MAKE

ANY SCRIPT MORE SELLABLE

WHY PRODUCERS OPTION/BUY SCRIPTS

1.
2.
3.
4.

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PRODUCERS N EED
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ANY S TORY C AN B E E XPRESSED

as ____________________________________________
or
as __________________________________________

YOU G ET T O C HOOSE H OW P RODUCERS

_______________________________________________________.

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Improve

Avoid / Eliminate

8. Cool __________________

KEY: Producers, directors, and actors love
__________________.

IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

Search for lines that could be great if they had the
___________________________________

7. _______________That Creates Buzz


Key: This is about building ____________________

IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

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Improve
6. ___________ That Quickly Engages Us


Key: The ______________ is your first impression.


IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________


5. Challenging and Meaningful ______________


Key: Trailers sell ________________.

IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

Avoid / Eliminate



AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

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Eliminate

Improve
4. Lead Characters that ___________________


Key: _________ get the movie a green light.

_________________________ to sign on.


IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________


3. _________________ That Hooks Us


Key: 30 Second TV Spots sell ________________


IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

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Improve

Avoid / Eliminate

2. Audience Drawing ____________

Key: _______________ is the primary tool for
marketing your movie.

IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________


1. Clear Engaging _____________________


Key: Hollywood lives based upon ______________


IMPROVE:
A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

AVOID OR ELIMINATE:

A. _____________________________

B. _____________________________

C. _____________________________

D. _____________________________

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Over 150 ProSeries Writers have sold scripts,

done writing assignments, or landed
representation.

PROSERIES

4 Stages - 10 Classes

300 Professional Skills

AGENTS AND MANAGERS NEED...

MARKETABLE SCREENPLAYS.

CONCEPTS THAT CAN SELL

OUTLINING THAT WORKS FOR PRODUCERS.

CASTABLE CHARACTERS

FOCUS ON MAXIMUM ENTERTAINMENT

OPENINGS THAT SELL YOUR SCRIPT.

ABILITY TO WRITE GREAT PITCHES.

WRITERS WHO UNDERSTAND THE BUSINESS.

In the ProSeries, you will:

STAGE ONE: CREATE THE

FOUNDATION OF A
MARKETABLE SCREENPLAY.
1. Create a Marketable Concept in
the High Concept class.
2. Plotting and Outlining an
amazing story.
3. Create Characters for A-list
Actors.

STAGE TWO: MAKE THE SCRIPT

A PAGE-TURNER

Write the best script of your life, so far,

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Improve your writing by 200% or more,

Expectation, and Compelling

And receive an invitation to the ProSeries Alumni.

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Special events for ProSeries Alumni where we meet with

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industry.

4. Write Fascinating Scenes.

5. Create Anticipation,

into a Page-Turner.

STAGE THREE: ELEVATE YOUR

WRITING TO A PROFESSIONAL
LEVEL.
6. Revealing Subtext Class.
7. Advanced Dialogue.
8. Make your First Ten
Pages Shine.
9. Write a Great Ending.

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STAGE FOUR: GET YOURSELF

AND YOUR SCRIPT READY FOR
THE MARKET.
10. Create a Complete Marketing
Campaign for your script.

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