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Stuart Goldberg

Closing Argument !
(Plaintiff)

Ladies and Gentlemen of the jury, this case boils down to something very simple-
deception. The evidence established that Taylor, through the pseudonyms Fatalflaw and
shockwave, knowingly and willingly harassed Jamie Anderson. Phoenix Hopp, a
seasoned expert on cyber crimes testified that there is an abundance of evidence linking
Taylor to the screen name Fatalflaw. Taylor had the intimate knowledge of what makes
Jamie go crazy and he used that knowledge to make her so paranoid, so afraid of death
that her grades fell precipitously in her final quarter of high school, which resulted in her
losing the Gugel scholarship. His motive for doing so was clear: he needed the money
which was only given to the valedictorian to pay for college. Taylor knew that he needed
to go to extremes to win the award and he was willing to do so- there was nothing that
was too extreme or to excessive for him. The current law states that in order to prove that
a crime is cyber stalking, it must show that

1) The plaintiff received at least two electronic communications. We have


established that during the week of March 6 through March 10, there were 6
instances in which the plaintiff received threats via the chat room, email, and
M_space page
2) The defendant was responsible for transferring these messages. We have linked
Taylor Williams to the screen name Fatalflaw. Fatalflaw had the exact same
interests as Taylor, and they even shared the same password for different
usernames. On March 9th, Shockwave refers to a comment that Fatalflaw made
about water bottles from March 6th, but Shockwave, who was Taylor, never
entered that chat room. Phoenix Hopp, a seasoned expert on cyber crimes,
testified before you that shockwave and Fatalflaw were definitely the same
person.
3) The electronic communications harassed the plaintiff. There is clear evidence
showing that the incidents in the chat room harassed Jamie Anderson. First of all,
when she went to the police offices to talk to Phoenix, she was crying too much to
talk to. Furthermore, her grades went from A’s in every single quarter in high
school to D’s. Her doctor’s findings, which were confirmed by an independent
doctor, revealed that Jamie couldn’t sleep at night, was fearful of bodily harm, and
“continues to display sings of anxiety disorder” but “has never displayed any
symptoms of mental illness in the past”
4) The defendant knowingly harassed the plaintiff. Taylor Williams repeatedly
harassed Jamie Anderson with his screen names Fatalflaw and shockwave during
the week of march 6 to march 10. He also went through the trouble of making a
new email address and a M_space page for the sole purpose of threatening and
scaring Jamie Anderson.
5) That the harassing communications were addressed specifically towards the
plaintiff. Taylor Williams repeatedly referred to Jamie or her screen name,
Jammin@lincolnHS when he wrote the threatening messages, and they were not
directed towards anyone else. In addition, the M_space space contained a picture
of Jamie’s bedroom window and her address.
6) That there was no lawful justification for the communications. Clearly, there was
no reason to threaten Jamie like Taylor did. His excuse is that his messages were
in the context of a history discussion, but Taylor was the only one who was
talking about it online. He wasn’t just talking about the material and the life of
Jack the Ripper, he wanted to practice it on Jamie. Also, the M_space page was
made for the sole purpose of threatening Jamie.
7) And finally that the plaintiff, as any reasonable person would, was in fear of
bodily harm. First of all, multiple people in the chat rooms told Taylor that he was
going too far. As allthumbs said on march 9, “shockwave, you’re about crossing
the line there with all that torture talk.” Her doctor wrote that she has a fear of
bodily harm and, on multiple occasions, had panic attacks from her fear of dying
and losing control. I’d like to reiterate the fact that she had no past history of
anxiety problems- they arose after the incidents with Taylor.

It’s really easy to see why Taylor Williams would commit such a sick crime. For starters,
he was completely fascinated by crime. He did a special report for his English
class about Jack the Ripper and talked about him frequently in the Lincoln High
School chat rooms. In his testimony to police, he wrote that he had dreams of
working in law enforcement. What a perfect opportunity for him to test his skills
and win the scholarship in one fell swoop. We also see that he enjoys terrorizing
Jamie. Back in 7th grade, he made her cry by pouring water on her and saying that
it was poisonous. These atrocious crimes did not strike Taylor as being wrong, he
just considered them funny and laughed them off. Jamie didn’t think it was so
funny, and neither should you.

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