Instructor:

Teacher:Eduardo Roca
ESSAY PLANNING SHEET
Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate
Date: 25/01/2015 Term:
When do you think is the right time to start a family?
Paragraph One: Introduction
Background/Hook-grabber: In last years, people in many countries have been trying to
control population growth. For that reason, when people think about starting a family,
they're probably thinking a lot about
the timing issue. Choosing the right time to start a family is a very personal decision.
Focusing: Starting a family is one of the biggest and most personal decisions of a lifetime.
However,there is no checklist of factors that can tell you when the right time to start a
family is, and perhaps there is no right time, but just a better time.
Thesis Statement (State your opinion: three reasons may be inserted): I think that the
best time to start a
a family is when you have a stable job.

Paragraph Two: Body 1

Topic Sentence (Reason 1) Firstly, you will have money or a fixed income to sustain a
family.
Having financial security is very important at time to consider start a familiy.
Support one: It is important to consider the overall cost of raising a child.
Example: According to the newspaper El Deber The cost of raising a child in the USA
ascended in 2013 to an average of 245.000 dollars for food, house, day-care center,
education and medical expenses, since he or she is born up to 18 years, according to a
report of the Department of Agriculture.
Support two: Moreover, you will be able to save money from your incomes for any
emergency.
Example: No child is free of the diseases or accidents, these ones just occurs and you
have to be prepared.
Support three:You will need to make a life plan and a list of priorities for that reason you
need to make periodic budgets
Example: Expenditure budgets based in monthly expenses in food, milk, diapers, light,
water,etc.
Closing/Transition Sentence: So, you ought to have a fixed income if you want to start a
family.

Paragraph Three: Body 2

Topic Sentence (Reason 2) Furthermore, you will already have reached the sufficient
maturity to start a family.

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ESSAY PLANNING SHEET

Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate
Date: 25/01/2015 Term:
When do you think is the right time to start a family?
Support one: To begin with, you will already have finished your career and you will feel
prepare to formalize a relationship because you will feel that it is the next step in your
life.
Example:.Many people here in Santa Cruz get married after finishing their careers.
Support two: Besides, you will be more responsible since you will have to fulfill a
schedule of arrival and departure in your work that will make you to plan your day to day
life, since you wake up until bedtime.
Example: My sister programmes her day, in the day she works and in the night she takes
care of her baby.
Support three: Both your couple and you help each other to take care children.
Example: Many couples are used to dividing responsibility for childcare.
Closing/Transition Sentence: Working as you start a family means that you have reached
the maturity.

Paragraph Four: Body 3

Topic Sentence (Reason 3)When you have a stable job, you will be able to give your
family a better life.
Support one: You will be able to buy a house to credit since the bank can finance you if
you have fixed incomes.
Example: Presently banks in Bolivia give you a credit line at five percentageinterest to
buy a house.
Support two: You will be able to give your sons a better education.
Example: Most of the time parents with a fixed income give their sons the best
education.
Support three:You can insure to your family if something did happen to you.
Example:If something did happen to you, your family will receive a life annuity.
Closing/Transition Sentence: With good incomes, there are more possibilities to live
better.

Paragraph Five: Conclusion

Restatement of Opinion: Thus, Having a stable job with fixed incomes is the exactly time
to start a family.
(Possible: Sum up major points) Not only you will have enough money to sustain a family
but also you will have

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ESSAY PLANNING SHEET

Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate
Date: 25/01/2015 Term:
When do you think is the right time to start a family?
the sufficient maturity to start a family.Besides,you will be able to give to your family a
confortable life.
Clincher: Recommendations and/or Predictions:So if you are thinking to start a family,
think about how to
sustain them before. Remember that children need to eat, study, have fun and live a
good life.

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