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Lm Anh
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Hiu

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Hng
Khi
Khng
Minh

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- missing final sounds a lot (finance,

house,... ), the sound /s/ appears a lot
(contact, university... ), negotiate, with,
bathroom, RMIT, meter
- There are about 2 to 3 sentences that I can't
understand.
Therefore,
pay attention
the
the speed is
quite good.
You use to
some
pronunciation more when you speak.
linking words quite well. (so) However,
try to speak a little smoothly. Try to
speak with more suitable intonation, only
You
-most
use
of
enough
the
grammar
necessary
is understandable,
words
stress
the
important
words,
do notto
introduce
however
some
a
house/apartment
points
should
be
to a
sttress randomly.
customer. university of finance
reviewed:
marketing, it's very secure, when we
have free time (not a free time), it has 5
bedrooms
( not it got
you 5
bedrooms)
- I can understand
almost
all.
Good
use of the
"It isarea,
- Pay
attention
to structure
some words:
located
....:"
district, coffee shop, attic, negotiate,
- Try to speak without stopping because
english
it will make the listeners hard to follow.
And speak clearly the important words
so that listeners can understand.
You use enough necessary words to
introduce a house/apartment to a
customer.
simple and understandable. However,
pay
attentionmore
to articles
(a/an/the):
Try speaking
in class.
-follow.
Pay attention
toifsome
words:
However,
possible,
pay
You
use
enough
necessary
words
toor
attention to your voice more
(raise
introduce
a
house/apartment
to
a
- However, there are still some mistakes:
customer.
"a
house have....", "It's nearly the coffee
However
there are
some
that
shop", "contact
with
you",words
In front
of you
our
should pay attention
to: stadium,
sometimes
(it is). However,
if you can
-speak
You use
enough
necessary
more
smoothly,
it's bewords
even to
a house/apartment
to a
-introduce
Your grammar
is good. the structure
is
customer.
simple and correct, except for 1 thing:
residential
area,
clean,
jog,
beside the
perfect
forlower
2 people
(not
person)
raise
and
your
voice
more
often in
park, coffee shop, read books, negotiate)
your speaking,
it would be better.
introduce
a house/apartment
to a And
speak
a
little
more
fluent
without
customer and integrate some more
of
effective about
phrases
to show
your ideas,
vocabulary
sports
(badminton,
However,
attention
to
the final
opinions (Ipay
think).
sounds (rent,house, price,...) and check
the
same.For
example,
"how of
arethese
you
the
stress
andof
pronunciation
You
use With
a lot
words. you
I really
like it,
today".
thisnice
sentence,
only
especially the exclamation words. (You
can't say "I very like it).

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attention to: like to play (not "like play"),

I don't like noise (not "noisy"), I have a
Grammar
Pronunciation recommendation for you, You can jog
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Comment
- You should pay attention to
your pronunciation a lot because
it's your biggest weakness.
Review the phonetics lessons
that you have learned.
(restaurant,
offices,
...). aTry
your
- You don't really
speak
lot.
Try
best
and
I
believe
you
will
be
to explain what is on the screen
successful.
so that everyone can

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understand, instead of just

-pointing
You justat
simply
use the
the screen.
A given
good
words
in
my
presentation
recommendation for you isand
that
seperate
words.
time, try to
you should
try toNext
practice
use
more you
descriptive
(city,
speaking
give a words
- Again, use
sentences
instead of
street,
destinations,
pagodas,
presentation.
just 1 or 2 words. It will help your
tower, building,.....)
speaking more lively and
interesting.

that you speak so softly that I

can
hardly
But Ito
think
difficult
for hear.
everyone
follow
overally,
it's
ok.
However,
pay
what
you
are
saying.
When
you
- It's quite limited, although
you
speak,
I suggest
stopping
try
to use
the given
words after
after
each sentence so that
correctly.
everyone
can
understand.
Maybe
believe
if you
learn
more vocabulary
the
whole
sentences.
Next
time,
and practice speaking more, you
will
try to speak more and comple
carefully
:v. Remember to make
sentences.
sureare
youso
understand
theyou just
you
nervous that
your
presentation
instead
of just
forget the grammar (Are you
poiting going
at theto
scree,
before
class,However,
it will be a
rehearsal
will
help
you
avoid
more fluent and
smoother.
Ime
can
presentation,
which
makes
still
hear
some
pauses
in
your
really
happy
(fountain,
throware
a
and
the
grammar
structures
coin,
make
a
wish,...).
But
please
quite mixed
upfinal
(Aresound.
you know,
except
for the
Please
the
located,...).
Practicing
in
pay attention However,
to it because
it'suse
continuously.
try to
very
important.
Also,
practice
full
sentences
instead
of
just
(varied, climatic diversity) in
shortpresentation.
phrases. It will
make
your
your
But
make
sure
you understand these words

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you are saying, although there

are still some grammatical

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Comment
- Ok, your pronunciation is quite
good when you speak slowly like
this, except for some phrases like
"Brave English center", street. But if
you want to communicate well in real
life, practice speaking faster.ANd
some words miss the final sounds,
pay attention to that too (left, street)
- As I said, you speak quite slow,
which makes your prinunciationa nd
grammar accurate. So try to speed
up more. But I think your intonation
is quite good. Keep trying Anh!
It's ok
- I know you are very busy with your
work. However, try to spend some
It's ok
time to practice with your
pronunciation because it is your
weakness. I think you've chances to
work with foreigners so you speak
quite
fluently
andgradually
confidently,
- You speak
quite
andwhich
easy
is
your
strength.
to follow. However, the only gap is
- Some
that raising
you should
that
youwords
just keep
yourreview
voice
thethe
pronunciation:
junction,
at
end of everythere,
sentence.
Try to
street,
fix that.
It's ok.
However, "you go for about 10
minutes"
junction (not you take about 10
problem
is you
feel shyit's
when
- About the
intonation,
ok, but try
speaking
with
others
in
real life.the
Just
word. Keep trying and describe
improve
that.
After
all,
it's
the
way more specifically (like pass how
straight),
on the street
in the
many junctions).
It'll be(not
better.
street)
audio. Just some advice about the
pronunciation
words
trying
like this.ofIf these
possible,
try(go,
to
speak a little faster but it must be
It's
ok. me from understanding the
prevent
whole story, escpecially the
some
minor mispronunciations
prepositions
(go outside, Brave that
you
can
fix
to
make
your
speaking
previous audios.
Keep
trying
:).
words
quite
well,
especially
the verbs
Moreover, you speak continuously
that go with
the noun
(pass
inversion
correctly
(Can
you the
tell me
crossroads,
keep
going).
Again,
keep
where
Vincom Thu
It'sadvice,
great.
can
understand
all.Duc
Just is).
some
Just other
minor
mistakes
with
pay
to some
the
difficult
that attention
you stop at
pointssounds
to think
and practice
them alot (excuse
me,
about
the
pronunciation
fo
some
- Good. However, when you want to
words. Practice
with first,
difficult
mention
something
usesounds
"firstly"
or "first", Don't sya "the first"

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Your pronunciation is not bad,

Hiu. However, you speak so
hurrily, thus making the sound of
the words seem to be seperate.
-Also
Again,
your
onlyto
problem
some
words
review:with
fluency
is
you
raise
your
voice at
"read, science, social,
the
end
of
every
single
twice,great"
sentence. Try to fix it, Hiu. And
speak gradually and smoothly
with connection.
It's ok
must review: We say "playing
sports
good
for mybetween
health. the
tend toisbe
mistaken
You
speak
very
well
when
you
weak and strong /s/ like "coffee
record it. Try to speak like this
home,
"come
home", but
when you
giveback
a presentation
"return to my house" or "come
It's ok
English that well. Try speaking
more you
like are
this.saying.
However,
pay
what
However,
vary your voice while you speak
It's ok
singular and plural use in your
speaking.However,
we say
"I can
Keep trying. I'd suggest
some
review
in words
like: restaurant,
have pauses
sometimes,
but
very
well
for
every
audio.which
they're sensible pauses,
(laughter, footbal match).
singular
However,and
we plural
woulduse
sayin your
speaking.However,
we
say "I can
correct and accurate, espeially
listen
to
and
understand
what
the final sound /s/, although
I
you are saying. It seems like you
are
not speaking.
- It'sreading,
ok

the verb "to be" in some sentences:

the Vincom "is" on the lest of you. It

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interviewer should ask " How

do youthe
often
go 2out with
-often
However,
first

sentences,
I don't
get it.
voice
to show
yourquite
attitudes.
combined
smoothly
and
Very good.
naturally.
- Your grammar is just perfect.

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Comment

- Well done, Hiu. Your

pronunciation is better than the
It'smoderate
clearer.
-previous
Overall,speakings.
the speed is
- Still,
some
of my suggestions:
and
easy
to follow.
And the
boat,
information,
check, wait
intonation
of your speaking
is a
minute,
show
(pay
attention
to
quite good.I don't know whether
strong
and
weak
/s/)
you
read
my
comments
or not,
but I see some changes in your
don'tone
raise
your
-intonation.
It's ok. ButYou
there's
word
that
voice
at
the
end
of
everysentence
you should pay atten tion to:
any
more.
Keep wine
tryinghouse =))
house
wine,not
(Have you
made a reservation?)
- However, some minor mistake
sounds
(sit, birthday,
starter,
like : calling
to book the
table (not
are
a real
customer.
Don't just
lobster,
a minute,
this)
speak at the same length. It's
kinda
boring.
Overall,
it's okI'd suggest you
Overall, it's ok
speak quite fast, you tend to skip
(is, glass try
of red
wine) some
-it.However,
to practice
difficult
more before you
like
yourphrases
imagination.
It's
ok,
but
be
careful
with article
- Just one word ( speciality:
c
usage (We have roast dinosaur
today, without "a")

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- However, some words to
speed
also grilled,
very moderate
review:isway,
soup,enjoy
and reasonable.
- Again,
It's ok. I'd suggest you speak
-It's
It'sour
ok.Keep
trying. So try to
advantage.
improve
your weakness,
they're
5- Your speed
is good enough.
the
final
sound
and
some
Keep trying. You have the difficult
learn
more new words and listen
potential.
to English more. You are quite
- It's ok

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