Assignment 3, peer commentary:

Sams Comments
1. I like how you have page links that take you to your subpages, but for
your work & responses page I would make each different type of
responses into subpages. Then instead of having a sources page, make
a page just for assignments. This will avoid confusion of how the group,
studio, and homework responses are different from each other.
2. As for your responses, try to make them more in depth in how each
response was conducted. You also need to include how each response
helped you in class. Maybe refer back to the rubric to help you fix
these minor mistakes in order to meet the requirement.
3. Instead of having a sources page, just add your links at the bottom of
each page where you used different images or shapes. And for the
sources you have included on your sources page, your A1 & A2 sources
should already be on your documents that you uploaded from scribd.
Adding your portfolio sources to the page theyre referring to will
decrease confusion about it as well.
4. I like how you did a prezi for your repurposing of A1. Maybe add an
explanation of what exactly the repurposing is so others dont get
confused why its there. Also maybe add titles for each of your images
on the slideshow instead of screenshot (#).
5. Also, maybe add a title for your entire portfolio at the top of the page.
Since you do have a home page, maybe an overall title would be
useful. This is just a suggestion for you to consider.
6. Overall, you did really well on your portfolio. I really like your page links
and how you included a lot of related images. Im actually going to add
page links to my portfolio are seeing yours, good work!
Rohs Comments
1. On your introduction page where you wrote your info about the course,
I feel you should expand on the details. I feel as though you should add
just a few more details on the group/ group chat in terms of why we
have groups, how many members so they can better understand why
we have a group chat. Just saying my group and I.. doesnt give
much understanding to outside readers. You could also add what your
specific goals were and expectations prior to taking the class and how
theyve changed or havent by the end of the semester.
2. On your assignment one page you have a link to your prezi but I feel it
needs a caption. Some people may overlook clicking the link, as I did
my first time revising your portfolio. You should put a brief explanation
on what the link leads to as well as discuss the repurposing aspect.

3. For your work and responses you may want to expand and connect to
your SLOs. This was a requirement in the portfolio checklists. Before
discussing how it relates you can briefly explain what SLOs are so
readers have some type of knowledge on it.
4. As Sam suggested in her feedback, you may want to remove the
sources page. I think it would be better to put a direct link to the
source under the images or embedded in them so when they click the
photo it sends them directly to the primary source. Only reason I
suggest this is because having the links all on one page, may be hard
to differentiate which link is for which image.
5. Pertaining to organization, I think you did a good job but you could
improve on that a little. I think you should make better titles for the
pages. For instance instead of portfolio you could put portfolio
progress just to be a bit more specific and clear.
6. I enjoyed your assignment, especially the moving background of the
drink. The image really ties into your assignment topic. Overall you did
a great job and I can see that you put effort into your portfolio.

Robertos Comments
1. During your intro explaining the course, maybe add some more details
about the course from the course syllabus. You could go through on the
different policies for the course, how she grades things in her class,
etc.
2. Make sure that your summaries are of proper length. I believe 6-8
sentences is the length requirement. Also dont forget to include the
student learning outcomes.
3. I would maybe have more than one background picture. Maybe have a
different one for each of the main categories or maybe just have two
overall.
4. On your assignment page I think it would look nice to have a little bit of
a lighter background maybe even somewhat of a clearer one so
viewers can see the background. Maybe give it a try if you have not
already and see how it looks.
5. I think you put them in your resources page, but I would put the link
them to the pictures and maybe have them hyperlinked so users can
click on them and it will take them to the original picture.
6. Overall, great work on your portfolio. I like the images you chose and
the overall layout of the portfolio. I also like the small details you put in
like the view counter or the comment section. With a few minor
improvements I think this will be a great portfolio. Good work!