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1. For your convenience, please use the order form supplied at the back of our catalog.
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3. For the next week, you can receive a 25 percent discount on all our 15-inch monitors.
4. Do you need a bright, capable person to handle the bookkeeping in your office? If so, please
consider me for the job. I recently earned a business degree with honors from Mira Costa
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B. Positive
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7. We offer refunds for merchandise that is returned in like-new condition.
8. We will ship your Baby Cry doll in 10 days.
9. Please indicate the blouse color you prefer on the enclosed order form and return it to us so
that we can mail your order.
10. The damage to your waterbed was caused by unusual conditions not covered by the
guarantee; however, we will be happy to send you a replacement valve for $9.95, plus
postage.
C. Bias free language
11. Maggie certainly is outgoing.
12. His job performance isnt affected by his wheelchair.
13. Pilots must have the ability to stay calm under pressure and they must be trained to cope with
any problem that arises.
14. Candidate Renata Parsons will attend the debate.
15. Sam Nugent is still an active sales representative.
D. Conciseness
16. The board cannot act with a consensus.
17. To surpass our competitors, we need innovations both in products and in company operations.
18. George McClannahan has wanted to be head of engineering a long time.
19. Dont pay more than you have to. You can get our new fragrance at $50.
20. The old calculator isnt good for solving hard problems.
21. The pay increases must be stopped before an unusually large debt mounts.
22. The executives all agreed that Ms. Jacksons strange ways were cause for a required meeting
with the companys personnel director.
23. The upcoming sale of the companys assets delighted the companys competitors.
24. Writing is important.
25. Prices will probably go up.
26. Well make a decision soon.
27. I will summarize this experiment when its over.
28. Several examples here show that Elaine cant hold a position very long.
29. A generous contribution to Mildred Cooks retirement party would be appreciated.
30. Generally reliable sources in Washington report today that the White House will soon make
an important announcement.
31. According to the rule, we cannot work overtime without permission.
E. Parallelism
32. We watched the countryside glide by as the train ran down the railroad tracks in a cloud of
smoke.
33. Ruby saw the seashell lying on the shelf.
34. Judging by the information, I think we should buy the property.
35. Sandy took the whole afternoon to clean up her desk, which was cluttered and filthy.
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