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Jabberwocky discussions
Point of View
SHIFTS
NEWSLETTER REVISING
Underline subjects to look for POV shifts
Circle all verbs to ensure that none of the verbs shift.
Ensure that there arent any shifts from a statement to
a question or vice versa
NEWSLETTER REVISING
2. Turn down the heat when are you more likely to wake up
at night when you are hot or cold? The body prefers to be in
a colder milder climate to sleep. Experts recommend
bedroom temperatures to be 65 70 degrees.
3. Exercise every day This will greatly improve your ability to
sleep at night. However be careful not to exercise too close
to bed time as it can have a negative effect on sleep.
ASSIGNMENT
Write a 1 paragraph essay analyzing one element of
Jabberwocky.
7-10 sentences
Topic sentence, primary details, secondary details,
concluding sentence
Write paragraph in 3rd person point of view
Rewrite same paragraph in 1st person point of view
Rewrite same paragraph in 2nd person point of view
Conferences 2/9, Peer reviews 2/11, Final copy 2/16
FOR TUESDAY
Conference your rough draft with me
FOR THURSDAY
Peer review Lit Analysis paragraph rough drafts