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Parenting is a tedious process which 2 requires equal i
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nvolvement from both mother and father. However,

mothers play a pivotal role in raising a child, but the r

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[which that] Which or that

ole of fathers 3 can not be neglected 4. In the modern e

ra, equality and women empowerment is an importan

3 Overused word: fathers

t issue. Scientifically it is proven that fathers 5 are resp

4 Passive voice

onsible for making a child 6 and hence they have a

key 7 role in a child's upbringing. Since early times, the

5 Overused word: fathers

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[child,] Missing comma in compound

sentence

fathers 9 have taken the role of the bread earner in mo

st families therefore it is the responsibility of the fathe

7 Vague word: key

r to provide his child with better facilities such as educ

ation, nutrition and good 10 clothing.8 Whenever possi

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Overused word: fathers

ble the father should use this opportunity to express h

is love for the family and his wife.

10 Vague word: good

Generally males 11 are associated with masculinity and

other related work. The father also has a crusical 12 rol
e to play when reaching the young ones

[Generally males Males]

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[crusical critical] Misspelled word:
crusical

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13 values of po

[ones one's] Plural

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instead of possessive

wer, resistance and discipline. They act as a role modl

e 14 for their kids and inturn 15 teaching them these valu
able qualities. They can utilize this time to bond with th
eir children and making them feel secure and guided
We should also consider, however, that the mother sti

[modle model] Misspelled word:

modle

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15 Possibly confused word: inturn

[still remains remains]
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ll remains 16 the primary carer for her child. Woman ar

e associated

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with love, compassion and patience. For

instance, I personaly

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approach my mother

eling low in mood or emotionaly

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when fe

touched. Mums are

move closely related to a child's needs and acts 21 as

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Misspelled word: personaly
19 Overused word: mother
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[emotionaly emotionally]
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word: emotionaly

building stone in one's life.

To conclude, although mothers give birth to the child h
owever fatherhood has come a long way and is absolu
tely 23 essential 22 for a balanced childhood. Lack of tim
e for males can be alleviated by utilizing weekends and

[acts act] Incorrect verb

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form with plural subject
[absolutely essential essential]
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time off from work.1

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