difference between the lowest and
the highest score was 29 and 24 points in the reading section, and 34 and 38 points in the writing
section accordingly. I interpret these results the following way: most students improved their results,
some of them improved less than others and some others improved quite a lot; therefore, there were
more students that improved their scores significantly. The two students who were not able to increase
their scores may be explained as they were already failing the year by the time the post test was given.
Concerning the scores item by item, the table below shows how many points the students
increased their average score in each item. Concerning the scores of the reading part, these were better
than the first time they took the test, especially in the items that were focused on evaluating lexical
knowledge. I consider that some students did really well as in the case of the students number 2, 6, 9,
18, 22 and 24 who obtained low scores in the pre-tests and increased over 20 and even 33 points in the
post-test. In terms of written production scores also improved quite a lot, especially students number 2,
6, 9, 18, 22 and 24 who obtained low scores in the pre-tests and increased over 20 and even 30 points
in the post-test. In general all the scores improved but the exception of the student who was failing the
year. Most of them increased at least one point what indicates that students did better in all the items of
the test.
Score per item
IX
X-I
X-II
XI
XII
15
15
15
10.8
Post-test students average score 3.7 5.6 4.8 2.5 5.8 2.9 2.5 6.7 4.4
13.6
12 4.2 7.7
Ideal Score
Pre-test students average score
II
III
IV
VI
VII VIII
3
10
2.8 3.6
Table 8 shows students averages in the two sections of the test, as well as the averages obtained both
times of the examination.
The table 9 on the next page shows a comparison between the percentage of students who
obtained the median, the ones whose result were below and over the median. The table reflects that
there is no great difference between the percentages in both tests but the difference is in the median
itself. There were no significant differences between students who obtained the median which
remained the same in both the pre and the post tests.
Reading
Students below the median
Writing
Pre-test Post-Test
Pre-test
Post-Test
12 50% 12 50%
11 46%
11 46%
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12 50% 12 50%
11 46%
11 46%
2
2
4
0%
24 %
0%
24 100%
8%
8%
100% 24 100%
Table 9 shows how many students were below and over the median in both sections
of the test in the pre and post test.
Concerning the median, in the reading part of the pre-test it was 28,5 points and in the pos-test
it was 38,5 points, whereas in the writing part it was 26 points and in the pos-test it was 39 points. That
shows that in general students scores increased despite of the fact that there are extreme values that
could influence the mean in general. Even though the results in the reading and writing sections of the
pos-test were as low as 25 and 12 points respectively, and as high as 49 (reading) and 49 (writing)
points, there was no great influence in the median.
Another statistical result that gives an idea of how the students improved is the central
tendency. Below is the central tendency table that shows the typical values of the data. Here it is shown
that the mean increased in both sections of the post-test. Also the mode(s) and the median were higher
than in the pre-test.
Group
Reading
Central Tendency
X
Mode(s) Median
Pre-test 28.04
Post-test 38.8
26, 30
35, 45
28.5
38.5
Writing
X
23.2
37.4
Central Tendency
Mode(s)
5, 23, 26, 28, 29, 31,
32
44
Median
26
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Table 10 Shows the average obtained by learners as well as the mode(s) and the median.
The dispersion table below shows a comparison between the results of both tests and
summarizes the data presented in the previous tables. The results of the standard deviation in the post
tests show that the groups became more homogenous, especially in the reading section.
Group
Pre-test
Post-test
Reading
Dispersion
Low High Range SD
12
25
40
49
29
25
8.1
5.7
Writing
Dispersion
Low High Range SD
3
12
36
49
34
38
9.5
8.8
Table 11 Shows the dispersion of the two examinations. It also presents the range and the
standard deviation.
Concerning the t-test, the intervention period was statistically significant as the observed
values for t were higher than the critical value for t and in that sense it ratifies the hypothesis as table
12 on the next page shows.
Reading
Writing
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Observed
value
for t
9,8248
Observed
value
for t
5,1973
Degrees of
freedom
46
0,05
Critical value
for t
1,6794
Significance
YES
Table 12 shows the T-test of both sections of the test proving that the intervention period
was statistically significant.
To conclude the analysis there are four charts which compare the pre and post tests. The first
two charts show the scores that students obtained in the reading section and the next two charts the
writing section.
It can be clearly seen in blue (Graph 16) that students in general achieved better scores in the
post-test, suggesting a real development in their reading and collocation skills. In the other chart (Graph
17) it can be seen in red that most students scores were around the middle (from 25 to 25) in the pre
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test, whereas in the post test (presented in blue) they clearly made a progress towards the higher scores,
implying that there also was an increment in their performance.
are
the
the
the
Both graphic depictions show students progress in the post test. In the first chart (Graph 18)
the blue color (post test) clearly surpasses the red bar (pre test) suggesting that students improved their
writing skills by the end of the instruction period. Also, it shows that most students moved their scores
from the middle to the higher scores (Graph 19) which implies that students had a significant increment
in the development of their writing skills. Even though some learners did not improve much, they still
obtained better results by the end of the instruction period.
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VIII IX
10
6
3.5 2.2
6.7 4.4
collocation
In table 13 we can see the four items already mentioned being compared. The improvement in
those items was good considering that students gained from 0.8 to 3.2 points, which suggests that
students were able to increase their collocation knowledge. In general these results show that there was
collocation knowledge development in students which suggests that activities and instructions were
effective for students.
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The scores that were obtained by students in the pre-test showed that their comprehension was
fair as the mean suggests (28,04) but they had little collocation knowledge. The objective was to
improve their lexical understanding and thus increase their reading comprehension achievements. In
my opinion the results shown in Table 13 represent a poor previous knowledge in terms of collocations
which could explain why the results of students in the pre-test were not better. In contrast with the pretest, the post-test results which mean was 38,8 points showed that there was a significant enhancement
in students reading comprehension and collocation knowledge. The results obtained by students before
the intervention period were fair, but after the intervention the scores were much higher.
St-T: Our objectives for today are to read a text comprehensibly and write a short text using collocations
Fs: Teacher what are collocations?
St-T: Ok, lets remember what collocations are. We have discussed this in previous lessons.
Ms: Collocations son las combinaciones de palabras teacher
St-T: Excellent Fernando, very good. So these are combinations of words. What type of combinations
/The teacher takes notes on the board/
Ms: Combinaciones po teacher. As de esas que hay dos o ms palabras.
St-T: Si Kevin, eso est bien pero me refiero a algunos de los tipos de combinaciones. Por ejemplo, verb plus
preposition
/He continues taking notes on the board/
Ms: Ah si teacher. El otro era adjective noun.
Degrees of
freedom
Critical value
for t
Significance
9.8248
46
0,05
1.6794
YES
Table 14 shows the T-test of the reading section of the test. It proves that the results
were statistically significant.
The statistical values also suggest that there was a significant increment in lexical knowledge
as the observed value for t (9.8248) was greater than the critical value for t (1.6794). These values
indicate that the presence of collocation knowledge could have influenced students improvement
during the instruction period.
In this sample of field note (Extract 6), students show that they were able to form the possible
collocations for a word, in this case TV set. This demonstrates that students not only were able to
identify collocations in a text but also they were able to form the correct collocations out of their
knowledge of the world and what they had already studied.
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St-T: Ok, you seem ready now. Lets check the activity. Any volunteer to correct the activity on the board?
Ms: Me teacher
St-T: Very good Daniel. Complete the verbs column
/The student writes the answers on the board/
St-T: Very good Daniel. Great work. Any other volunteer
Fs: Me teacher
St-T: Very good Karen. Complete the adjectives list
/The students writes the answers on the board/
In the extract below (Extract 7) students show that they are capable not only to understand the
meaning of a word but also they are able to classify it according to the function that serves in a given
text. Here they demonstrate that they acquired lexical knowledge that helped them improve their
reading comprehension. In this case they were able to understand and classify signal words. To
conclude the analysis of the reading section, students were able to attain the general objective of
developing reading comprehension after the explicit teaching of collocations in different types of texts.
St-T: Ok, you had enough time to complete the activity. I think it wasnt very difficult for some of you but I hope all
of you did well. I want to listen to Kevin with the second one
Ms: contrast teacher
St-T: Very good Kevin
Ms: Eso
St: Ok, number three, two separate. Is it chronological order, contrast or other text pattern according to what you
read?
Fs: It is chronological order.
St-T: Are you sure Monica?
Ms: No teacher, contrast
St-T: Very good Fernando, it is contrast because of the word separate. Now number 4, although. We have studied
this word in class many times. What does it mean?
Fs: Aunque teacher
St-T: Very good Cristina. Now is it chronological order, contrast or other or no text patter?
Fs: Contrast teacher
St-T: Excellent Cristina. Number 5, to create
Now I am going to analyze the attainment of the general objective based on the written
production achievements.
In the writing section learners results, which were shown and explained in the analysis of
quantitative data, suggested that the explicit teaching of collocations can improve students average
written production achievements. By the start of the intervention period some students were able to
write in English making many mistakes and/or producing very little text. It was proven in items X-II
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and XII that most students were not able to write extensively as the table below shows. In both items
students were required to produce texts. Before the instruction period the scores obtained by learners in
these items were very low, especially in item XII in which students were required to write a letter to a
friend. By the end of the instruction period, and after the practice of the writing skill students were able
to increase significantly their results.
Score per item
X-II XII
Ideal Score
15 15
Pre-test students average score
6
3,6
Post-test students average score 12,0 7,7
Table 15 Shows students outcomes in the
writing section in which they had to use
collocation knowledge to write.
These items were designed to tests students skill to write extensively using text patterns and
collocations. The results obtained by them in the post test showed that students increased from 6 to 4
points an average in their writing skill when they were required to write extensively. Those final results
(Table 15) suggest that most students were able to develop the writing skill, probably because of the
explicit instruction of collocations which could have helped them improve in terms of fluency. Also, the
activities allowed them to write as they did not have many chances to write before the instruction
period. It can be concluded that students had more experiences in writing by the end of the instruction
period than they had before.
St-T: It is time to check. I have seen some very good sentences. Please, any volunteers?
Fs: Me teacher
St-T: Very good Victoria
/The student writes on the board a sentence/
St-T: Ok, lets see. I will destroy my old fashioned TV set. Will you? Ok, its very good Victoria, sit down please.
Anyone else? Kevin, please.
/The students goes to the board and writes his sentence/
St-T: I will buy a LCD TV set. Excellent Kevin very good
(Two more students go to the board to write their sentences)
In extract 8 it is shown the kind of sentences that students were able to produce. As they were
not fluent writers at the beginning and had some problems to carry out writing tasks, the student-
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teacher asked them to produce simple sentences in which they were able to use collocations they had
already studied. The sample (Extract 8) shows that students were quite proficient in writing simple
sentences and had incorporated the use of some collocations.
Katerine Mol. (Pre test)
XII
Thank you for your letter. I went to August for holidays. I slept in a tent and it rained every day. I couldnt swim
because it was forbidden. I couldnt play tennis because my tennis racquet broke. I couldnt dance in the disco
because it was closed. (sic)
Katerine Mol. (Post test)
XII
Thank you for your letter. I went to Punta Arenas for holidays. I went in September. It wasnt great. I slept in a
tent with my sister, but in the night started raining.
It rained every day. I liked swim but I couldnt swim because it was forbidden. When I was played tennis my
tennis racquet broke and I didnt win the game. Also when I went the disco it was closed. (sic)
Extract 9 Students Sample 4. (See appendix 7.7)
In extract 9 it is shown a pre-post test comparison from one of the students. It can be seen that
in the pre-test there are some clear mistakes in the use of collocations such as I went to August for
holidays (sic). It can be compared with the post-test in which the student had incorporated the
collocation go to indicating location. Also it can be seen that in the pre-test there is little use of
connectors. It can only be found the use of and and because, whereas in the post test the student was
able to use but, and, and also. In addition, in the second piece of writing, the student was able to
include more information and organize it in a better way.
Karen Calfin (Pre test)
X-II
Hi! My name is Karen. Im 15 year old live on Purranque, Chile. I have got long dark hair I brown eyes. Im
quite short, like basquetball. I can play tennis and football very well. (sic)
X-II
Hello! My name is Karen and Im sixteen years old. I live in Purranque, Chile. I have got long dark hair and
brown eyes. Im quite short and slim. I love playing basquetball and I can play tennis. Please e-mail me today!
(sic)
Extract 10 Students Sample 2. (See appendix 7.7)
In extract number 10 there is also a comparison between pre and post test. In the pre-test some
clear mistakes can be seen in the use of connectives and organization of ideas. We can see a wrong
collocation live on which seems to be a literal translation. In contrast, in the post test in can be seen that
this student not only got the right collocation, but also increased substantially her spelling and the
amount of information that she was able to provide about herself, being able to describe her appearance
and interests. Also it is quite remarkable that by the end she was able to use a pre-fabricated item
(collocation) such as Please e-mail me today!. This suggests that the student was able to incorporate
collocation knowledge to the production skill.
Observed
value
for t
Degrees of
freedom
Critical value
for t
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Significance
5.1973
46
0,05
1.6794
YES
The instruction period proved its significance in the writing section as most students were able
to increase their results and develop the ability to write extensively as the observed value for t (5.1973)
was higher than the critical value for t (1.6794). It implies that the level of students proficiency by the
end of the instruction period was better, because most students were able to increase their achievements
in the writing part of the evaluation.
In conclusion, reading comprehension increased thanks to the explicit instruction of
collocations. Thus the written production increased as students were able to read, understand and
analyze texts as well as identify, form and extract collocations that they could use later to write a piece
of text. Learners were required to write, check and analyze their outputs, as well as receiving
feedback from the student-teacher. In some cases they had to re-write what was already corrected from
their works. I think the type of activities and analysis carried out during the instruction period helped
learners development of strategies to acquire vocabulary (collocation knowledge) so that by the end
they had learned and incorporated different types of collocations and prefabricated sentences which
aided them in developing fluency and lexical competence.
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In this innovative project three specific objectives were stated. The first specific objective was
to describe the strategies students use to write during the direct instruction period. In the following
lines data that justifies the attainment of this specific objective will be presented.
4
18
2
In this question of the survey, it was determined whether students planned their work before
writing anything. The results showed that most students were using the planning strategy to develop
their writing which may have influenced their final outcomes in a positive way.
8. Trato de recordar la forma de escritura de alguna historia
que he ledo para poder escribir mi propia versin.
5
a) siempre
17
b) a veces
2
c) nunca
Question number 8 reflects that most students tried to remember a text pattern they had already
studied to write their own tasks. It suggests that most students had already incorporated the strategies
that were encouraged by the student-teacher at the beginning of the instruction period in terms of
planning and resourcing for writing.
9. Cuando escribo en ingls:
10 a) escribo y despus reviso mi trabajo chequeando si hay errores de
forma
6 b) escribo, reviso y pido la correccin del profesor(a)
8 c) escribo pero no me importa si me corrigen o no
Another strategy that I was able to identify doing qualitative analysis was revising. It was clear
in this aspect that the majority of students checked their work or had it checked by the student-teacher.
Nevertheless, there was an important number that did not care about the form of their work and would
not have it corrected anyhow.
St-t: Now start to work. Im going to help you if you need anything. Remember that the activity will be graded. Also
hand it in a different piece of paper () Acuerdense que es con nota y que tienen que entregar en hoja aparte.
Fs: Teacher help please
St-T: All right Mayo. Im comming.
(During this time most student work and ask for the student-teacher help. They ask him for vocabulary and spelling
of words.)
In extract 10, there is evidence that confirms what students answered in the questionnaire.
Most of them would ask the teacher for help, especially resourcing vocabulary. Some of them
presented their work for corrections and guidance on how to do it right. Concerning the first objective,
the main strategies used by students were planning, resourcing and revising.
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Regarding the second objective which was to detect the effect of collocation knowledge on the
development of students reading comprehension and writing skill, I consider that collocation
knowledge was essential in the development of this project. There were many activities oriented to
developing collocation knowledge. They were presented to teach vocabulary and to prepare writing
mainly. The results of the post-test clearly show how the effect of collocation knowledge influenced
students performance.
Score per item
Ideal Score
II
III
IV
VI
VII
VIII
IX
X-I
X-II
XI
XII
10
15
15
15
3.5
2.2
10,8
2,8
3,6
6.7
4.4
13,6
12
4,2
7,7
Table 17 shows students results both in the pre and post tests in the reading (items I to IX) and writing (X-I to
XII) sections of the instrument.
The table (17) above presents and increment in the average of most items, especially in those
designed to assess collocation knowledge (items III, VI, VIII and IX). Although the results in the
reading comprehension items were not considerably higher, it can be explained due to some students
appropriate knowledge of English at the beginning of the instruction. By the end, the intervention
period led to a more homogenous group in which least advantaged learners improved the most getting
closer to most knowledgeable classmates. Also this table shows a positive increment in written
production especially in extensive writing (items X-II and XII) where in general students increased
from 6 to 4 points. It can be said that collocation knowledge did have a positive influence on the
development of reading and writing skills of least advantaged students. The contrast between the two
measurements shows that at first students reading comprehension was good but they were not skilled
writers, whereas by the end they continued having good comprehension, improved their written
production and developed some lexical competence.
With respect to the third objective to verify the level of proficiency that students can
accomplish after a period of explicit instruction of collocations in their reading and writing
development it can be said that the results were positive as Graph 20 shows. Almost all students were
able to improve their scores after the instruction period. Only one student was below her pre-test
results and one remained the same. Students improved their scored from 1 to 33 points which is a huge
increment concerning their proficiency in reading.
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Graph 20 shows comparison between the two measurements (pre and post tests) both for the reading and writing
skills. The results of the post test can be seen in blue which clearly surpass the results of the pre test in red.
The figure above (Graph 20) shows both skills being depicted in graph bars. For both skills the
pre-test was presented in red bars and the post test in blue bars. The blue bars are a graphic
representation of students improvements in the second examination. Based on that comparison, it can
be said that the third objective was met and that it was possible to verify the level of proficiency that
students gained by the end of the intervention period.
St-T: All right. Lets check the activity. The first sentence, number seventeen says Michael loves his wife. Which
sentence or sentences from column A justify statement number seventeen
Ms: Number one teacher
St-T: Very good Fernando
Fs: Teacher pero tambin puede ser la number three.
St-T: Yes Katerine. Very good. You are right. Remember that for some statements there may be more than one
possible answer. Now lets work number eighteen, Michael is sad
Ms: Number one teacher
St-T: Very good Rudy. Is there any other possibility? () All right, the following, Michael remembers his wife.
Fs: Number 1
The extract 11 shows students performance when correcting tasks orally. They were able not
only to give a correct answer but also to decide if there was more than one possible correct solution for
a task. This shows that students improvement in terms of their reading proficiency was good.
Regarding their written proficiency students results confirmed that while it was still their most
difficult area to develop, their results were better than in the pre-test as the figure above (Graph 20)
shows. Most students were able to write more fluently by the end of the instruction period using
collocations, and text patterns from texts they had already studied. Their performances were better as
they were given plenty of production tasks as they pointed it out in the survey in question number 11.
11. En la clase estn dadas las oportunidades para que usted pueda escribir en ingls ya sea oraciones,
prrafos, cartas, cuentos, etc.
20
a) Si, hay gran variedad de actividades donde se nos pide escribir
4
b) Si, pero slo a veces se nos pide escribir
0
c) No, no se nos pide escribir o son muy pocas las veces.
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Here the 24 students who answered the survey said that they had plenty of chances to write
during the lesson. In conclusion the analysis of the pre- and post test comparison, as well as the field
notes and survey results represent the supporting evidence to validate the attainment of this third
objective. While most students developed their collocation knowledge, they were also able to improve
their reading comprehension achievements and write more fluently using collocations and texts
patterns they had already analyzed.
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Writing
Observed
value
for t
5.1973
Degrees of
freedom
46
0,05
Critical value
for t
1.6794
Significance
YES
To sum up, the three research questions What are the strategies students use to develop a
writing task?, What is the level of proficiency when reading and writing that students can accomplish
after a period of explicit instruction of collocations? and What are the difficulties students face when
they read a text and begin writing? have been answered in the analysis of quantitative data and the
attainment of objectives. The strategies students used to write were clearly identified. Students were
able to use the strategies of planning and revising most of the times during the instruction period. The
level of proficiency was tested using the pre and posts test comparison. It showed that most students
improved their level of understanding of English considerably. Considering written production,
students were able to write more in the post-test. The difficulties students faced were identified. They
could understand general ideas most of the times and very few students were not able to understand a
text. They could identify the theme of a reading passage depending on the text they were presented to
read and sometimes they were able to identify the text type. In terms of their written production they
had troubles checking their work and as some of them pointed out that they were careless and did not
revise their outcomes.
In conclusion the strategies that students used to write helped them improve their written
production. Their level of proficiency, in terms of reading, was increased and they gained a lot of
lexical knowledge. Considering their written production, they were able to write more extensively by
the end of the instruction period though some of them were still not that accurate, thus proving that
collocation knowledge can enhance fluency.
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4.4 Categorization
The following tables categorize the qualitative data (field notes and lesson plans) I considered
the most relevant for the purpose of my final report. The student-teachers role, the students role, the
classroom interaction, the classroom resources and the teaching strategies are the aspects that I would
like to analyze in the following table.
Approach
Student-teachers Role
The lessons prepared focused on the improvement of reading and writing. For
this purpose, various activities aiming the acquisition of lexical knowledge were
presented. Most of lessons were based on teaching collocations to student and
Planner
Provider and
manager
became the provider of vocabulary and explanations and also the manager of the
interaction in the classroom. He also was monitor of the activities and provided
Vocabulary
Use of English
class and thus all the stages of the lesson could be attained.
At the beginning the intervention started with an accommodation using English
and Spanish most of the time. Gradually activities and exercises started to be
taught entirely in English. The instruction period ended with the student-teacher
Discipline
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lesson.
Timing
Timing of the lesson failed at the beginning of the instruction period because I
gave too much time to students to develop their tasks. It gradually started
changing as the time assigned for each task was established so students had to
finish all tasks during the time of the lesson. It was one of my weaknesses
through the intervention period, because not all activities were finished and
Monitor
Continuous
were helped by the instructor with special attention to less advantaged students.
There was a continuous assessment carried out by the student teacher. He in
assessment
every class graded students performance as well as their attitude in the lesson in
a rubric.
Students
Participation
Some students participated while others expected to copy the answers on the
board. This attitude was maintained for some students during the first term and
was later changed almost by the end of the second term. Some students worked
hard during lessons while others did not even participate. At the end of the
intervention period most students changed this behavior and started to get more
Level
English skills
results.
Students had problems with recognizing collocations and structures. They
considered reading a tedious activity and they did not like it when they were
asked to read articles or letters, for instance. As the instruction period was being
carried out students improved their performance although some of them still
Use of English
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Resources
project.
I prepared handouts, flashcards and pictures in advanced for the lessons. I also
used Bristol boards in which scripts and explanations were presented for
students. I prepared PowerPoint presentations to introduce vocabulary and
Sources
Setting up a context
Teaching Strategies
Lessons began by setting up the objectives of the activities to be developed. I
also helped students understand the theme of the class by brainstorming ideas
and helping them recall previous knowledge of the topic. Sometimes I used
pictures and mimicry to be able to set the context of the lesson and it was
Checking activities
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lexical knowledge could enhance students average reading and writing. This study analyzed
quantitative and qualitative data which allowed me to draw some conclusions.
First, lexical knowledge is an important aspect to be taken into consideration when reading and
writing in any language. In my personal opinion it cannot be excluded from any approach to teach or
learn foreign languages. Furthermore, based on my findings, it can be clearly stated that it should be at
the core of any language curriculum as it is a powerful tool to improve the four linguistic abilities in
English, because it can help increase students reading comprehension though it may already be at an
appropriate level.
In addition, the quantitative data analyzed showed that the students results were statistically
significant. I must say that students outcomes were good, especially for those learners whose reading
and writing skills had not been highly developed at the beginning of the innovation project. They were
the statistical proof that lexical knowledge can improve the results obtained by students. It verified the
hypothesis that if someone can improve their collocation knowledge, they can also improve their
reading comprehension and thus their written production, implying a direct relationship between the
two skills.
Also, the data gathered and analyzed helped me realize that students whose reading and writing
skills were in an appropriate level were not the ones who increased the most, but they were able to
improve their collocation knowledge considerably. It is important to notice that this project was highly
successful among students whose first results were not as positive compared to the best students. By
the end of the instruction period, the less advantaged students were the ones able to increase their
achievements the most. This study suggests that most of the students developed lexical strategies that
helped them enhance their collocation competence.
Taking into account the results shown by this research, there were some factors that should be
considered that might limit the scope of this project. One of the factors is the amount of years students
had studied English before, and the hours a week they had English lessons. Because English was a
important subject in the school, most of them had been part of an early development of the English
starting from kindergarten which amounted to almost 11 years learning the language by the time of the
intervention period. It may have benefited the results of this project in a positive way influencing
students outcomes in terms of lexical development. Also, they had 5 hours of English a week, meaning
they had one extra hour with another teacher besides the 4 hours of explicit instruction with the
student-teacher. Although not related to the project, the extra hour of work could have influenced the
results of the test. These two factors might have had some effect and they should be taken into
consideration for anyone who wants to replicate this research.
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Besides the concerns already mentioned about the intervention period, this innovative project
may have some implications for future researches. This study took into account the direct relationship
of two skills and the acquisition of collocation knowledge by means of explicit instruction. A study that
could be carried out in the future may include the development of collocation knowledge as well as
vocabulary strategies to improve the other two skills such as listening or speaking. Since, in this case,
the acquisition of collocation knowledge had a great impact on learners, it would be interesting to
know how it could affect the other abilities.
In this study, twenty four students showed that they were able to improve in their average
reading comprehension and written production achievements; therefore, I think that using the same
methodology in a research project with more students should have the same results. Also the core of
this project which is enhancing reading and writing by means of explicit instruction of collocations
may have helped students develop strategies to be better readers and writers and learn vocabulary
(collocations) in a more efficient way, so this same concept could be used to improve any of the four
skills.
Finally, this research intended to offer a new perspective towards the development of reading
and writing as two directly related skills by means of enhancing lexical development, which could
influence others in approaching the development of the four language skills in the future.
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7. Appendices
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FIELD NOTE 1
58
SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
59
This lesson students start reviewing a concept that they had studied the previous lesson. The
class is part of a unit review to prepare the test that was due for the following day. Students work
individually most of the times developing 2 handouts with exercises, most of the activities consist on
fill in the blanks.
School
Teacher
Subject
Class
Number of students
:
:
:
:
:
60
61
14:48
14:57
15:04
62
15:07
15:15
15:24
63
15:31
15:38
64
15:46
15:52
15:56
65
15:58
16:00
note)
(The teacher in several time has had to call
the attention to some students)
Ms: I think English is difficult
T: You didnt work. We are in number 7 ()
Ms: I think that physics is an easy subject
Ms: In my opinion football is a good sport
T: Kevin Rivera
Ms: Cul miss?
T: Anyone
Ms: In my opinion.no la tengo
T: Daniel Rosas? Guillermo Ruiz
Fs: I think that math is a boring subject
Fs: I dont think English is a difficult subject
T: Robinson Vargas, read your opinion
(The student did not answer because of the
bell)
The bell rings and students leave
T: Study for the test.
FIELD NOTE 2
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students.
Correction happens in the same
way as all the activities.
Probably the teacher should find
another way to correct tasks as
the one she uses does not
work.
Timing of the lesson has shown
to be another problem. When
the bell rang the teacher was
still correcting the activity.
No closure of the lesson and
revision of what was studied
were seen at the end. This
might difficult recalling of
information of the lesson in
another time.
SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
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In this lesson students start a new unit which is called Love Life. This is a listening and reading
class taken from the course book. Students work individually most of the times developing 2 handouts
with exercises, answering questions to check comprehension.
School
Teacher
Subject
68
Class
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: 23
Time of the lesson
: 14:30 to 16:00
Date
: April 10th, 2008
Ethnographer
: Victor Aguilera Obando
14: 32 /The bell went off and the students entered
the classroom. It took them some time to get
ready for the lesson/
T: Sit down please
Ms: Hola miss
/Students chat and walk around the
classroom/
14:36 T: Good Afternoon
Silence please. Today we are going to start
with a new unit. Love Life
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14:50
14:55
70
15:00
15:03
15:06
71
15:08
The
teacher
asks
some
personal questions. It could help
her recapture attention from
students.
Ms: Aah, esa era la diferencia, ese era con
doble e.
(Some students make jokes about the word
and how confusing is English for them. They
seem more interested in chatting than
working.)
(the teacher continues explaining the
vocabulary and asking questions)
T: Who is going out with someone? Are you
going out with someone? No?
15:11
72
15:16
15:20
15:23
15:29
15:35
15:39
15:42
15:46
73
15:56
15:57
The bell goes off and students
were still working. Timing was
not appropriate for the final
activity. It suggest either that
there was a poor plannign or
that
students
commanded
lesson instead of the teacher.
16:00
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FIELD NOTE 3
SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
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School
: Colegio Ingls Purranque
Teacher
: Liliana Aguilar
Subject
: English
Class
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: 25
Time of the lesson
: 10:15 to 11:45
Date
: April 11th, 2008
Ethnographer
: Victor Aguilera Obando
10:15 /The bell goes off and students start to enter The lesson begins and students
the classroom. It takes them some time to are very noisy. When the teacher
organize themselves in the classroom/
starts to talk they do not diminish
T: Sit down please
their noise. It might suggest little
(Students talk at a very loud tone of voice, class management from part of
they dont seem to pay attention to the the teacher. She should not start
teacher)
her lesson until all students are
T: Sit down Camilo.
in their seats and ready to start
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the lesson.
10:23
10:30
78
10:37
10:44
79
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Only
few
students
seem
interested
in
solving
the
assignment. Probably these are
the only students who were able
to understand the text and
activities.
11:26
11:33
11:40
11:45
and scores
(Few students approach the teacher to check
their scores and grades. Others dont even
bother to see the test.)
T: Are you working in the activity?
(The teacher stands up again and continues
monitoring the activity)
T: All right. Many students are asking about
the word jealous. It is a feeling when you
want what someone else has. When I want
the cell phone that Kevin has and I dont have
it, for instance.
Ms: Celos, Miss
T: Yes, very good.
/she writes on the board/
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Students
who
ask
about
vocabulary proved that there
was a need for a vocabulary
introduction at the beginning of
the lesson. Probably it could
have helped students whose
language knowledge is limited
and do not understand texts
well.
The fact that some students
have required for help from the
ethnographer, especially the
students at the back prove that
they needed help and required
for the teachers assistance. She
probably should walk around the
whole
classroom
so
that
students can ask their doubts.
SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
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In this lesson students work in the unit called Love Life. This is a listening and reading class
taken from the course book. Students work individually most of the times developing 2 handouts with
exercises, answering questions to check comprehension.
School
Teacher
:
:
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Subject
:
: English
Class
:
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: : 23
Time of the lesson
:
: 14:30 to 16:00
Date
: : April 17th, 2008
Ethnographer
: : Victor Aguilera Obando
14:
/The bell went off 5 minutes late. The Students at this time always are
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students entered the classroom. It took them reluctant to work. This might
some time to get ready for the lesson/
cause
distractions
and
T: Good Afternoon
misbehavior.
Y usted, no se sienta ah? Andrea, sit down
please. Felipe? ()
T: Open your book on page 14
The teacher starts the lesson
Fs: Qu pgina miss?
using the course book. Too much
T: Fourteen
dependence on the course book
Ok, who has the book? You? You? (asking might cause problems as not all
the students to see if they brought their the students have the text book to
books) Do you have the books? ()
work.
Ok, Im going to borrow this here (She lends
her book to a group of students)
A ver, quin se puede ir a conseguir libros Problems arise with the course
al otro curso?
books. Maybe this is spoiling most
(The teacher asks students if they can go to of the lessons. It might turn difficult
the other class and ask for books)
for the teacher to control the
T: OK, so you have to write. Ok, lets see. Im pacing of the class without having
14:42 going to write the questions and then you you the materials.
will have to answer.
Now the teacher has to write the
questions. This might help the
teacher force students to work. It
also may take time to finish other
tasks.
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14:50
14:52
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T: Camilo!
You will have to answer these questions. (she
reads aloud the questions she has written on
the board)
T: Here Im going to write the options.
Potions, Kisses, Marriage, Symbols
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14:57
15:01
15:04
15:06
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15:13
15:15
15:19
15:24
Ms: India
(some students brainstorm names of
countries who they think have arrange
marriages)
/The tape is played/
T: 23 veces. A man married 28 times and the
girl married 23 times. Listen they are very
unusual.
Would you like to marry a person which your
parents choose for you?
Ms: Con un pariente?
/The tape is played/
() T: We are now going to listen to kisses
Are you interested in love or money
(The teacher reads)
Ms: Quin es ese?
(This student interrupted the lesson because
he did not bring his book)
T: Listen!
(the teacher continues reading)
T: If a woman kiss that statue, she will marry
a rich man
/The teacher writes on the board/
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FIELD NOTE 1
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SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
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This lesson is part of a unit called On Screen which is related to television. The name of lesson
is Making Games in which students read a text about video games and how these are made. Students
work individually and in pairs using their course book and a handout prepared by the student-teacher.
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School
: Colegio Ingls Purranque
Teacher
: Vctor Aguilera
Subject
: English
Class
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: 25
Time of the lesson
: 14:30 to 16:00
Date
: October 16th 2008
Ethnographer
: Carolina Caucao
14: 32 /The bell went off late. The students entered
the classroom. It took them some time to get
ready for the lesson/
St-T: Good Afternoon students, how are you
today?
Sts: Fine
Fs: Teacher cmo le ha ido
St-T: Fine, and you?
Fs: Ok
St-T: Are you ready to work?
Sts: No
Ms: Teacher nos da tiempo para elegir a
nuestro rey y reina?
14:39 St-T: Ok. Im going to give you 5 minutes at
the most. Solo les voy a dar 5 minutos
/the teacher sets his materials and hands in a
handout/
(Students carried out an election. It took them
about 7 minutes. During this time the teacher
wrote the name of the lesson and the
objective)
St-T: Estamos listos con la votacin es hora
de comenzar la clase.
Rpido chicos, ya po
Remember that our unit is called On Screen
FIELD NOTE 2
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SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
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This lesson is part of a unit called On Screen which is related to television. The name of lesson
is Pride and Prejudice in which students read an extract of a film review. Students work individually
and in pairs using a text taken from internet and a handout prepared by the student-teacher.
School
: Colegio Ingls Purranque
Teacher
: Victor Aguilera
Subject
: English
Class
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: 25
Time of the lesson
: 14:30 to 16:00
Date
: October 23rd,2008
Ethnographer
: Carolina Caucao
14: 30 /The bell went off on time. The students
entered the classroom. It took them some
time to get ready for the lesson/
St-T: Good Afternoon students, how are you
today?
Sts: Good afternoon teacher
St-T: Are you doing ok?
Sts: Yes teacher
(the student-teacher had already written on
the board the name of the lesson and
objectives)
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14:34
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14:41
14:47
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14:52
15:00
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games.
Students have to discover the
correct collocations for words. It
can be helpful if students can
identify a collocation so that they
later use them to read and write
more fluently. Also as a means to
develop vocabulary at all levels,
Spanish translations can help
students whose level of English is
lower.
Students working show that there
is interest in the lesson. The few
students who do not work might
not be interested in the lesson or
probably were not able to relate
what they know with the issue in
discussion.
Corrections start and students are
able to notice correct and incorrect
collocations. They show that they
have already understood what
collocations are and how to
identify them. They were able to
form the correct collocation and
relate it to their meaning in
Spanish. It can be helpful for
students to form the correct
collocation and understand its
meaning.
comprehensibly.
15:07
15:13
St-t: In this exercises you have to columns.
In the first one you have the adjectives and in
the second you have the definitions ()
/He shows in the handout the two columns/
St-T: You have to match the words from the
left column with the definitions in the second
column and the meaning in Spanish.
Sts: Yes teacher
/The teacher walks around the classroom and
students start to work/
(During this time most students work
individually. Probably a best way would be to
encourage pair work. Also the teacher helps
students. Most students work and call the
teacher for help, but a few chat and laugh.)
St-T: Are you ready with the activity?
Fs: No todava teacher, hay palabras que no
sabemos
St-T: Ok, which ones?
Fs: esa que dice abuzz no me la s
St-T: Ok. Abuzz is when you are full of
activity ()
/He mimics a lot of movements to explain the
meaning/
Fs: eso es como desordenado
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planned
appropriately.
Many
students finish very quickly while
others still work. It might create
minor disturbances in the class
and interruptions in the students
work. Probably this activity could
have worked better assigning it
less time to be carried out.
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15:41
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15:49
15:55
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16:01
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SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
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This lesson is part of a unit called On Screen which is related to television. The name of lesson
is The History of Television in which students read a text about the invention of the TV set. Students
work individually and in pairs using a text taken from internet and a handout prepared by the studentteacher.
School
: Colegio Ingls Purranque
Teacher
: Victor Aguilera
Subject
: English
Class
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: 25
Time of the lesson
: 14:30 to 16:00
Date
: November 6th, 2008
Ethnographer
: Carolina Caucao
14: 30 /The bell goes off and students start to arrive
at the classroom. Meanwhile the studentteacher writes on the board/
The
lesson
starts
in
a
St-T: Come students, hurry up. Its time to conventional
manner.
The
begin our lesson.
student-teacher
and
the
/The last students arrive at the classroom/
students greet and the lesson
St-T: Good afternoon students. How are you and objectives are presented to
doing today?
the class. It can be helpful to
Sts: Fine teacher
start explaining students what
St-T: Good to hear that. All right, today we they are going to do so that they
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are going to continue working in our unit can anticipate the kind of
which is called On Screen. Our lesson today activities they are going to work.
is called the History of Television.
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14:35
108
14:42
words.
However,
students
worked efficiently and showed
understanding of the activity.
The
two
students
who
completed the activity proved
that they were able to form the
correct collocations for TV set
using what they already new. A
challenge would be to increase
the level of difficulty of words in
this activity.
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14:55
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15:02
15:09
112
15:14
Now
the
student-teacher
presents a new activity. He
prefers to explain the activity in
Spanish as it is a new type of
task. The sequence of activities
and its rising in difficult should
require for better explanations
from the student-teacher. It
might help students to be
explained in Spanish as it is a
new kind of task they have not
developed so far.
St-T: You have twelve minutes to develop the This activity seems stimulating
activity. I will monitor the activity so as to help for students. Many of them start
to work and call the studentyou. Is that ok?
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15:27
15:31
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Students
seem
to
have
understood the task. It is
reflected in their capacity to
correct their classmates using
arguments for their choices. Also
they are able to justify their
answers so as to rule out
chance.
15:27
15:34
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116
15:41
15:48
15:55
15:58
16:00
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SYMBOLS
T: Teacher
: Direct Quotation
/ /: Nonverbal behavior
Sts: Students
St-T: Student-teacher
Teachers table
Windows
Whiteboard
Door
118
This lesson is the start of a new unit called Messages which is related to paranormal
phenomena. The name of lesson is The Guardian in which students read a text about a guardian angel.
Students work individually and in pairs using a text taken from the course book and a handout prepared
by the student-teacher.
School
: Colegio Ingls Purranque
Teacher
: Victor Aguilera
Subject
: English
Class
: 10th grade A
Number of students
: 25
Time of the lesson
: 10:15 to 11:45
Date
: November 21st, 2008
Ethnographer
: Carolina Caucao
10:15 /The bell goes off and students start to arrive
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A vocabulary introduction is
carried out by means of
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10:22
121
10:29
St-T: Is it spirit?
Sts: Yes
St-T: So you put letter C on its corresponding
box meaning that guardian angel is a spirit. Is
it clear?
Sts: Yes teacher
/Students start to work and the studentteacher sits down for a while/
St-T: You have eight minutes to complete the
activity.
/The student-teacher stands up and starts to
walk around the classroom/
(During this time most students work. Some
students at the back finish the activity very
quickly and call the teacher to show him their
answers)
St-T: Ok students, very well done.
St-T: All right, you had enough time. Most of
you are already done so lets check the
activity. Lets check guardian angel. What are
its features?
Sts: Spirit letter d protects people
St-T: Very good. So we have letters C, D and
F. Now for prison guard. What are its correct
features?
Sts: people letter D protects people
gets money letter J.
St-T: All right very good. Lets keep checking
Guard dog ()
(The activity keeps to be corrected the same
way. Most students participate at the same
time. There are minor mistakes that are
clarified and corrected by the studentteacher.)
St-T: Be careful, someone said that the
guard dog gets money. That is not correct.
Probably the guard dog gets some food from
its master but no money.
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10:42
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Probably
the
similarities
between the last two activities
helped students be prepared to
answer the last activity. It also
may suggest that there was a
better sequencing that helped
students develop the task.
St-T: Are you sure? Camilo what do you correct answers by themselves.
have?
Ms: Eso es mirar, as que debera ser
guardian
St-T: All right, very good Camilo. Check your
answer Felipe ()
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10:56
pararse a conversar?
Ms: Ah teacher que no traje mi libro
St-T: Ven yo te voy a dar un texto
/The student-teacher hands the student a
sheet of paper/
St-T: Ya Kevin ahora a trabajar
/The student sits down and starts to read the
text/
(Most students read and develop their
activities. Some call the student-teacher to
ask him for clarifications)
St-T: Hurry up students, last three minutes to
complete the activity.
/The teacher walks around the classroom
monitoring the activity/
St-T: Ok students, lets check the activity. But
before that I want you to tell me what you
understood from the text.
Ms: Se trata del cumpleaos de un viejito
St-T: Ok, what else did you understand?
Sts: Hay un ngel una fiesta de
cumpleaos unas flores ()
(Some students make comments about the
reading. The student-teacher takes notes of
the ideas given by the students in English)
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Apparently
the
activity
presented a certain challenge
11:02
11:09
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11:16
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11:23
128
11:28
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Students
who
ask
for
clarifications proved that there
was a need for sampling of the
activity. It should have been
included in the planning of the
lesson.
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11:45
11:50
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I.
II.
LESSON PLAN 13
IDENTIFICATION OF
THE LESSON
Unit:
On Screen
Name:
Making Games
Class:
10th A grade
School:
Colegio Ingls Purranque
Date:
16th October, 2008 (Thursday)
Time:
14:30 16:00
90 minutes
Student Teacher: Vctor Aguilera
Teacher:
Liliana Aguilar
OBJECTIVES
GENERAL OBJECTIVE.
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III.
IV.
1.
2.
3.
4.
V.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
VI.
VII.
VIII.
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Games companies use expert programmers and other specialists for every part of
the games design and development. For example, for a new game, they have
scenes drawn by artists and have the music written specially by professional
composers.
Another recent change has come from the cinema. The Matrix is not only a film; it
has become a popular computer game too. As you read this, other film companies
are having games made from their new films. You will see adverts for the games
when you watch the films at the cinema.
Computer games are great entertainment for millions of people. There are multigame consoles that allow you to explore the universe or be a competitor in a golf
championship. But when and how did computer games start? What was the first
game and who was it inventor?
Who knows?
2 EM A
16th October, 2008.
Making Games
Name: _____________________________________
Handout N13
I. Which of the following words [1]collocate or [2]dont collocate with computer. Check your answers with the text.
1.
1
games
2.
2
Money
3.
1
company
4.
2
millions
5.
2
graphics
6.
1
To lunch
7.
2
Expert programmers
8.
1
Computer
9.
1
Console
10. 1
Popular
II. First form the collocation with words from the second column. Then, match the collocation with its appropriate
meaning in the third column. Put a [0]for the distracters.
1 Expert
11. 3 Composer
A 1 A person who is skilful in producing computer programs
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2
3
4
Film
Professional
computer
12.
13.
14.
15.
16.
17.
0
0
2
4
0
1
music
cinema
Company
Game
competitor
Programmer
B
C
D
E
F
G
0
2
0
4
0
3
III. Which of the following information is [1]right or [2]wrong according to the text.
18.
2
Computer games companies make a lot of 19. 1
Not all companies can compete in the game
money
industry.
20.
1
Companies invest in commercials as to sell 21. 2
The money paid in the design of graphics for
more games.
films is incredible
22.
2
The graphics, the design and the 23. 2
Specialist that develop games also develop
commercials are develop for the same
films and video clips.
people that develop games.
24.
2
The cinema influenced the music industry.
25. 2
Game computers are only an entertainment for
those who have a computer.
26.
1
No matter who created computer games, 27. 2
Games are sold at the same prize as films.
they entertain people.
IV. Which collocations are related to [1]companies or [2]computer games.
28.
1
a lot of money
29. 2
Great entertainment
30.
2
Music written
31. 1
Compete to
32.
1
Spend a lot of
33. 2
Allow to
34.
2
The best graphics
35. 1
Expert programmer
36.
1
millions of
37. 2
Be a competitor
V. Given your assigned set collocations write a short paragraph about any company.
38. The companies
that dominate
the computer games market
39. The companies
make
a lot of money
40. companies
spend
millions
41. They
also spend
a lot.
42. as they
compete
TO DESIGN the best game WITH the best graphics
43. Games companies
use
expert programmers and other specialists FOR every
part of the game
44. they
have scenes drawn have the BY artists and specially
music written
BY professional composers
45. Another recent change
has come
FROM the cinema.
____________________________________________________________________________
I.
LESSON PLAN 14
IDENTIFICATION OF THE LESSON
Unit:
On Screen
Name:
Pride and Prejudice
Class:
10th A grade
School:
Colegio Ingls Purranque
Date:
23rd October, 2008 (Thursday)
Time:
14:30 16:00
90 minutes
Student Teacher: Vctor Aguilera
Teacher:
Liliana Aguilar
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II.
III.
IV.
1.
2.
3.
4.
V.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
IX.
X.
XI.
OBJECTIVES
GENERAL OBJECTIVE.
To read a text comprehensibly and produce a piece of writing using collocations
SPECIFIC OBJECTIVES
To discover the possible collocations for a word in a text.
To infer the meaning of words in context
To identify the context in which collocations are used
To write a short commentary about a film
CONTENTS
Functions :
Commenting a film
Vocabulary:
Snob, proposal, marriage, doting, wealthy, abuzz, serene,
good-natured, encouraging, spirited
Collocations :
Set future, close of, aware of, fixation of, strive to, influx of,
inclined to, circle of, shortage of, poised to, the close of.
Skills :
Reading and Writing
ACTIVITIES
Students are introduced the lesson and objectives. The teacher will show students
pictures of the 19th century. They are going to be proposed a discussion about
marriage in the old times. (10 minutes)
In item I students have to check a set of given collocations in the text. They have to
decide if the proposed collocations are right or wrong, correct when needed and also
match the collocations with their meaning in Spanish. (15 minutes)
In activity II students have to infer the meaning of seven adjectives in the contexts
they are used. They have to match them with their correct definitions in English and
match them with their translation in Spanish. (15 minutes)
In activity III students have to decide in which situations the collocations strive to,
poised to, and inclined to are correctly used. They work in pairs to complete the
activity (15 minutes)
In activity IV, students have to read a text and answer true or false according to a
designed premise for each item. Students work in pairs to complete the activity. (15
minutes)
A short summary of the lesson is carried out pointing out the most important
collocations studied in the lesson and what students understood about the text.
ASSESSMENT.
FORMATIVE
In activity V students have to read to film commentaries. They analise the words in
bold and write a short commentary about any film they have seen recently. (20
minutes)
RESOURCES:
(1)Yahoo
Movies,
Pride
&
Prejudice
(2005)
<http://movies.yahoo.com/movie/1808657001/details>
(2)Evans, V. & Dooley, J. (2002). Upstream Intermediate. Newbury: Express
Publishing.
MATERIALS:
Pictures
Markers
Whiteboard
Handouts
Dictionaries
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Bennet sisters--Elizabeth, or Lizzie, Jane, Lydia, Mary, and Kitty--have been raised well
aware of their mother's fixation on finding them husbands and securing set futures. The
spirited and intelligent Elizabeth, however, strives to live her life with a broader perspective,
as encouraged by her doting father. When wealthy bachelor Mr. Bingley takes up residence
in a nearby mansion, the Bennets are abuzz. Amongst the man's sophisticated circle of
London friends and the influx of young militia officers, surely there will be no shortage of
suitors for the Bennet sisters. Eldest daughter Jane, serene and beautiful, seems poised to
win Mr. Bingley's heart. For her part, Lizzie meets with the handsome and--it would seem-snobbish Mr. Darcy, and the battle of the sexes is joined. Their encounters are frequent and
spirited yet far from encouraging. Lizzie finds herself even less inclined to accept a marriage
proposal from a distant cousin, Mr. Collins.
2 EM A
23rd October, 2008.
PRIDE AND PREJUDICE
Name:_____________________________________
Handout N14
I. Which words go with the following collocations is [1]correct or [2]wrong. What is the correct preposition?
1.
2 The close in _____ OF Al cierre de
2.
1 Inclined to _____ tener una tendencia hacia
3.
1 Strive to _____ esforzarce para
4.
2 Circle for _____OF circulo de
5.
2 Influx on _____OF llegada de
6.
1 Shortage of _____ escases de
7.
2 Fixation to _____OF fijacin en
8.
2 Inclined for ____TO inclinado a
II. Match the following adjectives (1-7)with their corresponding meanings
A
Class-conscious fijado en la clase 9. C Having a lot of money
social
B
Spirited energico
10. E peaceful and calm; troubled by nothing
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C
D
Wealthy adinerado
Abuzz alborotado
11. F
12. A
E
F
G
13. B
14. G
15. D
pleasant or friendly
very aware of the differences between the various social
classes
enthusiastic and determined
making you feel more confidence or hope
filled with noise and activity
III. Which of the following actions you: [1]strive to (try very hard) [2]are poised to (ready to do sth at any moment) or
[3]are inclined to (tend to feel sth)
16.
1 overcome poverty
17.
2 Take action
18.
3 Accept a proposal
19.
2 Attack an enemy
20.
1 Be successful in life
21.
3 Do as you are told
22.
3 Give a second chance
23.
1 Earn a degree
24.
1 Achieve your goals
25.
2 Go to Osorno
IV. Read the statements and put [1]True or [2]False according to the text.
26. 1
In a dysfunctional environment
1. The Bennet sister were 27.
1 Aware of their mothers desire o finding a husband for them
raised
28.
2 Under the strict rule of their father Mr Bennet
29.
1 Longs to have another kind of life encouraged by her father
2. Young Lizzie
30.
2 Wants to obey her mother in everything she says
31.
2 Wants to get rid of her family
32.
2 Mr Bingley is going to sell his mansion
3. The Bennet family is excited 33.
1 Mr Bingley settles nearby the Bennet family
because
34.
2 Mr Bingley wants to buy the Bennets mansion
35.
2 Worried about Lizzies future
4. Eldest daughter Jane seems to 36.
2 Sad because she doesnt have a boyfriend
be
37.
1 Ready to make Mr Bingley fall in love with her
V. Look at the 2 commentaries below, and write a new one about any movie you have seen recently. (30 words)
I.
LESSON PLAN 15
IDENTIFICATION OF
THE LESSON
Unit:
On Screen
Name:
The History of Television
Class:
10th A grade
School:
Colegio Ingls Purranque
Date:
6th November, 2008 (Thursday)
Time:
14:30 16:00
90 minutes
Student Teacher: Vctor Aguilera
Teacher:
Liliana Aguilar
OBJECTIVES
138
IV.
1.
2.
3.
139
Content:
1-5 Total: 20
Use of collocations:
1-7 points
Arguments and/or ideas: 1-5
Organization of information 1-3
XIII.RESOURCES:
Jezek,
G.
(2006).
The
History
of
Television.
Retrieved
from
http://www.thehistoryoftelevision.com/ on 12 October, 2008.
XIV.MATERIALS:
Pictures
Markers
Whiteboard
Handouts
Dictionaries
The history of television
The television as we see it and know it today was not always this way. Lets take a brief look
at the history of television and how it came into being.
Timeline of TV History
Different experiments by various people, in the field of electricity and radio, led to the
development of basic technologies and ideas that laid the foundation for the invention of
television.
In the late 1800s, Paul Gottlieb Nipkow, a student in Germany, developed the first ever
mechanical module of television. He succeeded in sending images through wires with the help
of a rotating metal disk. This technology was called the electric telescope that had 18 lines of
resolution.
Around 1907, two separate inventors, A.A. Campbell-Swinton from England and Russian
scientist Boris Rosing, used the cathode ray tube in addition to the mechanical scanner
system, to create a new television system.
From the experiments of Nipkow and Rosing, two types of television systems came into
existence: mechanical television and electronic television.
Mechanical Television History
In 1923, an American inventor called Charles Jenkins used the disk idea of Nipkow to invent
the first ever practical mechanical television system. By 1931, his Radiovisor Model 100 was
being sold in a complete kit as a mechanical television.
In 1926, just a little after Jenkins, a British inventor known as John Logie Baird, was the first
person to have succeeded in transmitting moving pictures through the mechanical disk
system started by Nipkow. He also started the first ever TV studio.
From 1926 till 1931, the mechanical television system saw many innovations. Although the
discoveries of these men in the department of mechanical television were very innovative, by
1934, all television systems had converted into the electronic system, which is what is being
used even today.
Electronic Television History
2 EM A
6th November, 2008.
The History Of Television
Name:_____________________________________
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HandoutN15
I. Order the following words in their correct column to form collocations related to TV set. Buy,
new, sell, modern, steal, plasma, steal, old fashioned, destroy, LCD, break.
Verb: to_______a
Adjective: a(n)_______
Sell
New
Buy
Old fashioned
TV set
Steal
Plasma
Break
LCD
Destroy
Modern
II. Now write 2 sentences using the verbs and adjectives from the list above. Look at the
example.
I will buy that new TV set.
* ________________________________________________________
** ________________________________________________________
III. Which words mark [1]chronological order, [2]contrast or [3]other or no text pattern
1. 2 Different experiments
2. 1 In the late 1800s
3. 2 Two separate
4. 2 Although
5. 3 To create
6. 1 Around 1908
7. 1 By the time
8. 3 Two types of
9. 1 By 1931
10. 2 But
IV. Reorder the following events. Put numbers from 1-6. Pay attention to the dates in the text
11. 5 Radiovisor Model 100 was sold as a
12. 3 Jenkins used the disk idea
mechanical television
13. 2 The cathode ray tube was used in
14. 4 John Logie succeeded in succeeded in
order to create a new television
transmitting moving pictures
system
15. 6 Television systems converted into the
16. 1 Paul Gottlieb developed the first ever
electronic system
mechanical module of television
IV. For the following statements from the text
- Different experiments by various people (), led to the development of basic technologies and
ideas that laid the foundation for the invention of television.
- ()a student in Germany, developed the first ever mechanical module of television.
- Although the discoveries () in the department of mechanical television were very innovative,
by 1934, all television systems had converted into the electronic system ()
Identify which of the following relationships below are [1]correct or [2]incorrect
17. 1 People: basic technologies: invention
18. 2 Student: Germany: electronic system
of television
19. 1 Mechanical system: electronic system 20. 1 Student: Germany: mechanical module
21. 1 People: mechanical module:
22. 1 Electronic system: People:
electronical system
experiments
23. 2 Electronic system: experiments: basic 24. 2 Discoveries: electronic system: basic
technologies
technologies
25. 1 Experiments: discoveries: foundation
26. 1 Basic technologies: mechanical
for television
television: electronic systems
VI. Look at the following sentence frames
1 Different experiments, technologies and ideas laid the foundation for the invention of television
141
Different equations, calculations and ideas laid the foundation for the atomic bomb.
2 He succeeded in sending images through wires with the help of a rotating metal disk
He succeeded in amplifying sound through speakers with the help of a microphone
3 They used wires in addition to tubes, to create a new television system.
They used leather in addition to air, to create a new football.
4 From the experiments of Michael, two types of television systems came into existence:
mechanical television and electronic television.
From the experiments of Juanito, two types of candies came into existence: the chocolate and
the ice cream.
5 By 1934, all writing systems had converted into visual systems, which is what is being used
even today.
By 1986, all aquatic sports had converted into Olympic sports, which is what is being used
even today.
What do they have in common? Underline the pattern which is repeated in the different
sentences.
VII. Write a paragraph in which you combine the different patterns discovered above to talk about
the invention of any device. Hand it in by the end of the lesson.
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__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
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LESSON PLAN 17
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Messages
The Guardian
10th grade A
Colegio Ingls Purranque
21st November, 2008
10:15 11:45
Vctor Aguilera
Liliana Aguilar
OBJECTIVES
II. GENERAL OBJECTIVE.
To read a text comprehensibly and study collocations
III. SPECIFIC OBJECTIVES
To determine the features of words related to a concept
To predict which words can appear with certain key words
To identify the arguments of T statements
To identify which information is inferable from the text
To infer the grammar of a collocation
To write a paragraph connecting collocation already studied
IV. CONTENTS
1. Collocations :
Celebrated much, Have lunch, Used to, Nice meal, Miss
terribly, Start to, Last week, Come to, Love parties, Hear
correctly, Young woman, Beautiful flowers.
2. Skills:
Reading and Writing
V. ACTIVITIES
1. Students are introduced the topic of the unit by being asked questions. They are asked
questions such as: What do you know about paranormal events? Do you believe in
Angels? Then students brainstorm what they know about the field. (5 minutes)
2. Students are presented vocabulary for the lesson. They are introduced by means of
definitions and explanations. Also students deduce the meaning of words in examples
provided by the teacher. Ex. She was a young and beautiful woman. What was the
woman like? Was she ugly? Her age? (10 minutes)
3. In activity I students have to decide which of the proposed features of protection apply
to different types of protectors. They have to discover the differences between the
kinds of guards. (5 minutes)
4. In activity II students have to decide which of the proposed words can be predicted to
appear when they have the words birthday and guardian. There are words that dont
belong to any of those words. Then they have to confirm their predictions on the text.
(10 minutes)
5. In activity III students are proposed arguments for several true statements about the
text. They have to say to which of those true statements those arguments belong to. (10
minutes)
6. In activity IV students are given extracts from the texts. They are proposed pieces of
information which has been inferred from those extracts in relation to the text. They
have to decide which of the inferences are correct according to the extracts. (10
minutes)
7. In activity V students are given 3 collocations from the text. They have to infer the
pattern of the collocation and decide if the examples given are correct according to the
structure of the collocation or no. (10 minutes)
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VI ASSESSMENT.
Summative
Students have to write a paragraph connecting the collocations already studied in
activity V. They have to hand in the activity at the end of the lesson. They are going to
be evaluated according to the following criteria.
Content:
1-5 Total: 20
Use of collocations:
1-7 points
Arguments and/or ideas: 1-5
Organization of information 1-3
VII RESOURCES:
Course book
Whiteboard-Markers
Handouts
* Wetz, B. and Gammidge, M. (2005). Adventures. Students Book. China: Oxford
University Press.
The Guardian
I was seventy years old last Thursday. I havent really celebrated much since my wife
Elizabeth died three years ago, but last week I had lunch at my sisters, and later three
good friends came to my house for dinner. It was a nice meal. We were talking and
laughing, but suddenly I felt sad. I shouldnt have been sad on my birthday, but Id
remembered my wife. She used to love parties. Before a party she used to buy flowers
and put them in every room of the house.
Suddenly my thoughts were interrupted. Somebody was knocking at the door. I went to
the hall and opened the door. A beautiful young woman was standing there. She may not
have been twenty yet, but she was very confident for her age. Her face was pale and
her skin was almost transparent. She had some beautiful flowers in her hands and she
was smiling. She may have come to the wrong house, I thought.
Is this Michaels party? She asked,
Yes, it is. Im Michael, I answered. Do I know you?
I am Lydia, she said. I am a messenger. I am a guardian.
Her voice was soft and sweet, but her words were very strange. I thought I might not
have heard her correctly.
A messenger? I dont understand. Who sent you?
A friend, she whispered, and she gave me the flowers. These are for you. You must
have missed your wife terribly since she died. Life cant have been easy, Im sure. But
you should be happy when you think about her. She is always near you, and we protect
her. Well protect you too.
I dont remember what happened next. I might have looked down at the flowers for a
moment. They were roses, my wifes favourite. I started to say thank you to the woman,
but when I looked up she wasnt there.
My friend Anne came to the door.
Who was that? She asked. You should have asked her name. She had the face of an
angel.
Yes I said, but it was difficult for me to speak,the face of an angel.
2 EM A
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HandoutN15
CDF
ADFGJ
BDEFIJ
ADEFH
II. Which words can you relate to [1]birthday [2]Guardian [3]none of them.
5. 3 Problem
6. 2 Dog
7. 2 Angel
8. 3 Disease
9. 1 Years old
10. 1 Invite
11. 2 Security
12. 3 Fight
13. 1 Gift
14. 2 Protection
15. 2 Watch
16. 1 Celebrate
Read the text on page 102 and answer as required.
III. Which arguments in column A justify those in column B. There may be more than one possible
answer.
A
B
1 Michael misses his wife
17. 13
Michael loves his wife
18. 1
Michael is sad
19. 1
Michael remembers his wife
2 Michaels wife loves flowers
20. 23
The wife attended the party
21. 3
Michael is not alone
22. 23
Michael wife still loves him
3 Michael is protected by angels
23. 23
The woman is sent by Michaels wife
IV. For the following extracts from the text, which inferences are [1]correct or [2]incorrect.
A I was seventy years old last Thursday. I havent really celebrated much since my wife Elizabeth
died three years ago ()
26. 1 Michael has been sad since his wife died.
27. 2 Michael does not throw parties anymore
because his wife died
28. 1 Michael is alone since his wife died.
B I am Lydia, she said. I am a messenger. I am a guardian.
29. 1 Lydia is a person who protects Michael
30. 2 Lydia is a spirit who watches Michael
31. 2 Lydia works in the post office
32. 1 The woman has a message for Michael.
C A friend, she whispered, and she gave me the flowers. These are for you. You must have
missed your wife terribly since she died.
33. 1 The woman is a friend of Michaels wife
34. 1 There is an after life (heaven)
35. 2 The woman and Michael know each other 36. 1 The woman knows how Michael feels.
V. Look at the sentences in column A, then say of sentences in column B are [1]right or [2]wrong.
A
B
37. 1 My parents came to Chile for work
38. 2 Michael came to beautiful for country
A Three good friends came to my house
39. 1 My sister came to the restaurant I was in for a
for dinner
chat.
B I started to say thank you to the woman 40. 2 I started to my house to my wife
41. 1 I started to apologize to my mom
42. 2 Gloria started to complain to Michael
43. 1 Before complaining she used to think her
C Before a party she used to buy flowers
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44. 2
45. 1
arguments
Before travelling she used to beautiful
Before lunch I used to drink water
146
III. For the following sentences put [1] if the sentence is correct or [2] if it is wrong. Pay
attention to the words in bold. (8 points)
13. 1
They've always had plenty of 14. 2 In Chile there are not many
money.
fashionable of clothes.
15. 2 Thank you for a delightful of 16. 2 I have some sticker that are rare
evening
with find
17. 1 The article was about the different 18. 2 Long hair is back from fashion for
varieties of Spanish spoken in
men
South America
19. 1 High
quality
computers
are 20. 1 I offered her a range of options
147
148
comparison Contrast, [2] cause and effect or [3] chronological order. (3 points)
37. 2 Paragraph 1 Aspirin is a simple drug. It has many useful effects. It can stop a
headache or an earache. It helps take away pain in the fingers or knees. Aspirin can
stop a fever if you have the flue. Or it can make you feel better if you have a cold.
Some doctors believe that aspirin also can result in a healthy heart. They say that
some people should take an aspirin every day. For those people aspirin may stop
heart disease.
38. 3 Paragraph 2 The rodeo has developed in three major stages. Rodeos began in the
Old West as contests of skill among cowboys during cattle roundups. By 1920
rodeos had become a popular spectator sport for the general public. Today rodeos
combine traditional western events with a circus like atmosphere and the marketing
techniques of big business.
39. 1 Paragraph 3 Poland and Italy may seem like very different countries. And of course,
they are different in some ways. Poland is in the north of Europe but Italy is the
south. Poland has a communist government but Italy has a democratic government.
However, there are also similarities. In both countries, the most important religion is
Catholicism. In both Italy and Poland, history is very important to the people. And
finally, both the Italian and the Polish are famous for their friendliness and good
spirit.
VIII. Look at the words and phrases below and classify them according to their meanings in
the paragraphs above: [1] effect, [2] comparison, [3] contrast, [4] chronological order (10
points).
40. 1 Take away pain
41. 4 Three major stages
42. 2 similarities
43. 3 However
44. 4 By 1920
45. 2 Both countries
46. 1 Stop a fever
47. 4 Finally
48. 3 But
49. 1 result in
IX. For the collocations result in, combine with and famous for from item VII, say if in the
following sentences [1] they are correctly used [2] they are wrongly used according to their
contexts.(6 points)
50. 1 Too much TV may result in academic 51. 1 It is possible to combine fruits
failure.
with vegetables on a diet.
52. 1 China is famous for its ancient culture
53. 2 Manifestations resulted in last
year
54. 2 Sickness combined with ruined our trip. 55. 2 He was famous for 15 minutes
WRITING SECTION
149
X. Read the advertisement for pen-friends and complete the table with the information about
Anna and yourself (15 points). Then write your own pen-friend advertisement (15 points)
Hello. My names Pierre and Im seventeen years old. I live in Paris, France. I have
got short straight dark hair and brown eyes. Im quite tall and slim. I love playing
computer games and I can play tennis very well. I like reading too. Please e-mail me
today!
Hi! My name is Anna and I am eleven years old. I live in Moscow, Russia. I have got
long straight fair hair and green eyes. Im quite short and I like skiing. I can play the
piano quite well. Please be my e-mail pen pal.
Pierre
Anna
You
Age
17
11
Lives in
Paris, France
Moscor, Russia
Hair
Short straight dark
Long straight fair
Eyes
Brown
Green
Height
Quite tall
Quite short
Build
Slim
--------------------------Likes/Loves Playing computer games, Skiing
reading
Can
Play tennis very well
Play the piano quite
well
XI. Read the letter from Amanda to Steve. Then write the things Amanda did at shady Pines.
(5 points)
14 September
Dear Steve,
Why dont you go to Shady Pines hotel for your holiday next year? I went in August. It was
great. We swam in the sea every day. We also went fishing in the river near the hotel. There
were lots of other things to do. We played tennis or went for walks in the woods. One day we
hired bicycles and visited a lake. We had a picnic there. Then, in the evenings there was a
disco. We danced all night! It wasnt expensive and we had a fantastic time! Did you have a
good holiday too?
See you soon,
Amanda
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
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XII. Write the letter from Steve to Amanda with the information provided about his holiday. (15
points)
He slept in a tent
It rained every day
He couldnt swim because it was forbidden
His tennis racquet broke
The disco was closed
24 September
Dear Amanda
Thank you for you letter. I went to __________ for holidays.
Best wishes,
Steve.
Answer Sheet
Name: __________________________ Class: ______ Date: ______ Score: Reading: ___/55
Reading Section
Writing: ___/50
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Writing Section
X.
Pierre
Anna
You
Age
17
Lives in
Paris, France
Hair
Short straight dark
Eyes
Brown
Height
Quite tall
Build
Slim
------------------------Likes/Loves Playing
computer
games,
reading
Can
Play tennis very well
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__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________
XI.
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
XII.
24 September
Dear Amanda
Thank you for you letter. I went to __________ for
holidays. ____________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
____________________________________________
Best wishes,
Steve.
7.5 Criteria to Asses Writing
Criteria to evaluate writing
152
0
Content
Use of Markers (collocations)
Arguments and/or ideas
Spelling and grammar
Organization of information
TOTAL:
/15
0. Very poor
Content: does not show knowledge of the subject, not enough to evaluate
Use of Markers (collocations): essentially translation, little knowledge of English vocabulary,
idioms, word form or not enough to evaluate.
Arguments and/or ideas: no clear ideas and/or arguments not related to the topic, not enough to
evaluate
Spelling and grammar: virtually no mastery of sentence construction rules, dominated by errors,
does not communicate, not enough to evaluate.
Organization: ideas do not communicate anything, not enough to evaluate.
1. Poor to Fair
Content: limited knowledge of subject, inadequate development of topic.
Use of Markers (collocations): limited range of collocations, frequent errors of choice and usage of
words, idioms and connectives.
Arguments and/or ideas: poor arguments and ideas no connected with the content.
Spelling and grammar: major problems in simple/complex constructions, frequent errors of
agreement, tense, number, word order, pronouns and prepositions. Many spelling mistakes
Organization: non-fluent, ideas confused or disconnected, lack logical sequence and development.
2. Average to Good
Content: some knowledge of subject, mostly relevant to topic, but lacks detail.
Use of Markers (collocations): occasional error in choosing of words, idioms and connectives
Arguments and/or ideas: some good arguments and ideas related to the content.
Spelling and grammar: effective but simple constructions, occasional errors of agreement, tense,
number, word order, pronouns and prepositions. Some spelling mistakes
Organization: somewhat choppy, loosely organized but main ideas stand out, logical but incomplete
sequencing.
3. Very Good to Excellent
Content: knowledgeable, relevant to assigned topic, substantive .
Use of Markers (collocations): effective choice and usage of words, idioms and connectives.
Arguments and/or ideas: good arguments and ideas pertinent to the content.
Spelling and grammar: mastery of the language and/or few errors of agreement, tense, number, word
order, pronouns and prepositions. No spelling mistakes
Organization: fluent expression, well organized, logical sequence, cohesive
153
Nombre:
Edad:
154
Survey Results
1. Cuando usted lee cualquier texto en ingls es capaz de entender:
155
16
6
2
a) ideas generales
b) ideas generales y especficas
c) slo algunas palabras pero no el contenido principal.
2. Cuando usted escucha algn texto en ingls, ya sea una cancin, una entrevista, una
narracin, etc., usted es capaz de entender:
10
a) ideas generales
4
b) ideas generales y especficas
10
c) slo algunas palabras pero no el contenido principal
3. Cuando leo y/o escucho identifico de qu se trata el texto (tpico/tema)
10
a) Si, generalmente lo identifico
2
b) me cuesta identificarlo
12
c) a veces, depende del texto
4. Cuando leo y/o escucho un texto en ingls se identificar el tipo de texto que este tiene
(narrativo, argumentativo, descriptivo, instructivo, informativo)
4
a) siempre
16
b) a veces
4
c) nunca
5. Con respecto a las instrucciones que el (la) profesor le da en ingls:
16
a) me las han enseado y las comprendo
8
b) no me las han enseado pero las deduzco
0
no me las han enseado y no las entiendo
6. Con respecto a mi conocimiento de la forma correcta de escribir oraciones y prrafos en
ingls:
14
a) me los ensean y me han dado ejemplos claros
2
b) me han enseado solo las reglas pero no me han dado ejemplos claros
8
c) nunca me han enseado la forma correcta de escribirlos
7. Antes de escribir diseo un plan para escribir una historia.
4
a) siempre
18
b) a veces
2
c) nunca
8. Trato de recordar la forma de escritura de alguna historia que he ledo para poder escribir mi
propia versin.
5
a) siempre
17
b) a veces
2
c) nunca
9. Cuando escribo en ingls:
10
a) escribo y despus reviso mi trabajo chequeando si hay errores de forma
6
b) escribo, reviso y pido la correccin del profesor(a)
8
c) escribo pero no me importa si me corrigen o no
10. Con respecto a su actitud haca una actividad donde se le pide escribir:
8
a) s como hacerlo y no cometo errores (o cometo muy pocos)
8
b) puedo hacerlo, pero con bastantes errores
8
c) no s como hacerlo o me cuesta mucho
11. En la clase estn dadas las oportunidades para que usted pueda escribir en ingls ya sea
156
First Term
157
UNIT
1. Love Life
April 25th-30th
2. Campaign
May 8-29
LESSON
Pre-test
24th April
From the heart
25th April
Evaluation
May 2nd
Charity
8th May
Charity (continued)
9th May
ASSESSMENT
Reading: Poems
Writing: Write a letter
Summative
Formative
Debate: Genetic
engineering
15th May
Formative
A Good Cause
23rd May
Formative
Revision of World
Issues
29th
Evaluation
30th May
A new look
5th June
Formative
Formative
Formative
Formative
A Good Cause
22nd May
3. Looks
June 5-19
Appearances
6th June
Fashion victims
12th June
Fashion victims
13th June
4. Art World
26th June to 4th
July
Evaluation
19th June
Masterpieces
26th June
158
Summative
Formative
Formative
Formative
opinions.
Art or crime?
27th June
Summative
Reaction
3rd July
Formative
Evaluation
4th July
Second Term
UNIT
The Art
World
August 7-14
(Pending from
previous term)
Behaviour
August 15September 11
Travel
September 25
October 9
LESSON
SKILLS
The Story of Pop
Reading and Writing
th
7 August
Unit Review
Reading and Writing
th
8 August
Evaluation
14th August
Extra Curricular Activity SIMCE exam training
15th August
Express Yourself
Reading and Writing
st
21 August
Dos and Donts
Listening
nd
22 August
Bullying Part 1
Reading and Writing
th
28 August
Bullying Part 2
Reading and Writing
th
29 August
Student-teacher was ill. Medical Certificate
4th September
Hooliganism
Reading and Writing
th
5 September
Evaluation
11th September
Extra Curricular Activity SIMCE exam training
12th September
Holiday 18th and 19th September
Getting Away from it all Reading and Writing
25th September
Walking Around the
Reading and Writing
World
26th September
Travelling to the USA
Reading and Writing
2nd October
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ASSESSMENT
Formative
Formative
Summative
Summative
Formative
Formative
Summative
Formative
Summative
Formative
Summative
Formative
On Screen
October 10
November 13
Messages
November 21 28
Travelling to Chile
Reading and Writing
rd
3 October
Evaluation
9th October
Prize Money
Reading and Writing
th
10 October
Making Games
Reading and Writing
th
16 October
No class because of Teachers Day
17th October
Pride and Prejudice
Reading and Writing
23rd October
Extra Curricular Activity SIMCE exam training
24th October
Colegio Ingls Purranque Anniversary Week 30th October
Holiday 31st October
The History of TV
Reading and Writing
6th November
Harry Potter
Listening and Speaking
7th November
Evaluation
13th November
Formative
Summative
Formative
Summative
Formative
Summative
Formative
Summative
Summative
UFO mania
27th November
Formative
Post Test
28th November
160
These samples correspond to 5 students writing performances in the writing sections both
from the pre and post test. They have been considered and transcribed as were produced by the
learners.
Sample 1
Andrea Crott (Pre test)
X-II
Hello. My names Andrea. I live in osorno, chile. I have got short straight hair and brow eyes. Im quite
tall and skiing. I love playing volleyball very well.
I like reading too. Please e-mail today. (sic)
XII
Thank you for your letter. I went to December for holidays. Well, I slept in atent and it rained every
day!!!
He couldnt swim because it was forbidden, often his tennis racquet breaked and finnich the disco was
closed.
Steve (sic)
Andrea Crott (Post test)
X-II
Hi! My name is Andrea I amd twty years old. I live in Purranque. I have little children. I have long hair
and brown eyes. I like go to the disco and what tv and cant play volleiball. (sic)
XII
Thank your for your letter. I went to Jamaica for holidays. I love this place is very relax. I the day splet
in a tet. I could swim because it was forbidden but drink a caimpiria in the afternoon in the play tennis
and the last night the disco was closed this is my holidays. (sic)
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Karen Calfin (Pre test)
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Hi! My name is Karen. Im 15 year old. I live on Purranque, Chile. I have got long dark hair, brown
eyes. Im quite short, I like basquetball. I can play tennis and football very well. (sic)
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Thank you for your letter. I went to USA for holidays. I slept in a tent.
The wather was terrible because it was rained every day and I couldnt swin because it was forbidden.
I cant go to the disco because was closed. (sic)
Karen Calfin (Post test)
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Hello! My name is Karen and Im sixteen years old. I live in Purranque, Chile. I have got long dark
hair and brown eyes. Im quite short and slim. I love playing basquetball and I can play tennis. Please
e-mail me today! (sic)
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Thank your for your letter. I went to Paris for holidays. I went in August too. It was so so. I visited a lot
of museum with my family and also a lot of shops, but the climate was terrible! It rained every day.
Also I tell you that I couldnt swim because it was forbidden and I couldnt play tennis because my
racquet broke. Also I couldnt to go the disco because the disco was closed.!!!
See you soon. (sic)
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Rudy Varas (Pre test)
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Hi! My name is Rudy and I am fifteen year old. I live in Purranque Chile. I have gott long and dark
hair and green eyes. I love surf the internet. I cant play guitar. (sic)
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Thank you for your letter. I went to Antartica for holidays. Is very fantastic. I cant slept in a tent
because is a very cold.
A rained every day.
Couldnt swim because it was forbidden. When play tennis my racquet broken
But in the disco never was closed. Is fantastic. (sic)
Rudy Varas (Post test)
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Hi!!! My name is Rudy and I am sixteen years old. I live in Purranque, Chile, twenty-nine km the south
of osorno. I have got short curly black hair and a green eyes. I am tall and slim. I like play computer
game and can play some instruments. (sic)
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Thank your for your letter. I went to Pucon for holidays. Is very delightful in the morning. We swam in
sea, after go to walk in the volcan, and in bicycle visited other places. In the night wooow!
Very good the disco. Danced every night just like you and every thing. (sic)
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Katerine Mol. (Pre test)
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Hello. My names Katerine and Im fiveteen years old. I live in Purranque, Chile. I have got long
straight dark hair and brown eyes. Im quite tall and I like listen to music. I can cook Italian food.
Please be my e-mail pen pal. (sic)
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Thank you for your letter. I went to August for holidays. I slept in a tent and it rained every day. I
couldnt swim because it was forbidden. I couldnt play tennis because my tennis racquet broke. I
couldnt dance in the disco because it was closed. (sic)
Katerine Mol. (Post test)
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Hello! My name is Kati and I am 16 years old. I live in Purranque, Chile. I have got straight dark hair
and brown eyes. I am tall and slim. I like playing with cats. I can cooking quite well. Please e-mail me
today. (sic)
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Thank your for your letter. I went to Punta Arenas for holidays. I went in September. It wasnt great. I
slept in a tent with my sister, but in the night started raining.
It rained every day. I liked swim but I couldnt swim because it was forbidden. When I was played
tennis my tennis racquet broke and I didnt win the game. Also when I went the disco it was closed.
(sic)
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Maria Jose Bravo
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Hello. My name is Maria Jos and I am seventeen years old. I live in osorno, chile. I have got long
straight dark hair and brow eyes. Im quite short and I like skiing I can playing computer every day.
Please be my e-mail pen pal. (sic)
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Thank you for your letter. I went to October for holidays. Well I he slept in a tent and it rained every
day!!
I couldnt swim because it was forbidden, after in his tennis racquet broke.
Its down down! and finish the disco was closed in the afternoon as well one kiss
Bye!
Steve (sic)
Maria Jose Bravo (post test)
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Hello! My name is Maria Jose other Kote. Iam seventeen years old. I live in Purranque Chile. I have a
short straight dark hair and brown eyes. I like chating in the computer and waching tv every day and I
liked go to the disco with my friend and my boy friend. Please be my e-mail pen pal! (sic)
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Thank your for your letter. I went to Brazil for holidays. The first day I slept in a tent and after go to
the very beautiful restaurant and eat very much! I rained every day I couldnt swim because it was
forbidden, but go to the beach and play volleyball
Is very like!! Is Cool
In the afternoon go to the gym and play tennis but the racquet broke. In the night go to the disco and
was closed and dint dancing!
Well this is my holidays. (sic)
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